Order of Balance: chapter 2

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Chapter one:

Chapter 2: Homecoming.

The dark lands of the southern province. a place barely habitable, the withered trees and ruins of wonderous towns seemingly destroyed by ravages of both fire and war. Hell 0 is the deepest part of this province with a huge castle with a black stone tower that reaches up into the all consuming sky of black clouds. Both Theos and Nexus approach the castle entrance.

????: Theos! who is that man? Where is Lord Kirabi?!

Nexus raises a hand in readiness to kill the gatekeeper. a black mist with red streeks of lightning running through it swirls around Nexus' hand, but Theos intervenes.

Theos: Stop!... umm... please, master. This is Yamato the gatekeeper. He's one of the main people in charge of this castle's protection for Kirabi, umm i mean you, lord Devil-sama

Yamato (Scary Yamato the Gatekeeper): What is this heresy?! this man? Devil? i should cut you down now Theos! Where is kirabi?!

Theos: Kirabi is gone! this man killed him! this is... Lord Nexus!

Yamato's face suddenly went pale. With an uneasy motion still thinking about the seemingly impossible feat of Nexus' return and Kirabi's disposal being true, he reached to a rope by the door. the rope was roughly 3 foot thick and blood red. with an almighty pull, a bell from atop the huge tower could be heard to ring. Looking up the tower Theos and Yamato could make out a dark shadow approaching, Nexus however was focussed on the door. His obvious nature was that of power and royalty as he concerned himself with nothing but the thoughts of reclaiming his castle. The dark shadow was falling at a huge rate and was beginning to get larger and larger. With a huge crash the ground shook and cracked as the ground was struck. Not by an object, but by a man! A monsterous Human 8 feet tall and musculour wearing spiked pauldrons on each shoulder, with huge thick chains running rounc from the pauldrons to the opposite side of the lower body and back up round the back to their respective pauldrons.

????: What have you brought me down here for Yamato?

Yamato: Commander Hasashi! This man is Lord Nexus! He killed kirabi!

Hasashi turns round and faces Nexus.

Hasashi: I see... and what of Daemon?

Theos: Daemon is dead too...

Yamato: You can't possibly believe this man is Nex-

Hasashi: Actually ... I can. I served under this man once. I could never forget this face...
Open the gate... now!


Theos: But that was 400 years ago...

Hasashi: I didn't get this large just by drinking milk did i?...

As Yamato opened the door, Nexus, Hasashi and Theos entered allowing Yamato to swiftly close it behind them. The 3 walked through the castle before arriving at the throneroom.

Nexus: Underling! What hapened to my beautiful castle?

Theos: What do you mean? It's always been like this.

Nexus: In this castle prisoners would be nailed to the wall! Corpses were my carpet! This looks like a damn commoner's house!

Theos (under his breath): Well sorry if i wasn't born 400 years ago to know what the castle was like...

Nexus strikes Theos with the back of his hand knocking him to the floor

Nexus: I'm starting to wonder if letting you live was the right choice.

Upper Province: Heaven A -
A pure white castle resides within a lake. The trees around the lake bear fruit all year round and a large burning ball of flame locked in a cage is suspended high in the sky slightly east of the castle.


????: Lord Versuvio! Nexus is back!


Versuvio (Lord Versuvio AKA. God): I thought that fool Madara crushed him? oh well... that's no trouble to us Lawliet

Lawliet: But...!

Versuvio: Don't worry about such things... Rei is collecting one of the 13 Guardian relics as we speak... all the conditions to unseal it from the mirror realm have been met.

In an unknown location within mountains of central province, a ancient, blind man is sat uppon a pedestal within a chamber holding a set of scales. The chamber is stone, at one side is a doorway with a walled platform. The chamber has no floor, but a pitch black abyss. the old man is bald on the top of his head but the hair surrounding is long running down and hanging down from the pedestal 2 metres. The empty scales held by the man suddenly change...
The scales tip south...
 

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o_o I like.

Obviously, a 400 year imprisonment means a lot of harbored anger and power and..etc.

Though, I can see the scales :)overjoy: [<.<" Sorry, I kinda like the concept of ancient scales and balance) are probably some kind of equivalent to the Doomsday clock. o.o

And you mean Hasashi didn't get that big from drinking milk?! :shy: I'll never have another foot, then.

xd Anyway, good chapter. ^_^
 

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k xd

you don't normally read anything if it's too long in your opinion... and it doesn't take much to be too long @_@
kiwi you know me long enough to know this

HELLZ NO I DON'T (roku's fanfic being an exception cause well he's a genius
and now this too xD)

but i demand an appearance of the family guy rock lobster
 

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o_o I like.

Obviously, a 400 year imprisonment means a lot of harbored anger and power and..etc.

Though, I can see the scales :)overjoy: [<.<" Sorry, I kinda like the concept of ancient scales and balance) are probably some kind of equivalent to the Doomsday clock. o.o

And you mean Hasashi didn't get that big from drinking milk?! :shy: I'll never have another foot, then.

xd Anyway, good chapter. ^_^
you're pretty close in a way... i'm surprised you didn't pick up on something else... this gave away some hints :rolleyes:

that's all i'll say =D

kiwi you know me long enough to know this

HELLZ NO I DON'T (roku's fanfic being an exception cause well he's a genius
and now this too xD)

but i demand an appearance of the family guy rock lobster
compared to roku? O_O =D

and rock lobster would be awesome xd
 
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