The Legendary Sage of Konoha 6

[Michael92]

I was sitting here wondering the whole time what happened with sasuke... Best chapter of all.

Since the very start or just while reading this chapter?

Oh thanks I must admit that i think so myselfxd followed by chapter 3(I guess it`s that way because of the fighting).

Sorry for taking so long for the reply..... No i didn't, sorry... Still new around here xd, but give me a link i would like to see it

Well this is the only FF I`ve wrote, but I meant that i didn`t know you had read this one

If you`re talking about the 5 earlier chapters, then there are links to them at the bottom of my first post, or in my signature

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Yeah i somehow always wondered why you didn`t make a FF about him

We`ll see as it`s in the next chapter that the 6 members strikes with a lot of different "new" jutsus and I have no idea whichxd

Well i can reveal that you will find out what happened to him later in my FF, but just how, why, and at what time you might not find out

Hidoi ;p​

 

[Xentinel]

Anbu: Kakashi san, I got news from Konoha.

Lmao! Well, it suppose to be Kakashi-sama. Haha xd Anyway it's really a cool one! Never thought that it going to be this way!! Btw, I can see that the 6th Hokage is Naruto. In fact, I had already suspected this from the start...from the first chapter! And Hinata, in this chapter...one of her speech...she said "You fool!" I was like...I never know that Hinata is like Sakura

But after all...it's awesome! ~Reps~

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

Oh, was the 6th hokage meant to be revealed in this chapter? I mean, I really didn't see that it was not Naruto from the first chapter. Though I had some doubts there but when he had his son named after Jiraiya, it was pretty obvious. then when it was revealed that he married Hinata, and even used FGT to get behind Tsunade after his note of arrival in 2hours (i think), it was supposed to tell everyone that its Naruto. hehehehehe...

 

[zempty]

Nice chapter man , can`t wait 4 the next one

 

[Michael92]

Lmao! Well, it suppose to be Kakashi-sama. Haha xd Anyway it's really a cool one! Never thought that it going to be this way!! Btw, I can see that the 6th Hokage is Naruto. In fact, I had already suspected this from the start...from the first chapter! And Hinata, in this chapter...one of her speech...she said "You fool!" I was like...I never know that Hinata is like Sakura

But after all...it's awesome! ~Reps~

Well maybe it should, but then anbu might like to call him Mr. Kakashixd

Well at the end if you paid attention as i guess you did, then you would see that when the flashback ended "Naruto woke up"(If you remember that the "Hokage fell asleep" for awhile in the last chap.) and that in it self revealed him to be the 6th Hokage.

She`s not like Sakura If you read the narrator after it you could see that she said it wit great care, like she raised her voice, but still said it in her "Hinata way"

Oh, was the 6th hokage meant to be revealed in this chapter? I mean, I really didn't see that it was not Naruto from the first chapter. Though I had some doubts there but when he had his son named after Jiraiya, it was pretty obvious. then when it was revealed that he married Hinata, and even used FGT to get behind Tsunade after his note of arrival in 2hours (i think), it was supposed to tell everyone that its Naruto. hehehehehe...

It wasn`t meant, it was I might have hid it a little, but if you see my post above(my reply to Fallen) you will see when it was
Hehe, yeah i guess it was kinda obvious And i also had the same color code for "Naruto" and "Hokage" tooxd

Nice chapter man , can`t wait 4 the next one

Oh thanks mate I`ll link you

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

It wasn`t meant, it was I might have hid it a little, but if you see my post above(my reply to Fallen) you will see when it was
Hehe, yeah i guess it was kinda obvious And i also had the same color code for "Naruto" and "Hokage" tooxd

Yep, I've read that (your reply to fallen) and yes the color kinda gave me a hint at first.

 

[Michael92]

Yep, I've read that (your reply to fallen) and yes the color kinda gave me a hint at first.

Hehe, as intended i suppose

 

[Michael92]

Release Update: Chapter 7 won`t come out untill at least Friday 17th or later, because i chose to focus at the first chapter of the first chronicle instead.
You can expect it in about 20 hours... Thanks for being patient

Edit: After it has been released, I`m not sure when chapter 2 will come out and neither when the first chapter of the other chronicle will be released.

So chapter 7 of the main story is most likely the next release after the first chapter of the first chronicle.

Because i will be very busy next week with school and work, chapter 7 will be out earliest at Friday, but I can`t promise anything..

Edit 2: If you have no idea what I`m talking about, then you should check out my blog as hinted in my first post

 

[Hammy120290]

I just caught up on all chapters.

So far im really enjoying the story and development of the characters.

My only criticism woud be ( dont kill me ^^) I dont believe you have got Sasuke's personality right...just the dialogue with Madara and Naruto wasnt...Sasuke-esque lol.

I enjoyed the Chapter but I believe Sasuke wouldnt fight the way you wrote either...the way he has been fighting recently has been straight on the offensive, unlike Itachi which is basically a Passive-aggresive fighting style, I believe against an opponent as strong as Naruto Sasuke wouldn't pull punches and he would activate Susanoo straight away and also I dont believe Sasuke is one to say things like "What?! You should have been consumed by the flames for using wind element against it!"...just doesnt feel right, and the fact that Sasuke has the Sharingan he should be able to see Naruto used a water element jutsu, Sasuke is a Genius and the fact that Naruto is standing on a waterfall and Sasuke knows he has learned Wind Element and still has 1 other element to learn Sasuke should be smart enough to say "So you have learned Water Element too? Well...Chidori Eiso!!" or something...but thats just my view on Sasukes speech and how is dialogue would go..I may be wrong or overthinking things.

Sorry if you hate me lol. But Sasukes speech/dialogue would be my 1 and only crticism.

 

[Michael92]

I just caught up on all chapters.

So far im really enjoying the story and development of the characters.

My only criticism woud be ( dont kill me ^^) I dont believe you have got Sasuke's personality right...just the dialogue with Madara and Naruto wasnt...Sasuke-esque lol.

I enjoyed the Chapter but I believe Sasuke wouldnt fight the way you wrote either...the way he has been fighting recently has been straight on the offensive, unlike Itachi which is basically a Passive-aggresive fighting style, I believe against an opponent as strong as Naruto Sasuke wouldn't pull punches and he would activate Susanoo straight away and also I dont believe Sasuke is one to say things like "What?! You should have been consumed by the flames for using wind element against it!"...just doesnt feel right, and the fact that Sasuke has the Sharingan he should be able to see Naruto used a water element jutsu, Sasuke is a Genius and the fact that Naruto is standing on a waterfall and Sasuke knows he has learned Wind Element and still has 1 other element to learn Sasuke should be smart enough to say "So you have learned Water Element too? Well...Chidori Eiso!!" or something...but thats just my view on Sasukes speech and how is dialogue would go..I may be wrong or overthinking things.

Sorry if you hate me lol. But Sasukes speech/dialogue would be my 1 and only crticism.

Oh nice insightsO.O Never thought of it that way, even though i`m not too found with writing fighting dialogues

I`m just trying to focus on the battle, but then i always have to add somethingxd

Btw, now that this thread has gotten some attention again... Chapter 1 of my first chronicle will be out no mater what today within around 6 hours. Maybe I`ll try to make it more credible then

Thanks for catching up, appriciate it

 

[Hammy120290]

Lol thanks for taking the critism on the chin lol. For better fight dialogue I would recommend the fight structure/dialogue I would recommend Sasukes fight with the Raikage and with Danzo. For other dialogue i.e. Sociopathic Sasuke maybe try the chapters when naruto/sakura/kakashi are talking to him.

 

[Michael92]

Lol thanks for taking the critism on the chin lol. For better fight dialogue I would recommend the fight structure/dialogue I would recommend Sasukes fight with the Raikage and with Danzo. For other dialogue i.e. Sociopathic Sasuke maybe try the chapters when naruto/sakura/kakashi are talking to him.

Well yeah, my main reason behind his rather "rash" actions was because of his strives to take revenge, and Madara constantly nagging him + the thought of him declineing Naruto to be as strong as him i guess
But I`ll take your points into consideration

Anyway i forgot that the manga was released today so I`ll release my next chapter and the first one in the chronicle tomorrow instead..

 

[Michael92]

Update:

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Chapter 7 of the original series is not yet settled on a release date...

 

[yummey1]

that was 100% pure awesomeness!!! wait to go!!!!

 

[Michael92]

that was 100% pure awesomeness!!! wait to go!!!!

Did you read this one after Sasuke chronicles 1? You're suppose to do it the other way though

Thanks for reading I guess, glad you liked it


Update: Chapter 7 will finally be out by tomorrow night or Sunday night (It's Friday night 22.25 pm right here now if you wonder.)

Preview Info: As some of you know I've been giving out a little preview of Sasuke Chronicle 2, so I thought I would share some here as well.

People that are interested with reading the preview as well before the release, will have to have me on their msn. That's the only condition. So far 4 people have got it.
Not at my msn and want the preview as well? Contact me through vm or pm.

 

[Yūsuke1]

:O!!! its been more then a week, the new chapter isnt out yet T_T?!

 

[Michael92]

:O!!! its been more then a week, the new chapter isnt out yet T_T?!

During this evening


Sasuke Chronicles 2 Released:

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[kushina9]

I like how you made Hinata Naruto's wife

 

[yusufms]

dude this is incredible, i wish i had the guts to finish any of the 10 stories i started...