Actually, that was good. And it's fine. ^_^ So long as you understand the strike and can give a rough description of the strike and the direction of which you're using it, you should be fine in battle.Alright heres the first sweep again:
*Holding the bokken in my right hand, I make my hand go to the left side of my body, about wher my shoulder is, making my bokken go over as well, and as im doing this I crouch down. In one movement, my arm extends as far as possible, and keeping the bokken outward, and straight, blade pointing to my right, doing a horizontal strike from my left to right, while staying close to the ground.*
Well, I understand how the leg sweep works i guess, and I have seen the first sweep in a video game i just forgot which one. Also im doing it from left to right because that just seems better for me. Also once again sorry if i messed up again, cause its a little hard for me to explain this one, thats all. :|
Next is the rising slash. o_o Now, before we go on, I have to ask: Have you ever played Street Fighter? If so, I can make this move very simple, and it won't require a lot of description on either of our parts to describe the move. o.o