Return of the dead Uchiha pt 2

shelma

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WOW, darn! Is this what you call epic? Itachi freeing himself from that technique all because Naruto talked him out of it! And the way you make Naruto use his word to influence people, is just soo Naruto. Very, very nice!

I wonder if Naruto gets to do the same with Pain. But then, the title would no longer be Return of the dead Uchiha, right? xd:D
Thank u.Probably this is my second fanfic.Thank u for ur encouragement :D
 

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ok...4 imo i give u 8.5/10

nicely writen...im looking forward 4 more next time ,Shelma...

keep the work going n still need some built up...let ur imagination rollin'...
 
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