- Removed chakra drainingTendogan bio in sig (Toji)
( Yūgana sheru ) - Graceful Shell
Rank: S-rank
Type: Defensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 60 (-40 from opponent)
Damage points: (100)
Description: Yūgana sheru is a purely defensive technique that takes on the aspects of (Jūken: Chou) - Gentle Fist: Block, Eight Trigrams: Palm Rotating Heaven and the chakra draining of Hyuga, combining them for a swift yet effective defense. Used typically on close combat techniques, but usable to block certain blunt force techniques also, this technique is flexible in use and can be deployed in a moment's notice. When a physical blow is about to make contact with the user, whether from a taijutsu attack, kenjutsu attack, blunt force blast or even a punch from an earth golem, the user would instantly release chakra from his tenketsu at any point of the body or even the entire body. This, coupled with the rotations abilities being implemented, a small "shell" of rotating chakra that covers an area of the users choosing would be conjured for a brief moment. This would do a few things at once to protect the user from damage. Firstly, using a basic martial arts skill pushed a bit further than usual, the shell would move the users body part/body away from the blow as it attempts to make contact, therefore mitigating the damage that would have been done. Along with that, the rotating chakra would be rotated precisely to direct the attack in another direction, therefore completely mitigating the remaining damage if possible. Lastly upon impact with a living being, the shell would drain -50 chakra from the target and throw it away as waste. Even though this technique is used to mitigate damage done, the user still can be pushed back and such; this is simply used to stop the user from being harmed or fully harmed in cases of techniques that simply can't be stopped.
Note: Requires the Tendogan due to the sharp increase of chakra used when deploying the defense.
Note: Only usable 3× and only once per turn.
Note: Boosts to Hyuga/Jyuken techniques can be applied to this technique in the form of boosting the defense instead of damage. I.e. a Hyuga technique that boosts the rank or damage of a technique by +20, would instead boost this techniques defense by 20 if logical.
Declined, so I had to think about this because of the abilities it has; blocks Taijutsu attacks of up to 100 damage, theoretically higher due to the boosts associated with Tendogan, namely just 1 canon that turns this into 130 damage blocking. Then you are capable of reducing 50 chakra per hit. It's the damage capability combined with chakra loss that bothers me, not to mention 3 usages and one per turn isn't a real restriction.
- Updated restrictions
( Yūgana sheru ) - Graceful Shell
Rank: S-rank
Type: Defensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: (100)
Description: Yūgana sheru is a purely defensive technique that takes on the aspects of (Jūken: Chou) - Gentle Fist: Block, Eight Trigrams: Palm Rotating Heaven and the chakra draining of Hyuga, combining them for a swift yet effective defense. Used typically on close combat techniques, but usable to block certain blunt force techniques also, this technique is flexible in use and can be deployed in a moment's notice. When a physical blow is about to make contact with the user, whether from a taijutsu attack, kenjutsu attack, blunt force blast or even a punch from an earth golem, the user would instantly release chakra from his tenketsu at any point of the body or even the entire body. This, coupled with the rotations abilities being implemented, a small "shell" of rotating chakra that covers an area of the users choosing would be conjured for a brief moment. This would do a few things at once to protect the user from damage. Firstly, using a basic martial arts skill pushed a bit further than usual, the shell would move the users body part/body away from the blow as it attempts to make contact, therefore mitigating the damage that would have been done. Along with that, the rotating chakra would be rotated precisely to direct the attack in another direction, therefore completely mitigating the remaining damage if possible. Even though this technique is used to mitigate damage done, the user still can be pushed back and such; this is simply used to stop the user from being harmed or fully harmed in cases of techniques that simply can't be stopped.
Note: Requires the Tendogan due to the sharp increase of chakra used when deploying the defense.
Note: Only usable 3× with a 2 turn cool down
Note: No S-rank or higher Jyuken the same turn this is used
Note: Boosts to Hyuga/Jyuken techniques can be applied to this technique in the form of boosting the defense instead of damage. I.e. a Hyuga technique that boosts the rank or damage of a technique by +20, would instead boost this techniques defense by 20 if logical
Approved
- Removed Soul binding circle phasing capabilities from the techs and redid partsTendogan bio in sig (Toji)
( Hakke Tamashii Kūshishō ) - Gentle Step Ghost Lion Palm
Rank: S-rank
Type: Defensive, Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 70
Damage points: 120
Description: Through the use of raw chakra control or through his Tenkaitenyajū (Including partial), the user is able to create projectile versions of the Gentle Step Twin God/Lion Fists from their hands, albeit slightly different. This could even be seen as a sister technique of ( Hakke Kūshishō ) - Gentle Step Vacuum Lion Palm, from the similarities In looks and how they are used; Though unlike the golden color of the sister technique, this one would take on a pale white glowing effect. This technique also differs in the type of destruction it does when fired off, not doing the raw physical damage to everything around like it sister technique. In fact, this technique also takes on inherent properties of (Jūho: Tamashii Baindingu Saakuru) - Gentle Step: Soul Binding Circle; Lacking actual physical properties outside of its shape, thus passing through physical constructs such as solids and liquids. This doesn't stop it from interacting with energy based constructs though, such as fire, lightning or even other raw chakra. The real damage comes into play whenever it hits a human or other living being with chakra. Not only would the chakra seep into the body and do destructive damage to muscles and organs, but it would absorb chakra from the target and directly lower their chakra reserves. This chakra absorption would come at a rate of -50 but would not go back to the user, it would simply be taken away and wasted. These lion heads are capable of being fired in rapid succession or as single projectile, having it's power split unless firing at multiple targets. In the case of firing at multiple targets, the lion heads would each carry 100 damage instead of the maximum, and can only work with up to two targets before splitting damage.
This technique doesn't require the used to have Tenkaitenyajū active, but if used through Tenkaitenyajū it would have slightly added buffs. Specifically it would be able to move at 35 speeds like its sister technique and drain chakra at rates of -100.
Note: Require the user to have activated his Tendogan.
Note: Can only be used by Hyuga Clan members
Note: Can only be used 4x with a two turns cool down between uses
( Hachidori no yasashī uta ) - Gentle Song of The Hummingbird
Rank: S-rank
Type: Defensive, Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40 (60)
Damage points: 80 (120)
Description: Gentle song is a Jyuken technique developed by a Hyuga that liked to indulge in mid to long range combate along with his Jyuken style. By implementing both shape manipulation and Vacuum palm, the Hyuga was able to create a technique that allowed them to make use of the precise attacking of tenketsu at a range. With thrusts similar to that of the Eight Trigrams attacks, the user would release projectiles that resembled ghostly versions of small hummingbirds; Releasing a flock of 128 in mere moments. These hummingbirds, though having shape to them, would take on the properties of (Jūho: Tamashii Baindingu Saakuru) - Gentle Step: Soul Binding Circle and would pass through physical obstacles such as earth or water and would move at twice the users base speed. The special thing about these projectiles would come into play once hitting a living being with a chakra system. Not only would the birds damage muscles when going through the body, but they explode inside, flooding the chakra system with chakra and damaging the tenketsu. This would cause the same drawbacks as the Eight Trigrams One Hundred Twenty-Eight Palms technique; Eliminating their ability to use B-rank and above levels of chakra for two turns. In cases that the user has the Tendogan, the user would be capable of shooting 256 hummingbirds and take on the effects of the Eight Trigrams Two Hundred Fifty-Six Palms; Not only increasing what its base damage is, but also taking on the chakra sealing ability of semi-permanently dropping their chakra totals to half.
Note: Usable 3× with a two turn cool down, though Tendogan variant can only be used once.
Note: When Tendogan variant is used the user can't use any S-rank or higher Jyuken techniques next turn
-Declined-
( Hakke Tamashii Kūshishō ) - Gentle Step Ghost Lion Palm
Rank: S-rank
Type: Defensive, Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 70
Damage points: 120
Description: Through the use of raw chakra control or through his Tenkaitenyajū (Including partial), the user is able to create projectile versions of the Gentle Step Twin God/Lion Fists from their hands, albeit slightly different. This could even be seen as a sister technique of ( Hakke Kūshishō ) - Gentle Step Vacuum Lion Palm, from the similarities In looks and how they are used; Though unlike the golden color of the sister technique, this one would take on a pale white glowing effect. This technique also differs in the type of destruction it does when fired off, not doing the raw physical damage to everything around like it sister technique. In fact, this technique is also Infused with Yin and takes on inherent properties of Hands of Sloth; Lacking actual physical properties outside of its shape, thus passing through physical constructs such as solids and liquids. This doesn't stop it from interacting with energy based constructs though, such as fire, lightning or even other raw chakra. The real damage comes into play whenever it hits a human or other living being with chakra. Not only would the chakra seep into the body and become physical to do destructive damage to muscles and organs, but it would absorb chakra from the target and directly lower their chakra reserves. This chakra absorption would come at a rate of -50 but would not go back to the user, it would simply be taken away and wasted. These lion heads are capable of being fired in rapid succession or as single projectile, having it's power split unless firing at multiple targets. In the case of firing at multiple targets, the lion heads would each carry 100 damage instead of the maximum, and can only work with up to two targets before splitting damage.
This technique doesn't require the used to have Tenkaitenyajū active, but if used through Tenkaitenyajū it would have slightly added buffs. Specifically it would be able to move at 35 speeds like its sister technique and drain chakra at rates of -100.
Note: Require the user to have activated his Tendogan.
Note: Can only be used by Hyuga Clan members
Note: Can only be used 2x with a two turns cool down between uses
Note: No Yin release in the same or next turn of this being used
Declined, for starters, Yin doesn’t grant techniques the ability to be intangible anymore and techniques based on it were revoked. Secondly, the Tenkai enhancement regarding speed can’t be allowed. It’s the same as saying you’re submitting a normal Amaterasu tech that gets boosted if used with Susano’o active. It’s either going to be completely dependent on being used in that state or have a form that’s not enhanced by the state.
( Hachidori no yasashī uta ) - Gentle Song of The Hummingbird
Rank: S-rank
Type: Defensive, Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40 (60)
Damage points: 80 (120)
Description: Gentle song is a Jyuken technique developed by a Hyuga that liked to indulge in mid to long range combat along with his Jyuken style. By implementing both shape manipulation and Vacuum palm, the Hyuga was able to create a technique that allowed them to make use of the precise attacking of tenketsu at a range. With thrusts similar to that of the Eight Trigrams attacks, the user would release projectiles that resembled ghostly versions of small hummingbirds; Releasing a flock of 128 in mere moments. The special thing about these projectiles would come into play once hitting a living being with a chakra system. Not only would the birds damage the flesh and muscles when going through the body, but they explode inside, flooding the chakra system with chakra and damaging the tenketsu. This would cause the same drawbacks as the Eight Trigrams One Hundred Twenty-Eight Palms technique; Eliminating their ability to use B-rank and above levels of chakra for two turns. In cases that the user has the Tendogan, the user would be capable of shooting 256 hummingbirds and take on the effects of the Eight Trigrams Two Hundred Fifty-Six Palms; Not only increasing what its base damage is, but also taking on the chakra sealing ability of semi-permanently dropping their chakra totals to half. Being Augmented by the effects of Heavenly rotations, this technique would lose no power during clashes it comes out the winner of.
Note: Usable 3× with a two turn cool down, though Tendogan variant can only be used once.
Note: When Tendogan variant is used the user can't use any S-rank or higher Jyuken techniques next turn
Declined, the bold makes this a definite no. I’m not sure how this is meant to be worded but this isn’t an inherent ability of the Byakugan’s rotation techniques. This is an ability only one technique has and that’s due to being one of it’s two only abilities. The stronger a custom is, the less of a chance it has of added strong canon skills. That’s a general rule of thumb and includes the more perks/mini abilities a skill has as well.
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