Constructive Criticism Welcome (:

[Sauron]

Hi, I recently took drawing back up, let me know what you all think!

Constructive criticism is more than welcome, I can take it (;

Spoiler: Greyscale

Sheik - Hyrule Warriors

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Mitsuki - Boruto

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Spoiler: Colour

Naruto - Kurama Sage Mode

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(First time drawing in colour so any advice would be appreciated)

Thanks!

 

[Chikombo]

You are talented.

 

[Sauron]

You are talented.

Thank you

 

[HowDidIGetPrem]

Really good shading. It looks great in spite of the images being so large. Even the smallest parts have good shading.

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I don't think your shapes are pronounced enough though. You highlight them pretty well judging by the wrinkles of Naruto's nose, but it becomes difficult to differentiate the shapes and markings from the shading. If I'd never seen Naruto before, I'd be a bit confused about the shape of his hair and what's going on around his eyes. To contrast this to similar

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s of the scene, the big difference is that their shades are easier to differentiate from one another and are distinguished from the shapes due to lacking the black lining that the shapes have.

Your shades are too similar in color and causes them to lose their depth. Look at the areas around the innermost corners of Naruto's eyes and under them. The shading is similarly dark throughout the entire area it covers when it should be noticeably darker near deeper areas like the very corners of Naruto's eyes. You could probably differentiate the markings from the shading by making the marking's color more solid by ridding of the white as well. Those are my thoughts, but I'm not really an artist or anything so I may written against intentional stylistic choices.

 

[Sauron]

Really good shading. It looks great in spite of the images being so large. Even the smallest parts have good shading.

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I don't think your shapes are pronounced enough though. You highlight them pretty well judging by the wrinkles of Naruto's nose, but it becomes difficult to differentiate the shapes and markings from the shading. If I'd never seen Naruto before, I'd be a bit confused about the shape of his hair and what's going on around his eyes. To contrast this to similar

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s of the scene, the big difference is that their shades are easier to differentiate from one another and are distinguished from the shapes due to lacking the black lining that the shapes have.

Your shades are too similar in color and causes them to lose their depth. Look at the areas around the innermost corners of Naruto's eyes and under them. The shading is similarly dark throughout the entire area it covers when it should be noticeably darker near deeper areas like the very corners of Naruto's eyes. You could probably differentiate the markings from the shading by making the marking's color more solid by ridding of the white as well. Those are my thoughts, but I'm not really an artist or anything so I may written against intentional stylistic choices.

I really appreciate your advice, particularly with the Naruto drawing, as it was my first time using colours I wasn’t really sure what I was doing, but I completely understand what you mean with the shades being too similar and not very easy to differentiate between, next time I’ll use slightly more contrasting shades to try to capture a little more depth!

Thanks again

 

[Koko]

Nice work
Just push the pencil more when you do the coloring.

 

[Sauron]

Nice work
Just push the pencil more when you do the coloring.

Thanks Koko I'll keep that in mind!

 

[Koko]

Thanks Koko I'll keep that in mind!

Wanted to have a conversation
Do you mind?

 

[Sauron]

Wanted to have a conversation
Do you mind?

Of course I don’t mind

 

[Animegoin]

I can only recommend that you actually pronounce Mitsuki’s nose bridge. You made it an inward-curved slope that extends from his forehead with no beginning. Refer to the following image, the arrow points to the beginning of the nose bridge:

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[minamoto 👑]

I can only recommend that you actually pronounce Mitsuki’s nose bridge. You made it a inward-curved slope that extends from his forehead with no beginning. Refer to the following image, the arrow points to the beginning of the nose bridge:

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ur english is very good compared to mine...mine sux..

 

[Animegoin]

ur english is very good compared to mine...mine sux..

I’ve seen your YouTube videos, Sozo! You can’t fool me!!

 

[minamoto 👑]

I’ve seen your YouTube videos, Sozo! You can’t fool me!!

what????....even sozo's english is bad...so where u from???..

 

[Animegoin]

what????....even sozo's english is bad...so where u from???..

Your English is better on YouTube than it is here. Why!!!??

 

[minamoto 👑]

Your English is better on YouTube than it is here. Why!!!??

ok at least is better then mine...becuz sozo is sozo...

by a way i have expieirnce wit pipole here :

-black americains were very nice to me and only 2% of them insulted my bad english..

-white americains only 9% insulted my english...

-but 85,31% of non native enligsh speakers were ones who insult my english a lot ...especially indians...
indians are rude to me....like wth pipole u not even english native speakers..

anyway im work hard to improve my english..

 

[Animegoin]

ok at least is better then mine...becuz sozo is sozo...

by a way i have expieirnce wit pipole here :

-black americains were very nice to me and only 2% of them insulted my bad english..

-white americains only 9% insulted my english...

-but 85,31% of non native enligsh speakers were ones who insult my english a lot ...especially indians...
indians are rude to me....like wth pipole u not even english native speakers..

anyway im work hard to improve my english..

We’re off topic, Sozo. Respect the OP!

 

[minamoto 👑]

We’re off topic, Sozo. Respect the OP!

gottammit tute i forgot myself....plz mods im sorry...just one last thing where u from answer me in teh profile section...