(Juno) Artemis
Type: Puppet
Rank: A
Range: NA
Chakra: 30
Damage: NA
Description: In ancient stories, Artemis was known to be the goddess of the hunt. Artemis is a rather average puppet height wise due to it being only five feet tall. It is clothed in rudimentary fabrics that run throughout her entire body. The most distinguishing feature about Artemis would have to be her holster used to carry a large amount of spear tipped arrows. In her holster, Artemis holds a variety of different arrows, some attached with sealing tags or explosion tags. Upon being summoned to the field, Artemis will hold in its arms a wooden bow that it will use to release arrows throughout the field. These arrows, for the most part, can reach up to long range with the help of the chakra the user uses when the arrows are released. There are specific arrows that Artemis has, but the user is also free to release free form arrows of the falling choices: wooden arrows by themselves or arrows with explosive. The user is free to release up to four arrows of freeform nature at once. Regarding its specialty arrows, the user is free to release up to two of any kind in different directions if wanted but at the cost of two moves. If by any chance, Artemis’s bow is destroyed, the user can retrieve up to three spare bows from inside of her body.
Abilities:
Sacred Arrow: The first ability of Artemis calls for the user to attach three arrows to its bow where it will then propel the arrows up to long range with the help of its chakra infused bow. The arrows will all be arranged into the formation of a triangle around whatever it is nearby. Instantly, as contact has been made the Fūinjutsu tags will activate and begin emitting a magenta colored barrier that will attempt to close in on whatever it is around. The point of this barrier will be to entrap enemies in a barrier that constantly closes in on them until they are crushed. If desired due to how these arrows work the user can instead use it as a protective shield to stop incoming attacks by surrounding themselves in the barrier or by placing the barrier in front of them. Let it be noted, that each arrow is placed at least five meters from its target, but if the user is placing the arrows around themselves then they can cover any allies five meters around them. If the arrows are removed from the ground then the barrier will be dispelled. (A-Rank)
Chaos Arrow: The next set of arrows have more of an elemental touch them. By first placing a string attached arrow laced with a Fūinjutsu tag, the will the propel it up to long range. While it is in mid-air the tag will activate unsealing a wide array of stringed arrows that cover a wide range and are hard outrun. A special thing about these arrows is that they can be coated in a layer of any specified base five elements and are able to be controlled via a string in order to allow for directional control. (A-rank)
Exorcism Arrow: The Exorcism arrow is one that has a sealing jutsu imbued inside of it. The seal is set to activate whenever the arrow makes contact with foreign chakras such as the enemy or the enemy’s technique. Upon expulsion of this arrow, the arrow will glow in a bright white light. The thing so special about this arrow is that upon contact with a surface the user will be able to seal away impurities and foreign chakra upon contact. For example, the user can use this to target poisonous smoke clouds or other toxins and upon the arrow making contact with the source it will seal all of it away. In regards, to enemy techniques, this technique can be used on A-rank jutsu within reason in order to seal them away. For instance, if this seal were to make contact with the Stone Golem technique, upon the arrow touching the creature, ethereal arms can be seen manifesting from the arrow and will begin to submerge the technique from all angles until the beast has been sealed inside of the arrow. This ethereal arms can still be countered logic wise with an opposing technique, and if desired the user can choose to shoot the arrow at a piece of the ground in front of a jutsu or person and release the ethereal arms from there, but they can only extend up to five meters. (A-rank)
Miasma Arrow: The last arrow is one that has a lethal part attached to it. This arrow has at the end of it a poisonous smoke bomb that can be filled with any poison the user currently knows. Upon the arrow making contact with a solid surface it will release a poisonous smoke cloud up to ten meters around where it went off. The user can release up to three arrows of this kind at once and upon them making contact with the ground smoke will be dispersed everywhere.
(Abigōru) Abigor
Type: Puppet
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: NA
Description: Abigor is a rather tall, demonic oriented puppet whose frame is larger than any ordinary puppet or human because it is around eight meters tall making it a distinguished puppet. As far as aesthetics go, Abigor is a rather bulky puppet that possesses a brownish hue and appears to be coated in a layer of metallic plates. Abigor is a grotesque, monstrous puppet entity with several lesser accessories scattered throughout its body. Some of its more distinguished characteristics would have to be the massive cannon that it holds on its arms. The cannon happens to be the puppets main source of power and with it allows the puppeteer to expel a variety of different types of attacks.
Abilities:
Elemental Cannon: The first ability of Abigor involves the user utilizing a Fuinjutsu tag located inside of cannon. By infusing thirty chakra points into the cannon the user will be able to release from it an elemental stream of the desired element. The cannon will release a thick and wide stream of the desired element that the user can choose to use to hit multiple opponents by simply moving the cannon around. This particular ability can extend up to long range.
Goo Cannon: The second ability of Abigor, involves the user channeling chakra into the cannon as previously done, but this time around the chakra will manifest itself into a sphere of concentrated chakra. Once ready the user can quickly release up to two chakra spheres in quick succession towards a targeted area. The special thing about these spheres in that the moment they make contact with the ground it will begin to disperse up to five meters around the targeted area. Once contact has been made, the ground will have been layered in a special chakra that is very sticky which can be used to immobilize targets. (A-rank)
Absorption Cannon: The third ability of Abigor, involves the user sending chakra points into a seal inside of Abigor's cannon. Once the user has done so they will point the cannon into the direction of an incoming attack. In response to the attack, the cannon will begin to unleash a powerful sealing jutsu that will begin to drag inside of it any incoming attacks or persons. The thing about this sealing jutsu is that the suctioning wave can only be felt when the object the user is trying to seal is five meters away. Also, when the user is trying to seal away a technique they are only able to seal away certain techniques which just means that jutsu that cover a wide range and scale will not be able to be sealed inside. Despite the cannon being unable to seal certain jutsu, it is still possible for the user to seal large jutsu because once the attack is within range of the suction wave the attack will become compressed and will be dragged inside of the cannon. When a person or sentient creation is within range of the suction wave they will find it difficult to move due to powerful suctioning wave This ability is equal to A-rank and can seal A-rank jutsu.
Poison Cannon: By utilizing a compartment inside of the cannon, the user will be able to release from the cannon a concentrated stream of gaseous poison throughout the field. This ability has the strength of an A-rank and, it is possible for the user to utilize it in order to counter other attacks or they could use it to blast away opponents with a powerful stream of smoke. It is possible for the user to give this poison stream the effects of one of their specialty poison. For example, puppeteers can choose to give this poison the effects of their specialty poison. (A-rank)
Notes:
~Each ability has a range of Short-Long.
~Must have training in Poison release in order to use the Poison cannon
(Shiru tame ni) Saber
Type: Puppet
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: 30
Damage: NA
Description: Saber is a rather tall puppet being around six feet tall. Saber is a wooden puppet crafted in the image of a man. Image-wise, Saber wears an armor with metallic plates which is purely a cosmetic part of its design. The thing that is so special about Saber is that he was crafted to be a sword specialist. He owns up to the name by carrying two ordinary katanas in his hands and other than the swords that he carries when he is summoned to the field there is nothing else unique about the puppet upon first glance. Saber, however, has Fuinjutsu seals scattered across its body that allows it to summon forth unique swords that are combined with Fuinjutsu in order to make deadly combos. If desired, the user can even passively activate a seal on the puppet with a surge of five chakra points and summon forth up to two ordinary katanas.
Abilities:
The first ability of the puppet involves the user manipulating the swords in Saber’s hands and pointing them in the desired direction. The swords can be pointing in different directions, but once a direction has been found the user will charge their puppet with raw chakra and upon doing so the puppet will release from the tips of its blades a thin stream of chakra. This chakra is refined so that it can easily cut through objects or pierce them. When using this ability, the user is free to manipulate the chakra in order to make abrupt turns or to move the arms of the puppet in order to allow for the chakra streams to move into another direction. If desired, the user can pierce the ground with the swords and cause the chakra streams to travel underground and emerge to attack the opponent. This particular ability is equivalent to A-rank and can extend up to long range.
The next ability of the puppet requires the puppet to retrieve two katanas from somewhere inside of its body or utilize the ones in its hands in order to place on the ground directly below the puppet. Upon the tips of the swords being placed on the ground, a fuinjutsu tag located on the puppet will activate and from it, an emerald barrier will spring forth from the swords. The barrier will extend up to five meters of where the swords were, but the special thing about this barrier is that upon its emergence the user can control the barrier to repel foreign chakra sources around it. This just means that the user can use the barrier in order to push away an enemy to the outskirts of the barrier which would be five meters away, but they could also use the barrier in order keep their allies inside. The barrier can also be used to push away other techniques such as smoke or mist that are around the swords when they release the barrier. Otherwise, the barrier is able to sustain up to A-rank damage but can be canceled if the opponent finds a way to remove the swords from the ground.
The last ability of Saber is the ability of the user to open a compartment on Saber’s left arm and send chakra into a seal located on the puppet in order to release a barrage of katanas from the seal that will be attached to a string. With the help of the strings, the user can manipulate them to alter their directions suddenly which can be useful to attack multiple targets at once. If desired the user can also choose to attach a poisonous smoke bomb filled with a poison of their choice and once the swords make contact with an object the user will release a smoke cloud up to a meter of where the sword was. This particular ability can extend up to long-range and covers a wide range making it difficult to outrun especially with the help of the strings. This technique, essentially, could allow the user to fill a good percentage of the battlefield with smoke.
Notes:
~Chakra stream ability is equal to A-rank.
~The barrier technique is equal to A-rank.
~The barrage of Katanas technique is equal to A-rank.
(Jupiter) Zeus
Type: Puppet
Rank: A
Range: NA
Chakra: 30
Damage: NA
Description: Zeus is a puppet based off of Greek mythology. Zeus was the sky and thunder god in ancient Greek religion, who rules as king of the gods of Mount Olympus. Zeus is a fairly tall puppet being around six feet tall making it taller than most ordinary puppets. Zeus wears a torn white cloth around his body that covers his legs, but keeps his chest exposed. One of its most unique characteristics is that it holds a metallic lightning rod in its left and right hands. Most of Zeus’s abilities are derived off of lightning hence the reason for the lightning rod.
Abilities:
The first ability that Zeus has is based off using the two lightning rods that are in its hand. By activating a seal on the lightning rods the user can release form them a lightning bolt that can extend up ten meters of wherever the rods where pointed. With this ability, it is possible for the user to adjust the puppet’s arms in order to release the lightning bolt into different directions, but the overall damage caused by this attack is equivalent to A-rank. When releasing the lightning bolt directly at an opponent, it is possible for the user to cause electricity to branch off of the main bolt in order to hit multiple targets. It is also possible for the user to place the rods on the ground and activate the seal and release underground a stream of lightning and once it reaches its designated location the user can cause lightning to erupt from the ground in a ten meter radius of wherever the lightning bolts go off at and can extend up to ten meters in the sky once it has been done.
The second ability of the rods is that the user has the ability to activate another sealing tag in response to an incoming lightning up to S-Rank. Zeus will then place the rods in a vertical position and emit a golden barrier five meters around itself. This next ability comes into action upon a lightning attack coming within five meters of the barrier and will then begin to seal/drag the lightning based attack inside of the rods. Once this is done, the rods will become charged with electricity and this can be seen as lightning currents branching off of it. Once the user has charged the rods with an incoming attack electricity can be seen flowing through it and will allow the user to boost the next attack used by rods by +20. Alternatively, it is possible for the user to release the sealed technique in the form of a lightning bolt/stream towards an opponent that is up to long range. As always the user can opt to point the rods in different directions in order to allow the lightning currents to attack different opponents.
Lastly, the user can infuse ten chakra points into a seal on Zeus’s body causing its body to emit a bright white light up to five meters around itself. This light does not harm anyone’s eyesight but does prevent the opponent from seeing what is happening around Zeus and what is happening to Zeus directly. Essentially, this light will block the opponent’s line of vision with a bright light. This ability can last up to one turn and can only be used three times. Additionally, it is possible for Zeus to own up to its name as a god because on the soles of Zeus’s feet are holes that the user can pour chakra into. By spending five chakra points every time the user can passively activate an ability of Zeus that allows it to move throughout the field and scale the skies with the help of the chakra pushing him around.
Note: The first ability has a one-turn cooldown whereas the second ability has a two-turn cooldown.
Training's if needed:
Type: Puppet
Rank: A
Range: NA
Chakra: 30
Damage: NA
Description: In ancient stories, Artemis was known to be the goddess of the hunt. Artemis is a rather average puppet height wise due to it being only five feet tall. It is clothed in rudimentary fabrics that run throughout her entire body. The most distinguishing feature about Artemis would have to be her holster used to carry a large amount of spear tipped arrows. In her holster, Artemis holds a variety of different arrows, some attached with sealing tags or explosion tags. Upon being summoned to the field, Artemis will hold in its arms a wooden bow that it will use to release arrows throughout the field. These arrows, for the most part, can reach up to long range with the help of the chakra the user uses when the arrows are released. There are specific arrows that Artemis has, but the user is also free to release free form arrows of the falling choices: wooden arrows by themselves or arrows with explosive. The user is free to release up to four arrows of freeform nature at once. Regarding its specialty arrows, the user is free to release up to two of any kind in different directions if wanted but at the cost of two moves. If by any chance, Artemis’s bow is destroyed, the user can retrieve up to three spare bows from inside of her body.
Abilities:
Sacred Arrow: The first ability of Artemis calls for the user to attach three arrows to its bow where it will then propel the arrows up to long range with the help of its chakra infused bow. The arrows will all be arranged into the formation of a triangle around whatever it is nearby. Instantly, as contact has been made the Fūinjutsu tags will activate and begin emitting a magenta colored barrier that will attempt to close in on whatever it is around. The point of this barrier will be to entrap enemies in a barrier that constantly closes in on them until they are crushed. If desired due to how these arrows work the user can instead use it as a protective shield to stop incoming attacks by surrounding themselves in the barrier or by placing the barrier in front of them. Let it be noted, that each arrow is placed at least five meters from its target, but if the user is placing the arrows around themselves then they can cover any allies five meters around them. If the arrows are removed from the ground then the barrier will be dispelled. (A-Rank)
Chaos Arrow: The next set of arrows have more of an elemental touch them. By first placing a string attached arrow laced with a Fūinjutsu tag, the will the propel it up to long range. While it is in mid-air the tag will activate unsealing a wide array of stringed arrows that cover a wide range and are hard outrun. A special thing about these arrows is that they can be coated in a layer of any specified base five elements and are able to be controlled via a string in order to allow for directional control. (A-rank)
Exorcism Arrow: The Exorcism arrow is one that has a sealing jutsu imbued inside of it. The seal is set to activate whenever the arrow makes contact with foreign chakras such as the enemy or the enemy’s technique. Upon expulsion of this arrow, the arrow will glow in a bright white light. The thing so special about this arrow is that upon contact with a surface the user will be able to seal away impurities and foreign chakra upon contact. For example, the user can use this to target poisonous smoke clouds or other toxins and upon the arrow making contact with the source it will seal all of it away. In regards, to enemy techniques, this technique can be used on A-rank jutsu within reason in order to seal them away. For instance, if this seal were to make contact with the Stone Golem technique, upon the arrow touching the creature, ethereal arms can be seen manifesting from the arrow and will begin to submerge the technique from all angles until the beast has been sealed inside of the arrow. This ethereal arms can still be countered logic wise with an opposing technique, and if desired the user can choose to shoot the arrow at a piece of the ground in front of a jutsu or person and release the ethereal arms from there, but they can only extend up to five meters. (A-rank)
Miasma Arrow: The last arrow is one that has a lethal part attached to it. This arrow has at the end of it a poisonous smoke bomb that can be filled with any poison the user currently knows. Upon the arrow making contact with a solid surface it will release a poisonous smoke cloud up to ten meters around where it went off. The user can release up to three arrows of this kind at once and upon them making contact with the ground smoke will be dispersed everywhere.
Declined: choose one element for Chaos Arrow, specify a poison for Miasma Arrow, and add cooldowns.
(Abigōru) Abigor
Type: Puppet
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: NA
Description: Abigor is a rather tall, demonic oriented puppet whose frame is larger than any ordinary puppet or human because it is around eight meters tall making it a distinguished puppet. As far as aesthetics go, Abigor is a rather bulky puppet that possesses a brownish hue and appears to be coated in a layer of metallic plates. Abigor is a grotesque, monstrous puppet entity with several lesser accessories scattered throughout its body. Some of its more distinguished characteristics would have to be the massive cannon that it holds on its arms. The cannon happens to be the puppets main source of power and with it allows the puppeteer to expel a variety of different types of attacks.
Abilities:
Elemental Cannon: The first ability of Abigor involves the user utilizing a Fuinjutsu tag located inside of cannon. By infusing thirty chakra points into the cannon the user will be able to release from it an elemental stream of the desired element. The cannon will release a thick and wide stream of the desired element that the user can choose to use to hit multiple opponents by simply moving the cannon around. This particular ability can extend up to long range.
Goo Cannon: The second ability of Abigor, involves the user channeling chakra into the cannon as previously done, but this time around the chakra will manifest itself into a sphere of concentrated chakra. Once ready the user can quickly release up to two chakra spheres in quick succession towards a targeted area. The special thing about these spheres in that the moment they make contact with the ground it will begin to disperse up to five meters around the targeted area. Once contact has been made, the ground will have been layered in a special chakra that is very sticky which can be used to immobilize targets. (A-rank)
Absorption Cannon: The third ability of Abigor, involves the user sending chakra points into a seal inside of Abigor's cannon. Once the user has done so they will point the cannon into the direction of an incoming attack. In response to the attack, the cannon will begin to unleash a powerful sealing jutsu that will begin to drag inside of it any incoming attacks or persons. The thing about this sealing jutsu is that the suctioning wave can only be felt when the object the user is trying to seal is five meters away. Also, when the user is trying to seal away a technique they are only able to seal away certain techniques which just means that jutsu that cover a wide range and scale will not be able to be sealed inside. Despite the cannon being unable to seal certain jutsu, it is still possible for the user to seal large jutsu because once the attack is within range of the suction wave the attack will become compressed and will be dragged inside of the cannon. When a person or sentient creation is within range of the suction wave they will find it difficult to move due to powerful suctioning wave This ability is equal to A-rank and can seal A-rank jutsu.
Poison Cannon: By utilizing a compartment inside of the cannon, the user will be able to release from the cannon a concentrated stream of gaseous poison throughout the field. This ability has the strength of an A-rank and, it is possible for the user to utilize it in order to counter other attacks or they could use it to blast away opponents with a powerful stream of smoke. It is possible for the user to give this poison stream the effects of one of their specialty poison. For example, puppeteers can choose to give this poison the effects of their specialty poison. (A-rank)
Notes:
~Each ability has a range of Short-Long.
~Must have training in Poison release in order to use the Poison cannon
Declined: choose one element for Elemental Cannon, specify a poison for Poison Cannon, and add cooldowns
(Shiru tame ni) Saber
Type: Puppet
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: 30
Damage: NA
Description: Saber is a rather tall puppet being around six feet tall. Saber is a wooden puppet crafted in the image of a man. Image-wise, Saber wears an armor with metallic plates which is purely a cosmetic part of its design. The thing that is so special about Saber is that he was crafted to be a sword specialist. He owns up to the name by carrying two ordinary katanas in his hands and other than the swords that he carries when he is summoned to the field there is nothing else unique about the puppet upon first glance. Saber, however, has Fuinjutsu seals scattered across its body that allows it to summon forth unique swords that are combined with Fuinjutsu in order to make deadly combos. If desired, the user can even passively activate a seal on the puppet with a surge of five chakra points and summon forth up to two ordinary katanas.
Abilities:
The first ability of the puppet involves the user manipulating the swords in Saber’s hands and pointing them in the desired direction. The swords can be pointing in different directions, but once a direction has been found the user will charge their puppet with raw chakra and upon doing so the puppet will release from the tips of its blades a thin stream of chakra. This chakra is refined so that it can easily cut through objects or pierce them. When using this ability, the user is free to manipulate the chakra in order to make abrupt turns or to move the arms of the puppet in order to allow for the chakra streams to move into another direction. If desired, the user can pierce the ground with the swords and cause the chakra streams to travel underground and emerge to attack the opponent. This particular ability is equivalent to A-rank and can extend up to long range.
The next ability of the puppet requires the puppet to retrieve two katanas from somewhere inside of its body or utilize the ones in its hands in order to place on the ground directly below the puppet. Upon the tips of the swords being placed on the ground, a fuinjutsu tag located on the puppet will activate and from it, an emerald barrier will spring forth from the swords. The barrier will extend up to five meters of where the swords were, but the special thing about this barrier is that upon its emergence the user can control the barrier to repel foreign chakra sources around it. This just means that the user can use the barrier in order to push away an enemy to the outskirts of the barrier which would be five meters away, but they could also use the barrier in order keep their allies inside. The barrier can also be used to push away other techniques such as smoke or mist that are around the swords when they release the barrier. Otherwise, the barrier is able to sustain up to A-rank damage but can be canceled if the opponent finds a way to remove the swords from the ground.
The last ability of Saber is the ability of the user to open a compartment on Saber’s left arm and send chakra into a seal located on the puppet in order to release a barrage of katanas from the seal that will be attached to a string. With the help of the strings, the user can manipulate them to alter their directions suddenly which can be useful to attack multiple targets at once. If desired the user can also choose to attach a poisonous smoke bomb filled with a poison of their choice and once the swords make contact with an object the user will release a smoke cloud up to a meter of where the sword was. This particular ability can extend up to long-range and covers a wide range making it difficult to outrun especially with the help of the strings. This technique, essentially, could allow the user to fill a good percentage of the battlefield with smoke.
Notes:
~Chakra stream ability is equal to A-rank.
~The barrier technique is equal to A-rank.
~The barrage of Katanas technique is equal to A-rank.
Declined: specify a poison and add cooldowns.
(Jupiter) Zeus
Type: Puppet
Rank: A
Range: NA
Chakra: 30
Damage: NA
Description: Zeus is a puppet based off of Greek mythology. Zeus was the sky and thunder god in ancient Greek religion, who rules as king of the gods of Mount Olympus. Zeus is a fairly tall puppet being around six feet tall making it taller than most ordinary puppets. Zeus wears a torn white cloth around his body that covers his legs, but keeps his chest exposed. One of its most unique characteristics is that it holds a metallic lightning rod in its left and right hands. Most of Zeus’s abilities are derived off of lightning hence the reason for the lightning rod.
Abilities:
The first ability that Zeus has is based off using the two lightning rods that are in its hand. By activating a seal on the lightning rods the user can release form them a lightning bolt that can extend up ten meters of wherever the rods where pointed. With this ability, it is possible for the user to adjust the puppet’s arms in order to release the lightning bolt into different directions, but the overall damage caused by this attack is equivalent to A-rank. When releasing the lightning bolt directly at an opponent, it is possible for the user to cause electricity to branch off of the main bolt in order to hit multiple targets. It is also possible for the user to place the rods on the ground and activate the seal and release underground a stream of lightning and once it reaches its designated location the user can cause lightning to erupt from the ground in a ten meter radius of wherever the lightning bolts go off at and can extend up to ten meters in the sky once it has been done.
The second ability of the rods is that the user has the ability to activate another sealing tag in response to an incoming lightning up to S-Rank. Zeus will then place the rods in a vertical position and emit a golden barrier five meters around itself. This next ability comes into action upon a lightning attack coming within five meters of the barrier and will then begin to seal/drag the lightning based attack inside of the rods. Once this is done, the rods will become charged with electricity and this can be seen as lightning currents branching off of it. Once the user has charged the rods with an incoming attack electricity can be seen flowing through it and will allow the user to boost the next attack used by rods by +20. Alternatively, it is possible for the user to release the sealed technique in the form of a lightning bolt/stream towards an opponent that is up to long range. As always the user can opt to point the rods in different directions in order to allow the lightning currents to attack different opponents.
Lastly, the user can infuse ten chakra points into a seal on Zeus’s body causing its body to emit a bright white light up to five meters around itself. This light does not harm anyone’s eyesight but does prevent the opponent from seeing what is happening around Zeus and what is happening to Zeus directly. Essentially, this light will block the opponent’s line of vision with a bright light. This ability can last up to one turn and can only be used three times. Additionally, it is possible for Zeus to own up to its name as a god because on the soles of Zeus’s feet are holes that the user can pour chakra into. By spending five chakra points every time the user can passively activate an ability of Zeus that allows it to move throughout the field and scale the skies with the help of the chakra pushing him around.
Note: The first ability has a one-turn cooldown whereas the second ability has a two-turn cooldown.
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