[KG] Sand with L-sama

[Excision]

Katora sits, eyes closed in the middle of the desert, iron sand floating around him as he waits.

 

[Detective L]

An odd man flies onto the training field, with Sand as his medium. He was indeed a master of Sand Ninjutsu, and today, he would groom a new student.

"Heyo there, let's begin with the easy stuff. What do you know of Sand, why do you want to learn of it and what makes it special?"

He asked, as the sand subsided beneath him, falling uselessly.

 

[Excision]

An odd man flies onto the training field, with Sand as his medium. He was indeed a master of Sand Ninjutsu, and today, he would groom a new student.

"Heyo there, let's begin with the easy stuff. What do you know of Sand, why do you want to learn of it and what makes it special?"

He asked, as the sand subsided beneath him, falling uselessly.

Katora sat up, a bored look on his face as he released the chakra in the iron sand letting it hit the floor. He'd have to tap into his other chakra now, which was a pain. As the man asked questions, Katora sighed

Sand is crushed dirt...its a weaker version than Iron sand, yet im trapped with the ability of both. Sand is just thousands of smaller granules manipulated with chakra to create endless possible constructs or objects. Theres nothing overly special about it. Its weak to water as it weighs the sand down, and lightning rips through it with ease. Ive no desire to learn it, but if Third-sama where still here, he'd beat me for not training, so here i am

 

[Detective L]

An Iron Sand user, they were always a pain. Nonetheless, the man keeps his smile on his face.

"Alright! I will explain the techniques, and I want you to just swiftly analyze it for me."

(Daisan No Me) - Third Eye

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damge Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a eye out of sand.This eye is then connected by an invisible link to the optic nerve thus allowing he user to see with that eye (connect eye must be closed) The eye must remain close to the user but has a seeing range of 20/20 vision.
Note: Only Sand users can use this jutsu

"Focus your chakra into the sand, feel it. And then manipulate it, to form a connection between the sand and you, this time, an eye being the medium. You form an eye made of sand, that is connected to your optic nerve, allowing you to spy and see some hidden things, around the field. Useful for checking out a potentially dangerous area."

( Suna no Jutsu ) - Sand Technique

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Sand is manipulated to create small waves that can bruise an opponent or small shields that can deflect kunai. This sand can be created by breaking down the earth or from Gaara's gourd.

"A simple technique, where you can break down the Earth and form sand, which can be manipulated. This can be used to make small shields, or waves of sand to damage the opponent. Quite simple.

( Suna Hokori Sākuru ) - Sand Dust Circle

Spoiler

Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user releases his chakra below the opponent and manipulates his sand to create a spinning pillar of sand rise up from beneath the opponent and lift them into the air. This can be used by breaking down the earth to create sand or through sand the user already controls such as from Gaara's Gourd.

"A technique where you focus your chakra beneath the opponent, and cause a pillar of Sand to emerge and blast the opponent into the air."

 

[Excision]

Katora sighed as the man want to jump right into the action.
Jumping down off the rock, Katora landed on the sand below, letting the warm feeling and rough texture seep into him. As the man explained the first move, Katora tapped into his sand chakra. Flowing the chakra through his feet and into the ground, he latches the chakra onto the sand, forming a small sphere which then begins to float upwards while forming. As the eye comes into place, Katora focuses his chakra behind his eye, linking the sphere and his eye, creating an optic link allowing Katora to see further than he once could. He would then release the chakra letting the eye crumble back to tge ground.

Such a boring jutsu. If i could push it to further away from me it might have use, bur ive better methods than this.


The second technique was easier and more useful. Grabbing onto the sand below, Katora brought the sand uo in front of him like a wave, creating a moving shield as it spun around his body. He would then slam the sand into the rock he was once sitting, causing the sand to scatter upon impact.

Not much different from manipulating magnets, same concept and useful i guess.

Pouring his chakra into the ground once more, Katora merely causes the sand to rise up into the air as one solid construct,
Causing everything below it to be pushed into the air. As it does, the sand spins rapidly, causing the granules to cut anything that would be in the center.

Basic once again. Nothing i cant do better with Iron...sigh...whats next

 

[Detective L]

"Good, moving on."

( Funsui no Maisō Hokori ) - Fountain Burial Dust

Spoiler

Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user manipulates his chakra to generate multiple small pillars of sand to rise up from the ground beneath the target and lifting them into the air.

"Focus your Sand chakra into the ground, and cause it to create small pillars of Sand beneath the opponent. This is able to hit them into the air."

( Suna Bunshin ) - Sand Clone

Spoiler

Type: Defense/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15 (+10 per clone reappearing)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates up to two clones made of sand. The clones are easily distinguishable from the user because of their brown colour. The clones can catch objects or attacking shinobi within themselves and trap them letting Gaara attack with ease. Even when hit with physical techniques, the clones reform. This is limited to attacks C rank and below. If hit by water the sand will be too heavy to reform and lightning will destroy the clones. These clones can be made from the earth or pre existing sand source.
Note: Clone costs 10 chakra to reappear again.

"You will be able to create two clones of Sand, which are brown in color, and can use C ranks and below. Basic technique, really."

( Suna no Ryuusui ) – Stream of Sand

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user gathers sand below his opponents and makes them move away, creating a stream or like a continuous wave of sand to push the target in the desired direction. It is used to incapacitate the opponent without harm.

"A technique where you gather Sand below the opponent, and then you will create a stream or wave of Sand, which allows you to move the opponent. This however, causes no damage."

 

[Excision]

The man was so eager to move on, and Katora was falling asleep. He hadn't had his third nap of the day yet, and was yawning as the man explained. Another simple technique it seemed.

Channeling chakra into the sand below the dummy, Katora focussed on forming three pillars. The first pillar would rise the dummy a meter into the air. As it raised up, the other two pillars would rise either side and curve inwards, slamming into either side of the dummy and crushing it between the two flat tops of the pillars.

Finally, a useful technique. Even though it does damage, its universal. Although a question. Can i raise one pillar below myself to raise myself up and then two other pillars under my opponent to lift them up and strike them?

Moving onto the next jutsu, it was also quiet simple. Weaving the clone handseals, Katora channels his chakra into the round around him, causing the sand the rise up on either side of him, creating two identical clones with a darker brown hue to himself. Both clones would simply stand there, also looking bored.

Just another clone technique. Nothing a shadow clone can't do better really

Channeling his chakra into the sand to the side of the dummy, Katora raises up the sand slightly, raising the ground to the side and below the opponent, creating a small wave which pushes the opponent to the left hand side, right into a fist from one of the clones who had circled around while the Katora spoke. The clone would strike the dummy, sending it back to the position it started.

Quite useful. I can move myself, or i can move my opponent. Question though, how fast and how far can i cause the sand to shift?

 

[Shady Doctor]

( Suna Shuriken ) - Sand Shuriken
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user sends up to ten fast moving spheres of sand. They are not sharp, and hence cause merely blunt force damage such as fractures. They move faster than normal shuriken. The user can control the direction of these projectiles as long as they are focusing on this jutsu. Can be made from the ground or a pre-existing sand source.

Sand*Shuriken*that aren't sharp at all, actually doing nothing but blunt damage whenever they strike something. The cool thing about this is the fact we can control the way they attack and move with our will, as long as we keep focus on them. Pretty cool.*

(Sesshoku Taipu) - Concealed Sand Picture Cat
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will release a special type of sensory sand across a terrain and then upon contact with an enemy target the sand can alert the user of the location and presence of an enemy target. The sand can even detect invisible targets and stick to their body.

This is a sensing ability that is available to the*sand*users, using the*sand*as a medium to sense in a certain vicinity. You'd spread*sand everywhere within mid range that is almost unseeable, and that will alert you to anything that walks through it. The*sand*sticks to anything coming through also, giving you a detailed sense of exactly where they are. You'd be able to use this purely to know where your opponent is, or to be alerted to if they come into your immediate area.

 

[Excision]

Sand*Shuriken*that aren't sharp at all, actually doing nothing but blunt damage whenever they strike something. The cool thing about this is the fact we can control the way they attack and move with our will, as long as we keep focus on them. Pretty cool.*




This is a sensing ability that is available to the*sand*users, using the*sand*as a medium to sense in a certain vicinity. You'd spread*sand everywhere within mid range that is almost unseeable, and that will alert you to anything that walks through it. The*sand*sticks to anything coming through also, giving you a detailed sense of exactly where they are. You'd be able to use this purely to know where your opponent is, or to be alerted to if they come into your immediate area.

First one pretty basic. But just to clarify, this jutsu can be continuously manipulated and moved to dodge ect?

Second is also pretty basic but very useful, i assume this gives the standard x2 sensing orr? And will this work against hayabusa?

edit: also does this last indefinitely or is it one turn?

 

[Shady Doctor]

1) Yes, as long as you're sustaining that technique alone.

2) eh idk anything about Hayabusa. But i assume if they are touching the sand then yes.

3) Indefinitely or until blown away (which only takes d rank wind)

( Suna No Muya ) - Sand cocoon
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will create a sphere of compact sand all around them in a orb, compacting the sand to create a dense defensive layer. Gaara used this in the chuunin exams to change into the shikaku.*
Note: Can only be User by Gaara

Basically the technique gaara used against Sasuke to protect himself whenever sasuke had to use chidori. You'd create a sphere of sand around you that will solidify and become very dense to guard from anything outside. Note that it leaves the bottom fully open to earth techniques and such since it doesn't cover below.

( Gokuamaisou ) - Sand Prison Burial
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user loosens the dirt around the targets feet causing the target to sink deep in to the ground.The pressure at the targets depth immobilizes the target.

A mini "antlion"/"swamp of the Underworld" type technique used directly beneath a target. Using our*sand*abilities we'd loosen the ground into*sand*that will sink the target into a pressurized and deep hole that will have them immobilized. Pretty much quicksand.

(Sabaku Fuyū) - Desert Suspension
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will create a cloud of sand for them to ride upon, this can be used for travel, or avoiding attacks, or simply going into the air. Remains active until destroyed or technique is ended. The user can control the sand cloud with hand gestures to change location a the cost of using this jutsu again.

This one is pretty dope. It let's you travel on a cloud of*sand, kinda like Goku's flying Nimbus. With it being made of*sand*you'd be able to use small*sand*techniques from it while using it for its main purpose of travel. You could personally use this to stay off the ground, but to also dodge techniques seeing as we are able to use a move slot to evade with this. And it stays active until i is destroyed or you want it to be deactivated.*

 

[Excision]

No questions, but tgat third technique will become very handy i suspect.

 

[Shady Doctor]

( Suna no Te ) - Hands of Sand
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate his chakra to create a hand or multiple hands made of sand to deal with a single opponent or multiple opponents and binding the legs preventing them from moving. Can be used from an earth source or preexisting sand.

Youd be able to create numerous or a single hand of*sand*that can be used from preexisting*sand*or earth that is present anywhere within the range of the technique. The hand(s) can be used to grab objects or directly grab the target's legs to keep them in place and available to be struck by an attack.

( Suna Dangan ) - Sand Bullet
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user forms a small sphere made of sand and compresses it to increase its hardness. The sphere can strike opponents with such speed and force that it knocks them unconscious. He can also change its trajectory, to strike down multiple targets.

Pretty cool technique to be C rank. You'd compress*sand*to create a small sphere that is able to be shot at people with great enough speeds to even knock someone out upon impact. Using your will alone, you could change the trajectory and the direction of the sphere to hit from numerous angles or hit different targets back to back to back.*

( Dai Uzumaki Maisō ) - Maelstrom Burial
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a small body of sand in the air, creating a compact sort of cloud and drop it on their opponent. This has enough force to knock them to the ground due to the mass off it but not enough to do serious damage.

You'd gather*sand*into the air, kind of like the sand*cloud technique, which is then moved above a target if not created directly above the initially. Once above them, the*sand*is dropped on them, causing a minor amount of damage but knocking them to the ground due to the big mass of the*sand*gathered.*

 

[Excision]

Just a small question. How big can i make the hand? And can i use the hand to raise myself up to dodge techniques? Aside from that no questions

 

[Shady Doctor]

They're basically the size of an average arm/hand, but yeah using multiple arms should let you lift yourself imho.

( Hageshii Suna Doshaburi ) - Fierce Sand Downpour
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user whilst using the floating sand technique manipulates his sand to create a small amount of sand in the air which he controls to fall down towards the opponent. Before reaching the opponent the sand splits into multiple shots increasing the spread of its attack range.

When using the*sand*cloud technique to float around, you're able to use this to attack with it. This shoots a small amount of the*sanddown at a target, splitting into multiple bullets once it gets closer so that it can hit numerous spots and make it harder to dodge.*

( Noroi no Suna Ningyō no Jutsu ) - Cursed Sand Puppet Jutsu*
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: With the help of pre-existing sand, the user creates a great number of sentient sand puppets and sends them to fight the opponent. The puppets, however, aren't that sturdy and can be easily taken out. Basic taijutsu can destroy the sand puppets or jutsu of the same rank or higher based on elemental strengths and weaknesses.
Note: Creates up to 8 Sand puppets

Basically another*sand*clone technique but with 8 "puppets" that are sentient and will attack the user's enemies. Of course they'd be destroyed by low rank techniques, like simple taijutsu or elements following sands strength and weakness.*

( Sunaarashi no Jutsu ) - Sandstorm Technique*
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: With the help of pre-existing sand, the user creates a localized sandstorm, surrounding opponents and limiting their sense of vision. The user can maintain this sandstorm and use it in a similar way to the hidden mist jutsu to block vision and irritate eyes. This does not harm the opponent.

This is a cool technique that is like the*sandversion of the hidden mist technique. We make a localized*sand*storm that surrounds a specific aea, obscuring people's vision at a high degree. Other than the vision obscurity and being an annoying storm of*sand, it holds no offensive capabilities at all.

 

[Excision]

No questions. All pretty standard

 

[Detective L]

Wow at least let me know next time ¬_¬

 

[Houdinii]

Sup, so my training style can be either of two ways. After I post the technique you would simply need to do a performance and analysis of the technique and if im happy with what you have provided we can continue onto the next.

However if I am consistently unhappy with your reply we will switch to a template based training that outlines the techniques more clearly, though we could start with this method from the offset if you wish.

You also have the option of RP style training if you prefer, which is likely better suited to the first method. The choice is yours and then we can begin

 

[Excision]

Sup, so my training style can be either of two ways. After I post the technique you would simply need to do a performance and analysis of the technique and if im happy with what you have provided we can continue onto the next.

However if I am consistently unhappy with your reply we will switch to a template based training that outlines the techniques more clearly, though we could start with this method from the offset if you wish.

You also have the option of RP style training if you prefer, which is likely better suited to the first method. The choice is yours and then we can begin

first way is fine by me

 

[Houdinii]

( Suna Jinheki ) - Sand Encampment Wall

Spoiler

Type: Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will create several medium sized pillars of sand in front of them or around them to protect them from incoming attacks. That can be made together to form on solid compact wall of sand.

Use your sand to create some pillars within short range of yourself, these are purely defensive but could be used for something like movement or pushing a target without actually hurting them since it lacks any damage.

( Suna Shigure ) - Sand Drizzle

Spoiler

Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range:Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates a cloud of sand above the opponent from which numerous sharp needles of sand rain down, to stab the target.

Manipulate your sand to create a cloud above the field, use shape manipulation to form this cloud into sharp needles that rain down upon your target. A good attack to use as it comes from a different angle than usual but fairly straight forward.

A performance and analysis of these techniques would you kindly and feel free to ask any questions you may have at any point. You don't have to write paragraphs for me, a couple well written sentences should suffice, just no copy pasta please

 

[Excision]

( Suna Jinheki ) - Sand Encampment Wall

Spoiler

Type: Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will create several medium sized pillars of sand in front of them or around them to protect them from incoming attacks. That can be made together to form on solid compact wall of sand.

Use your sand to create some pillars within short range of yourself, these are purely defensive but could be used for something like movement or pushing a target without actually hurting them since it lacks any damage.

( Suna Shigure ) - Sand Drizzle

Spoiler

Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range:Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates a cloud of sand above the opponent from which numerous sharp needles of sand rain down, to stab the target.

Manipulate your sand to create a cloud above the field, use shape manipulation to form this cloud into sharp needles that rain down upon your target. A good attack to use as it comes from a different angle than usual but fairly straight forward.

A performance and analysis of these techniques would you kindly and feel free to ask any questions you may have at any point. You don't have to write paragraphs for me, a couple well written sentences should suffice, just no copy pasta please

A pretty basic technique. Just forms pillars to act as a wall. Small question, as not all sand techniques require you to be in contact, if i was using Desert Suspension just a few meters off the ground, could i make the sand below me rise up and work, or do i need to be in contact?

Channeling his Chakra, Kator manipulates the sand directly in front of him and rises up several pillars. 3 pillars rise up, creating a half cresent protecting him from the in coming barrage.

Also basic, just a clump of sand thats manipulated to shoot senbon. two questions on this one. Similar to above, can i use Desert suspension as a medium for this jutsu, like if im hovering above my opponent, can i launch senbon from that?

Second question, does angle matter? Like do they have to rain directly down, or can i have them fire off at a sharp angle?

Manipulating his Chakra, Katora forms a clump of sand from the ground and raises it up high about the opponent. When the sand clump is almost 100m above the opponent, Katora manipulates the chakra and begins raining down small needles of sand, covering a large area around the opponent, piercing up to mid range with the opponent in the center, making dodging neigh impossible.

Any chance we can skip the "write the move" thing, ive never seen the point of it personally