[Tai] Trials of the Noldor

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when it comes to Iron head, first you must mold earth chakra and focus it to the forehead and the crown of your head because you use it as a headbutt to someones face resulting in facial fractures for the opponent or you can use it to shatter C-rank earth coming at you.

If i didnt know better i would say that this is the weaker version of the vortex punch. after the user focuses wind chakra to his feet and dashes and crouches to the target, the descriptions are almost verbatim.

Understanding the description of the final technique gets me excited because this sounds like the Shoryuken! im about to be the next Ryu up in this joint! just saying
Iron Head, cool name. Well simply enough gathering earth chakra within my forehead, i enhance it to the point where it becomes like iron, can also be done to the entire head before i forcefully headbutt someone straight in their chest or head, literally enough to break or knock them out.


Dashint towards my opponent with great speed after focusing wind chakra into my feet and coating my arms with wind chakra, i utilize it to dash into them delivering two forceful upwards thrusts right to the stomach sending them flying several feet away.


Finally the rising uppercut, quickly leap through the air spinning upwards delivering a powerful uppercut straight to the opponents chin sending him flying even further into the air.

You guys are focusing too much on the tai aspect of these jutsu. Not so much you waki, as with your note to the Iron Head, you did state you could headbutt C rank earth, but you Gutsy, like the third technique, why does it have to be to strike an opponent and nothing more? Be a bit more creative it your uses please.

Now we are onto B ranks:

( Hiza Sumasshu ) - Knee Smash
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: 40
Description: The user, after using an attack to strike the enemy into the air, will then appear above them in a burst of speed and deliver a double knee strike that sends the target crashing into the ground.

( Ryuu Handou ) - Dragon Kick
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage: 40
Description: An attack where the user quickly appears behind the enemy in a burst of speed, delivering a powerful kick to their side that sends them flying.

( Izuna Rakka ) - Izuna Drop
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will jump into the target grabbing onto their arms and thrust both feet into their stomach to wind them and cause them to fall forwards. In doing so, the user flips backwards lifting the target into their air whilst using the motion of the target to then slam them onto their shoulders on the ground. The user will then finish by kicking off them and flipping backwards a few feet
 

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This could be chained with the rising uppercut technique, and as you strike them into the air you can with a burst of speed quick appear above them to drop down upon them with both knees smashing into the persons chest sending them crashing to the ground.

A powerful technique where you again use an extreme burst of speed to appear at any angle and position of the opponent, delivering a side kick straight to their body sending them flying in any direction that you strike them with, even into the air so that you may combo or appear above them to strike them directly into the ground.

This could be used as the opponent dashes forward or tries to punch you, you leap into them while grabbing both arms immediately stopping their punches as you grab them by the wrists slamming your feet into their chest/stomach area and quickly backflip forcing them up over them and slamming them into the ground before leaping off of their chest and back onto a standing position.
 

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If i remember correctly, you used this technique on me during the taijutsu only test for my gates ability. well first you would have to launch the opponent in the air before pushing off the ground to appear above them, where you will come down on the opponent with both knees launching them back to the ground causing them to smash against it.

when it comes to the second technique this is very useful. I would preferably try and evade into a counterattack. i would use the part of the description where it says the user would appear behind the target to evade from any technique coming towards me only if i was short range of the target before using the kick to the side hat sends them flying as the counterattack. let me know if i am performing it incorrectly.

if you ask me the last technique would be more of a finishing move. for the technique to start you would have to grab hold of the opponent, and we al know that is not going to be easy. also you would have to kick the opponent in the stomach causing them to fall forwards while you still have a hold of their shoulders. you used the force from that to allow you to perform an aerial summersault backwards before slamming them onto the ground and double heel stomping his chest into the ground before kicking off of the target. As complex as it sounds, it is a very ruthless jutsu!
 

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Dragon kick - you just run really fast to create the "appear" factor, not like teleport or anything.


Alright, next three:

( Kamakiri Kaedama Dageki ) - Mantis Double Strike
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user holds their arms in such a way that they resemble blades. By covering their arms in a layer of wind chakra the user is then able to deliver knifehand strikes that possess considerable cutting ability.

( Testsu Sen Genkotsu ) - Iron Wire Fist
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: By wrapping ninja wire around their fists and controlling their breathing the user is able to deliver precise and deadly strikes that are able to knock targets back several meters.

( Chouyaku Kage Dageki ) - Jumping Shadow Strike
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: The user appears below a target in a low stance, striking at the pressure points in their inner thighs. A successful strike should cause an opponent to collapse, allowing the user to deliver a series of rising punches.
 

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Dragon kick - you just run really fast to create the "appear" factor, not like teleport or anything.


Alright, next three:

( Kamakiri Kaedama Dageki ) - Mantis Double Strike
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user holds their arms in such a way that they resemble blades. By covering their arms in a layer of wind chakra the user is then able to deliver knifehand strikes that possess considerable cutting ability.

( Testsu Sen Genkotsu ) - Iron Wire Fist
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: By wrapping ninja wire around their fists and controlling their breathing the user is able to deliver precise and deadly strikes that are able to knock targets back several meters.

( Chouyaku Kage Dageki ) - Jumping Shadow Strike
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: The user appears below a target in a low stance, striking at the pressure points in their inner thighs. A successful strike should cause an opponent to collapse, allowing the user to deliver a series of rising punches.
if anyone can run really fast it is going to be me


The user would hold their hands to resemble knives by covering their arms with wind before delivering knifehand strikes. alot like the hardliner gale chop technique

after wrapping their hand in ninja wire and with precise breathing he is able to deal destructive strikes that send the oppponent a several meters. just wondering is this technique strong enough to take on elemental techniques like the mantis double strike?

OOh this third technique is one that i feel that i will be using the most. simply because you take a low stance, striking the inner thighs of the opponent causing the opponent to collapse allowing the opponent to follow up with a barrage of punches.
 
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The first technique the user holds their arms and hands like blades while creating a layer of wind chakra around them, creating a powerful cutting ability. using this the user can either deliver several slashes or stabs to severely injure their opponent, if you got enough knowledge use it to strike specific dangerous areas like lungs, heart, or pressure points, joints, etc.


As per usual the following technique being quite simple, almost something i would say could be done freeform, would be the user wrapping wire around their fists and then by controlling their breathing they can have more focus and deliver precise and severe strikes upon any place on the target sending them flying.

The user will quickly appear in a crouched stance in front or behind their target and then deliver strikes to the inner thigh to their pressure points, forcing the opponent to collapse in pain before the user deliver several upwards strikes or upper cuts, sending them into the air.
 

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Well, both nice, easy and simple. The jutsu do kind of explain themselves though, there will be a mini test at the end.


( Danshingu Senpu ) - Dancing Hurricane
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: By executing a handstand and keeping their legs horizontal to the ground the user is able to deliver a series of spinning kicks to the target’s midsection.

( Assai Kuma Kobushi ) - Crushing Bear Fist
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: By snapping one leg backwards and using the resulting torque to push their body forwards and increase the force of their strike the user is able to deliver a devastating superman punch to their target.

( Sanmai Ashige ) - Absorption Kick
Type: Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: This is based around the Bak Mai Pa of Southern Chinese marital arts and the use of enemy's body weight. The user will concentrate chakra into their leg and then lift it up to lean into the enemy when they are attacking with Taijutsu and by using the body weight of the enemy and the chakra concentration, the user will absorb the power of the enemy's attack and rebound it with the kick to send the enemy flying.
Note: Can only counter B rank Taijutsu and lower

Love this third one
 

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A dancing hurricane, sounds pretty badass right? well you most definately think so after i do a front flip landing on my palms doing a badass handstand while spinning around with my legs out kicking you in the stomach several times ._.

if that was too unserious, how about my crushing bear fist. I quickly snap my right leg backwards using the torque to push forward smashing my fist into your face, sending you flying with a broken face for laughing at my previous reply.

then as you retaliate after being punched, by you punching towards me, i concentrate my chakra through my right leg as i bring it up leaning into you using your body weight i absorb the power of the strike and rebound it straight back at you with a powerful kick.
 

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for the first technique i performed this technique freeform in the battle test! that when you gave me dead leg in one of my legs. Wow i cant believe it took me this long to learn k'tai. Anyways, you first perform a handstand by landing with your palms to the ground and pivot, while extending your legs outwards to perform a series of spinning kicks to the opponent's sides.

for the second technique the user snaps their leg backward I would imagine to generate rotational or linear momentum in order to give greater strength to there superman punch or a charged straight punch. this is what i can gather from the description.

with this technique I lean in as the opponent goes in for a mid punch to the chest, raising my leg, focusing chakra to it, using the chakra to absorb the blunt impact of the punch and counterattack with a powerful side push kick to the opponent's chest, sending him flying back a few meters away.
 

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A dancing hurricane, sounds pretty badass right? well you most definately think so after i do a front flip landing on my palms doing a badass handstand while spinning around with my legs out kicking you in the stomach several times ._.

if that was too unserious, how about my crushing bear fist. I quickly snap my right leg backwards using the torque to push forward smashing my fist into your face, sending you flying with a broken face for laughing at my previous reply.

then as you retaliate after being punched, by you punching towards me, i concentrate my chakra through my right leg as i bring it up leaning into you using your body weight i absorb the power of the strike and rebound it straight back at you with a powerful kick.
for the first technique i performed this technique freeform in the battle test! that when you gave me dead leg in one of my legs. Wow i cant believe it took me this long to learn k'tai. Anyways, you first perform a handstand by landing with your palms to the ground and pivot, while extending your legs outwards to perform a series of spinning kicks to the opponent's sides.

for the second technique the user snaps their leg backward I would imagine to generate rotational or linear momentum in order to give greater strength to there superman punch or a charged straight punch. this is what i can gather from the description.

with this technique I lean in as the opponent goes in for a mid punch to the chest, raising my leg, focusing chakra to it, using the chakra to absorb the blunt impact of the punch and counterattack with a powerful side push kick to the opponent's chest, sending him flying back a few meters away.
Waki it's probably taken you this long due to me being slow, but yes i remember you doing this in a freeform style, i liked it xd

Lets go for three more. I mean overall these are so simple, but afterwords, when i know you understand them we will work on combos.

( Ikazuchi Ono Handou ) - Thunder Axe Kick
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user charges one leg with lightning chakra and then jumps into the air, positioning themselves to deliver a powerful flying kick to their target. Due to the infusion of lightning chakra the kick is able to partially paralyze the area whereupon it connects for one turn.

( Arashi Nageru ) - Tornado Throw
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: The user grabs ahold of a target by their clothing and then spins them around in a circular motion above their head. Using the momentum of the spin the user then slams the target into the ground.

( Mamushi Kiba ) - Viper's Fang
Type: Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: By tracking an opponent’s incoming punch the user is able to deliver
 

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when it comes to the first technique, the user would then mold lightning chakra before leaping in the air towards the opponent, focusing the lightning to the leg that they use to perform the kick. The kick can be a push kick, a snap kick, a roundhouse, a hook kick, a rising spike kick, or a falling axe kick.

when it comes to this technique this makes me think of the fight between Itachi and Sasuke at the Uchiha hideout. The user would grab the target by the clothes on the collar or the shoulder. from there the user would pivot to swing the target above their head before the user would slam the target against the ground. this would be a good way to get your opponent off balance and cause damage to them before using the freeform thrust of a kunai to finish them off.

the last technique description is incomplete
 
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Alright so first off the by leaping forward towards my target while having one leg bent back while i charge it with lightning, i then as i am mid-air i thrust my leg sideways into the face of the target releasing lightning through their head paralyzing them.

I quickly grab you by your collar and pull you from the ground spinning you above my head like a helicopter before slamming you back into the ground. O_O So simple eh?

bruh?????


( Mamushi Kiba ) - Viper's Fang
Type: Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: By tracking an opponent’s incoming punch the user is able to deliver
 

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when it comes to the first technique, the user would then mold lightning chakra before leaping in the air towards the opponent, focusing the lightning to the leg that they use to perform the kick. The kick can be a push kick, a snap kick, a roundhouse, a hook kick, a rising spike kick, or a falling axe kick.

when it comes to this technique this makes me think of the fight between Itachi and Sasuke at the Uchiha hideout. The user would grab the target by the clothes on the collar or the shoulder. from there the user would pivot to swing the target above their head before the user would slam the target against the ground. this would be a good way to get your opponent off balance and cause damage to them before using the freeform thrust of a kunai to finish them off.

the last technique description is incomplete
Alright so first off the by leaping forward towards my target while having one leg bent back while i charge it with lightning, i then as i am mid-air i thrust my leg sideways into the face of the target releasing lightning through their head paralyzing them.

I quickly grab you by your collar and pull you from the ground spinning you above my head like a helicopter before slamming you back into the ground. O_O So simple eh?

bruh?????


( Mamushi Kiba ) - Viper's Fang
Type: Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: By tracking an opponent’s incoming punch the user is able to deliver
I forgot you were both incompotent. I mean, it's so hard to go to the jutsu list, find the nb tai list, and find the rest of the technique <_<

( Mamushi Kiba ) - Viper's Fang
Type: Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: By tracking an opponent’s incoming punch the user is able to deliver a spear hand strike to a pressure point in the target’s arm, thus disabling the use of the arm for two turns.

( Nikui Kiwa ) - Hard Edge
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user reinforces their elbows and knees with earth chakra and then charges towards the target in order to deliver a series of knee and elbow strikes with enough force to bend steel.
 

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Yes me and waki is extremely incompetent :D :D :D

Viper Fang, essentially whenever you punch me I will make a quick and precise viper strike like a spear with a sharp point, directed right into a pressure point in your upper arm from below, before you arm connects with my face, causing your arm to fall limb.

Reinforcing my knees and elbows with earthen chakra i dash at you before delivering a knee strike straight to your stomach, bending you over with great force before slamming my other knee into your face sending you back up with a broken nose before delivering an elbow straight to your jaw, using my elbow similar to a punch coming from the side, sending you slamming sideways into the ground as i leap up to drop down upon you with my elbow aimed down on the side of your skull.
 
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