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Updating, same core concept but completely rewritten as such I omitted the bold.
Bau no Kaori | Fragrance of Bau
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage:N/A
Type: Supplementary
Description: Involves the release of copious amounts of specially produced pheromones, mixed with and rapidly propelled across the battlefield by chakra (reaches long range in a near instant but has no offensive power). The released pheromones immediately react with skin (namely bodily oils and sweat) to produce a potent scent that is nigh on possible to remove and will permanently mark the opponent. The scent produced by this reaction is one of a kind - unique to that individual only, easily trackable by Inuzuka but otherwise unnoticeable, and can serve as a replacement to the blood perquisite of Vánagandr - Marked. This occurs in a similar way to how wild dogs mark their territory naturally, but is markedly different in that the marking is not just the user's smell - but rather a special concoction produced by a reaction between the chemicals and chakra released by the user, and those naturally released by the opponent. The released musk, while completely normal, acceptable and not at all distracting to Inuzuka members, has been specially developed to be utterly vile to anyone who is not of Inuzuka origins. Enemy summons who encounter the smell will be repulsed on a primal level and will promptly, in an almost visceral reaction, disperse back to their homeland (the inclusion of the users chakra then, is vital, as it serves to grant immunity to anyone who is contracted to the user - such as summons, but also serves to increase the natural effects of the pheromones). Naturally this would not work on enemy summons who lack olfactory senses. Non-Inuzuka Ninja will be similarly repulsed too, as the musk is specially developed to be absolutely intolerable to any non-Inuzuka clan member, and as a result will inflict nausea and disorientation upon being inhaled. For that, and the next turn, the disorientation will prevent enemies from effectively using Taijutsu above B rank on account of being incapable of coordinating effectively (lowers their power to B rank), while their speed and reactions will also lower by a rank. The nausea will be similarly inhibitive as it will prevent usage of techniques that involve spewing, should the opponent, for instance, attempt to spew out water for Exploding Colliding Wave, they will instead merely find themselves vomiting, or gagging intensely, to the point where the technique is simply un-performable (all humans are emetic, so the effect is absolute). Techniques that do not involve spewing or excessive inhalation however, are still performable as usual. Doujutsu users will also be capable of seeing the release of the musk, as it is infused with chakra.
Notes:
- A Ninken can only use this once every nine turns.
- Chakra infused rain above B rank will prevent the Pheromones from using the air as a medium. (Does not affect the unique scent produced once a reaction has taken place whatsoever, only the musk itself.)
- Can only be taught by Scaze
Declined - reaching long range in an instant is just too fast, by wording anyway. And no, just no to making summons disperse. As for the taijutsu, say for gates users this is only A rank. But the OP part is, you say this is instant across the field, so they don't have time to react really, but if they did see it, one of the common counters would be to wash away the scent, and you're just making it so they can't even do that.
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Fenriru No Hikō | Fenrir's Claws
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
(Long)
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: A heavily ninjutsu orientated Inuzuka technique in which the user releases an abundance of silverish chakra that coats their fingers, forming talon like claws of highly condensed chakra. The claws being exceptionally sharp, can be utilised to slash and dice the opponent, holding enough physical prowess to easily slice through a Katana, or even a war hammer for that matter. The true prowess of these chakra claws however is that, through a thrust or slash, they can be released forwards as projectiles, following a pattern similar to that of their release method. For example a straight thrust would result in five straight lined streaks being released, or five arching crescent streaks if released through a swing. With the user capable of releasing four sets of such attacks, dividing the power among them, or alternatively releasing it all in one go for a more powerful singular attack. The released chakra waves can be made to naturally expand so as to prove more of an offensive threat, capable of growing to sizes just slightly greater
than twice the size of the user's body over a short period of time. However when these claws strike something solid, instead of puncturing, slicing, and blasting through them as they would intangible elements, they instead forcefully erupt, separating into dozens of tiny whirling claw shaped chakra structures that rampage forth outwards at any direction forwards of a 210 degree angle of the chakra streaks original direction, thus preventing them from backlashing onto the user. This of course only applies to solid techniques, should the technique clash with a water, fire, or wind technique it would not erupt, with the claws capable of overpowering A ranked elemental techniques to play equal against S ranked elemental techniques. Thankfully, the sharpness of the claws are minimised when they're not being used offensively, allowing the user to still utilise their hands to perform handseals, wield weapons and so on.
Note:
- Can only be used 3x
- No Inuzuka techniques above S rank for the rest of the turn.
- Can only be sustained for a maximum of three turns.
- Can alternatively be performed by a Ninken to coat their paws.
- Eruption can instead be suppressed, or forced to occur at will regardless of scenario.
- Can reach Long range once they explode
- Can only be taught by Scaze
Declined - remove the long range. That's not needed, makes this too strong then.
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Updating the above to be more in line with some of the benefits of current, canon, Inuzuka transformations.
Fenriru No Gimuzuke | Fenrir's Oblige
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (+200) (-40 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A merging transformation technique that is simple in concept, yet immensely useful in application. The user through either direct, or secondary contact with their Ninken will merge into a single entity, or if at range through the formation of a single handseal. This merger essentially combines many of the previous transformative techniques demonstrated by Inuzuka's into one, more harmonious, far more efficient technique. When within this form the user is capable of seamlessly switching between the forms of a human and a ninken, with such an ability giving way to rather useful 'mid points' that stem from utilizing a mixture of human and ninken aesthetics and physiology; for instance a tail and canine ears, or a completely hairy body, from a form mimicking that of the 4 legged technique to forms that grant the user a more burly werewolf like body. There even exists more extreme forms where power is amped to the max, ultimately granting a larger more giant summoned sized forms similar to the '(Jinjū Konbi Henge: Sōtōrō ) - Human Beast Combination Transformation: Double-Headed Wolf' technique
and (Jinjū Kongō Henge: Santōrō) Human Beast Mixture Transformation: Three-Headed Wolf. Of course the ability to morph and shift between the basic and chakra enhanced physiology of man and beast allows for devastating versatility. Alongside the visible outer changes, other changes occur such as those within the users chakra, or senses. The users senses are always bolstered to an utmost extreme thanks to the aid of their Ninken, having a sense of smell that surpasses that of the Silver-Tip Grizzly's, capable of easily distinguishing concentrations of parts per hundred millions from tens of meters away, a sense of hearing rivalling that of owls, and equally notable sight which of course includes night vision. While the users chakra system, having been intersected and interwoven into their Ninkens, yet still remaining individual in its own right experiences a constant flush of their Ninkens chakra every few moments, the perpetual flux making the user resistant to
A rank and below Genjutsu, while the initial merge frees the user from all genjutsu's due to the sudden introduction of foreign chakra (except MS/Doujutsu Level Genjutsu). The users reflexes also increase, leading to them being heavily relied on in place of reactions, not to say that the user is subconsciously reacting in an almost magical manner, but instead is based on a more a mind without a mind concept, with the tasks and skills that have been drilled into the user through both practice and prior battling experiencing surfacing for utmost efficiency and finesse. Due to the addition of the Ninken's physical, mental and chakra based influence, the users Inuzuka techniques gain a +10 damage bonus. There however remains to be a downside to the technique; as any damage the user receives is doubled, as not only is the physical recoil increased due to two entities being present within one body, and thus the damage affecting both, but, the mental and psychological damage denoting to injury is also increased two folds, due to two minds being affected by the same pain at the same point. It could even be argued that the mental pain is increased three or even four fold with the mental link working as more of a duplication rather than an addition. Due to this the gained resistance to genjutsu is invaluable, as the resistance not only works to dispel genjutsu of
A rank and below after the most minor amounts of exposure, but it also lessens the impact on the users senses, therefore preventing higher ranked genjutsu from dominating via exploitation of the users increased mental sensitivity.
Note:
- Can only be used thrice with a three turn cooldown inbetween usages. After the second usage the users speed will be reduced by a rank for two turns, and after the third their speed will be halved for three turns
- Lasts up to 4 turns
- While the transformation grants a base buff similar to that of the four legged technique, although slightly more potent (Drastically in terms of senses), certain forms have their specific strengths, for instance larger forms will be more powerful and bulky
(the melee, physical attacks of giant forms will, just like in Santoro, gain B ranked strength, even in freeform), more four legged forms will be faster and more instinctual (users base speed + Ninken's speed x1.5), while two legged forms with adaptations will specialize in balance and agility. (up to twice the user's speed)
- Can only be used by an Inuzuka, requires at least one Ninken,
and synergises with other Inuzuka transformations. I.e the effects of a transformation that makes the users fur more shaggy for defensive purposes can still persist once this is used
- Can only be taught by Scaze
Pending - need to discuss those buffs. x2 speed seems too much to me, even leg weights being dropped doesn't give you that.
