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(Seraphumizuton: Tamieru no Shitsumei; Fumetsu Kiri)- Seraphic Water: Tamiel's Blindness; Undying Fog
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 60
Description: With a single hand seal the user will release either from his body or any existing Seraphic Water sources within mid ranged of his position an immensely thick variant of the release: mist. Although technically fog due to its density, the technique more or less behaves like mist where it greatly hampers the opponent's visuals. When active, the Undying Fog renders anyone (other than the user) within it unable to see past 4m of their position in any direction. Doujutsu is also ineffective as the fog is permeated with the user's chakra, acting like a screen both to natural and supernatural senses. What makes the technique noteworthy though are three things: true to its name, the Undying Fog is seemingly limitless in that so long as the user keeps the chakra upkeep it will keep spewing from its source (be it the user's body or a Seraphic Water source) and is able to last more than the turn it is created up to 5 turns at a time. The second is that the fog carries with it the regular properties of the Seraphic Water element, where if it comes in contact with living things it immediately gets to work desiccating the opponent(s) from the outside, with emphasis on moist tissue/areas such as the eyes, exposed flesh, etc. But on the inside... If the fog is breathed, ingested, or taken into the body by other means, it causes great nausea in the first turn, preventing opponent(s) from performing techniques above A ranked. On the second turn the nausea turns to uncontrollable vomiting, which needless to say prevents the opponent from doing most things. On the third turn diarrhea kicks in. By this time the opponent(s) would lose almost half of their bodies' natural water and will begin to look mummified. On the fifth turn the target will die if no immediate attention is had, at which point the technique would come to an end. But not to be entirely linear, the Undying Fog can also be used as a source for other Seraphic Water techniques by having it condense back into mostly liquid. However, if used to fuel a Seraphic Water technique above A ranked, it is immediately terminated and will go on a three turn cool down. Regular usage places it on a two turn cool down.
Note(s):
- Can only be performed three (3) times, with a two (2) turn cool down between uses.
- If used as a source for other Seraphic Water techniques above A ranked it is ended and goes on a three (3) turn cool down instead.
- While active, the user can only perform Seraphic Water techniques as well as its components: Doton and Suiton.
Decline - nice technique. But what if they breathe it in on only one turn then blow it away? Doe th effects not evolve then? Make that clear please. Reduce how long it lasts too due to the rank of it.
(Seraphumizuton: Rahabu no Kodokuna Abisu; Sō Sensui)- Seraphic Water: Rahab's Lonely Abyss; Total Submergence
Type: Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: With two hand seals (Ram>Snake), the user will exhale a vast amount of Seraphic Water from his gullet appearing very much like the canon Water Bullet Technique. In fact, the two are virtually indistinguishable from each other due to Seraphic Water having the same texture and color as regular water. However, where the two techniques differ is that Rahab's Lonely Abyss, upon being spewed from the user, immediately spreads up to long ranged in all directions in the form of a great flood. As it spreads however, the outermost edges of the technique will begin to fold upward, creating a dome as it travels. This way, by the time the flood has reached long ranged, short and mid ranged distances would have been covered already. In the aftermath, the technique encapsulates the field in a bubble of Seraphic Water similar to Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave. However, where this technique retains its originality is that unlike regular water where the opponent has the privilege to move through, the user is able to either prevent or promote movement by any person/object while inside. Using the concentration shifting abilities the element is known for, the user can increase/decrease the concentration of Seraphic Water around any object or person inside the bubble. This can make swimming and moving completely impossible. Along with this the bubble carries the other effects of the element whereas if ingested it can cause nausea and vomiting as well as slowly sapping the moisture from living organisms. Although these effects aren't specifically outlined, if the opponent stays inside the bubble for the full three turns it is allowed to keep active, they will be killed as almost 80% of the moisture in their bodies would have been sucked from them.
Note(s):
- Lasts three (3) turns with each use.
- Can only be used two (2) times, with a three (3) turn cool down between uses.
- Cannot perform any other Seraphic Water techniques above A ranked in the same turn after this is performed.
- Once the technique has ended, the user is unable to perform SW techniques in the following turn.
Declined - not heavy enough drawbacks and it will cost a move per turn to control the effects of this. And while remaining active it will cost a move per turn due to the control of such a large mass
(Seraphumizuton: Tamieru no Shitsumei; Fumetsu Kiri)- Seraphic Water: Tamiel's Blindness; Undying Fog
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 60
Description: With a single hand seal the user will release either from his body or any existing Seraphic Water sources within mid ranged of his position an immensely thick variant of the release: mist. Although technically fog due to its density, the technique more or less behaves like mist where it greatly hampers the opponent's visuals. When active, the Undying Fog renders anyone (other than the user) within it unable to see past 4m of their position in any direction. Doujutsu is also ineffective as the fog is permeated with the user's chakra, acting like a screen both to natural and supernatural senses. What makes the technique noteworthy though are three things: true to its name, the Undying Fog is seemingly limitless in that so long as the user keeps the chakra upkeep it will keep spewing from its source (be it the user's body or a Seraphic Water source) and is able to last more than the turn it is created up to 5 turns at a time. The second is that the fog carries with it the regular properties of the Seraphic Water element, where if it comes in contact with living things it immediately gets to work desiccating the opponent(s) from the outside, with emphasis on moist tissue/areas such as the eyes, exposed flesh, etc. But on the inside... If the fog is breathed, ingested, or taken into the body by other means, it causes great nausea in the first turn, preventing opponent(s) from performing techniques above A ranked. On the second turn the nausea turns to uncontrollable vomiting, which needless to say prevents the opponent from doing most things such as standard rotary movement like walking or forming more than two hand seals at a time. On the third turn diarrhea kicks in. By this time the opponent(s) would lose almost half of their bodies' natural water and will begin to look mummified.
By the third turn the aforementioned effects would have almost doubled along with the opponent having very blurry vision as the moisture is sucked from their eyes. If the opponent doesn't leave the mist or remove it by the end of the third turn they will perish unless immediate medical attention is had, at which point the technique would come to an end.
If the opponent manages to leave the Fog the turn it is performed then they would escape before any of it harmful effects take hold. However, if the target fails to flee or dispel the Undying Fog after one turn, any of its effects (i.e the nausea, vomiting, etc) will linger for one turn after, even if they manage to leave. But not to be entirely linear, the Undying Fog can also be used as a source for other Seraphic Water techniques by having it condense back into mostly liquid. However, if used to fuel a Seraphic Water technique above A ranked, it is immediately terminated and will go on a three turn cool down. Regular usage places it on a two turn cool down.
Note(s):
- Can only be performed three (2) times, with a two (2) turn cool down between uses.
- If used as a source for other Seraphic Water techniques above A ranked it is ended and goes on a three (3) turn cool down instead.
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Lasts 3 turns.
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(Seraphumizuton: Rahabu no Kodokuna Abisu; Sō Sensui)- Seraphic Water: Rahab's Lonely Abyss; Total Submergence
Type: Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: With two hand seals (
Dog>Snake), the user will exhale a vast amount of Seraphic Water from his gullet appearing very much like the canon Water Bullet Technique. In fact, the two are virtually indistinguishable from each other due to Seraphic Water having the same texture and color as regular water. However, where the two techniques differ is that Rahab's Lonely Abyss, upon being spewed from the user, immediately spreads up to long ranged in all directions in the form of a great flood. As it spreads however, the outermost edges of the technique will begin to fold upward, creating a dome as it travels. This way, by the time the flood has reached long ranged, short and mid ranged distances would have been covered already. In the aftermath, the technique encapsulates the field in a bubble of Seraphic Water similar to Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave. However, where this technique retains its originality is that unlike regular water where the opponent has the privilege to move through, the user is able to either prevent or promote movement by any person/object while inside. Using the concentration shifting abilities the element is known for, the user can increase/decrease the concentration of Seraphic Water around any object or person inside the bubble. This can make swimming and moving completely impossible. Along with this the bubble carries the other effects of the element whereas if ingested it can cause nausea and vomiting as well as slowly sapping the moisture from living organisms. Although these effects aren't specifically outlined, if the opponent stays inside the bubble for the full three turns it is allowed to keep active, they will be killed as almost 80% of the moisture in their bodies would have been sucked from them.
Increasing or decreasing concentration of Seraphic Water inside the orb will cost the user an extra move to perform but doesn't cost any additional chakra.
Note(s):
- Lasts three (3) turns with each use.
- Can only be used two (2) times, with a three (3) turn cool down between uses.
- Cannot perform any other Seraphic Water techniques above A ranked in the same turn this is performed.
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User will only be able to perform two moves per turn while this technique is active due to the chakra control needed.
- Once the technique has ended, the user is unable to perform SW techniques in the following turn.
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(Seraphumizuton: Bōsei no Hasmed; Shizuka Shōkyo)- Seraphic Water: Tyranny of Hasmed; Silent Erasure
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Drawing inspiration from the Angel of Annihilation, Hasmed, Shizuka Shōkyo could easily be mistaken as a simple technique at first glance. It begins by the user holding out his hands, either in front or by his sides and focusing chakra into the short ranged surrounding area to create a sudden wave of Seraphic Water that can either originate from one direction or all in an omnidirectional wave. This wave towers high above the average human at about 10 feet in height, and quickly begins to cascade in its intended direction. Due to the element being a dense one, and extremely heavy at times, the wave creates a very peculiar rumbling sound as it rolls across the ground (or even a water source. Despite brine being significantly denser, it doesn't readily meld with fresh water) similar to waves rolling in on a beach and packs enough punch to crush most in its way while causing the earth to tremble from its weight. Despite all this it still manages to travel at the speed of an Unofficial Sage and can be loud enough drown out most other minor sounds like speech, footsteps, etc. By taking into account two very unique properties of SW, the element is able to absorb certain frequencies of sound, with low frequency waves falling prey faster than the rest. Because of this the wave will rumble loudly during its nascence (while it is still within short ranged of the user), and then as the sound is absorbed it will gradually be reduced to a low shuffling sound as it passes short and reaches into mid ranged. By the time it reaches long ranged the wave is almost a whisper as its sounds are being absorbed almost as fast as its being produced. Then, calling upon the second unique property, the acoustic energy absorbed is readily converted to thermal energy which turns the wave extremely hot as it progresses. While it is short ranged it would be slightly warmer than regular water, at mid ranged it becomes even warmer, reaching nearly boiling point degrees for regular water (100o C) and then by the time it reaches long ranged that value would have near doubled, which allows it to become scalding hot--so much so that it can eradicate entire forests and peel flesh from bone in instants--all while being dead silent in its travel. The ground will still tremble though, which can serve as its warning sign. A true show of annihilation carried out by Hasmed himself.
Note(s):
- Usage limit of three times (3) and a two (2) turn cool down between uses
Declined - Absorbing sound is fine within your c.e, but the thermal part isn't within how your c.e works and i don't believe you should gain access to a form of boil release through this. (will confirm with NK)
As agreed with Pervy, to be checked by NK.
(Seraphumizuton: Bōsei no Hasmed; Shizuka Shōkyo)- Seraphic Water: Tyranny of Hasmed; Silent Erasure
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Drawing inspiration from the Angel of Annihilation, Hasmed, Shizuka Shōkyo could easily be mistaken as a simple technique at first glance. It begins by the user holding out his hands, either in front or by his sides and focusing chakra into the short ranged surrounding area to create a sudden wave of Seraphic Water that can either originate from one direction or all in an omnidirectional wave. This wave towers high above the average human at about 10 feet in height, and quickly begins to cascade in its intended direction. Due to the element being a dense one, and extremely heavy at times, the wave creates a very peculiar rumbling sound as it rolls across the ground (or even a water source. Despite brine being significantly denser, it doesn't readily meld with fresh water) similar to waves rolling in on a beach and packs enough punch to crush most in its way while causing the earth to tremble from its weight. Despite all this it still manages to travel at the speed of an Unofficial Sage and can be loud enough drown out most other minor sounds like speech, footsteps, etc. By taking into account two very unique properties of SW, the element is able to absorb certain frequencies of sound, with low frequency waves falling prey faster than the rest. Because of this the wave will rumble loudly during its nascence (while it is still within short ranged of the user), and then as the sound is absorbed it will gradually be reduced to a low shuffling sound as it passes short and reaches into mid ranged. By the time it reaches long ranged the wave is almost a whisper as its sounds are being absorbed almost as fast as its being produced. Then, calling upon the second unique property, the acoustic energy absorbed is readily converted to thermal energy which turns the wave extremely hot as it progresses. While it is short ranged it would be slightly warmer than regular water, at mid ranged it becomes even warmer, reaching nearly boiling point degrees for regular water (100o C) and then by the time it reaches long ranged that value would have near doubled, which allows it to become scalding hot--so much so that it can eradicate entire forests and peel flesh from bone in instants--all while being dead silent in its travel. The ground will still tremble though, which can serve as its warning sign. A true show of annihilation carried out by Hasmed himself.
Note(s):
- Usage limit of three times (3) and a two (2) turn cool down between uses
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(Hokkyoku Āsurirīsu: Koko de Fuyu)- Arctic Earth: Winter is Here
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Similar to the setup of "King of The North", the user, with two hand seals (Dog, Snake), will dedicate all of his Arctic Earth chakra into transforming the entire terrain into a desolate tundra. The sheer scope of this technique spans up to long ranged in all directions all (including underground up to 20 meters). This type of terraforming is completely noticeable as the shiny Arctic Earth consumes the land and is very noticeable mainly due to its effects on surrounding structures such as trees and buildings, but is also very slow and takes the entire turn performed to complete. Meaning by the user's next move the technique would have been completed instead of the same post performed. Once established, travelling across the terrain would prove quite difficult to enemies as the clumsiness of slipping on ice prevails, preventing any sudden movement such as dashing or sprinting--unless the opponent(s) wish to find themselves sprawled out and nursing broken bones and other injuries from falling on the cold, hard ground. The user remains unaffected by this. Another advantage is that It allows permafrost techniques that would otherwise require regular earth to be performed using the permafrost ground instead with doubled efficiency (I.e double the casting time).
Note(s):
- Can only be done 3x
- Lasts 4 turns with each use, with a one turn cooldown
Declined - too much too fast, how does this effect when people want to use elements from the ground ect?
(Hokkyoku Āsurirīsu: Waru no Hiya)- Arctic Earth: Wicked Cold
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range : Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique allows the user to t as keep control if any preexisting Arctic Earth structures present around him (up to mid ranged) and with a hand gesture or chakra control cause said structure to explode violently, releasing razor sharp shards of Arctic Earth in all directions of its location, causing anything caught in the blast radius to be reduced to ribbons. The amount and size of the shards released is proportional to the structure sacrificed. The user can also control in what manner the structures explode in the event that an omnidirectional route wouldn't be favorable. He/she may send all the shards of the expended structure in one direction instead of all around.
Note(s):
- Can only be done 4x and only on preexisting Arctic Earth structures
- Requires a turn cooldown between uses
Declined - how can they explode violently? Your c.e doesn't say anything about this. They can burst omnidirectionally in the form of razor sharp shards, but there wouldn't be a violent explosion
(Hokkyoku Āsurirīsu: Koko de Fuyu)- Arctic Earth: Winter is Here
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Similar to the setup of "King of The North", the user, with two hand seals (Dog, Snake), will dedicate all of his Arctic Earth chakra into transforming the entire terrain into a desolate tundra. The sheer scope of this technique spans up to long ranged in all directions all (including underground up to 20 meters). This type of terraforming is completely noticeable as the shiny Arctic Earth consumes the land and is very conspicuous mainly due to its effects on surrounding structures such as trees and buildings, but is also very slow and takes
two turns after being performed to complete.
On the first turn this technique is performed the area up to 5m of the user becomes transformed to Arctic Earth. On the second turn it will spread to encompass 10m of the user's position and by the third turn the technique consumes 15m of the ground around (all measurements dictate the technique's growth both length and depth wise). In the turns after, the technique can grow far enough to take an entire landmark. Once the ground has been transformed in any of its sequences the opponent will be unable to manipulate it unless they possess the Arctic Earth chakra nature--or if it was destroyed somehow. Once established, travelling across the terrain would prove quite difficult to enemies as the clumsiness of slipping on ice prevails, preventing any sudden movement such as dashing or sprinting--unless the opponent(s) wish to find themselves sprawled out and nursing broken bones and other injuries from falling on the cold, hard ground. The user remains unaffected by this. Another advantage is that It allows permafrost techniques that would otherwise require regular earth to be performed using the permafrost ground instead with heightened efficiency (i.e quicker than usual).
Note(s):
- Can only be done
three times (3x).
- Lasts 4 turns with each use, with a one turn cool down.
Declined - if they were to use earth that would over power the arctic earth release chakra they would over power it. Especially where it's weak to earth, or like lightning jutsu that shoot up from the ground. O_< Apart from that it's fine
Basically everything was changed, didn't bother to bold.
(Hokkyoku Āsurirīsu: Waru no Hiya)- Arctic Earth: Wicked Cold
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range : Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique allows the user to take control of any preexisting Arctic Earth structures present around him (up to mid ranged) or, by adding an extra Ram hand seal to an Arctic Earth technique being performed, cause the structure to be filled with either Wind or Water. By tilting the ratio of Water to Wind to Earth in any order, the user can make his Arctic Earth structures become filled with either of its component fluids. Then, with a gesture of the hand or body the user will command the uniquely morphed structure to 'swell' by steadily increasing the content of whatever fluid it was filled with. This will in turn lead the Arctic Earth structure to explode voilently (think pressurized air rushing into a balloon), spewing razor sharp shards of the element in all directions of its location, leading to anything caught in the blast radius (7m) to be reduced to ribbons. The amount and size of the shards released is proportional to the structure sacrificed. The user can also control in what manner the structures explode in the event that an omnidirectional route wouldn't be favorable. He/she may send all the shards of the expended structure in one direction instead of all around. If used as a controlled explosion then the radius is reduced to 5m.
Note(s):
- Can only be done four times (4x) on preexisting Arctic Earth structures and three times (3x) on techniques being performed.
- Requires a turn cool down between uses.
Declined - this would require Y/Y to add another element into it like that. Same as my carbon is made up of fire/earth to form it, i could just add a core of fire into the center of it. You could however cause any of your jutsu to just shatter into shards like glass to go in any and all directions. Wouldn't be explosive but it would be handy.
(Hokkyoku Āsurirīsu: Omo no Freljord)- Arctic Earth: Lord of The Freljord
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: N/A (Dependent)
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: N/A (Dependent)
Description: Omo no Frejlord is a technique dedicated to using the remains of Arctic Earth techniques once they've been destroyed or reduced. With hand gestures the user will take control of any pieces/shards of Arctic Earth around him up to mid ranged and can send them flying at a target in an effort to dish out some last second damage before the structure is truly wasted. Something very important to note is that Omo no Frejlord's true rank and damage is equal to one less rank of the technique that it was taken from. For example, if an A ranked structure was reduced to pieces this technique will take control of those pieces and be treated as a B ranked technique, doing B ranked damage (40) to a target. in the same light, if the structure was B ranked this technique will become a C ranked and carry C ranked damage (30) to a target. However this move cannot be performed in rapid succession (i.e more than once in the same turn) and cannot be performed on pieces that have already been used prior. Omo no Frejlord can also be used defensively to form crude walls and shields with the same rank-dependent system previously mentioned. However, only one type of the technique can be used each turn, meaning one cannot use the shards offensively and defensively at the same time or even in the same turn.
Note(s):
- Can only be performed four times (2x) on S ranked Arctic Earth structures with a two turn cool down in between. Also, only three times (3x) on A ranked Artic Earth structures with a turn cool down in between. Usable a maximum of four times (4x) on B and C ranked Arctic Earth structures and unlimited for structures under C ranked.
- Once on cool down for any of its uses this technique cannot be performed on differently ranked structures until that cool down is finished.
Declined - make it so this can't be used if the original jutsu was completely destroyed. For example you're element is weak to lightning, if i wipe it out with chidori remei, there wont be anything left to control.