[Gen] Shinta trains gaara in genjustu

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I kinda get it then i don't
Okay basically when someone uses a genjutsu on you there are things you have to do to break out of it. The first thing you have to do is explain, and give good reasoning on how your character knows he is in a genjutsu. Usually there is something in a genjutsu that is weird or strange. You should ask yourself (What do I see? What do I hear? What do I feel? What do I smell? (Or taste in some cases). For example, if someone blinds you with cherry blossoms you should be able to smell the aroma of cherry blossoms, Because it is just an illusion, the fact that these blossoms have no smell lets your character know you are in an illusion. For the purpose of having timely, and useful training I will save this lesson until after you learn B rank genjutsu so I can find ways to explain this clearly.

For now just perform the jutsu and I will provide extra notes/comments

(Magen: Nijū Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu) Demonic Illusion: Double False Surroundings Technique
Type: Supplmentary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user will do a sequence of 3 handseals, putting his opponents under a double layered Genjutsu. The user is able to create false surroundings to fool his targets, much like the simpler version of the technique. However, the illusion is in fact layered. If the opponent manages to release the first one, he will then feel the effects of the second illusion. If, for example, the first illusion is that of a desert and the second that of a forest, upon releasing the first one, the opponent will see the desert fade away while the forest appears around him, making him think he dispelled the illusion while in essence he is still caught in one. Each illusion is equivalent to C-Rank and both are casted at the same time. While normal releases will release only one illusion at a time, a strong enough pain or an external source of chakra can dispel both at the same time.

Perform 3 handseals and then layer your opponent in a double genjutsu. In this genjutsu you change the terrain, but have another illusion of a terrain set, so that if the enemy breaks out of the first illusion, he will see the second illusion. Each illusion is C ranked seperately, but B rank together, so the opponent can dispel both genjutsu at the same time if he is able. No explanation necessary as of now. Just perform plz.
 

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Gaara takes a deep breathe and channel his charka and perform 3 qick hand signs but he wasn't done their he channel more channel to cast the first genjustu on your clone then gaara adds more and more charka to cast a second genjustu on your clone placing him a terrian
 

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Gaara takes a deep breathe and channel his charka and perform 3 qick hand signs but he wasn't done their he channel more channel to cast the first genjustu on your clone then gaara adds more and more charka to cast a second genjustu on your clone placing him a terrian
Okay, nice, but what terrains did you choose? What did the illusionary terrains look like? (Two terrains.)
 

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( Konoha-Ryū: Yanagi ) - Leaf Ninja Art: Willow
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 35
Description: The user waves their sword back and forth, which when seen by the target locks them in a genjutsu which causes them to hallucinate multiple waving arms. The movement resembles that of a willow tree blowing in the wind. With the enemy off guard, the user is free to cut them down.

Alright you'll need a sword so hold on to this one. Wave it back in forth to cast the genjutsu. The opponent will see multiple wavinf arms almost like the movement of a willow tree. With any luck it will get the enemy off guard and allow you to attack at close range. This is a nice genjutsu, but is pretty obvious. It would work well with a freeform strike with a sword, but yeah perform this. Make sure you describe your actions and the genjutsu you cast on the enemy.



 

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( Konoha-Ryū: Yanagi ) - Leaf Ninja Art: Willow
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 35
Description: The user waves their sword back and forth, which when seen by the target locks them in a genjutsu which causes them to hallucinate multiple waving arms. The movement resembles that of a willow tree blowing in the wind. With the enemy off guard, the user is free to cut them down.

Alright you'll need a sword so hold on to this one. Wave it back in forth to cast the genjutsu. The opponent will see multiple wavinf arms almost like the movement of a willow tree. With any luck it will get the enemy off guard and allow you to attack at close range. This is a nice genjutsu, but is pretty obvious. It would work well with a freeform strike with a sword, but yeah perform this. Make sure you describe your actions and the genjutsu you cast on the enemy.



Gaara takes the sword from the hand and analyze the justu and begin to focus his charka and start to wave the sword to the point where you can see arms moving almost like willow tree then i strike omega in the chest
 

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Gaara takes the sword from the hand and analyze the justu and begin to focus his charka and start to wave the sword to the point where you can see arms moving almost like willow tree then i strike omega in the chest
Ragna summons his uzumaki chains to break out of the genjutsu and grab Gaara. "No, bad gaara......"

( Genjutsu: Ingemame Ketsugō Sakkaku ) - Illusion Technique String Bean Binding Illusion
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: Similar to Illusion Technique: Tree Binding Death, the user will do the Dog → Hare → Snake → Ram hand seals and trigger an illusion where the user first disappears, while the target sees several bean vines growing from the ground around and beneath him. These vines bind the target body, lifting them into the air. Then a bean pod rises from the ground to reveal the user, ready to strike. In reality, the opponent is immobilized by the illusion, allowing the user to strike.

I'll admit...I hate this jutsu because the bean part just throws me off. I know its chilidish but beans? REALLY? Anyway....this jutsu can be used mid range from the opponent in which it binds the opponent with bean vines coming out of the ground. During this time you will dissappear from your opponent...that is if they don't have sensing. A bean pod will rise out of the ground to reveal you, the user at which point you attack. It is very slow developing and the opponent will probably use Nagashi to break out of the genjutsu so be careful about getting close range. By the time you reveal yourself its probably going to be too late to take advantage of this jutsu fully but since you have to learn it please perform. Don't forget the handseals!



( Magen: Hanarasui ) - Demonic Illusion: Flower Head Death
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40 due to stress on the mind
Description: The user will trap the target within an illusion where the opponent appears to be trapped in a large flower bud which then explodes. The opponent is made to believe that an explosion actually occurred and collapses, believing himself to be injured. The resulting stress on his mind causes damage.

Okay so this is a pretty decent genjutsu if you haven't revealed your KG. It is also fairly obvious to break out of. One could use the fact that the flower's lack of aroma/smell due to it being an illusion and not a real flower. One can even use the excuse, in character, to use Nagashi to destroy the flower; however, its real purpose would be to break out of the illusion. The flower itself keeps the enemy in one place due to trapping them, and then adds a danger component by exploding. Best to use this while the opponent is standing on some kind of earth/ground. I used this one time when my opponent was in the air, and it was embarrassing......
I digress describe the illusion you cast on some worthless NPC's I picked up on the way here....0_0 (P.S you can use this mid range. ^^)
 

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Ragna summons his uzumaki chains to break out of the genjutsu and grab Gaara. "No, bad gaara......"

( Genjutsu: Ingemame Ketsugō Sakkaku ) - Illusion Technique String Bean Binding Illusion
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: Similar to Illusion Technique: Tree Binding Death, the user will do the Dog → Hare → Snake → Ram hand seals and trigger an illusion where the user first disappears, while the target sees several bean vines growing from the ground around and beneath him. These vines bind the target body, lifting them into the air. Then a bean pod rises from the ground to reveal the user, ready to strike. In reality, the opponent is immobilized by the illusion, allowing the user to strike.

I'll admit...I hate this jutsu because the bean part just throws me off. I know its chilidish but beans? REALLY? Anyway....this jutsu can be used mid range from the opponent in which it binds the opponent with bean vines coming out of the ground. During this time you will dissappear from your opponent...that is if they don't have sensing. A bean pod will rise out of the ground to reveal you, the user at which point you attack. It is very slow developing and the opponent will probably use Nagashi to break out of the genjutsu so be careful about getting close range. By the time you reveal yourself its probably going to be too late to take advantage of this jutsu fully but since you have to learn it please perform. Don't forget the handseals!



( Magen: Hanarasui ) - Demonic Illusion: Flower Head Death
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40 due to stress on the mind
Description: The user will trap the target within an illusion where the opponent appears to be trapped in a large flower bud which then explodes. The opponent is made to believe that an explosion actually occurred and collapses, believing himself to be injured. The resulting stress on his mind causes damage.

Okay so this is a pretty decent genjutsu if you haven't revealed your KG. It is also fairly obvious to break out of. One could use the fact that the flower's lack of aroma/smell due to it being an illusion and not a real flower. One can even use the excuse, in character, to use Nagashi to destroy the flower; however, its real purpose would be to break out of the illusion. The flower itself keeps the enemy in one place due to trapping them, and then adds a danger component by exploding. Best to use this while the opponent is standing on some kind of earth/ground. I used this one time when my opponent was in the air, and it was embarrassing......
I digress describe the illusion you cast on some worthless NPC's I picked up on the way here....0_0 (P.S you can use this mid range. ^^)
Can I analyze it and tell you how it work
 

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Sure, I'm trying to see what works best for you, but go ahead and try that out.
The first justu as I read can you be using be binding the target and make them see beans but in reality they just been trapping and binding



The second just cast a lot of stress on the mind and traps their target inside their mind
 

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The first justu as I read can you be using be binding the target and make them see beans but in reality they just been trapping and binding



The second just cast a lot of stress on the mind and traps their target inside their mind
Ok going off your replies i think a template based training method will work best. Have a read through the below and let me know if you have any questions, once thats out of the way we can begin.

For each reply you would just need to copy/paste the bolded below and fill them out. I would just need a sentence or two for each point

Perform the technique:

Advantages:

Disadvantages:

Techniques that counter this one:

Speed of use:


The first few are fairly easy, the first is simply you performing the technique. Use a good amount of description and don't forget to use nature and shape manipulation. The next two are simply the advantages and disadvantages that are accompanied with the technique we are learning. Whether that be for example, trapping your opponent or losing sight of him from the scale of the technique.

While with the techniques that counter you simply have to copy/paste a whole technique that you think counters the one we are learning and give a small explanation why you think so.(1-2 sentences). Also with this try to think outside the box so don't always go straight for the element that its weak to, doing so will help you understand battling more and will actually help you in fights.

As for speed of use you factor in the techniques preparation time(handseals, etc) where it actually forms(near you, near your opponent) and its travel speed to assign it as slow, medium or fast. Along with that give it a small explanation on why you assigned it so.
 

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Ok going off your replies i think a template based training method will work best. Have a read through the below and let me know if you have any questions, once thats out of the way we can begin.

For each reply you would just need to copy/paste the bolded below and fill them out. I would just need a sentence or two for each point

Perform the technique:

Advantages:

Disadvantages:

Techniques that counter this one:

Speed of use:


The first few are fairly easy, the first is simply you performing the technique. Use a good amount of description and don't forget to use nature and shape manipulation. The next two are simply the advantages and disadvantages that are accompanied with the technique we are learning. Whether that be for example, trapping your opponent or losing sight of him from the scale of the technique.

While with the techniques that counter you simply have to copy/paste a whole technique that you think counters the one we are learning and give a small explanation why you think so.(1-2 sentences). Also with this try to think outside the box so don't always go straight for the element that its weak to, doing so will help you understand battling more and will actually help you in fights.

As for speed of use you factor in the techniques preparation time(handseals, etc) where it actually forms(near you, near your opponent) and its travel speed to assign it as slow, medium or fast. Along with that give it a small explanation on why you assigned it so.
Right on I am on my phone 24/7 so if I cannot copy and paste sometimes get mad and I really trying to understand genjustu because my sand genjustu are gone be complete with different unique ideas and stuff this will help combined sand and gen together for combos so thanks for this
 

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Right on I am on my phone 24/7 so if I cannot copy and paste sometimes get mad and I really trying to understand genjustu because my sand genjustu are gone be complete with different unique ideas and stuff this will help combined sand and gen together for combos so thanks for this
No problem, if you can't copy/paste just write the title of each section and fill it out. Let start with the next genjutsu.

( Magen: Jubaku Satsu ) - Demonic Illusion: Tree Binding Death
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes five handseals, and appears to dissolve into a mist. Once they stealthily approach the target and get within short-range, the opponent feels completely immobilized, and believes they have been bound by a fast-growing tree and are unable to move. The user then appears as if they emerge from the tree to attack the target. In reality, the target is immobilized, allowing the user to strike or interrogate them.

Focus your chakra into my clone and form five hand seals, using your chakra to disturb his chakra flow and initiate the illusion. using your chakra manipulate his senses, firstly his sight to make it appear as if you have dispersed into mist and are hidden from him. Secondly manipulate his sense of sight and touch to make it appear as if the limbs of a tree grow from underneath him and immobilize him. This will leave him vulnerable to any follow up attack.
 

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No problem, if you can't copy/paste just write the title of each section and fill it out. Let start with the next genjutsu.

( Magen: Jubaku Satsu ) - Demonic Illusion: Tree Binding Death
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes five handseals, and appears to dissolve into a mist. Once they stealthily approach the target and get within short-range, the opponent feels completely immobilized, and believes they have been bound by a fast-growing tree and are unable to move. The user then appears as if they emerge from the tree to attack the target. In reality, the target is immobilized, allowing the user to strike or interrogate them.

Focus your chakra into my clone and form five hand seals, using your chakra to disturb his chakra flow and initiate the illusion. using your chakra manipulate his senses, firstly his sight to make it appear as if you have dispersed into mist and are hidden from him. Secondly manipulate his sense of sight and touch to make it appear as if the limbs of a tree grow from underneath him and immobilize him. This will leave him vulnerable to any follow up attack.
Gaara begin to focus his charka inside your clone and then he add more charka to your clone and then gaara forms five fast hand seals to to distrub his charka flow and then gaara vanishes in the mist then he make you thank it's tree limbs growing from you while you in shock gaara slams his on the ground and control the earth at will and bury your clone inside my sand
 

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Gaara begin to focus his charka inside your clone and then he add more charka to your clone and then gaara forms five fast hand seals to to distrub his charka flow and then gaara vanishes in the mist then he make you thank it's tree limbs growing from you while you in shock gaara slams his on the ground and control the earth at will and bury your clone inside my sand
I will need advantages and disadvantages of each genjutsu with the performance. you can ignore the counter and speed of use sections though.
 

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I will need advantages and disadvantages of each genjutsu with the performance. you can ignore the counter and speed of use sections though.
Well the advantage for this justu is I am able to hide in the mist but for as someone with white eyes or red eyes cannot be fooled that easy
 

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Well the advantage for this justu is I am able to hide in the mist but for as someone with white eyes or red eyes cannot be fooled that easy
Thats a good advantage, but i will need a better disadvantage. the sharingan can see through a lot of visual illusions so it isn't specific to this one
 

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Tbh i don't know bad disadvantage of this justu
Well a disadvantage would be the number of hand seals, since 5 is a little longer than most other techniques. It is also only short range while most other genjutsu can reach up to mid.

Try to look for things like the amount of preparation, the speed of the illusion(how long it til it actually takes effect) and its range as these things are often slightly skewed negatively to balance techniques. If you have no other questions we can move on to the next one.
 
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