[Nin] with Detective L

[RuckenTM]

Spoiler

No, no, the size should be realistic in terms of "general weapons" but other than that, good job.

(Sōgu: Fūjin Heki) - Manipulated Tools: Floating Blades Wall]
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user unrolls in the floor under the enemy two small scrolls and summons many different weapons from them, taking the enemy into the air. Then they wraps the leg of the enemy with a chain and crushes him back down to the ground.

With this technique, you will utilize two scrolls and unroll them on the floor before the opponent. From these scrolls, many different weapons are summoned. These blast the opponent into the air, and a chain is then released. This chain grabs the opponent's legs, and brings them down with great power. Pretty simple, but not very practical.

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description:The user takes out a big scroll and waves it in a circle. It turns into a giant chain hammer with a huge metal ball at the end that they then crushes the enemy with. After this move, the chain hammer turns back into a scroll.

After that, take out a scroll and focus your chakra into it as you wave it in a circle. This then forms into a giant hammer, with a huge metal ball at the end, with which the opponent is crushed. After finishing off the move, the hammer will turn back into a scroll.

(Sōgu: Fūjin Heki) - Manipulated Tools: Floating Blades Wall

Spoiler

He unrolls on the ground under the log infront him two small scrolls and summons many different types of shurikens from them, as the release forced out from the scroll takes the log into the air. Having then wrapping the log with a chain he crushes it back down to the ground, smashing it. "One could decide to release paper bombs perhaps because, of the given the different aspect mentioning." I don't know if that is allowed, if it so as much is it allowed, I'd use this jutsu surely in the future. "Though having the limited range, one has to use it with ken/tai at most, given elemental use with it is a rare case." It be countered with the victim stopping the un-scrolling by using a clone. Being that you'd need to release it from your hand as you had grabbed it from the start...which is an undermining move which can be halted. "So say, you are about to get the scroll in close range, they use tai to kick your hand, which makes you lose your scroll." Given the small scrolls aren't elaborated about their size, I could say they're as limited to finger size. Which is a good thing, given you can release them as you summon a creature. "like moving in on the opponent then kneeling down fast as you place a summoning seal you release them scrolls..."

(Sōgu: Dai Tekkai) - Manipulated Tools: Giant Iron Lump

Spoiler

He takes out a big scroll and waves it in a circle. It turns into a giant chain hammer with a huge metal ball at the end that he then crushes the tree with before leaping into the sky to do so. After this move, the chain hammer turns back into a scroll. "Much like a huge baseball bat, I can assume the strength to whip something like that is useful to counter some types of attack." I find it interesting as I could use the weapon as a cover from wave like attacks. "Like if some would fire water at me, I'd use this to bat away the water." Though besides how it goes by fast after one move, and the action it takes to form/summon the tool, I don't see any other flaws within it." For look at its range, it means one can smash a jutsu with it" The powerhouse size allows the most use in close range attack, as it leaves near to no other choice of counter. "If they get within short range and you'd have finished dancing the ritual, you could brush them away from the field."

 

[Detective L]

Good job, though I wouldn't use a hammer to brush away Water attacks z,z

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: This technique is very similar to Twin Rising Dragons, but in this version the user only summons countless kunai from the scrolls, which are connected by strings at thier hands. They then throws all the kunai at the same time on the opponent.

A technique that is similar to the technique, Twin Rising Dragons. In this version, you will summon a large amount of kunai from scrolls, which are all connected by strings attached to your hands. You will then throw all the kunai towards the opponent, allowing you to manipulate them as they move towards the opponent.

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
description: The user summons a long chain from a scroll and wraps the enemy with it. When the enemy is trapped, they use another scroll to launch a rain of weapons at the enemy.

With this technique, you will summon a long chain from a scroll, which is able to wrap the opponent with it. When the opponent has been constricted, you will use another scroll to launch a large amount of weapons towards the opponent. Pretty simple and straightforward.

 

[RuckenTM]

Good job, though I wouldn't use a hammer to brush away Water attacks z,z

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: This technique is very similar to Twin Rising Dragons, but in this version the user only summons countless kunai from the scrolls, which are connected by strings at thier hands. They then throws all the kunai at the same time on the opponent.

A technique that is similar to the technique, Twin Rising Dragons. In this version, you will summon a large amount of kunai from scrolls, which are all connected by strings attached to your hands. You will then throw all the kunai towards the opponent, allowing you to manipulate them as they move towards the opponent.

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
description: The user summons a long chain from a scroll and wraps the enemy with it. When the enemy is trapped, they use another scroll to launch a rain of weapons at the enemy.

With this technique, you will summon a long chain from a scroll, which is able to wrap the opponent with it. When the opponent has been constricted, you will use another scroll to launch a large amount of weapons towards the opponent. Pretty simple and straightforward.

(Sōgu: Shu Senjin) - Manipulated Tools: One Thousand Blades

• Useful. Quick. Bare use.
• Once released, they allow one to attack in a frontal wave of kunais that are easily inescapable.
• Might never use in a fight

(Kuchiyose: Tetsurensa Housou) - Summoning: Iron Chain Wrapping

• Useful. Slow. Bare use.
• If you manage to wrap the enemy.
• With hiding screens, perhaps one could use it.

No questions, fully understandable.

 

[Detective L]

So you go from nice replies, to not even performing the techniques and just giving me bullet points? C'mon, man. These techniques are easy to understand, and easy to perform too.

 

[RuckenTM]

(Sōgu: Shu Senjin) - Manipulated Tools: One Thousand Blades

• Useful. Quick. Bare use.
• Once released, they allow one to attack in a frontal wave of kunais that are easily inescapable.
• Might never use in a fight

"Jumping into the air he summons countless kunai from the scrolls, which are connected by strings at their hands. They he throws all the kunai at the same time on the tree."


(Kuchiyose: Tetsurensa Housou) - Summoning: Iron Chain Wrapping

• Useful. Slow. Bare use.
• If you manage to wrap the enemy.
• With hiding screens, perhaps one could use it.

"He summons a long chain from a scroll and wraps the tree with it. When the tree is trapped, he uses another scroll to launch a rain of weapons at the tree."


No questions, fully understandable.

 

[Detective L]

Fine.

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user and either there summon or a partner combine into one transformation.
Note: Must have a summoning or partner to use this jutsu.

A simple technique where you and your summoning, or partner, combine to form into one being. However, this doesn't mean you gain their abilities, it is an appearance based technique, as can be seen with the rank and chakra cost. A simple technique to hide more than one person or simply for easier movement on the field.

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can take on the properties of any earthen material they touch and harden any part of there body. This jutsu also lets the user turn into fine grains of rock that can be used to do another jutsu. The issue with using this technique is that the user will gain all the weaknesses of the material they mimic, even if they are granted their strengths.

A technique where you will use your chakra to take on the properties of any Earthen material that you touch, and harden your body with that material. However, you gain all the weaknesses of the material that you mimic.

 

[RuckenTM]

Spoiler

Fine.

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user and either there summon or a partner combine into one transformation.
Note: Must have a summoning or partner to use this jutsu.

A simple technique where you and your summoning, or partner, combine to form into one being. However, this doesn't mean you gain their abilities, it is an appearance based technique, as can be seen with the rank and chakra cost. A simple technique to hide more than one person or simply for easier movement on the field.

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can take on the properties of any earthen material they touch and harden any part of there body. This jutsu also lets the user turn into fine grains of rock that can be used to do another jutsu. The issue with using this technique is that the user will gain all the weaknesses of the material they mimic, even if they are granted their strengths.

A technique where you will use your chakra to take on the properties of any Earthen material that you touch, and harden your body with that material. However, you gain all the weaknesses of the material that you mimic.

(Konbi Henge) - Combination Transformation

Rp: He summons Manda and they combine into one transformation. Appearing as a half and half serpent, they undo the jutsu as it feels too much awkward for both.
Oc: Like being glued to another person, this jutsu is useful if applied thoughtfully. I have no questions.​

(Shinra Banshō Dōka No Jutsu) - Assimilate All Creation Technique

Rp: He takes on the properties of a rock material that he'd touched and hardens his whole body.
Oc: Very basic, useful when you'd need to hide or avoid getting destroyed. I have no questions here.​

 

[Detective L]

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user throws nails into the air. Upon impact on the ground, they dig themselves into the earth. When the opponent walks over the ground where the nails dug themselves in, nails pin their feet stopping their movement. Then, the user forms a hand seal and hundreds of nails shoot out of the ground at the opponent.

A simple technique where you will throw some nails into the air, and once they impact with the ground they will dig themselves deeper into the ground. When the opponent crosses it, they pin their feet and stops them. You will then form a single hand seal and cause hundreds of nails to shoot out of the ground.

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: After forming the needed hand seal, the user will emit a flying mist of small nails from their mouth. These small nails can travel towards the opponent at quite a distance.

After a single hand seal, you will release a small mist of nails from your mouth. These nails can go a bit far, and are pretty cool if you know where to use them.

 

[RuckenTM]

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user throws nails into the air. Upon impact on the ground, they dig themselves into the earth. When the opponent walks over the ground where the nails dug themselves in, nails pin their feet stopping their movement. Then, the user forms a hand seal and hundreds of nails shoot out of the ground at the opponent.

A simple technique where you will throw some nails into the air, and once they impact with the ground they will dig themselves deeper into the ground. When the opponent crosses it, they pin their feet and stops them. You will then form a single hand seal and cause hundreds of nails to shoot out of the ground.

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: After forming the needed hand seal, the user will emit a flying mist of small nails from their mouth. These small nails can travel towards the opponent at quite a distance.

After a single hand seal, you will release a small mist of nails from your mouth. These nails can go a bit far, and are pretty cool if you know where to use them.

(Gyorai Shin) - Torpedo Needle

Near a dummy, he throws a few needles onto the ground as makes the handseal, they leap out, filling the dummy with needles after. "Odds of use depend on other forms of sight hindering jutsu, given its simply ninjutsu, this highly depends on whether or not the victim will be able to use elemental ninjutsu. Short range use lowers the odds of use."​

(Hitei Mushou) - Flying Nail Mist Pierce

"The upgrade from the previous jutsu as the user can simply now launch the attack and use it as a form of defense." He forms the needed handseals as he emits mist of nails toward a tree.​

 

[Detective L]

Good job.

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After throwing a special umbrella that has been equipped with springs into the air, it releases a hailing "shower" of senbon. It cannot be dodged by moving away since the needles cover a wide area in all directions, controlled by chakra.

This technique is quite simple where one will utilize a special umbrella which is equipped with springs and senbon. One would throw the umbrella into the air, where it will then release all the senbon, controlled by chakra and difficult to dodge due to the large area it covers.

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to take on the body of their target. They must remain close to the one they want to copy for a short period of time. Their body will then shape and contort to resemble the target. The copy is said to be so good that even family members of the target cannot tell they are a fake. The user will even take on the smell of the original. Unfortunately, the user does not copy the targets jutsu, leaving them with only their original skills. Practitioners of this jutsu are also skilled in quickly taking on the mannerisms of the original person and playing up the character traits of their target. Through a regular Henge in combination, they can copy the clothing of the opponent. Their appearance will eventually change back to their original form after several days.

With this technique, one is able to copy an opponent's body structure, all the way down to their smell. Pretty useful in the NW, but that's pretty much it.

 

[RuckenTM]

(Jouro Senbon) - Sprinkling Needles
He then would detach an umbrella from his belt and toss it into the air. Upon reaching the at most highest, the umbrella would open up and spin. As it would spin, thousands of needles would pour from the umbrella and spew out in every direction. Then by releasing his chakra into the atmosphere, he was able to manipulate the needles and direct them all towards a nearby tree. Without the Umbrella, you can't use this jutsu. Great for surprise attacks.

(Kao Utsushi no Jutsu) - Face Copy Technique
He walks towards his photo frame and began to use his chakra to alter his physical appearance. His hair would turn blue along with his skin colors. His eyes turned blue while he began to develop huge eyes and his clothes and voice changed. Good to hide yourself, but not great at changing your scent.

 

[Detective L]

Good job on the performance, but where's the advantages and disadvantages..?

 

[RuckenTM]

I've edited them within the training.

 

[Detective L]

Good job.

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: A summoning technique meant almost exclusively for weapon's experts. To begin, the shinobi will remove two scrolls and set them on the ground, after forming the necessary hand seals, the two scroll rise into the air and begin to swirl around a middle vortex that is the user. They then use this space to launch themselves into the air between the spinning scrolls. From these scrolls the ninja can then summon a mass of weapons, which they then begin to throw at their opponent. If the first barrage fails, they can use wires that run from each weapon to their fingertips to pull them back into the air to strike at their opponent again.

Place two scrolls onto the ground and form the necessary hand seals. This causes the scrolls to swirl around you as they rise into the air. You will then jump up, and summon a lot of weapons from the scrolls. All these weapons are connected to your hands via strings, and are launched towards the opponent. So if they miss, they can be brought back.

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: This technique allows a shinobi to hover multiple kunai in the air while they approach a target. The technique allows a ninja to unleash a torrent of kunai, shuriken, or other weapons much more quickly than if each was thrown individually.

A technique where you will focus your chakra and allows you to hover basic weapons, meaning they can be launched faster. Pretty useful.

 

[RuckenTM]

(Soushouryuu) - Twin Rising Dragons
He draws out some scrolls that he sets onto the ground after, quickly making hand-seals he then watches as the two scrolls lift upward toward the sky. While they begin to swirl around him, he leaps upwards through them, as he summons a mass of weapons, which he then begins to throw toward a nearby tree.

(Soushuuha) - Manipulate Advancing Blades
Moving in toward a tree, they draw a couple of kunai that hover in the air while they approach. Then the kunais launch themselves faster than he would've thrown all of them. The aim is precise and exact that it makes this jutsu quite use. "Its quite annoying that it isn't supplementary, but rather an attack which is downer. Great range makes this jutsu profound to use with other jutsu.

 

[Detective L]

Good.

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: Utilizing chakra, the user is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant bomb tag. The exploding tags that the Third Hokage used were different than the usual bomb tags, being yellow in color instead of white with a red border.

A special tag, that can be detonated via the use of chakra. This tag differs from the normal one in color.

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will jump into the air and begin spinning around rapidly whislt releasing a continous amount of kunai converging in all directions around them.

Jump into the air, and spin your body around as you release a continuous amount of kunai, converging all around you.

 

[RuckenTM]

Spoiler

Good.

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: Utilizing chakra, the user is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant bomb tag. The exploding tags that the Third Hokage used were different than the usual bomb tags, being yellow in color instead of white with a red border.

A special tag, that can be detonated via the use of chakra. This tag differs from the normal one in color.

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will jump into the air and begin spinning around rapidly whislt releasing a continous amount of kunai converging in all directions around them.

Jump into the air, and spin your body around as you release a continuous amount of kunai, converging all around you.

(Ninpo: Jibaku Fuda: Kassei) - Ninja Art: Exploding Tag: Activate

Utilizing their chakra to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant bomb tag. "Given the range and damage, by assuming the normal paper bomb is E-rank level. Not much of faults in design compared to the advantages this jutsu attains. Having the ability of using normal paper bombs with this makes it effective." saying in response after.​

(Ninpo: Bōseki Enbu no mai) - Ninja Art: Spinning Walts Dance

Jumping into the air and beginning to spinning around rapidly whilst releasing a continuous amount of kunai converging in all directions around them. He lands saying "The range is good enough and not any disadvantages."​

 

[Detective L]

Cool, onto the next ones.

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique enables the user to project an image of themselves in the sky in order to send a message. This technique can work as a good diversionary technique.

Through utilizing your chakra, you will project an image of yourself into the sky, which allows you to send messages over long distances. This also works to divert the attention of your opponent in battle, making it a good diversion based technique.

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will throw three paper bombs connected to kunai that act like parachutes and float down above the enemy. The user will then make the confrontation hand seal to explode the explosive tags when they reach their desired location.

With this, you will throw three paper bombs, which are connected to kunai and act like parachutes and float down towards the opponent. With a single hand seal, the tags are triggered and will explode. Remember, Shikamaru used a variation of the technique, though he didn't trigger explosions, just the parachute tactic.

 

[RuckenTM]

Cool, onto the next ones.

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique enables the user to project an image of themselves in the sky in order to send a message. This technique can work as a good diversionary technique.

Through utilizing your chakra, you will project an image of yourself into the sky, which allows you to send messages over long distances. This also works to divert the attention of your opponent in battle, making it a good diversion based technique.

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will throw three paper bombs connected to kunai that act like parachutes and float down above the enemy. The user will then make the confrontation hand seal to explode the explosive tags when they reach their desired location.

With this, you will throw three paper bombs, which are connected to kunai and act like parachutes and float down towards the opponent. With a single hand seal, the tags are triggered and will explode. Remember, Shikamaru used a variation of the technique, though he didn't trigger explosions, just the parachute tactic.

(Ninpo: Bōkun Yobidashi no Jutsu) - Ninja Art: Tyrants Calling Technique

Molding chakra he summons a technique that enables him to project an image of themselves in the sky in order to send a message. "Quite useless in battle and worth not use otherwise in a form of combat. Does the message have to be words or can I make it appear as an eye in the sky?" His message says -Battle of the bastards-​

(Rakka Kibaku Fuda) - Falling Paper Bomb

Then as he launches three paper bombs connected to kunai that act like parachutes and float down above the tree. Adding a confrontation hand seal to explode the explosive tags when they reach their desired location after. "Smart jutsu to use, with a help of a clone that is. No issues with it besides it seems slow to work and allows the victim good enough time to react." saying after the impact.​

 

[Detective L]

Good job, and no, just image.

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20 (-5 per turn)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, the user can merge with another passive object and take on its properties to avoid any damage. While merged, the user is virtually undetected unless the enemy has a doujutsu. Even chakra sensors won't be able to pinpoint the users position. The limitation of the technique is that to use a technique and mold chakra, the user must fully unmerge although doing so doesn't produce any sound and the user can only be sensed once fully unmerged. The user is still aware of the world outside the object and can travel inside it at his normal running speed. The technique was used so far by 3 ninjas (Yamato, Orochimaru and Uchiha Madara) but as an advanced ninjutsu, it can be used by any skilled enough ninja.
Note: the user must be Sannin Rank and above
Note: Orochimaru and Yamato can use it 5 times per battle, Uchiha Madara can use it 3 times, other ninjas can use it twice.
Note: Cannot merge into mediums which aren't tangible

Alright, a very useful technique where you will use your chakra to merge with a tangible object, like a rock, for example to take on its properties. When merged, you can't be detected, not even by a Doujutsu or Sensors. However, you can't mold chakra whilst merge either, until you emerge from said object or substance. You travel inside said object, at your normal running speed.

Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
After doing the Ram seal, the user will put his palm close to a hidden explosive tag or sealing tag and will draw it out towards his hand. If the tag is inside a solid object it will warp through it towards the users palm. The technique disables the tag as it draws near the users hand in the case its an explosive tag.

Now, form the Ram hand seal and put your palm close to where a explosive tag or sealing tag was hidden (if you see it, when it was hidden with the C rank technique I taught you as well). This allows you to draw the tag out of the object, and also disables it, meaning it won't harm you.