Black despair Part 12 "Metamorphosis"

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BLACK despair

PART TWELVE
"METAMORPHOSIS"

[ENTER THE 9 YEAR TIME SKIP]

Narrator: A nine year interval has occurred. Everybody is nine years older and as the nine years have passed many things have developed in the child’s life. These nine years have molded and impacted the child into what he currently is.

[Setting change: Root sub-department division corridors]

Danzou: (In thought) Ukusa, you have served me for this long, being deceived as you are the salvation of our village

(Initial Character Insight revisited)

Initial Character Insight - Child:

● Classification: ANBU (added)
● Occupation: ANBU Root shinobi (added)
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root (added)
● Face: Porcelain animal mask (only in missions) (added)
● Name: Ukusa (a code name of many given to the adolescent shinobi) (added)
● Weapons: Tantou (added)

Danzou: (Continued in thought) It was very fortunate for me that you never again regained your memories..

Narrator: Making his way towards the center of the Root’s division, did he continue to lie in thought.

Danzou: (In thought) My men have searched for this organization without any results..when will they strike?

Danzou: (Continued in thought) Could this truly be linked to Ukusa?

[ELASPED TIME]

[Seven years ago]

Head Root Iryou-nin: This man is regaining consciousness

Head Root Iryou-nin: (In thought) He has far exceeded my expectations and practice through sheer willpower

Ryuuta: (In thought) I must inform Danzou-sama before it is too late

Narrator: News of the ANBU’s miraculous recovery reaches the elder leader and thereafter Ryuuta meets with Danzou to discuss the relevance of the opposing Dokueki organization.


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[Four years ago]

Haru: Danzou-sama..Kou has awoken and I have information regarding the incident

Danzou: Inform me

Haru: He confirmed what Kuza said and added that when he grasped the child’s arm that a struggle broke

Haru: (Continued) The child’s body glowed a powerful light that he thought could have blinded him and he tried to possess the child but he was rejected

Haru: (Continued) He stated that he attempted to escape it however the light devoured him and he passed out soon after

Danzou: (In thought) It was very informative as I have concluded that this young man whilst under any sort of stress will unintentionally release an offensive and defensive light…could it be a Kekkei Genkai and the reason why his hair changed color?

Danzou: Haru, you are dismissed


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[Post Kou’s recovery]

Narrator: Elder Danzou stands in the center of the Root divisions and slams his woodened cane against the floor. His messenger shinobi then appears awaiting instructions.

Haru: Yes Danzou-sama?

Danzou: You are to notify Kou and Ryuuta to see me now

Haru: Understood Danzou-sama

Narrator: Root Messenger returns with the two ANBU as ordered.

Danzou: I have a mission for both of you

Danzou: (Continued) You two will have a new name…Kou..your code name will be Fuu and Ryuuta will be Torune

Character Insight - Kou:

(Character insight revisited)

● Name: Fuu (code name Kou has now been replaced with the still in use present time code name) (added)

Character Insight - Ryuuta:

(Character insight revisited)

● Name: Torune (code name Ryuuta has now been replaced with the still in use present time code name) (added)

Danzou: (Continued) Fuu you are needed to track down the Dokueki organization and Torune will serve as back up.

Fuu: Understood Danzou-sama

Torune: Understood Danzou-sama

Narrator: The years that followed held many missions to identify the organization’s location yet the results were always futile as Dokueki would relocate when they felt the presence of a sensor via their own sensor.

[ELASPED TIME ENDS]

[Setting change: Root sub-department center chamber]

Narrator: Danzou arrives to the center of his division and a small army of Root shinobi appeared shortly after.

Danzou: Hayashi no Kuni is attempting to over throw our village and I will not allow it

Setting Insight - Hayashi no Kuni[/COLOR]:

● Land: Hayashi (Woods)
● Founder: Unknown

Characters insight - Hannyashuu:

● Side characters
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Affiliation: Hayashi no Kuni (Land of Woods)

Danzou: (Continued) I have been informed of this early and so we will take action

Danzou: (Continued) We must prevent a world war at all cost

Assailant #8: Is Sandaime Hokage aware of this as well?

Character Insight - Assailant #8:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Root shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Masked (Porcelain animal mask worn in missions only)
● Weapons: Tantou

Danzou: No..not yet and if I can help it he never will

Danzou: (Continued) We will take charge while we have the chance

Gio: What are your orders Danzou-sama

(Character insight revisited)

Character Insight - Kaitei:

● Name: Gio (code name Kaitei has now been replaced with the present time name) (added)

[Setting change: Kirigakure outskirts]

Setting Insight – Kirigakure no Sato:

● Village: Kiri
● Founder: Unknown
● Location: Mizu no Kuni

Ukusa: We are nearing their territory

Assailant #10: Proceed with caution and be sure to remember your training as this mission is a first for you two

Character Insight - Assailant #10:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Root shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Masked
● Weapons: Tantou

Ukusa: Roger

Assailant #9: Roger

Character Insight - Assailant #9:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Root shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Masked
● Weapons: Tantou

[Setting change: Root sub-department center chamber]

Danzou: I have chosen Ryuuta as leader…the mission is to infiltrate and assassinate the Hannyashuu found in Hayashi no Kuni!

Narrator: All Root members informed depart for an upcoming massacre.

Thirteenth part will be released next week, same day, titled Outbreak (Look for it!).

Part 13: Outbreak
 
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Exccellleennnttttt!!! The time skip is perfect and I personally believe this fanfic is worthy of the Fanfic award here on NB. Keep it going, Its getting better each week! (P.S. Ukusa is a sick name xD)
 

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I just read the last 5 chapters and I can say that your fanfic is getting better and better :)
Thanks ^.^

You did it agn ! You making it awesome and awesome ~~ !
Thanks for continuing to follow my work ;)

Exccellleennnttttt!!! The time skip is perfect and I personally believe this fanfic is worthy of the Fanfic award here on NB. Keep it going, Its getting better each week! (P.S. Ukusa is a sick name xD)
Wow! I did not think I would have received a response like that over the time skip but thank you! I have been told this several times but in my opinion I still believe that I am a rookie however, coming from a reader it means a lot ;) I will do my damndest to keep it going and thanks for the compliment over the main protagonist?s code name!​
 

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I agree with the rest. You should take part in a FF contest(I can`t believe you haven`t yet;))!:D

13, here i come:D
I know, I know but I simply feel like my work is as limited as the little fans that I currenlty have and so not having that array of readers (like other much more successful fanfics have) I think that there is no real point in bothering to enter.​
 

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I know, I know but I simply feel like my work is as limited as the little fans that I currenlty have and so not having that array of readers (like other much more successful fanfics have) I think that there is no real point in bothering to enter.​
Have you ever thought that more peoples will be interested and fans of your FF if you joined a contest;)
 

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Have you ever thought that more peoples will be interested and fans of your FF if you joined a contest;)
No, I actually have not thought of such a concept and it seems very logical. You are good at what you do let me tell you ;) Though, I will give it some thought but thanks for your the encouraging theory! ^.^​
 
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