That isn't very horrid. But it will do.
These are very dark and dangerous emotions, one's that are rarely released, and when they are, it's devastating.
I want to to channel all of that emotion into a single blast. We are aiming for quality over quantity on this jutsu. The big finish.
Show me what you've got. Release the biggest flame you can.
*I close my eyes and let the darkness of my own depts engolf me. As the feeling of loss suffocates me, my vision is filled with the image of a young girl, looking at me, but behind her sweet tender smile, something makes me burn inside, drowning my soul in hatred for her smile. Deep, profound hatred pierces my eyes, and with my bare hands I slam my hands on her face, and I pull, ignoring her terrorized screaming, freezing my heart, my hatred consumes, burning my body. I rip of her ears, leaving horrible scars on her face, as the teary eyes leak in pain. I put my fingers on the wounds, and as the darkness possessess me, I open the wounds, mutilating her face. The screams now annoy me, while my heart is lost. I grab her neck and I feed on her scream, dilacerating her throat*
*I immediatly come to my senses, open my eyes wide and release all the anger of my soul through a ravaging ball of fire.*
Dark enough?