Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
(Kenjutsu: Resshinkohō) - Sword Technique: Bestial Roar
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user grips the handle of his sword with his dominant hand while the other grips the other scabbard tightly, infusing it (scabbard) with chakra. The user unsheathes the sword, performs a normal, diagonal slash upwards, and then resheathes his sword. Then, what looks like the same motions again, the user instead brings up the sword (inside scabbard) to his chest, and then releases a burst of chakra (that had been infused in the scabbard) that the user manipulates into the form of a lions head that charges forward and knocks the opponent forward because of the density of the chakra. The released chakra isn't meant to do anything other than push back the opponent to create a gap between the user and his target.
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
~Declined~
This is an Iado technique in disguise with the only addition being a raw chakra burst which is completely unrelated to Kenjutsu.
(Ninjutsu: Ōshun) - Ninja Technique: Cherry Blossom Springtime
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20-40
Damage: N/A
Description: Using his prowess in the art of deception, the user causes Sakura petals to begin falling from the sky until they cover the entire battlefield. The petals themselves are harmless but they allow the user to manipulate for other techniques because they are imbued with his chakra. The chakra petals take a total of three turns to cover up to long range, two turns to cover up to mid-range, and one turn to cover up to short range of the user. Based on the user's skill with the petals, he can also change their color and appearance depending on the surroundings/terrain allowing for more versatility however he can't make them into anything other than petals. By using a higher degree of chakra and concentration (A-Rank and must maintain his focus, meaning he can't use other techniques while he is doing this), the user can cause the petals to cover the entire field in one turn but he is unable to use this technique further for the remainder of the battle. One important note is that you can only use either two B-Ranks or the one A-Rank (you can't use B-Rank then A-Rank).
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
Note: Can only be used 2x per battle if using B-Rank
Note: Can only be used once per battle if using A-Rank
~Declined~
Forgive me if I'm missing something but what does this technique actually acomplish beside just having petals fall from the sky? If that's all you're doing with this technique, don't resubmit.
(Ninpō: Giman Tengoku) - Ninja Art: Deceptive Heaven
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A (S if using with Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique)
Range: Short-Mid (Bright light extends to Long Range)
Chakra: 30 (40 if using with Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique)
Damage: 40 (80 if using with Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique)
Description: The user throws several senbon with an small orb designed at one one end throughout the battlefield. The orbs are small non-lethal bombs that release a bright light that when combined with the other orbs, can cover the entire battlefield if there are no obstacles to block the light directly. The user must take precaution when using this technique as he himself could get caught in it and end up blinded as well. Once the senbon are released it doesn't matter if they get blocked or not as the intention is in the orbs not the senbon. The orbs can be activated at any time the user wishes by making the Tiger handseal making it ideal to activate from a vantage point. By using the Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique, the user can increase the senbon and the amount of damage the technique can cause to the enemy.
Note: Can only be used 2x per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
~DNR~
1) you're already throwing "several" using the shuriken shadow clone wouldn't change that arbitrary value. 2) this can be done freeform with flashbombms on projectiles
(Kenjutsu: Resshinkohō) - Sword Technique: Bestial Roar
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user grips the handle of his sword with his dominant hand while the other grips the other scabbard tightly, infusing it (scabbard) with chakra. The user unsheathes the sword, performs a normal, diagonal slash upwards, and then resheathes his sword. Then, what looks like the same motions again, the user instead brings up the sword (inside scabbard) to his chest, and then releases a burst of chakra (that had been infused in the scabbard) that the user manipulates into the form of a lions head that charges forward and knocks the opponent forward because of the density of the chakra. The released chakra isn't meant to do anything other than push back the opponent to create a gap between the user and his target.
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
~Declined~
This is an Iado technique in disguise with the only addition being a raw chakra burst which is completely unrelated to Kenjutsu.
(Ninjutsu: Ōshun) - Ninja Technique: Cherry Blossom Springtime
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20-40
Damage: N/A
Description: Using his prowess in the art of deception, the user causes Sakura petals to begin falling from the sky until they cover the entire battlefield. The petals themselves are harmless but they allow the user to manipulate for other techniques because they are imbued with his chakra. The chakra petals take a total of three turns to cover up to long range, two turns to cover up to mid-range, and one turn to cover up to short range of the user. Based on the user's skill with the petals, he can also change their color and appearance depending on the surroundings/terrain allowing for more versatility however he can't make them into anything other than petals. By using a higher degree of chakra and concentration (A-Rank and must maintain his focus, meaning he can't use other techniques while he is doing this), the user can cause the petals to cover the entire field in one turn but he is unable to use this technique further for the remainder of the battle. One important note is that you can only use either two B-Ranks or the one A-Rank (you can't use B-Rank then A-Rank).
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
Note: Can only be used 2x per battle if using B-Rank
Note: Can only be used once per battle if using A-Rank
~Declined~
Forgive me if I'm missing something but what does this technique actually acomplish beside just having petals fall from the sky? If that's all you're doing with this technique, don't resubmit.
(Ninpō: Giman Tengoku) - Ninja Art: Deceptive Heaven
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A (S if using with Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique)
Range: Short-Mid (Bright light extends to Long Range)
Chakra: 30 (40 if using with Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique)
Damage: 40 (80 if using with Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique)
Description: The user throws several senbon with an small orb designed at one one end throughout the battlefield. The orbs are small non-lethal bombs that release a bright light that when combined with the other orbs, can cover the entire battlefield if there are no obstacles to block the light directly. The user must take precaution when using this technique as he himself could get caught in it and end up blinded as well. Once the senbon are released it doesn't matter if they get blocked or not as the intention is in the orbs not the senbon. The orbs can be activated at any time the user wishes by making the Tiger handseal making it ideal to activate from a vantage point. By using the Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique, the user can increase the senbon and the amount of damage the technique can cause to the enemy.
Note: Can only be used 2x per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
~DNR~
1) you're already throwing "several" using the shuriken shadow clone wouldn't change that arbitrary value. 2) this can be done freeform with flashbombms on projectiles
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