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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Denshi rirīsu

Custom element English name: Electron Release

The element is based on:Wind +Lightning

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Disclaimer : The element's name doesn't refer to the creation of elections but rather the reliance on science and alchemy to create a substance that manipulates electrons. I took the name not to suggest that the element created is electrons, but to describe the general effect the element will have on matter. If anything, the actual element is an ionized form of air.

Quite often even opposing elements may be combined to form a different element. Normally water would quench fire but the careful combination of these two natures gives us steam release. It is in the same way that in this case the wind doesn't nullify the lightning, but rather works together with it to create the charged wind.
Fundamentally, the element is air/wind that possesses the abilities of both wind and Lightning. It has the generic appearance of normal air/wind with several sudden flashes of blue streaks of electricity(Similar to how storm techniques look but with wind exchanging water). The main characteristic of the element is that it is a highly potent oxidizing agent. Upon contact with an object the element sucks out virtually all electrons starting with those within the atoms in immediate contact until gradually "disintegrating" the entire object.

When an element(object) is oxidized, it turns into an ionic product which is usually physically useless. Meaning, the disintegration doesn't destroy the object from existence but simply changes it into a form(the ionic form) that can no longer be seen nor manipulated in a battle by normal people. This ionization effect it has on other materials is a change in their physical structure. This is similar to how Acid and Boil releases attack the structure of materials. The motion of electrons through from the body as they are removed also generates electricity which zaps the object internally. This is the electrification effect of the element. Scientifically Raiton works by charging a body with electrons. That out-to-in movement of electrons generates the electricity/lightning we see. That is why lightning can be siphoned into the ground using techniques like ( Kenjutsu: Hirashin ) - Sword Technique: Lightning Rod.

In the manga/anime lightning has been associated with charges myriad times. One such example involves how Kirin is formed. Charges are amassed in the sky to be able to perform kirin. Electrons are an example of charge inducers. In reality thunderclouds are formed from the accumulation of electrons. The only difference in function between regular lightning and this element is the direction we want the electrons (charges) to go. Regular lightning takes an outside to inside path while this element takes the inverse: inside to outside route. Nevertheless movement of charges will generate electricity. That's the working principle behind even dry cells. Electrification quickens the disintegration process.


This 1-2 combination of ionization and electrification effectively produces damage from contact with the element.


How it works:
How it's created:
The element is created by reacting regular lightning with wind. In its simplest application, a lightning surge is ran through a controlled volume of wind(actually air since it remains stationary as it is being converted into the new form) extremely fast to push out all the natural charges within the wind mass. This creates a charged and unstable mass of wind that is more than ready to extract electrons from objects it comes across. This new charged highly oxidative wind(Ionic wind), is the element.

How it functions:
When it comes into contact with an object, the element siphons out the electrons in the object in a fraction of a second. The removal of electrons will convert a previously "inert" and usable element, say Al(s), into its ionic and naturally uncontrollable form Al(3+). The extraction of electrons however is so sudden that it creates an internally generated current that races along with the electrons as the move. Ultimately the current and the ionization disintegrates the object in contact according to relative strengths and weaknesses.


Jutsu Usage Examples:
Daburin e no kunan no michi || Rocky road to Dublin
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: (-5 per turn for subtle movements) (-10 per turn for vigorous movements)
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of ionic wind around themselves much similar to Thunder Dragon Tornado. However, after its creation the vortex gradually sinks into the ground, losing its form as it enters. To the untrained eye it would seem as though the technique was simply being cancelled out but this isn't so. Upon entering the ground, the ionic wind spreads underground reaching a diameter of up to mid range. Underground, the ionic wind enters a continuous cycle of extracting charges from the ground(which is a mega reservoir of charges) and ejecting them to the surface of the earth. The charges themselves are harmless. However, when an opponent moves within the region, interaction with the charges causes a slight jolt to run through their body similar to how when someone touches a doorknob static electricity on his body would shock him. The shocks aren't lethal but are able to express compounding effects on opponents with continued exposure. For every turn an opponent moves, even slightly, within the confines of the technique's range, he/she incurs 5 damage. For every turn an opponent moves vigorously(includes running or jumping or making more than 6 total handseals in the turn) within the confines of the technique's range, he/she incurs 10 damage. Normal opponents can only endure 20 damage from the technique before their body shuts down. People who have unique traits that make them resilient to certain amounts of stress must incur 20 damage in addition to the amount they can endure passively however after that their body loses that passive endurance trait for the rest of the battle. Additionally for every turn an opponent remains under the technique's influence, his/her speed reduces by 1 level. This is due to the fact that reflexively, the opponent's body would become more unwilling to move due to the uncontrollable reflex fear of being shocked(kinda like a knee jerk reaction).
-Charge extraction from the ground lasts for up to 5 turns or until nullified.
-Usable twice per battle.

Kore wa shōgakkō Watosondesu || This is Elementary Watson
Type:Defensive/Supplementary/Offensive
Rank:A-rank
Range: Short-long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (80 When modified to attack after collecting rain/snow or similar material for two or more turns)
Description: The user makes two handseals and blows out a gust of ionic wind from his mouth that immediately shapes into an inverted cone-like vortex. The cone travels upwards violently and rapidly, stretching and spreading out as it ascends so that by the time it gets to its final height(right beneath the clouds) it has covered the entire field without totally getting rid of its conical shape. Upon reaching the maximum height the "bowl-like" vortex stays there for up to 5 turns. What it does is that it traps whatever may be falling from the clouds especially rain or snow. The centripetal acceleration of the vortex is enough to trap small falling objects such as rain and snow in its confines as well as fling heavier objects off their intended course. After 2 or more turns of collecting material such as rain, the user can make a single handseal shaping the now water engulfed vortex into a dragon that attacks a target from the sky. This effectively brings the technique to an end.
-Attacking with the dragon modification counts as a move per turn.
-Usable twice.



Conditions to be able to use it: Must've completed wind and lightning training.

Is weak to:fire and elemental variants that rely primarily on a flame or energy based physique.

Is strong against:lightning (simply cuz of wind being involved), earth, water and elemental variants that rely primarily on a solid or liquid nature.

The ionizing ability of this element is its primary attribute. Strengths and weaknesses are based more on the nature of the opposing element's atoms. Solids and liquids are easily 'ionizable' but energy based elements like fire don't really have molecules that can be ionized.

Co-creator: n/a

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: This has to be redone almost completely. A CE needs to have at least two basic CE weaknesses, you have only one. Then you say lightning is a strength because wind is involved while you used the opposite argument to be able to mix wind and lightning. Also you are pretty much trespassing on the Radiation CE with all that ionizing stuff, which is here the biggest problem. This is not its primary attribute, this is by all means something along the side and something like that should never be described as "strengths and weaknesses are based on the nature of the opposing element". That was allowed for the radiation CE because it's solely focused on that, but what you are doing is having a completely standard element and throwing that on top of that. As a result you have absolutely no control over that ionizing ability. The moment you create a jutsu, it will immediately start reacting with everything around it and it works both ways. It's based on giving and receiving electrons resulting in new things so it's a two-way street. It's not like your element would never change, in fact it will always change and it's really not going to suck in an instant all the electrons out of things. You could potentially change an opposing water jutsu into an acid. Realistically that entire ability should be removed.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau


Custom Element Japanese Name
Kitsunebiton

Custom Element English Name
Foxfire

The Element is Based On
Fire + Water



Facts that Prove the Element to be Possible (In the Manga Context)

Fire and water have already been shown to be compatible elements, as seen by the existence of Boil Release and Steam Release. These elements focus by combining the two in the most obvious manner; the fire would raise the water to a high enough temperature to turn it into steam. Other elements, such as Wood and Storm, have proven that the combination of two elements do not need to focus on the literal mixing of physical traits/forms, but the mixing of more abstract properties. For example, in a normal situation, adding lightning to water would simply make electrocuted water, though when combined together as Storm Release, the element takes on the "shape" properties of water (liquid state and fluid movement) and the "destructive" properties of lightning. Storm Release is actually described as Lightning that flows like Water. Foxfire Release acts in a similar manner, taking on more abstract properties of each element. By combining fire's ability to eat and grow and water's property to be used as a chakra absorption medium, Foxfire would be created. The end result is fire that burns through chakra and eats away at chakra sources. What this creates is not a fire that burns combustible material, but rather burns through chakra and eats away at chakra sources. A small flame that is left unchecked feeding off chakra can quickly become a raging inferno.​


How it Works:

This element combines some properties of both fire and water into a new element that is unique from both. It mixes typical fire chakra with the water chakra enhanced with its absorptive property. As the fire eats away at the water the two elements combine and mix their properties. This results in flames that are blue-ish in color and room temperature, but with the ability to eat away at the bonds between chakra and absorb it. If a person finds themselves covered by the Foxfire instead of being physically burned the chakra in their body is burned and consumed. The effects of this can range from general weakness in the effected area to complete chakra depletion in some of the more advanced attacks. When clashing with techniques the Foxfire eats away at the chakra. With energy based elements as well as normal ninjutsu such as the rasengan, this can cause the total dissipation of the other technique and strengthening of the Foxfire. When faced with a physical element such as water or earth the Foxfire is capable of eating the chakra from within the technique causing its manipulation to fail, however this is a relatively slower process than when clashing with energy based techniques causing it to be weak in these clashes. It is however still an effective counter to self controlled constructs such as golems or clones where over time it can remove all chakra from the being rendering it useless.​



Example Techniques:
(Kitsunikaton: Sengan Tamashi Imoreito) — Foxfire Release: Cleansing Soul Immolation
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is used by one to cleanse their body of impurities that are chakra based. This could be a seal, another elemental technique, or even an active genjutsu. The user will focus their chakra to their tenketsu points and release the blue Foxfire flames around their body and allow it to eat away at any foreign chakra on, or inside of them.

Note: Can be used three times per battle.
Note: Cannot impact physical maladies such as poison.



(Kitsunikaton: Kitsune no Den) — Foxfire Release: The Fox's Den
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user makes four hand seals and then stomps on the ground opening up a small cavern. From the mouth of the cavern nine Foxfire foxes spring forth and attack the enemy. When they latch on to the target they erupt in flames covering the local area (such as an arm or a leg) in Foxfire. A limb that is consumed by one of the foxes is instantly weakened and unusable for two turns, or longer if the flames are not removed.



(Kitsunikaton: Fearī Kirema) — Foxfire Release: Faerie Wisps
Type: Attack
Rank: B - S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20 - 40
Damage Points: 40 - 80
Description: The user will make three hand seals and spread their arms out to the side. Doing so will manifest two soccer ball sized wisps of Foxfire that will circle the user about their waist. These begin as C-ranked but continually feed off the user's chakra growing strong with each passing turn. Each turn they increase in strength by one rank. The first turn each one is C-ranked, the following turn each becomes B-ranked and the last turn they become A-ranked. After that they will no longer eat chakra and remain at that strength. At any point the user can attack with either one or both of these wisps directing them at a target. Upon striking the target the engulf them in Foxfire devouring their chakra.

Note: Can be used three times per battle.
Note: Increases a rank per turn up for three turns.




Conditions to be Able to Use it
Water – Fire



Is Weak Against
Solid Elements
(E.G. Earth, Water, Metal, etc.)




Is Strong Against
Energy Based Elements
(E.G. Fire, Wind, Lightning, etc.)




Co-Creator


Students
None Available & None Available


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✗ Declined: Even the storm-argument has its limits you know. No proof, no sensible explanation other than that you subjectively picked some abilities you want and stick them together. These abilities are not even correct. Water does not have inherent chakra absorption qualities. There are a few water jutsu who have that property, but there was also an earth jutsu which could do that. It's not something that's permanently present and fire inherently absorbs oxygen and will set aflame things that can easily set aflame, but that's completely different from burning through chakra. It's not even the same concept anymore.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau


Custom Element Japanese Name
Kuriputonaiton

Custom Element English Name
Kryptonite Release

The Element is Based On
Earth + Lightning + Fire
Chakra Control



Facts that Prove the Element to be Possible (In the Manga Context)

As seen by Guren, Crystal Release can create mass quantities of an unknown material from scratch or from the ground. Using the same principals as Crystal Release, and focusing on the abstract qualities of Lightning and Fire chakra representing energy, Kryptonite is a possible crystalline variant that can absorb energy. Different colors of Kryptonite can be made, with the most common being green. A noticeable trait is how each tend to give a glow periodically.​

How it Works:

Creation

Using advance properties of Earth Release, the user can generate minerals from either the ground or on their own to crystallize and take form. As this is happening, Fire and Lightning chakra are added into the mix, with a bigger focus on Lightning. Both chakras represent energy, and the Lightning chakra influences the crystal connecting to the electromagnetic spectrum around it, allowing it to naturally "react" with other forms of energy. This natural reaction gives Kryptonite a unique glow.

At this point, the abstract qualities of Fire and Lightning are being focused within the surrounding "aura" of Kryptonite. This allows Kryptonite to naturally draw in energy, like Dark Release.

Function

Kryptonite Release acts in a very similar manner to Dark Release. Whereas Dark Release grants a user the ability to store virtually an infinite amount of energy through a portal and then release it in a raw form through an additional portal, Kryptonite acts as both the portal to store and release energy in a nearly limitless amount.

Kryptonite can absorb the energy from any position, as the entirety of the crystal acts as the portal. The user is then able to release the energy in a raw form from anywhere on the Kryptonite. The release form can either be done as a single direction streaming blast/beam, projectile, or omnidirectional wave.​



Example Techniques:
(Kuriputonaiton: Kyousei Kuriputonaito No Jutsu) — Kryptonite Release: Greater Kryptonite Technique
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses and molds his chakra, using it to create Kryptonite structures, pillars, tools, etc to defend, attack or support him. The Kryptonite can be created from the users body or from earth sources and its limitations are only set by the users own imagination and the chakra put into the technique.



(Kuriputonaiton: Jigen Bakudan) — Kryptonite Release: Time Bomb
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user focuses his chakra and creates a pillar of Kryptonite to rise up. While the pillar is up, it will naturally absorb all energy-based attacks into it. The energy will be stored within the Kryptonite for a limited amount of time before releasing all the built up energy it stored into an omnidirectional wave of raw energy that reaches mid-range.

Note: Raw energy is released every 3rd turn.
Note: Kryptonite pillar remains until destroyed.
Note: Kryptonite pillar can be formed anywhere up to Mid-Range from the user
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(Kuriputonaiton: Taiyō Furea) — Kryptonite Release: Solar Flare
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user focuses his chakra and creates a four pillars of Kryptonite to rise up around the enemy, similar to the canon Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind technique. These four Kryptonite pillars will then absorb the light around and redirect it as huge flash of light that blinds the target. At anytime, the use can choose to slam the pillars together and compact the victim inside.

Note: Blindness effect lasts 1 turn.




Conditions to be Able to Use it
Earth — Lightning — Fire
Chakra Control




Is Weak Against
Water & Earth
Kryptonite's ability to draw in energy makes it weak against non-energy based attacks



Is Strong Against
Energy Based Elements
(E.G. Fire, Lightning, Wind, etc.)

Kryptonite is able to easily absorb forms of energy​




Co-Creator


Students
None Available & None Available


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✗ Declined: This is not the DC universe. You should have realized that if this explanation was even remotely acceptable, it would be extremely easy to get CE approved as the only thing you do know is throwing qualities you find convenient together without any kind of proof or correlation and point towards Guren.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau



Custom element Japanese name:

(液体ブタン) Ekitai butan

Custom element English name:

Liquid Butane

The element is based on:

Earth + Wind + Water + Chakra Manipulation/Control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

In the real world, Butane is a extremely abundant natural gas and a fossil fuel (Coal/Natural gas/Oil) that is created deep within the Earth's crust through natural means. When Butane is mined in the real world, Oil and condensation have to be separated from the gas which brings me to my next point. Oil is yet another fossil fuel and is seen quite often in the Narutoverse whether it be with jutsu such as Water Release: Black Clouds or used by the Toads of Mt. Myobuku. Another fossil fuel used in the NV is Coal which is often seen to being used in restaurants to cook various characters food and is also abundant deep within the Earth's crust. If two out of three types of fossil fuels have been proven to exist in the NV, then it would only make sense that the third is also existent.

How it works:

Butane is a highly flammable natural gas that turns into a liquid form when lower than room temperature. Practitioners of this element will create it by first using their Earth chakra to draw raw Butane from the earth into their body, they will then use Wind chakra to cool the Butane down, turning it into a liquid form, and finally by adding Water chakra in order to maintain its liquid state and manipulate it. When combined with a Fire/Lightning style jutsu or infusing Fire chakra into the liquid the user can ignite Butane creating flames up to 1,700 degrees Kelvin or 2,600 degrees Fahrenheit. Butane release can both be countered and complimented in various ways. Butane release is perfect when used with fire and lighting which will cause it to catch flame. Earth style jutsu can block the liquid streams and stronger earth styles can defend against the flames. Butane floats on water but Water style and Butane don't mix so it will be neutral in blocking the liquid, but stronger Water styles will be able to put out the flames once it has been ignited. Wind would be beneficial to the element because while a liquid it can help to deal more damage and spread the butane and when on fire the wind will feed the fire making it bigger and hotter.

Jutsu Usage Examples:

(Ekitai butan: Purometeusu no ikari) | Liquid Butane: Wrath of Prometheus:
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: NA (+60 if ignited)
Description: After performing 2 hand seals, the user focuses his/her butane chakra within their mouth. They will then release a stream of Butane towards the opponent, hindering their movement as the flammable liquid covers them. Although weak on its own, it can be combined with Fire, or sparks of Lightning, to ignite said Butane, and set the opponent ablaze.

(Ekitai butan: Nise dopperugengā) | Liquid Butane: False Doppleganger
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short (reach up to Long range)
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A (+40 if ignited)
Description: The user creates a physical clone of themselves but made up of Liquid Butane, but retains its physical form despite being made up of Butane. The clone has a physical substance and therefore is able to Taijutsu techniques and all Liquid Butane techniques. When the clone is damaged, it releases all the stored Liquid Butane onto the opponent, covering them in the flammable liquid. With a single hand seal, the user is able to prematurely cause the clone to explode, releasing the Liquid Butane, making it suitable for creating a source of Liquid Butane, but also to douse the opponent in the liquid.

(Ekitai butan: Poseidon no kōru) | Liquid Butane: The Call of Poseidon
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+40 if ignited)
Description: The user will focus a large amount of Liquid Butane chakra, and then proceed to slam their hands onto the ground. This will allow the user to create a powerful wave of Liquid Butane, which makes its way towards the opponent. The wave can be used as a defense against elements that Liquid Butane is strong against, and would serve the purpose of completely drenching the opponent in Liquid Butane whilst also dealing blunt damage as it hits them off their feet.

Conditions to be able to use it:

Mastery of Earth, Water and Wind.

Is weak to:

Fire and its variations, Physically stronger elements (Earth, Variations of Earth, Carbon and its variations including Diamond, Kaguya Bones) etc.

Is strong against:

Water and its variations, Wind and its variations (if ignited), Wax, Foam, Plasma.

Co-creator: Kēji

Students I passed this custom element on too:

Flásh & ?


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✗ Declined: At this point it's pretty much the same as regular oil.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau


Custom Element Japanese Name
Yakuton

Custom Element English Name
Singe Release

The Element is Based On
Lightning + Fire
Advanced Chakra Control



Facts that Prove the Element to be Possible (In the Manga Context)
St. Elmo's Fire, also known as St. Elmo's Light, is a weather phenomenon in which a luminous form of plasma is created by a corona discharge from a sharp or pointed object in a strong electric field in the atmosphere (such as those generated by thunderstorms or created by a volcanic eruption). In Naruto, it has been proven multiple times that natural forms of lightning can appear and be manipulated, shown clearly with Kirin. Given that lightning can be made naturally, it's safe to say that weather phenomena of all types, including St. Elmo's Fire, exist.

Other elements, such as Wood and Storm, have proven that the combination of two elements do not need to focus on the literal mixing of physical traits/forms, but the mixing of more abstract properties. For example, in a normal situation, adding lightning to water would simply make electrocuted water, though when combined together as Storm Release, the element takes on the "shape" properties of water (liquid state and fluid movement) and the "destructive" properties of lightning. Storm Release is actually described as Lightning that flows like Water. Singe Release acts in a similar manner, taking on more abstract properties of each element.

This way, Singe Release takes on the "shape" properties of fire (focused flame like state) and the "destructive" properties of lightning. Due to it's St. Elmo's Fire's unique composition, it gives off a luminous bluish-white flame color.​

How it Works:
Understanding

St. Elmo's Fire is a type of continuous electric flow known as an "electric discharge", a plasma formed by the passage of electric current through a low-pressure gas. St. Elmo's Fire and normal sparks both can appear when high electrical voltage affects a gas. St. Elmo's fire is seen during thunderstorms when the ground below the storm is electrically charged, and there is high voltage in the air between the cloud and the ground. The voltage tears apart the air molecules and the gas begins to glow. It takes about 30,000 volts per centimeter of space to start a St. Elmo's fire (although sharp points can trigger it at somewhat lower voltage levels.)

St. Elmo's Fire is plasma. A normal gas is composed of molecules. The molecules are composed of atoms, which in turn are composed of electrons and clusters of proton particles. If the electric force applied to each bit of gas is greater than a certain level of voltage, it causes the electrons and protons of the gas molecules to be pulled away from each other. High voltage transforms the gas into a glowing mixture of separate proton clusters and electrons. We call this mixture of particles by the name "plasma," and it is conductive. It also fluoresces with light. Due to our atmosphere being composed predominantly with nitrogen and oxygen, this mixture glows blue/violet when exposed to high voltage fields.

Creation

Yakuton, the only lightning element that mimics fire and surpasses it's capability. This element combines some properties of both fire and lightning into a new element that is unique from both. Using Fire Release as the "shape" of the element and Lightning Release as the "nature" of the element, Singe Release is made. Using Fire Release, the user will create a low-pressure heated gas. Lightning Release is then added, causing an electric current to flow through it. While this is happening, the lightning heats up the flames to intense degrees, while the shape is maintained with Chakra Control to keep it stabilized as flames. This results in a bluish-white focused flame which is mainly electricity running through the heated gas.​



Example Techniques:
(Yakuton: Kyousei Yaku No Jutsu) — Singe Release: Greater Singe Technique
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses and molds his chakra, using it to create Singe flames from either their limbs structures (through movement) or exhaling it. It can produce fire balls, streams, defensives, or simply aid in taijutsu. Its limitations are only set by the users own imagination and the chakra put into the technique.



(Yakuton: Den'atsu Furea) — Singe Release: Voltage Flare
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A - Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30 - 50
Damage Points: 60 - 100
Description: This technique allows the user to focus his Yakuton chakra throughout his body in a single surge which he can then expel as an omnidirectional wave of bluish-white flames. The surge first appears on the user as if he was on fire, or like an aura of sorts. Whenever he chooses, the user can expel the flames outward, burning and shocking anything it passes through to a crisp. The amount of power the user expels and how far it goes is dependent on the chakra output.
A-Rank
For A-Rank power, the user need only focus his chakra and release it. In this case, the surge of Yakuton Flames can go up to Short-Range.

S-Rank
For S-Rank power, the user must perform a single handseal while focusing his chakra and release it. In this case, the surge of Yakuton Flames can go up to Mid-Range.

Forbidden-Rank
For Forbidden-Rank power, the user must perform a set of three handseals while focusing his chakra for a full turn and then release it. In this case, the surge of Yakuton Flames can go up to Long-Range.​

Note: If the user uses the Forbidden Rank version, the user cannot perform any Fire, Lightning, or Singe Release techniques the following turn.



(Yakuton: Chikyū Nenshō-Ki) — Singe Release: Earth Burner
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses Yakuton chakra into his hands and slams them on the ground. The user will then release the Yakuton flames into the ground. At anytime, the user can make flames rise up in an instant and attack. The user can either have the flames rise up as a flames wide like wall or thin like a pillar. So long as the user keeps his hands on the ground, he can focus and sustain the pillars. The user can also split the amount of flames that rise up, splitting its power in each. The intensity of the flames are fatal should someone directly pass through them, with major burns occurring from getting near them.


Conditions to be Able to Use it
Lightning — Fire
Kage Ranked Chakra Control




Is Weak Against
Wind Based Elements
As this element is lightning at it's core, it leaves itself weak to being knocked out by the wind since it loses it's conductivity.

Lightning Based Elements
Despite Yakuton's base being lightning, it's inherit fire "form" makes it linger behind pure lightning, making it weak to it.



Is Strong Against
Fire Based Elements
Fire Release and other forms of heat would only strengthen the overall intensity of Singe Release.

Earth and Metal Based Elements
The very base of this element is Lightning, the weakness of Earth Release. It can also easily conduct through Metal and melt it due to it's intense voltage it gives off.

Water Based Elements
Water, being a conductor of electricity, allows for Singe Release to release naturally conduct through it, and given the intense heat coming from the voltage, Singe Release is easily capable of extinguishing water and other forms of it.​




Co-Creator


Students
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✗ Declined: The plasma CE already exists and every CE that's based on using abstract qualities of other elmenets deserves to be declined. Storm and wood are not so abstract as you think they are. They didn't randomly pick up something "abstract" from another element, there is very well a logic behind it, a logic that is completely missing here.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Futoueki

Custom element English name: Antifreeze
The element is based on:Suiton/ Raiton


Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
many times refrigerators and or cooler's and even back up generators have been shown or talked about in naruto to store food and or beverages and or backup power. it can be easily said that antifreeze and freon are definetly shown in naruto by this aspect alone because you cannot have a fridge or generator that does not use antifreeze. but i will go one step further stating that many oils have been shown as well meaning that anitfreeze is a sure bet too be seen as an element. although i am not going into the oil aspect it is well known that oil is a coolant of sorts because of its chemical compounds and viscosity.

How it works:
the user begins by using his Suiton and Raiton to charge the liquid and change the properties of the liquid while inside the users body into antifreeze. the suiton gives the extra liquid needed to use this element in a liquid form while the lightning is used to change the ph and add viscosity and corrosiveness qualities to the element . once moulded the user can use handsigns to acieve the desired effect the user chooses such as freon based chemical sucking the heat out of the atomosphere and or antifreeze which has high boiling points, low freezing points and won't break down. the user can also use handsigns and the chakra's needed to naturally form coolants from the earth using most organic compounds wich can be found throughout the narutoverse lands. these coolants can only be used in liquid forms by a user and the user cannot in any way manipulate gaseous forms upon heated contact of the elements. the liquids can be made in any desired colors with the proper tintings and pigments used. both forms of these coolants will be in a super heated form but not boiling due to using lightning in the process of making the element it also works to heat the liquid.
Usage Examples:
(Futoueki gouben ) antifreeze pool.
Rank: A
Type: supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user forms two handsigns and utilizing his or her's chakra's they are able to form anywhere on the ground a pool of antifreeze which is in boiling state. this pool acts as a source of antifreeze for other jutsu's to be used it is no bigger then a small pond. being in boiling state this pool cannot be evaporated as it has a higher boiling point then most liquids.

Conditions to be able to use it:
mastery of Suiton
mastery of Raiton
Kage rank or higher to achieve proper control of such a high viscosity element.
Is weak to:
Suiton: this natural element will highly dilute the coolant compounds making them less effective in all area's.
Raiton: this natural element of lightning will have close to the same effects as it does against most water based products a very conductive reaction.
Is strong against:
Katon: this natural element will have little to no effect on coolants as there boiling points are so high the only longstanding flame which could dimish the coolants and evaporate them would be that of amaterasu. but during thus would cause a vapour that would be deadly to both the user and the enemy.
Futon: this natural element will have only one effect on coolants and that is to move them around making them spread to other area's. a shot of coolant can easily penetrate through a wall of wind being that it is high viscosity.
Ice: due too the low freezing point's of coolants they will have the upper hand to combat against ice being that it transfers heat extremely. the coolant to combat the ice it has properties against freezing all together.
Co-creator:

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

edits include rewriting how its made and what its based on along with shown in the manga.
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✗ Declined: Same comment as last time, you have nothing concrete and as a result this is simply messy. To explain an element you need to know exactly what it is, if you don't know what it is, the explanation of it will not make much sense. You are talkinga bout antifreeze, freon, coolants... but you have many types of antifreeze and coolants. You say you use lightning on water to make it corrosive and viscous, that explanation alone I'm not really getting, but what is now exactly corrosive and viscous? Then you start talking about waving handseals, which is something for jutsu, not the explanation of the element itself. Handseals are for shape manipulation, but the characteristics should be inherently to the element. Finally I don't get the impression you understand exactly what this all is as antifreeze does not control the temperature of things, it makes it so that certain substances, mainly liquids, don't freeze/boil/evaporate when in conditions they normally would.



Bolder all changes
- added more understanding of how it is made.
- focused on what it does
- gave plenty of examples of narutoverse


Custom element Japanese name: Futoueki

Custom element English name: Antifreeze

The element is based on:Suiton/ Doton


Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
many times refrigerators and or cooler's and even back up generators have been shown or talked about in naruto to store food and or beverages and or backup power. it can be easily said that antifreeze are definetly shown in naruto by this aspect alone because you cannot have a fridge or generator that does not use some form of antifreeze without that appliance blowing up from over heating, or lack of Viscosity substances. Oil is a nice basis to talk about when referring to Antifreeze as it is viscous and liquid form as well. Oil is also a known coolant as well and is found in the anime in multiple instances/types. When you look at the things needed to make Antifreeze it is liquid (water based)and organic sugars/diols. All substances of which are abundant in Naruto. Ethylene is also a plant hormone, which can be found in numerous vegetation and organic materials. Ethylene glycol is neutral ph under elevated temperatures.

Wiki temperature ratings and ratios:

Ethylene glycol disrupts hydrogen bonding when dissolved in water. Pure ethylene glycol freezes at about −12 °C (10.4 °F), but when mixed with water, the mixture does not readily crystallize, and therefore the freezing point of the mixture is depressed. Specifically, a mixture of 60% ethylene glycol and 40% water freezes at −45 °C (−49 °F)

Pure ethylene glycol has a specific heat capacity about one half that of water. So, while providing freeze protection and an increased boiling point, ethylene glycol lowers the specific heat capacity of water mixtures relative to pure water. A 50/50 mix by mass has a specific heat capacity of about 3140 J/kg C (0.75 BTU/lb F) three quarters that of pure water, thus requiring increased flow rates in same system comparisons with water.

What happens when ingested:
Upon ingestion, ethylene glycol is oxidized to glycolic acid which is, in turn, oxidized to oxalic acid, which is toxic. It and its toxic byproducts first affect the central nervous system, then the heart, and finally the kidneys. Ingestion of sufficient amounts can be fatal if untreated.




How it works:
the user begins by using his Suiton and Doton elements simultaneously to bring about the liquid and organic sugars/diol materials necessary for antifreeze. The proper diol ratio to organic should always be more organic sugars then diols. This prevents the antifreeze from being evaporated easily. Antifreeze will have a higher then normal liquid viscosity to it that it will make any surface slippery. The fumes that antifreeze give off from being in a heated state will be enough to give a person nausea that induces vomiting after a full turn, by being breathed in.
Antifreeze has an extremely low freezing point when not diluted with water thus making it still able to combat ice. The slight corrosive properties that antifreeze has are that of a Descaler liquid which can slowly dismantle earth solid constructs.
Antifreeze has the ability to make things slippery and also colourful as any type of coloured antifreeze can be made.
The user can also use the sugars from there bodies and the natural needed compounds normally found in antifreeze. All of which the body does produce just on a lower scale.
Antifreeze is a colourless liquid which is almost odourless, but has a faint sweetness.




Usage Examples:
(Futoueki Gouben ) Antifreeze Source.
Rank: A
Type: supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user forms two handsigns and utilizing his or her's chakra's they are able to form anywhere on the ground a pool of antifreeze which is in boiling state. this pool acts as a source of antifreeze for other jutsu's to be used it is no bigger then a small pond. being in boiling state this pool cannot be evaporated as it has a higher then normal evaporating point then most liquids.

Conditions to be able to use it:
mastery of Suiton
mastery of Doton



Is weak to:
Suiton: this natural element will highly dilute the antifreeze compound.

Raiton: this natural element of lightning will have close to the same effects as it does against most water based products a very conductive reaction.

Is strong against:

Katon: this natural element will have little to no effect on coolants as there boiling points are so high the only longstanding flame which could dimish the coolants and evaporate them would be that of amaterasu. but during thus would cause a vapour that would be deadly to both the user and the enemy.


Futon: this natural element will have only one effect on coolants and that is to move them around, making them spread to other area's. a shot of coolant can easily penetrate through a wall of wind being that it is high viscosity.

Ice: due too the low freezing point's of antifreezes properties they will have the upper hand to combat against ice being that it transfers heat extremely. the coolant to combat the ice it has properties against freezing all together.

Co-creator: ZandaT

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

Side note should I go inactive ZandaT has the approval to resubmit this CE as long as he keeps me as CO Creator

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✗ Declined: Why are you now talking about oil? And why are you copy pasting things directly from wiki, which again I have my sincere doubts whether you now exactly what is written there? What happens when you ingest is also rather irrelevant as nearly any element you ingest is hazardous and the way how you create your element is also way to shallow or since when is earth sugary? You will need to understand what Ethylene glyco exactly is and how you can create it. Your STR are also messed up. Ice is no weakness as it can't conduct heat from itself, that's the entire point of a coolant: to keep other stuff cool while channeling was the excess heat. It's not going to heat itself. So it has no way to destroy ice and that fire has no effect on it, is also questionable as they are not meant to put out fire. Coolant's boiling points aren't really that particularly high in comparison to the heat of a flame. Even the temperature of a cigarette is higher than the boiling point of your CE. And win? How is this strong against wind? If your element gets dispersed, it means it got beaten. In reality this is really not suitable for a CE.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Serenton
Custom element English name: Selenium dust Release
The element is based on: Earth + Fire + Advanced Chakra Control.
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): In real life Selenium is very rarely found, it exists in the soil. It is easily washed away. It is in also present in small amounts in the human body. Selenium is found most in sulfide ores like pyrite. Sometimes selenium is concentrated in plants. It can also be leached into rivers when copper is mined and copper wires has been shown several times in the NV which is proof that copper is mined in the NW. Serenium is also present in several foods such as Pork, Chicken ,Turkey and even mushrooms
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In the NarutoVerse, the earth/soil is identical to the one in real life ,it contains the same elements, the same minerals etc so it can be assumed that selenium is present in the soil in the NV. The constituents of the human body in the NV and RL are the same so definitely Selenium exists also in the human body in the NV. Selenium is also found in metal sulfide ores, where it partially replaces the sulfur and since sulfur exists or has been proven to exist in the NW, Selenium is present. Lastly, on several occasions Pork, Chicken and the selenium providing foods have been shown in the NV so I believe, Selenium must exist in the NV.
How it works: Selenium exists in several forms but the main and only form of this CE is the brick-red powdered selenium which can be found in plants, foods, human body and even the soil, the user simply adds doton chakra to katon chakra to form serenton in the sense that the user uses doton chakra to bring selenium from metal sulphide ores underground and uses fire chakra to evaporate it at a particular rate in the presence of advance chakra control to form the amorphous selenium, alternatively however the user can use the serenton chakra to create selenium from their body or other natural sources such as plants.
Powdered selenium is an insulator and is oxidized by air ,it gives off a smell like horseradish when burned .Selenium is needed by the human/animal body in small quantities ,high concentrations (400mg and above) of selenium is toxic if ingested which causes selenosis which causes gastrointestinal disorders, hair loss,sloughing of nails, fatigue, irritability, and neurological damage after one turn of exposure. Extreme cases of selenosis result in cirrhosis of the liver, pulmonary edema, and death which occurs after 3 turns of exposure to selenium dust. Users can carry gourds or any form of container filled with red powdered selenium but it must be stated in the bio first.
Jutsu Usage Examples:
Selenium Release: Die hard
Rank: S rank
Range: Short - Long
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will send his serenton chakra beneath the ground under the opponent causing selenium to burst out from under the opponent similarly to the B rank water prison, the red powder would try to encompass, trap and choke the opponent in an orb of selenium. The secondary ability of this jutsu is that up to 8 tendrils burst out of the selenium which try to catch the opponent should the opponent escape, should the whip catch a target, it would pull the opponent into the orb of selenium and proceed to choke them.
- Tendrils can only reach out to short range from the orb.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Must have mastered Fire
Must have mastered Earth
Must have mastered Basic Ninjutsu
Is weak to:
Water - Water
Is strong against: Wind due to its powder like form being denser than air
Lightning due to it being an insulator
Organic elements due to its toxicity
Co-creator: N/A
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: Nagato.. already submitted this two times and got it declined two times for the same reason, namely that proof for its existence is rather feeble as it's really not a common element and the arguments of both you are that there's a bit of here and bit of there. Also no proper elaboration on its properties other than you focusing on its toxicity when burned, which is as much of a threat for you as for the opponent and I don't accept comments like "after one turn/after three turns". Also each CE needs to have at least two basic weaknesses (unless the element is atypical, which is really not the case here). That it's bad for organic elements is also questionable as it's not like that they absorb it immediately and wind and earth are neutral to each other. So how exactly is a dust-like element supposed to be strong against it with its density?

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Suisanka Natoriumun
Custom element English name: Sodium (Sodium Hydroxide form)
The element is based on: Earth | Water| Chakra control
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Prove #1: In the anime, Utakata, the 6th Human Sacrifice, was seen using "(Shabondama: Santōka) – Soap Bubble Release: Acid Permeation" with which he was able to produce acid bubbles that aided him against his opponent. Having got Acid in Narutoverse means right away that alkali exists. Since there is no Fire without water nor Yin without Yang, there can't be any acid without alkali since in this world, everything have to get something to neutralize it.

Prove #2: Sodium Hydroxide could be produced simply by Hydrating Sodium, which is simply adding water to it like it is explained in the formula:
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Sodium is the sixth most abundant element in the Earth's crust, it also exists in stars and salt.

How it works: With the aid of the user's earth chakra and water chakra along side with high chakra control, the user is capable of producing Sodium Hydroxide that can be found in a pellets, flakes or granular form. This process could happen from the user's body or the ground, using it as a source of Sodium and simply hydrating it with water chakra. It could also be used in combination with water which would cause it to explode. Sodium Hydroxide could be also manipulated from a gourd, much like Gaara's sand gourd, however, the gourd is to be created as a technique should the Custom Element be approved.


Characteristics:

Sodium Hydroxide is an inorganic compound. It is a white solid and highly caustic metallic base and alkali salt. Melting Point of Sodium Hydroxide is 318'C, 604'F
and Boiling Point is 1388'C, 2530'F. Even though it exists in the sand form the Sodium Hydroxide's grain is bigger than the sand's which could be seen in the picture below:

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Usage Examples:
(Suisanka Natoriumun: Sō teiden) - Sodium Hydroxide Release : total blackout
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Offense
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performing the Boar and Ox hand seal to produce Sodium Hydroxide chakra in the form of of sand. Once he control some amount of Sodium Hydroxide inside his body, the user wave his hand to spread out a decent amount of sand Sodium Hydroxide toward the enemy with an average speed. The sand Sodium Hydroxide will targeting the opponents eyes, where can result in corneal damage lead to blindness, loss his eye sight, vision and control balance of his body due to panic.

(Suisanka Natoriumun: Mugen tekitai) - Sodium Hydroxide Release: Infinite hostile
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user claps his hand together and concentrate his Sodium Hydroxide chakra in the form of of sand. Once he gather a large amount of Sodium Hydroxide chakra with sand like form, the user stretched out his hand to spread it a few meter in front of him, they will scattered around but out of the user range and act as an active sand. The user can use it at will.
Note : can only be use twice
Note : Last for 3 time usage
Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over Earth, Lightning and Water.
Is weak to:
  • Wind
  • Earth
Is strong against:
Neutral to water
Strong to weak fire and neutral to strong fire due to it's high boiling point.
Strong against weak acids. Neutral to strong acids.

-Organic Materials:
  • Wood
  • Paper
  • Plant Release & Root Release
  • Amber
  • Textiles/Silk/Leather
  • Coal & fuel oil
  • Plastic
  • Rubber
-Human/animal body and everything related to it from skin to hair to bones.
-Absorbs all sorts of steam/water vapor.
-Corrodes metals, such as aluminum, tin, and zinc. During this process, it
generates hydrogen, which has the potential to behave as an explosive gas.
-Absorbs Carbon dioxide, or sulfur dioxide
-When liquid caustic soda is diluted with water, it generates a considerable amount of heat.
of dilution.
-Sodium Hydroxide have a decomposing effect on proteins, which may gradually penetrate the deep tissues. In particular, if the eyes are exposed to it, since eye tissue is rapidly affected causing a lowering or loss of vision depends on the technique's rank.
-The inhalation of caustic soda dust or mist causes various degrees of injury in
the respiratory tract.
Co-creator: Ryujin
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

Changed the bolded. Made it Sodium and the Sodium Hydroxide is a mere form of it.

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✗ Declined: This is poorly explained and ill-structured. There are not supposed to be neutral elements in your submission and formulations like "strong to weak fire and neutral to strong fire" should never be present. They are confusing and look like they are trying to limit the weaknesses. Frankly that entire part of your submission is very confusing the way it is written. There's also a real difference between sodium and sodium hydroxide. The latter dissolves very easily in water, meaning that's pretty much a weakness. Also this pretty much conflicts with the acid element.


Custom element Japanese name: Suisanka Natoriumun
Custom element English name: Sodium (Sodium Hydroxide form)
The element is based on: Earth | Water | Chakra control
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): In the anime, the 6th Human Sacrifice, also known as Utakata, has been seen using one of his signature techniques; Acid Permeation. This technique allowed him to produce acid bubbles that aided him in combat. Seeing that this is proof of acids existence in the Narutoverse, it means that alkali exists. Since there can't be fire without water, nor yin without yang, there cannot be any acid without its counterpart, alkali, since in this world, everything has to have something to neutralize it. Another way to prove the existence of Sodium Hydroxide, could be that it can be produced by hydrating sodium, which is done by adding water to it, to create the Sodium Hydroxide. Sodium is also the sixth most abundant element in the Earth’s crust, while it also exists in stars and salt.


How it works: With the aid of the user's earth chakra and water chakra along side with high chakra control, the user is capable of producing Sodium Hydroxide that can be found in a pellets, flakes or granular form. This process could happen from the user's body or the ground, using Sodium as the source and simply hydrating it with water chakra. It could also be used in combination with water which would cause it to explode. Sodium Hydroxide could be manipulated from a gourd, much like Gaara's sand gourd, however, the gourd is to be created as a technique should the Custom Element be approved. Sodium Hydroxide absorbs water vapor, steam and mist, while it also corrodes metals. When sodium hydroxide explodes it generates hydrogen which acts as an explosive gas, which the user can ignite, but he cannot control this gas made from the sodium hydroxide.


Characteristics:

Sodium Hydroxide is an inorganic compound. It is a white solid and highly caustic metallic base and alkali salt. Melting Point of Sodium Hydroxide is 318'C, 604'F
and Boiling Point is 1388'C, 2530'F. Even though it exists in the sand form the Sodium Hydroxide's grain is bigger than the sand's which could be seen in the picture below:

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Usage Examples:

(Suisanka Natoriumun: Sō teiden) - Sodium Hydroxide Release : Total blackout
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Offense
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performing the Boar and Ox hand seal to produce Sodium Hydroxide chakra in the form of of sand. Once he control some amount of Sodium Hydroxide inside his body, the user wave his hand to spread out a decent amount of sand Sodium Hydroxide toward the enemy with an average speed. The sand Sodium Hydroxide will targeting the opponents eyes, where can result in corneal damage lead to blindness, loss his eye sight, vision and control balance of his body due to panic.

(Suisanka Natoriumun: Mugen tekitai) - Sodium Hydroxide Release: Infinite hostile
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user claps his hand together and concentrate his Sodium Hydroxide chakra in the form of of sand. Once he gather a large amount of Sodium Hydroxide chakra with sand like form, the user stretched out his hand to spread it a few meter in front of him, they will scattered around but out of the user range and act as an active sand. The user can use it at will.
Note : can only be use twice
Note : Last for 3 time usage

Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over Earth and Water.
Is weak to:

• Wind
• Water
• Strong Acid
• Sand
• Sound
• Crystal


Is strong against:

• Fire
• Wood
• Paper
• Plant Release, Root Release & Organic Elements
• Amber
• Textiles/Silk/Leather
• Coal & fuel oil
• Plastic
• Rubber
• Dead Bone Pulse (including other body type techniques)
• Steam (Mist etc.) [Absorbs it]
• Steel & other metal variations

Co-creator: Gutsy Jiraiya
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

Removed lightning mastery ruquite for making the technique's and made a total make over in the weakness section bolded.

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✗ Declined: This is plainly bad on all levels. You have barely any proof (all that stuff about yin and yang isn't even necessary). You have barely any explanation on how its made, it really requires much more than just water + earth. You barely explain its characteristics and most of is just copy pasted from wikipedia. And most of your STR and WEAK have no explanation to be justified and many of them are debatable or don't even belong in such al ist.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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Custom element Japanese name: Borutagarasu
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Custom element English name: Voltaic Glass
The element is based on: Earth + Lightning + Fire + Advanced Chakra Control
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context)
Plasma is one of the four fundamental states of matter in the universe being the most abundant form of matter. Stars, lightning, and the atmosphere are a few examples of plasmas, places where plasmas occur, or things caused by plasmas seen in the Narutoverse. Plasma is created when gas becomes ionized through an electromagnetic field, having no definite shape or volume by itself, but can be controlled to form structures when influenced by an electromagnetic field. Lightning is one of the five basic elements of Naruto and magnetism release is a KG used in the Narutoverse which is enough proof needed to show that plasma is not only present in the verse, but can also be utilized and controlled as an element as well.
Similar to how water and ice, both made of the same compound, are two different elements in Narutoverse, Voltaic Glass is a dusty plasma that has the same features of a regular plasma but also has unique features of its own. Occurring naturally in space and in the atmosphere of Earth, dusty plasmas are plasmas containing very small sized charged particles of dust suspended within it. It's the unique abilities of those dust particles that set Voltaic Glass apart from a regular plasma.

How it works: Voltaic Glass is an advance kekkei tōta created by simultaneously molding one's earth, lightning, and fire chakra all at once creating a hot and electrifying plasma. The lightning and fire chakra is the base of the ionized gas while the earth chakra gives the plasma its dusty particle features. Voltaic Glass appears as an electrically charged gas with a light violet hue with barely visible earth particles rapidly moving within it. Similar to gas, Voltaic Glass has no definite shape or volume unless manipulated by the user, and the plasma has burning and shocking qualities making it a dangerous element to touch. The plasma's temperature is high enough that it will slowly melt certain substances caught within it like human flesh, vegetation, and most other materials that are susceptible to burning with heat. Many unfocused electrical currents move throughout the plasma giving it numbing and paralyzing features similar to Nagashi when touched. The user can increase the power of the electric charges running through the plasma making it more deadly when performing techniques. As a plasma, Voltaic Glass can be released from the users body, manipulated from a previously made source, or channeled into the ground when being utilized.

Due to the dust particles being charged, the user can cause electrostatic coupling between the many miniature dust particles within the plasma causing them to form larger particles changing the weakly coupled gaseous dusty plasma into a crystalline state with similar properties as the plasma. Still keeping its light violet hue, Voltaic Glass is translucent and able to be seen out of if in a case where the user has created a crystal in front of themselves. Due to the earth chakra within this unique element crystallized Voltaic Glass's density and malleability can be altered allowing the user numerous possibilities when making structures out of the crystalline plasma. Losing its burning properties when in this state, Voltaic Glass still remains electrically charged and due to the lightning chakra within it Voltaic Glass crystals are unusually sharper than most other crystal elements. In this form the user can create the crystalline plasma from his body, its plasma form, or the earth.

Like basic crystal ninjutsu Voltaic Glass chakra also has a crystallization effect on humans and elements of a weaker or neutral nature following correct logic and reasoning.

Usage Examples
(Borutagarasu: Shōgeki-tekina hari) Voltaic Glass: Shocking Needles
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid.
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Focusing their Voltaic Glass chakra to their mouth, the user will spew out a large plasma cloud which they then manipulate creating numerous electrifying needles. The user will then clap their hands together causing the numerous needles to shoot forwards at a swift pace piercing and electrifying anything in their path.

(Borutagarasu: Yūki yamārashi) Voltaic Glass: Courageous Porcupine
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Focusing their Voltaic Glass chakra to their hands, the user will create a small crystalline ball of Voltaic Glass that is highly condense. Triggered with a hand seal or by foreign chakra, the crystalline ball will grow sharp needles as the technique itself begins to expand at a large pace piercing and electrifying anything within its range.
Conditions to be able to use it
Mastery of Lightning | Mastery of Fire | Mastery of Earth | Advance Chakra Control

Is weak to
  • Wind (The sharp concussive force will shatter its crystalline form while neutralizing the gas form as well)
  • Fire & Superheated CE (The heat will overpower its plasma state while melting the crystalline form)
  • Lava (The molten lava will overpower its plasma state while melting the crystalline form)
  • Metals (Denser than earth, metals will break its crystalline form while its gaseous state has minimal effects on metals, but the Voltaic Glass's electrical features are still conducted through metals)
  • Blast (Raw non clay explosions will break its crystalline form while dissipating its plasma form)
Is strong against:
  • Lightning (The electrical properties of Voltaic Glass overpowers the properties of basic lightning)
  • Earth & Earthen CE(The electrical properties of Voltaic Glass overpowers and neutralizes earth, and its crystalline form is denser)
  • Water & Water CE(The electrical properties of Voltaic conducts through water while its crystalline form is also denser)
  • Wood (The electrical properties of Voltaic Glass overpowers and neutralizes wood)
  • Ice (The electrical properties of Voltaic Glass overpowers ice while its crystalline form is denser as well)
  • Clay (The electrical properties of Voltaic Glass overpowers and neutralizes clay)
  • Dead Bone Pulse (The electrical properties of Voltaic Glass overpowers and neutralizes shikotsumyaku)
Co-creator:
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: Plasma is already an approved CE, also CE are neither KG nor KT.


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Custom element English name: Voltaic Glass
The element is based on: Earth + Lightning + Fire + Advanced Chakra Control
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context) Plasma is one of the four fundamental states of matter in the universe being the most abundant form of matter. Occurring naturally in space and in the atmosphere of Earth exist a variant form of plasma called dusty plasmas. Dusty plasmas are plasmas containing very small sized charged particles of dust suspended within it that acrete into larger forms as the plasmas charge rises. This unique plasma is found in many states, but the main one of focus for this CE is its charged crystalline state. In the canon Narutoverse their exists various forms of plasma and crsytal manipulation shown, and this CE is just a combination of both. Voltaic Glass is based off of the creation of a charged dusty plasma when coupling occurs between the many growing dust particles within it causing them to form into an electrically charged crystalline state.

How it works: Voltaic Glass is an advanced element created by simultaneously molding one's earth, lightning, and fire chakra all at once creating a new type of chakra, Voltaic Glass chakra. The combined lightning and fire chakra is the base of the ionized gas, while the earth chakra gives the highly charged energy the particles needed to couple together forming it's crystalline state. Due to the high charge levels needed to sustain the crystalline element, Voltaic Glass emit high levels of electricity that can be felt on contact with the element. Its crystalline form radiates a strong pure light blue color that is strong enough to illuminate areas acting as a sufficient source of light when in darkness. Voltaic Glass can be released from the users body, manipulated from a previously made source, or created from a source of earth.

Features
Voltaic Glass has shocking qualities making it a dangerous element to touch. Similar to Nagashi, contact with this crystalline element will cause residual effects of paralyzation that last for periods of time depending on the rank. Due to Voltiac Glass's natural ability of emitting charges, when this element is created from the earth it charges its source up to a certain range depending on its rank, giving weaker elements a hard time when trying to use that same source. Rank D-C will charge up to 2m, while B-A spreads to 3m, and S-F reaches up to a 5m radius all due to the strength of the element's electrical field being emitted

Although it may shine brightly
, Voltaic Glass is translucent and able to be seen through with limited trouble. The element's density matches the charge level needed to sustain mass coupling making it denser than the basic crystal and canon earth elements. Voltaic Glass can be manipulated to form into various shapes and structures with a special proficiency when it comes to designs with sharp edges due to the element's nature.

Like basic crystal ninjutsu Voltaic Glass chakra also has a crystallization effect on animals and elements of a weaker nature following correct logic and reasoning. Altough, when Votaic Glass is used to crystallize its targets, its shocking abilities propagate through the conductive materials during the process.

Usage Examples
(Borutagarasu: Shōgeki-tekina hari) Voltaic Glass: Shocking Needles
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid.
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Focusing their Voltaic Glass chakra to their mouth, the user spits out several shards of VG which propagates while traversing creating a wave of several electrifying needles. The user will then clap their hands together causing the numerous needles to explode into a malestrum of elecricity.

(Borutagarasu: Yūki yamārashi) Voltaic Glass: Courageous Porcupine
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Focusing their Voltaic Glass chakra to their hands, the user will create a small crystalline ball of Voltaic Glass that is highly condense. Triggered with a hand seal or by foreign chakra, the crystalline ball will grow sharp needles as the technique itself begins to expand at a large pace piercing and electrifying anything within its range.
Conditions to be able to use it
Mastery of Lightning | Mastery of Fire | Mastery of Earth | Advance Chakra Control

Is weak to
  • (Wind) - The sharp concussive force of the energy will weakin the bond of the particles causing the element to shatter or be sliced
  • (Fire) & Superheated CE - The heat will overpower and melt the crystalline element
  • (Lava) - The molten lava will melt the crystalline form
  • (Metals) - Metals denser than earth, metals will break the crystalline, but Voltaic Glass's electrical features are still conducted through metals
  • (Blast) - Explosive force will break Voltaic Glass
Is strong against:
  • (Lightning) - The electrical properties of Voltaic Glass overpowers the properties of basic lightning
  • (Earth) - The electrical properties of Voltaic Glass overpowers and neutralizes earth
  • (Water) - The electrical properties of Voltaic conducts through water and it is denser as well
  • (Wood) - The electrical properties of Voltaic Glass overpowers and neutralizes wood
  • (Ice) - The electrical properties of Voltaic Glass overpowers ice and it is denser as well
  • (Blast: Clay) - The electrical properties of Voltaic Glass overpowers and neutralizes clay
  • (Dead Bone Pulse) - The electrical properties of Voltaic Glass overpowers and neutralizes shikotsumyaku
Co-creator:
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: Because it's still just plasma and unless I understood the concept, what you are describing and what dusty plasma is are two completely different things. It's not because something is charged that by default it's electrifying the way you are imagining it. Practically everything you wrote is based upon that is shocking, which as I see it is baseless. The red parts by default dont belong here and a crystal and crystalline are related to each other, but not the exact same thing.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau


Custom Element Japanese Name
Kuriputonaiton

Custom Element English Name
Kryptonite Release

The Element is Based On
Earth + Lightning + Fire
Chakra Control



Facts that Prove the Element to be Possible (In the Manga Context)

As seen by Guren, Crystal Release can create mass quantities of an unknown material from scratch or from the ground. Using the same principals as Crystal Release, and focusing on the abstract qualities of Lightning and Fire chakra representing energy, Kryptonite is a possible crystalline variant that can absorb energy. Different colors of Kryptonite can be made, with the most common being green. A noticeable trait is how each tend to give a glow periodically.​

How it Works:

Creation

Using advance properties of Earth Release, the user can generate minerals from either the ground or on their own to crystallize and take form. As this is happening, Fire and Lightning chakra are added into the mix, with a bigger focus on Lightning. Both chakras represent energy, and the Lightning chakra influences the crystal connecting to the electromagnetic spectrum around it, allowing it to naturally "react" with other forms of energy. This natural reaction gives Kryptonite a unique glow.

At this point, the abstract qualities of Fire and Lightning are being focused within the surrounding "aura" of Kryptonite. This allows Kryptonite to naturally draw in energy, like Dark Release.

Function

Kryptonite Release acts in a very similar manner to Dark Release. Whereas Dark Release grants a user the ability to store virtually an infinite amount of energy through a portal and then release it in a raw form through an additional portal, Kryptonite acts as both the portal to store and release energy in a nearly limitless amount.

Kryptonite can absorb the energy from any position, as the entirety of the crystal acts as the portal. The user is then able to release the energy in a raw form from anywhere on the Kryptonite. The release form can either be done as a single direction streaming blast/beam, projectile, or omnidirectional wave.​



Example Techniques:
(Kuriputonaiton: Kyousei Kuriputonaito No Jutsu) — Kryptonite Release: Greater Kryptonite Technique
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses and molds his chakra, using it to create Kryptonite structures, pillars, tools, etc to defend, attack or support him. The Kryptonite can be created from the users body or from earth sources and its limitations are only set by the users own imagination and the chakra put into the technique.



(Kuriputonaiton: Jigen Bakudan) — Kryptonite Release: Time Bomb
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user focuses his chakra and creates a pillar of Kryptonite to rise up. While the pillar is up, it will naturally absorb all energy-based attacks into it. The energy will be stored within the Kryptonite for a limited amount of time before releasing all the built up energy it stored into an omnidirectional wave of raw energy that reaches mid-range.

Note: Raw energy is released every 3rd turn.
Note: Kryptonite pillar remains until destroyed.
Note: Kryptonite pillar can be formed anywhere up to Mid-Range from the user
Begin at 1:07



(Kuriputonaiton: Taiyō Furea) — Kryptonite Release: Solar Flare
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user focuses his chakra and creates a four pillars of Kryptonite to rise up around the enemy, similar to the canon Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind technique. These four Kryptonite pillars will then absorb the light around and redirect it as huge flash of light that blinds the target. At anytime, the use can choose to slam the pillars together and compact the victim inside.

Note: Blindness effect lasts 1 turn.




Conditions to be Able to Use it
Earth — Lightning — Fire
Chakra Control




Is Weak Against
Water & Earth
Kryptonite's ability to draw in energy makes it weak against non-energy based attacks



Is Strong Against
Energy Based Elements
(E.G. Fire, Lightning, Wind, etc.)

Kryptonite is able to easily absorb forms of energy​




Co-Creator


Students
None Available & None Available


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✗ Declined: This is not the DC universe. You should have realized that if this explanation was even remotely acceptable, it would be extremely easy to get CE approved as the only thing you do know is throwing qualities you find convenient together without any kind of proof or correlation and point towards Guren.


Custom Element Japanese Name
Kuriputonaiton

Custom Element English Name
Kryptonite Release

The Element is Based On
Earth + Lightning + Fire
Chakra Control



Facts that Prove the Element to be Possible (In the Manga Context)

As explained by Yamato and Kakashi, advanced elements do not technically "exist" in the obvious sense. The only chakra natures that do exist are the Basic 5 (Fire | Wind | Lightning | Earth | Water) and advanced elements are formed under the combination of these elements.

The idea of chakra ratios can be proven by the fact that there are variants of advanced releases, as well as different possible end results. For example, the Storm Release has two variants. One is a more obvious transformation that creates storm clouds. The other is another variant that creates laser-like abilities. Additionally, Lava Release is known to have several variants, which include the Quicklime, Rubber, and Magma style variants. Additionally, we can see that two elements can also be used to create two different advanced elements. This is seen with the combination of Water and Fire Release to create either the Steam or Boil Release. In addition, Muu was stated to have passed on the secrets of Dust Release to Onoki. Since these two are implied to not be related further goes to prove that certain advanced releases aren't genetic, but based on chakra ratios.

Based on how other people could not replicate the same variants yet possessed the same ability to combine chakra natures, whether through training or genetics, shows that the true ability of advanced elements are chakra ratios that a user is able to create.

Dark Release is the result of combining Fire and Lightning chakra natures in a certain ratio which creates two portals that are present on the user. These portals act as mediums to allow energy to be absorbed and released. Crystal Release is another advanced element where Earth chakra is a component. By using the same ratios with Fire and Lightning chakra that allows the user to absorb and release energy and adding Earth Release to act as the new medium instead of the portals on the user's body, Kryptonite Release can be made.

Kryptonite Release is essentially a variant of Dark Release that combines the usage of crystals to act as the new medium for absorbing and releasing chakra, as opposed to portals.
Different colors of Kryptonite can be made, with the most common being green. A noticeable trait is how each tend to give a glow periodically.​


How it Works:

Creation

Using advance properties of Earth Release, the user can generate minerals from either the ground or on their own to crystallize and take form. As this is happening, Fire and Lightning chakra are added into the mix, in the same ratio that it produces Dark Release. Both chakras represent energy, and the Lightning chakra influences the crystal connecting to the electromagnetic spectrum around it, allowing it to naturally "react" with other forms of energy. This natural reaction gives Kryptonite a unique glow. Additionally, due to the addition of Earth chakra, the "portals" that are the medium created as a result from the combination of Fire and Lightning chakra become the entire crystal itself. This allows Kryptonite to naturally draw in energy, like Dark Release.

Function

Kryptonite Release acts in a very similar manner to Dark Release. Whereas Dark Release grants a user the ability to store virtually an infinite amount of energy through a portal and then release it in a raw form through an additional portal, the crystal created from Kryptonite Release acts as both the portal to store and release energy in a nearly limitless amount.

Kryptonite can absorb the energy from any position, as the entirety of the crystal acts as the portal. The user is then able to release the energy in a raw form from anywhere on the Kryptonite. The release form can either be done as a single direction streaming blast/beam, projectile, or omnidirectional wave.​



Example Techniques:
(Kuriputonaiton: Kyousei Kuriputonaito No Jutsu) — Kryptonite Release: Greater Kryptonite Technique
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses and molds his chakra, using it to create Kryptonite structures, pillars, tools, etc to defend, attack or support him. The Kryptonite can be created from the users body or from earth sources and its limitations are only set by the users own imagination and the chakra put into the technique.



(Kuriputonaiton: Jigen Bakudan) — Kryptonite Release: Time Bomb
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user focuses his chakra and creates a pillar of Kryptonite to rise up. While the pillar is up, it will naturally absorb all energy-based attacks into it. The energy will be stored within the Kryptonite for a limited amount of time before releasing all the built up energy it stored into an omnidirectional wave of raw energy that reaches mid-range.

Note: Raw energy is released every 3rd turn.
Note: Kryptonite pillar remains until destroyed.
Note: Kryptonite pillar can be formed anywhere up to Mid-Range from the user
Begin at 1:07



(Kuriputonaiton: Taiyō Furea) — Kryptonite Release: Solar Flare
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user focuses his chakra and creates a four pillars of Kryptonite to rise up around the enemy, similar to the canon Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind technique. These four Kryptonite pillars will then absorb the light around and redirect it as huge flash of light that blinds the target. At anytime, the use can choose to slam the pillars together and compact the victim inside.

Note: Blindness effect lasts 1 turn.




Conditions to be Able to Use it
Earth — Lightning — Fire
Sage Ranked Chakra Control




Absorption Ability

Is Weak Against
Tangible Solid Elements
(Water, Earth, Metals, etc.)

Kryptonite Release is used to absorb and redirect chakra and energy in general. This makes it so that while it can absorb the chakra in Earth and Water techniques, it will have a difficult time absorbing the Earth itself or the Water produced by techniques since it doesn't work exactly like a Fuuinjutsu technique. Unlike Dark Release however, where Earth Release is double the strength against Dark Release, Kryptonite is not as weak to Earth Release because the crystalline structure is more durable. (S-Rank Kryptonite Release can absorb A-Rank Earth Release)

Is Strong Against
Energy Based Elements
(E.G. Fire, Lightning, Wind, Raw Chakra, etc.)

Kryptonite Release is used to absorb and redirect chakra and energy in general. So things like Raw Chakra, Fire, Lightning, Wind and other forms of raw energy like Storm, Dust, Scorch or even raw Sage Jutsu are easily capable of being drawn in and absorbed. Raw chakra absorption and redirection is the core of Kryptonite Release (just like Dark Release), making it gain double strength towards it (B-Rank Kryptonite Release overcomes S-Rank Raw Chakra).



Release Ability

Is Weak Against
Tangible Solid Elements
(Water, Earth, Metals, etc.)

These type of elements have substance and density to defend from raw forms of energy like those produced by Kryptonite Eelease after the absorption of a technique. Other solid elemental forms may serve the same purpose, such as Solid Ice, Steel, Wood or Lava

Is Strong Against
Energy Based Elements
(E.G. Fire, Lightning, Wind, Raw Chakra, etc.)

These elements lack the substance and strength needed to actually overcome or even deal with the raw form of energy produced from dark release after absorbing a technique. Other intangible or less tangible elements such as Snow (basically, snow based Ice Release techniques), Sand, Rain, Steam, Boil, etc. may also be susceptible of being overcome by the raw energy of Kryptonite Release.




Co-Creator


Students
None Available & None Available


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✗ Declined: And don't resubmit. Essentially you just took dark release properties and stuck it on crystal. We don't know anything about dark release, we don't know what it's made out of. We just chose two elements for the RP because we had to say something. However it becomes a different matter when you start making a CE out of it. Fire and lighting in reality have nothing in common with dark, so that you would get some solid version of it by adding earth, is highly doubtful. Then you just gave it some additional qualities because it's beneficial for you, but are baseless. We already have enough problems with defining dark release and with other elements that use chakra absorbing stuff, so I really not going to approve this.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau


Custom element Japanese name:
Keīshīkoton

Custom element English name:
Pumicite Release

The element is based on:
Fire + Earth + Water​

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Pumicite is a volcanic rock that consists of highly vesicular rough textured volcanic glass, which may or may not contain crystals. It is typically light colored. It is composed of highly microvesicular glass pyroclastic with very thin, translucent bubble walls of extrusive igneous rock. It is commonly, but not exclusively of silicic or felsic to intermediate incomposition, but basaltic and other compositions are known.

Pumice is created when super-heated, highly pressurized rock is violently ejected from a volcano. The unusual foamy configuration of pumice happens because of simultaneous rapid cooling and rapid depressurization. The depressurization creates bubbles by lowering the solubility of gases (including water and CO2) that are dissolved in the lava, causing the gases to rapidly exsolve (like the bubbles of CO2 that appear when a carbonated drink is opened). The simultaneous cooling and depressurization freezes the bubbles in the matrix. In Narutoverse, It isn't far-fetched Pumice properties are been formed underneath the earth-crust or in an active volcano. There have also been instances were pumicite could be created under the influenced of super-heated chakra. Roshi in his transformed state could create small volcano that explodes vehemently, sending molten rocks flying up in all direction like a giant flower.​

How it works:

Pumice is composed of highly microvesicular glass pyroclastic with very thin, translucent bubble walls of extrusive igneous rock. It is commonly pale in color, ranging from white, cream, blue or grey, to green-brown or black. Pumice forms when Fire, Earth and water base affinities are being amalgamated simultaneously, The water element cools down the gas solvents embedded in the pressurized rocks, causing the gases to enter a state of depressurization. The depressurization subsequently causes bubbles to be formed by lowering the solubility of gases that are dissolved in lava, Thus enabling the gases to rapidly exsolve. The simultaneous cooling and depressurization then freezes the bubbles in the matrix. As the water continues to cool down the gases that exsolve, the bubbles already frozen within the viscous magma cools down and then forms pumice.

When Pumice is formed, it can manipulated into different shape or forms of weaponry pertaining to user intuition. In its dust form however, it consists of highly vesicular rough textured volcanic glass, that can certainly pierce flesh upon contact. The dust when inhaled causes internal injuries to the pleural sac present in the lungs. It is also more than capable of overwhelming liquid base properties, and its variants.​

Jutsu Usage Examples:

(Keīshīkoton: Doūmu no dasuto) - Pumice Release: Dust of Doom.
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short -Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user manipulates their Fire, Earth and water base chakra simultaneously, expelling a massive pumice dust that moves towards the target at intense speed. The dust consists of vesicular miniature volcanic glass that easily penetrates the target body upon contact. This causes irritation, and piercing injuries that weakens the target but doesn't necessary kills them. Additionally, the dust can resist related wind techniques due to it being denser than air.

(Keīshīkoton: Burōdofuttomoru) - Pumice Release: Broad-foot Mole
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short -Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user executes three hand seals, and slam their hands unto the ground, manipulating their Fire and earth base chakra, forming a vesicular molten rock before cooling down with water. Through shape manipulation, the user thens forms a Broad-foot Mole completey made out of Pumice. The Mole has the ability to move through earth without hindrance. However, its main objective is to move underneath the target, grabbing them substantially inside the ground, before crushing them with their sharp crawls.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery of Fire, Earth and Water affinities.​

Is strong gainst:
Wind ▬ Strong against all Wind elements and its variation.

Water ▬ Also strong against water elements due to its denser nature, and rigid properties.

Fire ▬ Strong against fire as the vesicular glass properties present in Pumice can act as a deflective shield against fire techniques.​

Is weak to:
Lightning ▬ Weak against Lightning elements and its variations as it can shatter through glass properties within the pumice with ease.

Earth ▬ Although it has a considerable strong density, it's however less dense than Earth. Meaning, Earth techniques of lower-rank can still overpower pumice.

Lava ▬ Becomes Insubstantial against Lava related techniques. This is because Molten Lava can cause the bubbles within the glass to melt, Thus rendering it non-functional and flaccid.​

Co-creator:
N/A​

Students I passed this custom element on too:
N/A​

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✗ Declined: We already have the Volcanic Glass CE and someone has been trying to submit fulgurite for a while now. So I already don't see much difference anymore. Also you largely seem to have copy pasted wikipedia without thinking about it yourself much, I mean how is dust supposed to be stabbing people? Not to mention you are way too optimistic. With all due respect this is what you would rate as a mediocre element in terms of strength, so it really is not going to be immune to three basic elements. I mean it floats on water, but somehow is supposed to be strong against it? It's dust but somehow can stop wind? Something even solid earth isn't strong against? Let alone all their variations.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau


Custom element Japanese name: Dākuraitoningu

Custom element English name: Dark Lightning

The element is based on: Fire + Lightning

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Dark Lightning is a type of element completely made of just electrons. Unlike normal lightning, Dark Lightning only has electrons which are the negatively charged particles of atom. Together, all of the electrons of an atom create a negative charge that balances the positive charge of the protons in the atomic nucleus. In Narutoverse it isn't far-fetched Dark Lightning element could be attainable. This is because Dark Lightning contains only electrons, and electrons are found in clouds that surrounds an atom which in turn makes up an element. Electrons can also be found in the electrical appliances. They are mainly useful in encoding and processing information electrically, a field known as electronics. Nowadays this usually involves transistors, where electrons are loosely held inside a semiconducting material; but at one time all electronic devices radios, TVs, even early computers--relied on vacuum tubes, in which a hot wire emitted electrons and an arrangement of electrified grids and coils controlled their motion. We have seen presence of televisions, computers in Narutoworld which contains electrons and Thus proving Dark Lightning can be formed.​

How it works:


Dark Lightning is black in color and extremely volatile. It can be formed through the amalgamation of Fire and Lightning element. Normally Lightning are made up of protons and electrons. However in this case, Fire heats up the Lightning to a substantial state, and causes the protons present in lightning to wear off exponentially, Thus forming Dark Lightning. Unlike normal Lightning, Dark Lightning is completely harmless against beings due to it containing only electrons. It does have a unique ability that can be considered solitary. When release, the electrons within the element attacks the compact present in a solid element such as earth, causing the Molecules to vibrate in a transitional motion. The vibration causes the intermolecular bonds to get weakened and consequently break apart. In reality, this phenomenon causes the Earth element to lose its strength. E.g When an S-rank Earth element absorbs Dark lightning, it's rank is subsequently decrease to C-rank.​

Jutsu Usage Examples:

(Dākuraitoningu: ) Dark Lightning Release - Solid Cleanser
Rank: S-rank
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user execute a single hand seal, and manipulate their Fire and Lightning chakra forming Dark Lightning. Thereupon the user releases their Dark Lightning from their hand in an omni-direction. When the Dark Lightning comes in contact with a Solid element such as the Earth, it causes the rank of the Earth to drop severely. Forbidden Earth techniques are reduce to B-rank, S-rank are reduce to C-rank, While B-rank Earth techniques are reduce to D-rank.

Note:
• Can be used Thrice in battle.
• Must be a Dark Lightning user.
• Same situation are applied to other Solid techniques such like Ice, Metal and Crystals.


Conditions to be able to use it:

Mastery of Fire, and Lightning affinities.​
Is strong gainst:


Earth and Pure Metals ▬ Strong against Earth and Pure Metals due to its intermolecular forces which are very strong, and the constituent particles are closely packed. Dark Lightning when absorbed, can easily break apart this strong intermolecular forces. Also tenacious against other Solid elements such as Ice, Crystals e.t.c

Fire ▬ Strong against Fire techniques.

Is weak to:


Wind ▬ Weak against Wind and its variations because the intermolecular forces are negligible (extremely weak), and the constituent particles are free to move. As a result Wind cannot absorb Dark Lightning. In addition, gases such as Smoke are also resistant to Dark Lightning


Lightning ▬ Weak against Lightning as it can easily absorb and gain the electrons that are found in Dark Lightning

Is Neural against:

Water ▬ It's been widely noted Water already has weakened intermolecular bonds. Meaning if it were to absorbed Dark Lightning, they both become stalemated because the bonds already in water element are broken.​


Co-creator:
N/A​

Students I passed this custom element on too:
N/A​

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✗ Declined: When there's in the manga something called Black Lightning, that literally is black lightning, it should be obvious that a Dark Lightning CE of black lightning is not going to be approved. There's no reason for this to be black in the first place. Secondly this is just electricity, which already falls under lightning. There are many people who already made CJ playing with the concept of electrons. The weakness of earth is also lightning, so there's really no difference here other than that you try to be less destructive. There is nothing that stops people from making a lightning CJ and saying it gently breaks down an earth jutsu rather than blowing it apart. Also do not ever code a CE submission like this again and the template does not contain neutral elements, so it shouldn't be there.


Resubmitting
• Changed the name.


Custom element Japanese name:
Dākuraingu

Custom element English name:
Dark Electron

The element is based on:
Fire + Lightning + Chakra Control​

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Dark Electron is a type of element completely made of just electrons. Unlike normal lightning, Dark Electron only has electrons which are the negatively charged particles of atom. Together, all of the electrons of an atom create a negative charge that balances the positive charge of the protons in the atomic nucleus. In Narutoverse it isn't far-fetched Dark Electron element could be attainable. This is because Dark Electron contains only electrons, and electrons are found in clouds that surrounds an atom which in turn makes up an element. Electrons can also be found in the electrical appliances. They are mainly useful in encoding and processing information electrically, a field known as electronics. Nowadays this usually involves transistors, where electrons are loosely held inside a semiconducting material; but at one time all electronic devices radios, TVs, even early computers--relied on vacuum tubes, in which a hot wire emitted electrons and an arrangement of electrified grids and coils controlled their motion. We have seen presence of televisions, computers in Narutoworld which contains electrons and Thus proving Dark Electron can be formed.​

How it works:


Dark Electron is black in color due to the large amounts of energy stored in it. It's extremely volatile and can be formed through the amalgamation of Fire and Lightning element. Normally Lightning are made up of protons and electrons. However in this case, Fire heats up the Lightning to a substantial state, and causes the protons present in lightning to wear off exponentially, Thus forming Dark Electron. Whereas normal Lightning is harmful, Dark Electron is completely harmless against beings due to it containing only electrons. It does have a unique ability that can be considered solitary. When release, the electrons within the element attacks the compact present in a solid element such as earth, causing the Molecules to vibrate in a transitional motion. The vibration causes the intermolecular bonds to get weakened and consequently break apart. In reality, this phenomenon causes the Earth element to lose its strength. E.g When an S-rank Earth element absorbs Dark Electrons, it's rank is subsequently decrease to C-rank. Unlike Lightning which gradually breaks down most solid elements after impact, Dark electron attacks the bond itself, weakening it exponentially. Basically, the solid element won't lose its structure but its strength.

Jutsu Usage Examples:

(Dākuraitoningu: ) Dark Electron Release - Solid Cleanser
Rank: S-rank
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user execute a single hand seal, and manipulate their Fire and Lightning chakra forming Dark Lightning. Thereupon the user releases their Dark Lightning from their hand in an omni-direction. When the Dark Lightning comes in contact with a Solid element such as the Earth, it causes the rank of the Earth to drop severely. Forbidden Earth techniques are reduce to B-rank, S-rank are reduce to C-rank, While B-rank Earth techniques are reduce to D-rank.

Note:
• Can be used Thrice in battle.
• Must be a Dark Electron user.
• Same situation are applied to other Solid techniques such like Ice, Metal and Crystals.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery of Fire, and Lightning affinities.​

Is strong gainst:
Earth and Pure Metals ▬ Strong against Earth and Pure Metals due to its intermolecular forces which are very strong, and the constituent particles are closely packed. Dark Electron when absorbed, can easily break apart this strong intermolecular forces. Also tenacious against other Solid elements such as Ice, Crystals e.t.c

Fire ▬ Strong against Fire techniques.

Is weak to:
Wind ▬ Weak against Wind and its variations because the intermolecular forces are negligible (extremely weak), and the constituent particles are free to move. As a result Wind cannot absorb Dark Electron. In addition, gases such as Smoke are also resistant to Dark electron

Lightning ▬ Weak against Lightning as it can easily absorb and gain the electrons that are found in Dark electron

Water ▬ It's been widely noted Water already has weakened intermolecular bonds. Meaning if it were to absorbed Dark electron, nothing significant affects the water.

Co-creator:
N/A​

Students I passed this custom element on too:
N/A​

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✗ Declined: This makes no sense whatsoever. You somehow heat up lightning, one of the hottest things in existence, to remove the protons, but leave the electrons? I already don't understand how you could heat up lightning and why that would remove protons and not electrons, but anyway the result would be that you only have a bunch of electrons. These would be called free electrons, which aren't that uncommon as their primary usage is creating electrical currents and that already falls under regular lightning.

 
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Custom element Japanese name: Dasuto Panteonic
Custom element English name: Pantheonic Dust Release
The element is based on: Earth | Fire | Wind​

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Pantheonic Dust (Superabsorbent Polymers, commonly shortened to SAPs or Slush Powder, but will however be referred to as Pantheonic Dust henceforth) is a polymer that can absorb and retain extremely large amounts of a liquid relative to it's mass. In essence, it is created by purifying grounded up pieces of earth with a dust or sand-like quality until it is composed of purely crystallized acrylic acid. Acrylic acid is a product of propene, an unsaturated organic compound that is found in nature through natural gas. Being that natural gas (a type of fossil fuel) is created when layers of buried/decomposed plants, gases, and animals (All three of which found within the NV) are exposed to intense heat and pressure over thousands of years, it is safe to assume that natural gas, the primary factor needed to create Pantheonic Dust exists within the Narutoverse.

How it works:

An advanced chakra nature, Pantheonic Dust requires the use of the earth, fire, and wind elements in order to create the crystalline grains. Natural gas from within the earth below is manipulated and heated using wind and fire release respectively to both purify the earth and remove unnecessary gasses so that only the acrylic compound remains, forming the necessary synthesis required; This basically mimics a procedure that would normally be performed within a more controlled environment (Labs, etc). The earth itself is simultaneously ground up into fine, minuscule grains. The resulting product is a whitish, almost crystal clear-like substance (It is used as artificial snow on motion picture and stage productions) that is 99% crystallized acrylic acid and 1% water (Which is just moisture) - It is manipulated and acts much like sand release through the use of the wind element [ ].

Pantheonic Dust is unique in that it is hydrophilic; Each grain is capable of absorbing over 500 times it's own weight in liquid, expanding in the process [ ]. A single grain that is just 4 millimeters in diameter can expand considerably in size and congeal with other grains around it, changing from a crystalline structure to that of a larger, gel-like mesh [ ]. Once the dust absorbs the liquid and congeals, it adopts the color and temperature of said liquid, going from being comprised of 99% acrylic acid and 1% water to 99% of the liquid absorbed and 1% acrylic acid. Because of this and for the purpose of this particular form of release, Pantheonic Dust can only be created or controlled in it's dust/sand-like state, and not after it has absorbed any forms of liquid. It is also for this reason that liquids that have been absorbed and confined within Pantheonic Dust cannot be manipulated any longer by others (For example: If it absorbs a water jutsu from the enemy, the water that has been absorbed cannot be used/manipulated to perform another water technique, as it has basically turned into something different entirely; A gel-like substance).

To reiterate more clearly, the gel that is produced as a reaction to the dust absorbing a liquid cannot be manipulated once formed.

Usage Examples:

(Dasuto Panteonic: Panteon no Ressā Kōchiku) - Pantheonic Dust Release: Lesser Constructs of The Pantheon
Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user is able to manifest a plethora of weapons, shields, pillars, etc, out of Pantheonic Dust. The objects that are able to be formed are limited to the user's imagination and follow the same restrictions of the dust itself; Should the user choose to create weapons of Pantheonic Dust that carry momentum toward a target such as projectiles, and should those objects come to absorb a liquid, the dust immediately expands (However still retaining the shape that it was in prior to) into a firm state of gel continuing toward the target. The gel adopts the same temperature as the liquid that has been absorbed, so it has the possibility to burn the target if the liquid was hot or become more dense if the liquid was extremely cold. This interaction with liquid applies to all objects created.
Note: All objects created with this technique follow the same initial restrictions the dust has.
Note: Objects can only be created within reason.

(Dasuto Panteonic: Hekate no Geretsunamisuto) - Pantheonic Dust Release: Hecate's Vile Breath
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user clasps their hands together and holds this hand gesture, focusing their Pantheonic chakra into the ground, calling forth Pantheonic Dust that bursts from the ground and heads toward the target(s) as a large, wide wave of dust in an attempt to engulf them. Should the wave make contact with the target(s), they will suffer direct blunt force damage from the sheer weight and density of the wave, potentially burying them in the dust as well. This dust can also be used as a pre-existing source to perform other Pantheonic Dust techniques should it still be in it's original state.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

(Dasuto Pantheonic: Atorasu no taitō) - Pantheonic Dust Release: Rise of Atlas
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs a series of three handseals and slams one of their hands onto the ground, giving birth to a giant amalgam of Pantheonic Dust from the ground that can be controlled as long as the user keeps their hands on either the ground or the amalgam. This can be used to defend against incoming jutsu or attack the target.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.

Conditions to be able to use it: Fire Mastery | Wind Mastery | Earth Mastery

Is weak to: Lightning and all other CE variants (Due to Pantheonic Dust being comprised of earth material) | Wind and all other CE variants (Pantheonic Dust can be blown/dispersed away easily) | Acids/Corrosive elements of any kind

Is strong against: Water and all other liquid based CE (Pantheonic Dust carries hydrophilic properties) | Earth (Much like normal sand, Pantheonic Dust is capable of grinding into earth and is able to become dense enough to compete with the hardest of rocks) | Steam and all other variants (Pantheonic Dust simply absorbs the moisture)

Co-creator: Joker

Students I passed this custom element on to: ? & ?


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✗ Declined: You start with searching natural gas in the ground, so there it already ends. You also skip the entire phase from acrylic acid to SAP, you just said you grind earth into bits, but that's just sand then. To form SAP it needs to undergo, depending on the method, again a series of reactions with other substances under specific circumstances.

- Expanded on what's needed to create it and outlined a specific method of creation.

Custom element Japanese name: Dasuto Panteonic
Custom element English name: Pantheonic Dust Release
The element is based on: Earth | Fire | Wind​

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Pantheonic Dust (Superabsorbent Polymers, commonly shortened to SAPs or Slush Powder, but will however be referred to as Pantheonic Dust henceforth) is a polymer that can absorb and retain extremely large amounts of a liquid relative to it's mass. In essence, it is created by purifying grounded up pieces of earth with a dust or sand-like quality until it is composed of purely crystallized acrylic acid combined with polyacrylonitrile via co-polymer chemistry. Both acrylic acid and acrylonitrile [ ] are a product of propene, an unsaturated organic compound that is found in nature through natural gas. Being that natural gas (a type of fossil fuel) is created when layers of buried/decomposed plants, gases, and animals (All three of which found within the NV) are exposed to intense heat and pressure over thousands of years, it is safe to assume that natural gas, the primary factor needed to create Pantheonic Dust exists within the Narutoverse.

How it works:

An advanced chakra nature, Pantheonic Dust requires the use of the earth, fire, and wind elements in order to create the crystalline grains. Natural gas from within the earth below is manipulated and heated using wind and fire release respectively to both purify the earth and remove unneeded gasses so that only the necessary compounds remain (namely gasses such as propene, oxygen and ammonia -- the latter two are used to create the polyacrylonitrile and are innately found within the earth). This release uses the process of co-polymerization with acrylic acid and polyacrylonitrile (the oldest known form of creating SAP [ ]), with the formation of the substance being created by grinding the earth up into fine, minuscule grains, infusing it with propene while ammoxidizing it afterward (acrylonitrile is created from the ammoxidation of propene), producing the necessary synthesis required; This mimics a procedure that would normally be performed within a more controlled environment (labs, etc). The resulting product is a whitish, almost crystal clear-like substance (it is used as artificial snow on motion picture and stage productions) that is 99% crystallized acrylic acid and 1% water (which is just moisture) - it is manipulated and acts much like sand release through the use of the wind element [ ].

Pantheonic Dust is unique in that it is hydrophilic; Each grain is capable of absorbing over 500 times it's own weight in liquid, expanding in the process [ ]. A single grain that is just 4 millimeters in diameter can expand considerably in size and congeal with other grains around it, changing from a crystalline structure to that of a larger, gel-like mesh [ ]. Once the dust absorbs the liquid and congeals, it adopts the color and temperature of said liquid, going from being comprised of 99% acrylic acid and 1% water to 99% of the liquid absorbed and 1% acrylic acid. Because of this and for the purpose of this particular form of release, Pantheonic Dust can only be created or controlled in it's dust/sand-like state, and not after it has absorbed any forms of liquid. It is also for this reason that liquids that have been absorbed and confined within Pantheonic Dust cannot be manipulated any longer by others (For example: If it absorbs a water jutsu from the enemy, the water that has been absorbed cannot be used/manipulated to perform another water technique, as it has basically turned into something different entirely; a gel-like substance).

To reiterate more clearly, the gel that is produced as a reaction to the dust absorbing a liquid cannot be manipulated once formed.

Usage Examples:

(Dasuto Panteonic: Panteon no Ressā Kōchiku) - Pantheonic Dust Release: Lesser Constructs of The Pantheon
Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user is able to manifest a plethora of weapons, shields, pillars, etc, out of Pantheonic Dust. The objects that are able to be formed are limited to the user's imagination and follow the same restrictions of the dust itself; Should the user choose to create weapons of Pantheonic Dust that carry momentum toward a target such as projectiles, and should those objects come to absorb a liquid, the dust immediately expands (However still retaining the shape that it was in prior to) into a firm state of gel continuing toward the target. The gel adopts the same temperature as the liquid that has been absorbed, so it has the possibility to burn the target if the liquid was hot or become more dense if the liquid was extremely cold. This interaction with liquid applies to all objects created.
Note: All objects created with this technique follow the same initial restrictions the dust has.
Note: Objects can only be created within reason.

(Dasuto Panteonic: Hekate no Geretsunamisuto) - Pantheonic Dust Release: Hecate's Vile Breath
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user clasps their hands together and holds this hand gesture, focusing their Pantheonic chakra into the ground, calling forth Pantheonic Dust that bursts from the ground and heads toward the target(s) as a large, wide wave of dust in an attempt to engulf them. Should the wave make contact with the target(s), they will suffer direct blunt force damage from the sheer weight and density of the wave, potentially burying them in the dust as well. This dust can also be used as a pre-existing source to perform other Pantheonic Dust techniques should it still be in it's original state.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

(Dasuto Pantheonic: Atorasu no taitō) - Pantheonic Dust Release: Rise of Atlas
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs a series of three handseals and slams one of their hands onto the ground, giving birth to a giant amalgam of Pantheonic Dust from the ground that can be controlled as long as the user keeps their hands on either the ground or the amalgam. This can be used to defend against incoming jutsu or attack the target.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.

Conditions to be able to use it: Fire Mastery | Wind Mastery | Earth Mastery

Is weak to: Lightning and all other CE variants (Due to Pantheonic Dust being comprised of earth material) | Wind and all other CE variants (Pantheonic Dust can be blown/dispersed away easily)

Is strong against: Water and all other liquid based CE (Pantheonic Dust carries hydrophilic properties) | Earth and most earth based CE (Much like normal sand, Pantheonic Dust is capable of grinding into earth and is able to become dense enough to compete with the hardest of rocks) | Steam and all other variants (Pantheonic Dust simply absorbs the moisture)

Co-creator: Joker

Students I passed this custom element on to: ? & ?


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✗ Declined: It's really not an element anymore when you need to search for natural gas and than start doing everything you did.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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Custom element Japanese name: Shougekihaoton
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Custom element English name: Shock wave Release

The element is based on: Chakra control + Wind + Lightning

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

It has been very well shown in the manga that this could be possible in two places. First let us take the case of Nagato, he was shown to repel all the incoming projectiles around him in a direction of 360 deg in the form of a wave. This can be considered as a kind of a shockwave that moves all around the user to repel the objects. Although in this case Nagato used Gravity to get things away from him, we will be doing things a little differently and would not be able to repel everything.
Secondly it was shown by the outer path statue when it released a huge blast of chakra that created a shockwave that sent chouji and his father flying in their enlarged forms. The nine tails Fox has also been shown doing it.
Although the above examples definitely require a huge pool of chakra to create shockwaves out of pure chakra, we will be doing it a little differently than what the above examples have been doing.

How it works: A shockwave is a kind of a propagating disturbance. It carries energy and like any ordinary wave travels through a medium. The basic theory for this element would be to use chakra to create a wave that moves through earth or any other substantial medium disturbing the molecular binding among the elemental atoms and causing it to implode in a particular direction or in some cases expanding a heavily compressed chakra rapidly in all directions.
Nature transformation could be used to increase its powers (wind nature transformation/ Lightning nature transformation). The user will be concentrating and condensing some amount of chakra and then will release it instantaneously in any particular direction creating a spiked wave in any particular medium like the air causing the air to implode in a particular direction and in case of an opponent send him flying.
Because of the chakra requirement and the loss of the chakra amplitude as it travels over a distance shockwaves are not meant to reach the Long distance or rather it is the most damaging when the target exists in the short or the mid range. Also in case it does reach the long distance such a technique will drain enormous amount of the users chakra such that it would result in a Forbidden Jutsu. These waves create an exploding force wave that pushes things backwards or in case of insubstantial things destroyes them completely.
Using the Lightning elemental transformation one can create a powerful shockwave of lightning that would destroy any electromagnetic field or forces in the surrounding area also it would create a magnetic disturbance and could be used to stop incoming projectiles made out of metal.​

Usage Examples:

(Shougekihaoton : Kaimetsu-tekina panchi)-Crippling Punch
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: This attack is similar to a taijutsu punch to the opponent with only a little difference in how it gets executed. The user when is about to punch the opponents body with hist fist will release a powerful shockwave at the very instance that the punch makes contact with the opponents body. This causes an unbearable amount of damage inside opponents body through which the shockwave travels. Depending upon the position hit it can cause a rupture of blood vessels which may result in internal bleeding.
-This punch can break through C rank and below earth jutsu as well.

(Shougekihaoton/Futon: Tenrai sazanami)-Divine Ripple
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user Concentrates his chakra into the Palm of his hands and then slamming them together releases a shockwave in the air. The user also uses Wind transformation to some extent on this shockwave increasing its power. This wave will disperse any concentrated water attack coming towards the user causing the water to disperse into the air and mix up with the atmosphere in the form of non harmful glistening water droplets. This shockwave will be directed specifically towards the incoming water projectiles.
-Can be used 3 times in a battle.
-Requires the Mastery of Wind nature transformation.
-Can be used to destroy B rank and below water attacks.
Conditions to be able to use it:
Due to the unique nature of this element, a user needs to satisfy the following conditions in order to be able to use it.

  • Needs to be of Kage Rank.
  • Needs to have mastered Wind and Lightning releases.
  • Needs to be extraordinarily good in Chakra Control.
Is weak to:
Since it Requires a medium to propagate, Intangible elements like Fire could be of destructive nature against this.
Elements like Lightning also will be very powerful against this, thanks to its speed which will make a shockwave useless. As there will be no catching up to Raiton.

In short it is weak to,
  • Fire
  • Lightning
Is strong against:
Any substance that has a mass to it. Meaning a substantial medium will be weak to this release. As it will provide the shockwave a medium through which it could travel causing the medium to disintegrate.

Examples,
Water
Earth

Co-creator: None.

Students I passed this custom element on too: None.


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✗ Declined: This already exists.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Keisōdo

Custom element English name: Diatomaceous earth

The element is based on: Earth+Water+chakra manipulation

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Diatomaceous earth consists of fossilized remains of diatoms, a type of hard-shelled algae. It is used as a filtration aid, mild abrasive in products including metal polishes and toothpaste, mechanical insecticide, absorbent for liquids, matting agent for coatings, reinforcing filler in plastics and rubber, anti-block in plastic films, porous support for chemical catalysts, cat litter, activator in blood clotting studies, a stabilizing component of dynamite, and a thermal insulator.
It has a particle size ranging from less than 3 micrometres to more than 1 millimetre, but typically 10 to 200 micrometres. Depending on the granularity, this powder can have an abrasive feel, similar to pumice powder, and has a low density as a result of its high porosity.
Diatomite forms by the accumulation of the amorphous silica (opal, SiO2·nH2O) and are generally formed from the remains of dead diatoms (microscopic single-celled algae) in lacustrine or marine sediments.


-Diatomaceous earth exists as a fine white to off-white powder.
-It exists and travels as a gritty and abrasive dust, similar to regular sand.

-Pest control: Diatomaceous earth is used as an insecticide, due to its abrasive and physico-sorptive properties.[8] The fine powder absorbs lipids from the waxy outer layer of insects' exoskeletons, causing them to dehydrate. Arthropods die as a result of the water pressure deficiency, based on Fick's law of diffusion.

-Also it has the ability to hydrate and dehydrate while maintaining structural stability. This confers a hygroscopic capability on the element. Hygroscopy (etymology and pronunciation) is the ability of a substance to attract and hold water molecules from the surrounding environment.

-Thermal insulation: As a Zeolite, the element can be used as solar thermal collectors and for adsorption refrigeration. It is a hard char Intumescent meaning, it can resist heat conduction using its hydrates.
The element is fundamentally composed of multiple molecules of silica, the primary composition of sand, hydrated to an extent. In the RP the element will be formed using sand and water
In the series Gaara is able to grind the earth into sand. With sand available, hydrating it with water in a specific ration is as easy as adding water to regular earth to form mud.


How it works:
The user manipulates earth chakra to grind earth(from the ground or generated with the chakra) into a polymer of silica. He merges water chakra to this polymer in a specific ration as it forms to create Diatomaceous earth which has the formula SiO2·nH2O.


Diatomaceous earth can be created in two forms: a severely hydrated form and a basic hydrated form. Hydration means the polymer of SiO2 is attached to a number of water molecules. Diatomaceous earth is always hydrated since at least a water molecule is always present but the amount of water chakra used determines whether the material created is in the basic or severely hydrated form. Each form has its perks afforded as a result of the quantity of water molecules it has attached. This can be likened to how earth chakra can be used to create hard rocks as well as mud based on the jutsu used.


Basic Hydrated Form- This form produces an off white sand-like powder. The material bears minimal H2O molecules on it. This compounds the hygroscopic characteristic of the material making it super effective at adsorbing water and ultimately stronger against water.

Qualities of Diatomaceous earth in the basic hydrated form:
-Very hygroscopic: The minimal amount of water imbued makes the material unstable. As such it readily adsorbs water from its environment to achieve stability. Adsorption of water from living/organic creatures and summons is indicative of strength loss, which is translated as chakra loss. Materials such as wood would wither from dehydration when contact is made(This means such materials are generically weaker). Adsorption of water can occur even when water isn't in direct contact. It can occur through osmosis and diffusion when in contact with an opponent's skin.


Severely hydrated form- This form produces a white sand-like powder. The material bears maximum H2O molecules on it. This compounds the heat absorption characteristic of the material making it super effective at absorbing heat and ultimately stronger against fire.

Qualities of Diatomaceous earth in the severely hydrated form:
-Thermal neutrality: Diatomaceous earth of this nature is absorb a ton of heat due to a high specific capacity afforded by the numerous water which hydrates it. A unique quality is that, like all zeolites even after absorbing heat the material is cool to the touch. The heat absorbed simply strengthens the material and makes it capable of evaporating bodies of water should contact be made. Because fire/heat is essentially pure energy, it can be absorbed and its strength added to techniques containing severely hydrated diatomaceous earth. Thermal energy, when absorbed, may grant extra strength to the material. A unique trait of severely hydrated material is that, should a fiery technique not be enough to entirely nullify a technique, the heat, which would be absorbed, fuels the diatomaceous earth technique making it retain its original strength even after the interaction. Such an interaction is essentially a minus plus one which leaves the element as it was.

Jutsu Usage Examples:

(Howaitouedingu) A White Wedding
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: short/long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60(-20 chakra each turn from opponent caught within)
Description: The user 2 handseals while channeling chakra beneath a target and then claps his hands. This causes a dust storm of basic hydrated Diatomaceous earth to erupt from the ground rising high to form a localized storm which stretches to great heights. The cloud is extremely hygroscopic and is capable of removing any water from its vicinity up to its rank. Additionally foes caught within the cloud have water sucked out as the material makes contact with their skin resulting in a loss of strength and chakra.
-The cloud of Diatomaceous earth can cover mid range space.
-Useable three times per battle.
-The cloud persists until eradicated.

Conditions to be able to use it:
-Requires earth and water training.

Is weak to: earth, lightning

Is strong against: Wind, fire (Severely hydrated form), water(Basic Hydrated Form)

Co-creator:n/a

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: I don't get why I see listed three different forms despite the fact I don't see any particular difference between them. You can't just change the composition of your element when you see fit. The red bolded part by default has to go. If you weaken a fire jutsu with wind, it's not going to start absorbing the remaining wind and become stronger again. I also have my sincere doubts about the water absorbing things, at least the way how you're portraying it here as I can hardly imagine it will start sucking me dry immediately if I would touch it, which makes the "absorption" of things like wood a mute point as there really would be no time in a quick-paced battle. On top of that apparently this earth is even specifically used to grow plants and trees, meaning this is completely the opposite of what you are saying here. Lastly how are you supposed to evaporate water sources on contact if it feels cool?

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name:

Oujuusuiton


Custom Element English name:

Panthalassic Water Release


The element is based on:

Water


Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Panthalassic Water is the equivalent of Tritiated Water, Tritium Oxide or Super-Heavy Water. This is a natural occurrence, albeit very rare, where a water molecule is composed of 1 Oxigen and 2 Tritons, an isotope of Hydrogen that has 1 proton and 2 neutrons, instead of the common Hydrogen. Tritiated Water is a radioactive form of water that naturally occurs in minute quantities, and is thus used to determine the age of various water-based liquids, such as vintage wines, and is used as a tracer for water-transport studies.

The Naruto World is said to be a replica of ours in all ways. Water exists in the Naruto world without any evidence against it being any different than RL water, so tritiated water is presumed to exist in the world as well, and the manipulation of specific minerals or molecules is already common, with Orochimaru's many science experiences and even some techniques, like Gaara's sand technique Shukaku's Shield that utilizes only the strongest minerals in the ground to add to its strength. It's relationship with Basic Water, as in, Water Release in it's clear liquid form, is the same as Water Release as a flammable oil and as a sticky syrup, with Panthalassic Water granting different abilities, though at a scale much greater than mere oil or syrup.

The name is a play on Tritiated Water RL applications, though exaggerated. With Panthalassa being the primordial ocean, there would be no older body of water, so one would imagine that, it being bottled like vintage wine, and present until today would have turned to tritium oxide by now. Besides, its my nickname.


How it works:

To produce Panthalassic Water, the user relies only on their Water chakra to produce liquid water, though selectively produces more quantities of tritium oxide compounds than normally, an ability than mimics that of elemental KG. The user can, through his chakra, modulate the quantity of tritium diluted in their water techniques, across a linear spectrum. On one side, the user produces entirely pure Water, which is the basic Water Release, and on the other side the user produces pure Tritiated Water, with every tier of dilution in between. With this element, the user is capable of controlling tritium oxide molecules, which are referred to as panthalassic water molecules or panthalassic molecules, produce panthalassic molecules or covert water molecules into panthalassic water molecules.

The additional neutrons of the tritum confer Panthalassic Water a higher density, which slightly increases it's physical properties. As a radioactive version of water, pure Panthalassic Water is corrosive due to self-radiolysis, where the molecules disassociate by nuclear radiation resulting in high output of energy. Triton is a low energy beta emitter, which means it's incapable of penetrating the skin but is a radiation hazard when inhaled, ingested or absorbed by the skin. Panthalassic Water is thus a carcinogen and a teratogen. These effects are attenuated in the lower ranges of the Water-Panthalassic Water spectrum, and aggravated by higher ranked chakra and quantities.

When diluted, tritiated water distributes itself across a body of water relatively quick, which is a property that is used to calculate an unknown volume of water. As an advanced Water-Based element, Panthalassic Water establishes it's dominance over Basic Water by being both physically denser and by infecting water sources and water based techniques, spreading the user's chakra-filled Panthalassic Water molecules throughout and severing the opponent's chakra link. This is modulated by the normal W&S rules, thus the overpowering effect happens when two techniques of the same rank collide, with Panthalassic Water having the elemental advantage.


Jutsu Usage Examples:

( Oujuusuiton: ) Panthalassic Water Release: Primordial Sea

Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user infuses a body of water or a water technique with Panthalassic Water chakra, creating a solution of panthalassic molecules that protects that source from any chakra manipulation but the user's. By infusing an opponent's water technique, the user can sever the opponent's control over it, and shoot it back at them. The user can control the concentration of panthalassic molecules in order to control the levels of corrosion and radioactivity of the water source.

( Oujuusuiton: ) Panthalassic Water Release: Song of the Leviathan

Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user shoots out a blast of Panthalassic Water from their mouth, creating a fast projectile that will burst out on contact with a target, spreading corrosive water all over the field.


( Oujuusuiton: ) Panthalassic Water Release: Trident of Triton

Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user produces a great trident out of Panthalassic water, which the user is able to wield or throw. He can freely manipulate it in mid-air and underwater.


Conditions to be able to use it:

The user is required Mastery of Water to such a degree that it becomes a Specialty.


Is weak to:

Earth - While denser than Basic Water, Panthalassic Water is still not dense enough to compare to Earth and other Earth Based elements, thus it retains Water's weakness to Earth. It's low energy radiation isn't strong enough to penetrate even skin, in terms of thickness. It's corrosive properties aren't strong enough to act at a level beyond that of a Biological Element.

Lightning - Due to the self-Radiolysis, Panthalassic Water is susceptible to lightning's effects, thus it turns Water's neutrality to Lightning into a Weakness. Lightning will accelerate the decay of Panthalassic Water and rapidly consume it, outputting high levels of energy. Radiation-based elements will most likely be stronger than Panthalassic Water's Radiation effects.


Is strong against:

Fire - Panthalassic Water shares the same relationship that Water shares with Fire, being able to douse it out. Fire's heat does not conflict with either the corrosive nor the radiation effect, and Panthalassic Water is already pretty hot due to self-radiolysis.

Water - As an advanced form of water, denser than it, Panthalassic Water overpowers water in every aspect, both physically and chakra-wise. It's corrosive effect melts through any Biological Element, and is a radiation hazard to living beings.

Wind - Denser than Water, Panthalassic Water is capable of turning Water's neutrality to Wind into a Strength, pushing wind and flexible enough to sustain it's cutting power. Wind does not counter either the radiation or the corrosive effect of Panthalassic Water.


Co-creator:

N/A


Students I passed this custom element on too:

? & ?


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✗ Declined: I think I have said this before to you, but each time I see you making posts like these I become very suspicious as they always seem to dodge the main issue and try to cover stuff up. For instance I don't really get the bolded part, but I'm guessing based on you talking about spectrum and the like, that you think you can just change your water as you see fit, which really is not going to be accepted. Things like syrup and mist are not the core of the water element, but something in the niche. It's really not a spectrum. Secondly you actually provided no acceptable way whatsoever how you create this. You just said you could create like it's an elemental KG, but it's not, this is a CE and you need to provide a real explanation. Lastly this all seems to come down pretty much to the acid element.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Kōryō to shita umi
Custom element English name: Desolate Sea
The element is based on: Water + Earth + Wind + Advance Chakra Control
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): The environment in the Narutoverse is for the foremost based off of the real world, and my custom element resides within the ocean which has been seen in the lands of Kirigakure, Kumogakure, and any other coastal lands visited in the series. In the last battle between Guy and Kisame, when they were within the ocean, there were dark areas towards the bottom of the sea signifying the presence of the various depth levels of the ocean. Desolate Sea is based off of the deepest part of the ocean, within the abyssopelagic layer, a place where no light resides.

How it works: The main element of Desolate Sea is the water element, it is the element that serves as the basis of this custom element. The addition of earth chakra is the key to making Desolate Sea what it is, and gives it most of its natural properties. Earth chakra combined with the water chakra turns the element black as its pressure and density increases beyond that of both the water and earth element while also adding certain minerals, like salt, to the custom element making it resemble the salty waters of the ocean, but its salt levels past the usual seen at the top of the ocean's surface layer. The last element needed to complete Desolate Sea is the wind element. The wind element cools the custom element to the the extremely low temperatures experienced at the abyssopelagic region of the ocean, the deepest layer, which can reach down to water's freezing point, but Desolate Sea can never freeze due to the immense pressure within its waters. When created, Desolate Sea can be made from the user, the earth, or sources of water.

Features

Natural light does not penetrate the deepest layer of the ocean, making photosynthesis impossible for sea plant life to exist in the layer Desolate Sea is based off of. The dark composition of Desolate Sea not only prevents light penetration, but also absorbs the light attempting to pierce through the element, hence why it can not be penetrated, allowing the element to always keep its dark composition no matter what. Desolate Sea is the opposite of translucent, and when facing certain elements that produces natural light, Desolate Sea absorbs the source of light on contact while clashing with the element in question, either succeeding or failing depending on the opposing element's nature.

The combination of the earth element, and the wind element to the water element pushes Desolate Sea's density and pressure beyond that of both the basic water and earth element as the custom element mimics the lowest depths of the ocean. When things non-resistant to very high pressure are submerged within Desolate Sea, they fall victim to its immense pressure and compress in on itself as it is crushed and reduced to nothingness.

Just like the icy depths of the sea, Desolate Sea has a very low temperature that matches water at its freezing point, but due to the custom element's properties it does not freeze whatsoever. Instead, Desolate Sea remains icy cold to the touch causing things in contact with the custom element to drop in temperature until it matches that of Desolate Sea. This can be dangerous for living organisms and in some cases lead to first degree frostbite, or freezing injuries to plant life.

Jutsu Usage Examples
(Kōryō to shita umi: Jigoku no gurippu) Desolate Sea: Grip of Hell
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid.
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user does two hand seals as they channel their Kōryō to shita umi chakra into the earth short range of them creating dark whip made of Desolate Sea that erupts from the ground. The whip can extend up to mid.range in order to bind the target by a limb, or all over their body. From their the captured target can be maneuvered by the user as they painfully suffer from the icy cold touch of Desolate Sea. Prolonged exposure can cause the surface area of the area in contact with the element to suffer minor freezing damage like, numbness or tissue damage.


(Kōryō to shita umi: Sourushādo) Desolate Sea: Soul shard
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will focus their Kōryō to shita umi chakra into a source of water where they will manipulate a small portion of the source to change into needles made of Desolate Sea. These needles will then shoot out from the source of water aimed towards the target in order to hit them with a barrage of needles. The Desolate Sea needles that have managed to pierce into the body of the target will force itself into nearby tissues, muscles, organs, etc. freezing the area causing painful internal damage.

Conditions to be able to use it​

Kage rank + Water Mastery + Earth Mastery + Wind Mastery​

Is weak to

Wind(& wind based CE): Strong currents slices through the element, or large gusts dissipate it.

Fire: Desolate Sea being the complete opposite of the fire element in terms of properties, temperature, tangibility, producing of light, etc., the fire element is the only source of light able to beat Desolate Sea. When absorb the light of a burning flame, Desolate Sea also absorbs its source of heat, which is strong enough to trump the icy coldness of Desolate Sea, causing the element to evaporate.

Lava: Hotter than normal fire, lava doesn't focus on producing light so much as fire, but its extreme hot temperature surpasses fire and is more than enough to trump the iciness of Desolate Sea.

Metal Elements: Harder and stronger than earth, the density, strength, hardness of metal elements trump that of Desolate Sea.

Is strong against

Water(& water based CE): Higher density, pressure, and structural hardness than water.

Earth: Higher density and structural hardness than average earth.

Lightning: Unlike the water element, Desolate Sea does not conduct lightning, but instead it absorbs lightning, a source of light, due to its light absorbing properties

Light:
Absorbs basic light in all of its various forms.

Ice: Higher density and structural hardness than ice.

Organisms: Desolate Sea crushes living organisms when submerged within it, and its icy properties reduces the temperature of organisms to dangerous levels with prolonged contact. When introduced into the bodies of organisms, it acts like a poison in terms of lethality, causing the exposed body parts to crush internally due to the elements pressure.

Co-creator:
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: The main problem I see here, is that there's a huge contradiction. Light does not go that deep into the ocean. So how is water that has never seen light and can't be penetrated by it, supposed to absorb it? I'm pretty sure there are certain fish that have luminescent properties and submarines have travelled there. So you are making contradictory statements. This argument maybe is enough for the light element, but with with most CE that produce light, the light is nothing more than a side effect. The main point of lightning is not to be bright, but to be destructive and shocking and I can't find a single reason here to assume your statement that it does not conduct lighting, is correct. It's not because it can counter light, it can counter everything else of the CE. Absorbing light is what regular water does as if you travel even a few meters below the surface, it already becomes darker. So your reasoning is flawed. Also you can't turn existing earth sources into a water element, that is not how it works.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Hokuton
Custom element English name: Starfire (White Dwarf is the real scientific name)
The element is based on: Fire + Lightning + Chakra Control
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Starfire, in reality called White Dwarf, is a stellar remnant. They are very dense and it's faint luminosity comes from the emission of stored thermal energy. The material in a white dwarf no longer undergoes fusion reactions once it has been forged through chakra, so the element has no source of energy other than chakra. It is supported by electron degeneracy pressure, causing it to be extremely dense. A white dwarf is very hot when it is formed, but since it has no source of energy, it will gradually radiate away its energy and cool. This means that its radiation, which initially has a high color temperature, will lessen and redden with time. Over a very long time, a white dwarf will cool to temperatures at which it will no longer emit significant heat or light (this will take effect in numerous techniques to be made).

In essence White Dwarf is white bright energy in the mixture of fire and lightning chakra natures, which will be explined into further detail under "How it Works". Narutoverse wise, being nothing more than super heated energy, it is highly obvious that energy has been seen used by shinobi in the manga. Be it spiritual, body, or elemental energy. We have seen very dense and heated elements as well, such as the likes of Scorch release, and bright energy elements such as lightning or storm. Chakra itself (the spiritual and physical energies) has been used by shinobi to manipulate nearly anything in narutoverse, such as the realm of life itself, and even the moon. Thus it would be much logical to assume such matter like energy can be controlled by the likes of ninja.

How it works: By combining Fire, which represents the energy and heated body of White Dwarf with the purity of lightning, which brings forth to the mixture it's destructive capabilities and bright properties. Once this is done, through chakra control the user creates a greater mixture between the two energies, forming something burning like fire, and yet cutting sharp and bright as lightning. The White Dwarf energy can from this point, be used as the previous two elements can. The user can release the element as a form of energy that appears akin to that of a flame energy and raw chakra, commonly white or atleast sky blue in color: in form of waves, blasts, streams, etc. While it is bright, it works similiar to a glow stick, so it does not blind or impair vision for the user or the opponent; unless the technique explicitly says so. It behaves akin to that as fire would, being the element that forms it's mass, when the energy comes into contact with something it will burn like fire however also cut and shred as lightning would. Another use for White Dwarf is it's release to produce shapes and objects such as orbs, disks, etc.; which can stop intangible elements such as fire, lightning, and even solid as the likes of earth (due to the lightning properties). However, nothing advanced such as shields, weapons, etc, because of it's heat - simply holding it would be harmful to the user. The form is still the same as with the energy use, however in this case further chakra control is applied to shape the White Dwarf into near solid shapes with tangible properties (resulting in the Lightning properties of this element).

Usage Examples:
Hokuton: Shuuha Ishi ♦ Starfire Release: Waves of Snaptun
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs three handseals as he collects Hokuton chakra into both palms, radiating with white colored heat, the user then claps his hands against eath other. With a second of interval in between, a white torrent of White Dwarf is released in an omni-directional wave of burning white energy, shredding and burning it's surroundings as it then zooms out at a distance. The wave towers up to 10 meters into the air and it's color burns a slight blue hue over it's higher edges, making it easier to spot even from a distance away.

Note: Usable twice per battle.
Note: Cannot use other White Dwarf technique of S rank next turn.

Hokuton: Hisameya Chisoku ♦ White Dwarf Release: Sigyn's Hailing Arrow
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs a single handseal and aims with an open palm at his target. Shooting forth from his mouth an arrow of Hokuton at their target, roughly the size of an adult man. Blessed with speed and destructive power, the arrows then cuts into it's target. The user can fire a round of up to three arrows, with the strength divided equally amongst them.

Note: Can only be used thrice per battle. With a 1 turn cooldown between uses.

Conditions to be able to use it:
-Advanced Chakra control
-Mastery over Fire and Lightning Elements
-Large Chakra amounts (Kage Rank)

Is weak to:
Water, and most CE variations. Because it's main form is kept by it's fire properties, White Dwarf can be subdued by water techniques and it's variations.
Wind, and most CE variations. Wind can deplete the lightning properties of White Dwarf, leaving remnants of fire to space out and die moments afterwards.
Dark Release ( Cannon ). Dark can absorb intangible elements, such as fire and lightning which compose this element.

Is strong against:
Fire and Lightning and any CE variation of both.
Earth (as well as Ice, Crystal, Wood, etc.) due to it's lightning properties, it can cut and shred with ease through these.
Most Earth based CEs: same as above.

Co-creator: Moxxi
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: You just threw fire and lightning together, gave it the properties you want to have and than placed it under the name "White Dwarf" despite the fact I don't see any kind of connection between your explanation of what a white dwarf is and the actual element you created nor any substantial proof. It's not the first time people try to mimic stars, but I have always declined them because of its extremely vast scope, energy and matter that is needed to create something like that. It's simply beyond the abilities of a regular ninja.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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Custom element Japanese name: Sekimenton

Custom element English name: Asbestos release

The element is based on: Earth, Fire, Chakra control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Naruto world is similar to ours in many aspects. In Naruto series we can see many things which exists in our real world. We know that soil/earth exists in Narutoverse and was shown to be with exact properties as that of in real world where trees can grow with mountains, volcanoes, rivers, rocks, etc.

In our real world, the earth crust is made up of approximately 90% of silicate minerals. So it's safe to assume that earth in Naruto world is also made up of silicate minerals.

Asbestos is a naturally occurring silicate mineral on the earth crust and being a compound containing silica, they are abundantly found in naturally occurring ores in our real world. Since the properties of soil/earth in Naruto world is similar to our real earth, we can safely assume that the compound of silica - Asbestos, exist naturally in Naruto world.

We have seen people building houses with bricks, cement, wood, etc in Naruto world. Silicates in the form of earth is actually a component of bricks, concrete and since asbestos is naturally occurring silicate compound, once again we can come to a conclusion that asbestos may exist in Naruto world.


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How it works:
Asbestos - Properties:
Asbestos is a naturally occurring silicate mineral. Asbestos possess excellent qualities like good flexibility, sound absorption, good tensile strength, high resistance to fire, heat and chemicals. It's essentially inert and doesn't react with chemicals.

We can see shinobi using their chakra to create the basic 5 elements out of their own body and capable of manipulating the basic 5 elements and combining them to form a unique element which is different from its parent elements.

In the same way as above, Asbestos is created by the user by mixing up their fire chakra, earth chakra and wind chakra simultaneously. Asbestos element can be created & utilized by the user in two ways:
i) by focusing the earth & fire chakras in their body & creating asbestos out of their body.
ii) by channeling the earth & fire chakras into the ground creating asbestos out of an existing ground (earth) which is abundant in silicate minerals.

Although when creating out of their body, the user can create only small objects and weapons like sword, stick, kunai, shuriken, rope, shield, armor, etc.


Using shape manipulation and altering the structure and density between the asbestos molecules, the user can shape them into various forms.

Forms of asbestos that can be created by the user:
  • The user is able to create asbestos in the form of solid structures of various size, shapes and rock like masses similar to earth jutsus.
  • The user is able to alter the structure and density of the asbestos particles and can shape them into sheets/cloth like material, ropes, threads etc depending on the user's imagination. The high tensile strength and flexibility of Asbestos permits the user to shape them and use them according to his imagination.
Usage Examples:

Asbestos release technique (Sekimenton no jutsu)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user creates small objects, pillars, spikes, tools, weapons, ropes, sheets of asbestos out of their body or from ground.

Asbestos release: Wild ropes entangle (Sekmenton: Mikon kouki matsuri)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user performs the Ox -> Tiger -> Snake hand seal and creates several long ropes (maximum of 10 cm diameter) of asbestos to erupt from the earth binding and entangling the opponent. Because of its good tensile strength it can effectively hold down a medium size summon.

Asbestos release: Cloth protection (Sekimenton: Kiji engo)
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user quickly fabricates a sheet of asbestos from the earth in front of him which protects him and the nearby persons from an incoming attack. The transparency and thickness of the sheet depends on the user.

Asbestos release: Asbestos dragon (Sekimenton: Sekimen doragon)
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long (Created short range of the user)
Chakra: 40 (-5 per active turn)
Damage: 80
Description: The user after performing the Ram -> Tiger -> Snake hand seal creates a large asbestos dragon out of earth. The dragon is similar in size to Earth release: Earth dragon but it has all the properties of asbestos. The user can maintain and reform the dragon by performing snake hand seal up to 3 turns each time while controlling the dragon the user can use jutsus which don't require hand seals. The asbestos dragon is capable of spitting several sharp spikes made of asbestos which equals C rank and counts towards the user's move. The dragon is also capable of creating several ropes from its mouth and body which can bind and entangle the opponent(s) and using it counts towards the user's move.
Note(s):
  • Can only be used 2 times per battle.
  • Stays in the battle for 3 times.
Conditions to be able to use it:
  • Must be kage ranked
  • Earth - Mastered
  • Fire - Mastered
Is weak to:
  • Lightning & its related CE (As lightning will shatter asbestos since it's based on earth element)
  • Wood (Can pierce/destroy asbestos)
  • Crystal release (Can pierce/destroy asbestos)
  • Strong metals and minerals eg: Iron, Titanium, Diamond, etc. (Will pierce through asbestos)
Is strong against:
  • Fire & its related CE (Asbestos can withstand high temperature)
  • Water & its related CE (Asbestos being derived from earth element is naturally strong against water. Asbestos is neither reactive nor soluble in water)
  • Earth & its related CE (As asbestos can be created from earth itself)
  • Ice release (Asbestos will shatter it)
Asbestos is neutral to Wind & its related CE as asbestos does nothing to wind and vice versa.

Co-creator:

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

Permission from Solf J.Kimblee( Lōgan) through VM, creator of silicon CE as asbestos is a silicate compound >> <<

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✗ Declined: Personally I still find this quite a dull element, but that's up to you to decide. Once again I find your understanding of it way too shallow. You talk about mixing fire and earth, then also mention wind, which I don't understand why, which gives me the feeling you just copy pasted stuff while not reading it carefully. I mean asbestos apparently is some kind of fibre, but it has 6 different types which all are used in different applications in conjunction with different material, but you reduced it all to being the same things and as a result your CE doesn't make any sense anymore. How can something be used the same way as earth, but also also the same as ropes or laces and a transparent sheet? I mean a sheet? Even if that sheet is indestructible, it's so thing anything would blast it away unless it would be huge and anchored 10 meters in the ground and how are ropes meant to destroy earth or ice? That all clearly shows you have no clear understanding of the element or, in the least, you didn't explain. It's in the end very sloppy. Also neutral elements are not part of the template and thus shouldn't be listed and on top of that you have no 2 basic element weaknesses anymore.

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Custom element Japanese name: Amosaiton

Custom element English name: Amosite Release

The element is based on: Water, and Earth

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Amosite (the type of asbestos that will be used with this CE, since there is 6 different forms, for this CE we shall stick to this name) release has many vivid examples and evidence of being existent for the Narutoverse.

In our real world, the earth crust is made up of approximately 90% of silicate minerals. So it's safe to assume that earth in Naruto world is also made up of silicate minerals. Amosite is a naturally occurring silicate mineral on the earth crust and being a compound containing silica, they are abundantly found in naturally occurring ores in our real world. Since the properties of soil/earth in Naruto world is similar to our real earth, we can safely assume that the compound of silica - Amosite, exist naturally in Naruto world.

We also have seen people building houses with bricks, cement, wood, etc in Naruto world. Silicates in the form of earth is actually a component of bricks, concrete and since Amosite is naturally occurring silicate compound, once again we can come to a conclusion that Amosite may exist in Naruto world.

How it works:
To start, for the purpose of clarification since Asbestos has 6 distinguishable types, we will be basing this CE off of the universally known type, Amosite - first found in South Africa, it is a Amphibole type fiber which basically means it is has spiky edges of fiber, more solid then other forms of Asbestos (but still rather flexible to manipulate). Earth is needed for this element since Amosite is commonly found within the earth, one would need to manipulate it and mine it out (creating the base of the element). Water would be applied within the earthly substance to cleanse it on any impurities and solidifying its final shape. This element can be created out of the users body, or out of the ground. Lastly, this element is brownish in color, like regular earth.

Amosite is very durable and rather rough. Able to resist heat, unable to react to most acids/chemicals, insulates electricity/lightning, sound absorbent, and lastly provides rather average tensile strength against solid impacts. Various unique forms can be created due to its composition and flexibility, such as threads and sheets.

[video=youtube;dJosuZ6Q36k]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dJosuZ6Q36k[/video]
0:46 presents an impressive display of the elements resistance to fire/heat as well as its structural appearance.

Jutsu Usage Examples:
Amosite release technique (Sekimenton no jutsu)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user creates small objects, pillars, spikes, tools, weapons, ropes, sheets of Amosite out of their body or from ground.

Amosite release: Cloth protection (Amosaiton: Kiji engo)
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user quickly fabricates a sheet of Amosite from the earth in front of him which protects him and the nearby persons from an incoming attack. The transparency and thickness of the sheet depends on the user.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Water mastered | Earth mastered​

Is weak to:
Wind (KG and CE alike)- Able to slice the fibers with relative ease.

Water (KG and CE alike)- Water can easily douse the fibers while the fibers absorbing the water weakening the shape/structure of the Amosite.

Extremely Dense Minerals and Material- This mainly falls on material like steel, diamonds, quartz, Crystal etc

Is strong against:
Fire (KG and CE alike)- Amosite is extremely heat resistant, able to withstand scolding fire with relative ease.

Lightning (KG and CE alike)- Amosite is a natural insulator of electricity.

Sound release- Is able to absorb sound within its structure.

Most Corrosive Chemicals (such as bromine, and acid for example)- There has been evidence of Amosite not reacting to chemicals.

Earth- Asbestos and its minerals (Amosite specifically for this element) has a Mohs scale of 2.5-3, showing it is much denser and rougher then regular earth, able to break through it.

Co-creator: -Jiraiya-

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: Why do people keep submitting this? Frankly I find this too powerful for what it actually is and then it struck me that I had the exact same thought of Soapstone and apparently I'm not the only as despite that Asbestos and Soapstone aren't directly connected, they are so similar that they often get confused with each other because they are so much alike. So at this point I don't see a difference.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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Custom element Japanese name: Nenshouhiton
Custom element English name: Burning Ice Release
The element is based on: Earth, Water, and Fire
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):Burning Ice or its original name Methan clathrate is when a large amount of methane is trapped within a crystal structure of water, forming a solid similar to ice, which becomes super heated and burns or catches flames, but the solid is very cold similar to ice but not exactly since it does not melt to heat. Methan is considered one of the key elements to natural gas, natural gas can be found in deep underground rock formations in coal beds, coal is simply high combustible pieces of earth, which was shown in the manga how people used to heat up food. Also since methan has to be trapped in solid objects, which looks clear, a good example is crystal release which is what the methan is trapped in or atleast how it appears. So the user will create a large amount of methan around the area and then create a solid which will trap the methan setting the solid into flames. Methan is also considered a very cool element, which gives off its freezing temperature.

How it works: Basically the element is a super cool, and heated solid all in one. It works very much like regular ice, but it does not melt to extreme heat. So when the opponent comes into contact with the element, the property of ice will take effect; it will freeze the opponent in that located area by doing this the area becomes numb like what regular ice does and then the heat portion of the element takes effect and sends a large amount of heat through the area where it was first frozen or cool. When the heat is sent its intense heat, condenses and explodes. This acts as a great way of deception for when the opponent is numb by the ice they will be unable to feel the heat begin to condense so by the time it expands and explodes it would be to late to react.
With special control of the element, this in a way can confuse the opponent on how to defend against this element since it seems almost like complete opposites. It will also confuse the users body, when the body comes into contact with ice or cooling properties the muscles begin to tighten due to how muscles react in cold temperatures, this is done to have the body respond by condensing itself and keeping the body temperature warm to survive harsh conditions, then when it is exposed to extreme heat the bodies muscles inflate and expand this is another reaction of the body which is opposite of what was explained above, when muscles are exposed to extreme temperatures they expand to allow blood flow to circulate much slower this allows the body to remain with its normal temperature. When the body experience cool and hot conditions in all at once or in quick succession this confuses the muscle on how to react and in most cases this causes pulls or tears of the muscles especially when a opponent is trying to fight. The muscular confusion will be damaged either instantly when exposed all at once or over time when exposed in quick succession.
The last known ability when the heat and cold properties come together to shape into an attack or defense. The overall property when the two comes is a very sharp weapon. An example could be if the user sends a stream of burning fire towards the opponent, the stream acts to use the property of sharpness of ice and acts to pierce through the opponent, when an opponent is pierce the heat is generated and released which circulates around the opponents body, burning the area hit and the opponents insides around the area will be burned.
Their are two main forms of the release. The first release is ice that is lit on fire. This is the solid form of the release. The color of the ice is blue and the fire lit is the color of regular fire. The other form is extremely cold fire. Its the energy form of the release. This form moves and waves like fire but is super cold. The heat is condensed and acts as a base for the coolness of ice. It has a color of blue fire.

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Usage Examples:
Burning Ice Release: Burning Spike
Type: Offense
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user will summon a large Ice spike under the user impaling them, then heat will be sent from the ice towards the opponent where they were impaled, the heat will superheat the area to the point where the area impaled will explode into fire burning the area and exploding the area hurt.

Burning Ice Release: Cool ground, hot feet
Type: Offense-Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will freeze the whole ground around the user, forcing him to lose balance, then the ice will be heated dramatically where the ice will burn the feet of the opponent rendering him unable to move at all.

Conditions to be able to use it: Must Master Earth, Water, and Fire
Is weak to: Water and Lighting
Is strong against: Wind and Earth
Co-creator:
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: You are misinterpreting what this is and as a result keep contradicting yourself. Simplified as I understand it this is frozen methane gas or ice containing methane gas. This is only possible under very high pressure and under very low temperatures, however that could still be justified by saying that the normal ice element also needs low temperatures, still it's used under normal temperatures. However for the rest you are mixing things up. Normal ice can't be set on fire, it will just melt, methane however is very flammable. When you hold a flame to the methane ice, it will start to melt and the methane released will ignite, giving the appearance that the ice is burning, but in reality that's the methane that is burning and the ice is melting. So you saying it does not melt is already wrong or, more precise, if it doesn't melt, it will not be set aflame. Also it doesn't generate any heat, fire is just warm and as said methane is very flammable. It's just warm when it's set on fire, but there isn't any 'heat' face. Finally you wouldn't be able to set on fire inherently from the element, for that you would need to use a separate fire jutsu or something and you wouldn't have or barely any control over those flames when it's burning.

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Custom element Japanese name: Kaskōriton

Custom element English name: Burning Ice Release

The element is based on: Water, Wind, and Fire

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): This element is based off of . A crystalline structure that has methane trapped inside. This interesting structure has been found under sediments on the ocean floors of the earth, where it is extremely cold, and strong pressure is present. The gas entering the water tend to occur when movement under ground releases this methane gas while the ice then forms around the gas trapping it.

To insure probability of this element being possible in the manga context all these must be present. The ice structure is documented well in the manga. Methane gas is no more but a natural gas that is released from the earth. The manga has also shown many instances of flammable material to be created (such as flammable gas). As long as there is cold water and cold environments present as well as the probability of a flammable substance such as methane being able to be released naturally from the earth due to sudden shift of the earth to allow the flammable gas to exit - then with the two interacting together through natural means - there would be no reason for this natural phenom not to happen in the manga context.

How it works: The user will gather their water, wind, and fire chakra to develop all the needed components to create the element. The water and wind used to create the cold crystalline substance, similar to how regular ice is created. The fire portion will be used to create the flammable substance inside of the crystalline structure as it is created simultaneously so it will be trapped inside the structure. This technique is created out of the ground or out of the users body to allow for the gas to be manipulate properly at the same time of the water and wind.

This element is rather hard due to the crystalline substance, as well as cold on its own. The structure however will be able to set ablaze when contacting heat elements and burn slow until the gas is all warn out and the structure deteriorates. When set in flames the structure is no longer cold, but warm. The structure when cracked or shattered will leak the gaseous substance all at once, lingering in the air which can potentially be set into flames [ ].

User won't be able to set on fire inherently from the element, for that one would need to use a separate jutsu or material (such as a match, friction, or a hot element). The user won't have any control over the flames when it's burning.

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Jutsu Usage Examples:
(Kaskōriton: Hanran no Chēn)- Burning Ice Release: Chains of the Rebellion
Type: Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will release various balls of cold burning ice towards the opponent attempting to crush and hurt their body and break their bones. However, they are not compacted much, the moment they contact with the opponents body they might break and leak some gas to be used and set ablaze.

(Kaskōriton: Rushifā no Kēji)- Burning Ice Release: Lucifer's Cage
Type: Supplementary/Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will surround many sheets of crystalline structure around the opponent. The structures is compacted closely onto the opponent restricting them while crushing them in place, not much pain is presented, but due to the closeness of the sheets, a likelihood presents itself that if the opponent attempts to break the material they might leak the gas and expose themselves, while also if they use anything of heat, they will be burned by their own doing, leaving them in a tough spot.

Conditions to be able to use it:

Mastery of Fire | Water | Wind​

Is weak to:
Lightning- Able to pierce and set the flammable substance to blaze with ease.
Fire and any fire based element- Sets the structure in flames burning the gas up and dismantling the body. Earth, Minerals, and Metals- Anything solid with a dense structure is able to shatter the body of the structure while leaking the gas out.

Is strong against:
Wind- Can actually decrease the temperature of the structure.
Water- Unable to break the structure.

Co-creator: Noni

Students I passed this custom element on too:
? & ?

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✗ Declined: The bolded part; this is a CE, I see people continuously make statements like these, however you should be able to create most CE solely from using your chakra. So in regards to the creation I think you should add earth and elaborate a bit more on how you use your chakra as currently I find it too shallow and simple. Normally I also would say that you would need to give more info about the characteristics of this element to make it differ from ice as all the methane stuff is rather limited, however considering tho moderate strengths I might let that slide.

 
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