[Tai] About time: Physical Enlightenment with McRazor-sama.

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Sivlagne catches the bandages from her new sensei and starts to wrap her hands and feet in the. Looking like a pseudo, female Rock Lee. After, she begins to perform what her sensei instructs.

Sivlagne darts at an incredible speed towards the dummy. When she gets close enough, she jumps, pushing off more so with her left leg and bringing up her right for a brutal attack. As she comes down at an angle, she smashes the dummy's face in with a super powerful and heavy kick with her dominant leg. She lands heavily and stands straight up, waiting for the next set of orders.
 

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Sivlagne falls asleep on the field with her head propped up on a dummy, drooling with a kunai in hand. Waiting for a sensei. Any sensei. She was going to sleep until an active sensei replies because she's bored out of her mind.
 

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Ryuko Matoi walks in, twirling her scissor blade, and bops her new students' head.

"Oi oi! No sleeping, lazy-ass!"

"Get up!"


She seemed kind of harsh, even looked obnoxious. She didn't take any shit.

"Ryuko M. I'm taking this training over, so deal with it. Got it? Good."

Tossing Sivlagne the D-rank scroll, Ryuko makes her read the next two jutsus:

(Konoha Reppū) - Leaf Gale
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points:20
Description: This technique is a good example of how even simple taijutsu can become a pre-eminently destructive, lethal technique. The attack is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body.

(Konoha Senpū) - Leaf Hurricane
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 20
Description: A taijutsu where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark connecting to the rib cage area. So originally the high kick is little more than a feint.

"They say you're some upcoming big shot, huh? I don't see it." she said almost mockingly, but this was really to challenge Sivlagne to try her best.

"Perform those two in a smooth, continuous combination on a clone I'll make. Be detailed, I expect nothing less."

Ryuko makes a clone of herself, looking equally as headstrong.

"Don't waste either of our precious times, but if you've got a question, ask it. Don't make yourself look stupid by making a mistake."

Stabbing her Scissor Blade through the ground, she leaned against it, waiting.
 

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Surprised at everything that happened but with a funny, emotionless face, still on the ground, getting bopped on the head and having scrolls thrown at her face, Sivlagne quickly hopped up and raises her finger at the indecent, rude sensei. Her eyes turned all black and black lines came running down her face, showing the Kekkei Genkai of the Kurama clan in action. As soon as this happened, in an instant, another sexy shinobi quickly appeared on the field to put her arm in front of Sivlagne, reminding her that there was something she needed to attend to.

"Sivlagne, you are needed at the village hidden in the Mist immediately. Don't leave the Mizukage waiting now." This new lady had such a blank expression. An expression of a killer. She was also very calm when speaking. Sivlagne nodded as her facial features returned back to normal and she quickly hopped away in the trees.

This kunoichi, in place of Sivlagne, walked up to the scrolls and picked them up. She read them with the utmost seriousness. Whilst still reading, she addresses Ryuko. "This looks moderately easy. I will be your new student in place of Sivlagne. But I'll be damned if you talk to me as you did her. I heard everything." She sets the scrolls back down and took up a certain fighting stance that looked rather... Aggressive.

After this, she squinted at the clone and rushed it with great, immense speed... She was... A member of the great Gyojin clan. Coming up to the clone, she performed an extremely heavy and lethal roundhouse kick, sending the clone flying through an entire tree and pinning her up against a second behind that.

(Konoha Reppū) - Leaf Gale
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points:20
Description: This technique is a good example of how even simple taijutsu can become a pre-eminently destructive, lethal technique. The attack is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body.

After that, in an instant, she rushed the clone again, appearing in front of it almost instantly. Virretta kicked the clones right in the face numerous times and then switched her stance, using her other leg to then kick the clones in the face and stomach and then switched her stance yet again, delivering one final devastating blow to the clone's rib area, ultimately making it poof away.

(Konoha Senpū) - Leaf Hurricane
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 20
Description: A taijutsu where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark connecting to the rib cage area. So originally the high kick is little more than a feint.

Slowly walking back to her sensei, she spoke. "Not my best work, but I don't think I'll make a bad student." All of this happened rather quickly and Virretta maintained a straight face.

"My name is Villetta, but I rather be called Virretta or simply V."

She took off one of her shinobi boots and turned it upside down, disposing of the dust and dirt that had easily gotten into her boot during her swift and precise movement. She puts it back on and places her hands in the pockets of her jacket, looking right at her sensei and waiting for the next order.
 

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Ryuko giggled upon seeing Viletta's rampage. It was almost cute how seriously she took herself.

"Wahhh... soooo intense. You're like my sister. Love her to death, though!" she stuck her tongue out playfully, with a hint of sarcasm.

"Last D-rank. A basic tackle where you ram into them and slam them downward to the ground. Easy!"

Looking excited, Ryuko formed another clone of herself and tossed an American football to said clone. Said clone began running towards the end of the field, intent on... scoring?

"Don't just stand there, V... get her! You wanna lose or somethin'?"

(Fōringu Hōyō) Falling Embrace
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 20
Description: The user runs at the enemy and tackles them, slamming them into the earth.
 

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Virretta looks at the bipolar kunoichi in a bit of disgust. Was she going to be strict or a lazy bum trying to act funny? Who knows? V sure didn't. Not even giving her the reward of a response, V looked on as the clone was formed and a ball was thrown into the clone's hands. Easily enough, before the clone even passed Virretta, swiftly and extremely violently did she tackle the clone upon the clone coming mere inches into Virretta's vicinity. The outcome was V being on top of the clone and the ball had been dropped and rolled a few feet away.

(Fōringu Hōyō) Falling Embrace
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 20
Description: The user runs at the enemy and tackles them, slamming them into the earth.

Virretta lifted her right arm up and arched her fingers with her thumb sticking out. After this, with great strength, she slammed her palm into the clone's nose "fracturing" it and making a great indentation in the clone's skull, poofing it away. She got up and walked over to the football and stepped on it with a dominant state of mind, giving off the vibe that she wasn't there to play mere games... The ball popped beneath her boot as she rested her left hand on her hip and gave Ryuko a nonchalant look.


"Next."
 

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(switching bios.)

"Heh. Ok, for the first C ran-GAHHH!!"

Out of nowhere, Ryuko was stabbed from behind, through her chest. Her look of disbelief transformed into horror as she was lifted up slightly and the blade drove deeper through her spine and out the other way. She helplessly struggled and twitched, but it was futile as her body quickly turned slack and her mouth foamed as her eyes rolled up. Virretta could see the large, stinger-shaped blade end was dripping with a purple poison.

It seemed the blade was attached to a... metal cable tail of sorts. With a sideways swing, the tail unceremoniously threw Ryuko off its edge, against a tree. Her body crumpled to the ground.

Emerging from the shadows, Sasori of the Red Sand appeared in his Sasori puppet form with an unbuttoned cloak as he retracted the stinger into his stomach cavity.

"Stupid girl didn't know her place. I was to be your replacement teacher. She ran ahead and left me to deal with a trap. I have no idea why, but she will make a nice human puppet for my collection."

His expression and tone of voice was cold and almost uncaring, with hints of class.

"I don't like Taijutsu much, but I know the basics and know how to deal with specialists that bumble around with their fists. No artistic value... no elegance. My only exception would be the Gentle Fist style. Goodness knows how many Hyuugas I've killed."

"C-ranks. First, squat and spring forward with a kick, aiming for the head. This brings your opponent upward into the air."

"For these exercises, you will be practicing on me. I don't feel pain... my form is artistic perfection. You hold back, I kill you."
he said matter-of-factly.


(Konoha Shōfū) – Leaf Rising Wind
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: This technique uses the entire body as a spring, by amassing power through taking a posture where the back of the body falls down. With this powerful taijutsu, the user kicks just above the head. Because the power of the kick from the ground is instantly converted into a blow, the enemy hit with this attack will be launched high into the sky.
 

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Virretta looked on with a blank stare just thinking "Why would he kill his own teammate?.." She thought it was outlandish, foolish, evil, however, she was not here to question the ways of other villages but to learn. She squatted down, ready to spring, but as soon as she sprung, a figure appeared and stuck their foot out, completely tripping Virretta thus making her fall on her face. It was Neopolitan of the Ganmi clan. As the dust settled down, she was clearly visible. Virretta responded.

"What is wrong with you?.." as she dusted herself off and stood up. She looked at her with a blank stare but she gave off a vibe that made it seemed like she just wanted to take Neo and throw her to the ground. The two were not friends. Merely acquaintances. Neo didn't talk much. All she responded with was a warm smile as usual. Neo walked up to Virretta and whispered something in her ear. On that note, Virretta nodded and quickly jumped away from the scene. As Neo overheard the way Sasori had explained the technique, she crouched down, looking straight at him with that grin on her face, knowing she would perform the technique perfectly. With full force, using all the power in her legs that she possibly could, she sprung up, rising and kicking Sasori in the chin in a devastating matter and almost disconnecting his head from his body, sending him flying a few feet away and into the air. As he fell, she pulls out her umbrella, putting it over her shoulder and her other hand on her hip in a cocky or egotistical manner.

(Konoha Shōfū) – Leaf Rising Wind
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: This technique uses the entire body as a spring, by amassing power through taking a posture where the back of the body falls down. With this powerful taijutsu, the user kicks just above the head. Because the power of the kick from the ground is instantly converted into a blow, the enemy hit with this attack will be launched high into the sky.
 

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With full force, using all the power in her legs that she possibly could, she sprung up, rising and kicking Sasori in the chin in a devastating matter and almost disconnecting his head from his body, sending him flying a few feet away and into the air. As he fell, she pulls out her umbrella, putting it over her shoulder and her other hand on her hip in a cocky or egotistical manner.
Really poor description, all the side RP stuff doesn't mean anything to me about this. The bold leaves a lot to be desired. Which foot are you using, left or right? Also the sprung up part, I don't understand much, like did you squat first and then spring up? Did you jump from place? You never mentioned how you had to allow your upper body to fall back to allow leverage and room for the kick to be directed upward. How would the opponent be hurt, yes its a devastating kick and it would seem their head is getting torn off, but what aftereffects happen? Would their jaw be crushed, dizziness from the kick to the head? A lot to be desired take these words into consideration and move forward.

(Asshō) - Pressure Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user strikes their opponent with a downwards thrust striking them to the floor.

Lets take this simple taijutsu attack. I want you to open your palms and strike the opponent in the torso, leaning over them as you deliver a downward palm strike, use your shoulders and make sure to keep your feet on the ground. Essentially, the opponents body should slam into the ground, head/upper body first. I consider this a great technique to be used as a counter to an opponent when they try to matrix out of my attacks by leaning back, or ducking down so I just palm the top of their head into the ground, good finishing combo as well.
 

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Really poor description, all the side RP stuff doesn't mean anything to me about this. The bold leaves a lot to be desired. Which foot are you using, left or right? Also the sprung up part, I don't understand much, like did you squat first and then spring up? Did you jump from place? You never mentioned how you had to allow your upper body to fall back to allow leverage and room for the kick to be directed upward. How would the opponent be hurt, yes its a devastating kick and it would seem their head is getting torn off, but what aftereffects happen? Would their jaw be crushed, dizziness from the kick to the head? A lot to be desired take these words into consideration and move forward.
Can you not read ^ o-o? Also, never address me like that again o-o. Now continue with the next jutsu.
 

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Flora, with great might, swings her right arm up to a great height. So much so, that she was tiptoeing. Towering over the dummy, she brings her right palm down onto the upper part of its chest area, near wear the collar bones would be, slamming it into the dummy and slamming the dummy down into the ground, also breaking the entire section of where her palm made contact, with her brute strength and might.

(Asshō) - Pressure Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user strikes their opponent with a downwards thrust striking them to the floor.
 

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Flora, with great might, swings her right arm up to a great height. So much so, that she was tiptoeing. Towering over the dummy, she brings her right palm down onto the upper part of its chest area, near wear the collar bones would be, slamming it into the dummy and slamming the dummy down into the ground, also breaking the entire section of where her palm made contact, with her brute strength and might.

(Asshō) - Pressure Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user strikes their opponent with a downwards thrust striking them to the floor.
Meh, I suppose this is adequate.. Do you want to continue with descriptions.. or?
 

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I will perform better. We can do whatever you prefer or think is best, sensei.
WILL YOU?

(Shōgekishō) - Upwards Attacking Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user strikes their opponent with an upwards thrust into the abdomen lifting them into the air.

Same thing as before but an upward angle. I use..

(Konoha Shōfū) – Leaf Rising Wind
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: This technique uses the entire body as a spring, by amassing power through taking a posture where the back of the body falls down. With this powerful taijutsu, the user kicks just above the head. Because the power of the kick from the ground is instantly converted into a blow, the enemy hit with this attack will be launched high into the sky.

Defend/evade this while using your new, learned technique.
 

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Yes, I will.

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As Flora sees her sensei squat for an incoming attack, Flora braces herself and watches his waist area as she could tell the power of his prepared attack will be coming from his waist down. As he sprung up, with near flawless precision and speed, Flora slides just slightly to the right of her sensei's kick and path of momentum, his left. A few blades of grass beneath her feet are uprooted by her swift movement as her feet shuffle across the ground. Just as the kick's trajectory is near finished, Flora squatted and brought down her right arm, preparing her attack. As she sprung up, she jammed her right palm into the the left side of her sensei's abdomen area, shifting the mere structure of his ribs in the specific area and she lifted herself, springing upward in the same movement, lifting her sensei off of the ground with amazing might, pushing him off her palm and up into the air a few feet. As this happens, Flora quickly steps back and stands straight, observing her sensei as he falls. He comes down from the decent height and slams to the ground bluntly.

(Shōgekishō) - Upwards Attacking Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user strikes their opponent with an upwards thrust into the abdomen lifting them into the air.

Two questions, sensei: 1: Was that a better performance? 2: Can you freeform dodge actual taijutsu techniques? I know to a degree you can pretty much freeform dodge anything freeform that your opponent throws at you, given you can keep up with what they do, etc. But since you cannot defend from actual ninjutsu attacks and such that are actual technique you post, does the same apply to taijutsu techs? Also, what about Kenjutsu, since it's basically the same thing but with a sword/weapons?
 
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Yes, I will.

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As Flora sees her sensei squat for an incoming attack, Flora braces herself and watches his waist area as she could tell the power of his prepared attack will be coming from his waist down. As he sprung up, with near flawless precision and speed, Flora slides just slightly to the right of her sensei's kick and path of momentum, his left. A few blades of grass beneath her feet are uprooted by her swift movement as her feet shuffle across the ground. Just as the kick's trajectory is near finished, Flora squatted and brought down her right arm, preparing her attack. As she sprung up, she jammed her right palm into the the left side of her sensei's abdomen area, shifting the mere structure of his ribs in the specific area and she lifted herself, springing upward in the same movement, lifting her sensei off of the ground with amazing might, pushing him off her palm and up into the air a few feet. As this happens, Flora quickly steps back and stands straight, observing her sensei as he falls. He comes down from the decent height and slams to the ground bluntly.

(Shōgekishō) - Upwards Attacking Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user strikes their opponent with an upwards thrust into the abdomen lifting them into the air.

Two questions, sensei: 1: Was that a better performance? 2: Can you freeform dodge actual taijutsu techniques? I know to a degree you can pretty much freeform dodge anything freeform that your opponent throws at you, given you can keep up with what they do, etc. But since you cannot defend from actual ninjutsu attacks and such that are actual technique you post, does the same apply to taijutsu techs? Also, what about Kenjutsu, since it's basically the same thing but with a sword/weapons?
Wow you're amazing Moxxi omg <3<3<3<3<3

And you can freeform dodge freeform techniques but as usual, techs are needed to dodge techniques. What the goal is here is for you to use your enemie's body placement against them.
 

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Okay. Got it.
DO YOU?

(Hōshō) - Crumbling Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user strikes the opponent with a forwarding palm thrust.

I use..

(Gangeki) - Rock Attack
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will strike their opponent with a strong punch to the chest

.. With my left arm to your chest.
 

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I do.

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Ready for the next attack, Neo scouts the oncoming attack and braces herself. As her sensei thrusts his left fist forward, aiming for her chest, she pulls her left arm back and swings it forward, shifting her entire body in the thin path of her arm thrust and switching her stance completely as her feet dig into the ground as they shift, making her sensei's punch barely miss her as she pushes her palm forward, striking her sensei's unprotected chin with her palm in a vicious manner but knowing her sensei could take it, she wasn't all too worried.

(Hōshō) - Crumbling Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user strikes the opponent with a forwarding palm thrust.
 
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