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"Very good, strong points. Here you go."

"A very simple technique now, where you will stomp the ground as you use your Earth chakra. This pushes up chuncks of rocks, that is blasted towards the opponent. Combined with a fire technique, it ignites the rock, and causes them to explode upon contact with the opponent. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, a weird hybrid technique. You will start off by forming four hand seals, and slamming your hand onto the ground. This causes a pillar of Earth to rise from the ground, however, the pilar is given an electrical charge. It releases it at short range around it, and shocking anyone in short range vicinity of the electrically charged pillar. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.
As Deans clone runs towards him Keji stomps the ground using his earth chakra he sends several rocks flying at the clone. Immediately after he throws several chakra infused shuriken into the rocks. He then ignites the shuriken with a mental command causing the rocks to explode upon contact with the clone. As the send clone appears Keji weaves four hand seals and slams his hand on the ground causing a pillar of earth to rise from it under the clone. As the pillar rises it starts to produce a short range electrical discharge that shocks the clone to death.

"Advantages and disadvantages. First jutsu is that it is a multi range jutsu with zero seals, it also has the capability to explode when combined with a fire jutsu. It only down fall that I can see is the stomping which can possible give you away if against an Uchiha or taijutsu specialist. As for the second I like that it has a dual one of which is it's ability to create distance between you and an enemy and second is the electrical discharge. The negative of this jutsu is that if you miss or the enemy isn't close enough to the pillar it was a wasted move."
 

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"Awesome job, nice combo. Here you go."


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will stomp the ground to lift of chunks of rock which he will then send at the opponent. Then, by using a fire style technique, he will cause them to ignite into burning rock chunks which explode on contact with the enemy.




Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid (Short for electric bolts)
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will make a set of four hand seals and then will place their hand on the ground to create a pillar of earth to rise up from the ground. This pillar is then given a electrical charge that causes electric bolts to be emitted from the pillar up to short range from the pillar, shocking any targets in the vicinity.



"Now, a weird and oodly useful technique where you will focus your Earth based chakra, in order to create two 2x2 meter cubes, which rotate around you as the are created from the very earth. These cubes spin around you, to defend against attacks, through hand motions, and through mometum, can be launched towards the opponent. Eah cube carries the strength of a C rank technique, and combined, it makes them B rank. Pretty cool. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, form the Ram → Dog → Rat hand seals, and manipulate your Earth based chakra, as you place your hand onto the ground. This allows you to create a circular arena around you and your opponent, spanning 15 meters around you, and is 4 meters in height. Ince the wall takes the damage of a C rank technique, it disappears in a puff of smoke. So its basically useless, and just cool for dramatic effect. Use it against my Gladiator themed clones."

Dean creates a clone that dashes towards Kenji and screams;

"ARE YOU NOT ENTERTAIIIINNNNEEEDD?!?!?!"

Referring to one of the most famous quotes, his clone based mind could think of.
 

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"Awesome job, nice combo. Here you go."
"Now, a weird and oodly useful technique where you will focus your Earth based chakra, in order to create two 2x2 meter cubes, which rotate around you as the are created from the very earth. These cubes spin around you, to defend against attacks, through hand motions, and through mometum, can be launched towards the opponent. Eah cube carries the strength of a C rank technique, and combined, it makes them B rank. Pretty cool. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, form the Ram → Dog → Rat hand seals, and manipulate your Earth based chakra, as you place your hand onto the ground. This allows you to create a circular arena around you and your opponent, spanning 15 meters around you, and is 4 meters in height. Ince the wall takes the damage of a C rank technique, it disappears in a puff of smoke. So its basically useless, and just cool for dramatic effect. Use it against my Gladiator themed clones."

Dean creates a clone that dashes towards Kenji and screams;

"ARE YOU NOT ENTERTAIIIINNNNEEEDD?!?!?!"

Referring to one of the most famous quotes, his clone based mind could think of.
Smiling from the praise he had received Keji waited for next instruction. After the Dean clone appears Keji focuses his chakra forming two cubes to appear and circle around himself. As the clone begins it's assault Keji points one arm towards the clone. this sends the cubes flying but in a manner that resembled a jet's aerial maneuvers. One cube comes in from the side crashing into the clones face and the second right behind it resembling what Madara did to the shinobi alliance but on a much smaller scale. As the clone dies from multiple skull fractures Dean goes on to talk about the next justu. Once finished he creates several gladiator themed clones in return Keji weaves the ram dog rat seals and slams his hand on the ground creating a arena around the group. When one clone shouts "ARE YOU NOT ENTERTAIIIINNNNEEEDD?!?!?!" all the clones begin to charge in return I create two more cubes and place my on them. Using doton no jutsu I turn the cubes into blades and proceed to draw my katana and proceed to cut my way through all the clones. After finishing the last clone I replied "Entertained? Spartacus, Crixus, and Gannicus proved more of a challenge."

Keji then turns to Dean. "Advantages and disadvantages. The first is multi functional it provides both an automatic defense and a controlled assault. It also gives you a wide variety of strategic way to attack an opponent. I don't really see a fault in this technique but you may know something I don't. I do wish it had automatic offensive abilities though. The second jutsu is like you said basically useless and just for dramatic effect. Maybe just maybe trap an opponent or multiple opponets for a brief moment to breform a combination/counter attack but other than that probably not going to use in battle."
 

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"Great job, here you go."


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user focuses his chakra and channels into the earth to create 2 large floating rock cubes 2 meters squared. The cubes rotate around the user to either defend him from incoming attacks (he needs to direct them using hand movements towards the attack and each cube has a C-Rank strength) or, through using the momentum created by the rotation, be flung at the enemy with incredible speed.




Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After first performing the required hand seals Ram → Dog → Rat the user then places their hand on the ground. This causes a circular arena to surround the target, spanning 15 meters around him and being 4 meters high. The floor, the walls and the ceiling are all chakra reenforced and the user can also lock himself inside if he so pleases. If these prison receives any damage above C-Rank, they disappear in a puff of smoke.



"Alright, now, the last two B ranks. First one starts off by forming the Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse → Tiger hand seals, and manipulating your Earth based chakra. You will then slam your hands onto the ground, and cause the Earth to erupt upwards, or downwards, to create trenches or barricades. A pretty cool technique. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, the last B rank. Use your Earth based chakra, to create three massive boulders before you. You will then launch these rocks towards the opponent, and cause them to come from different directions, and when the rocks smash into each other, they release segments of Earth which are also capable of damaging the opponent. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.
 

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"Great job, here you go."
"Alright, now, the last two B ranks. First one starts off by forming the Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse → Tiger hand seals, and manipulating your Earth based chakra. You will then slam your hands onto the ground, and cause the Earth to erupt upwards, or downwards, to create trenches or barricades. A pretty cool technique. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, the last B rank. Use your Earth based chakra, to create three massive boulders before you. You will then launch these rocks towards the opponent, and cause them to come from different directions, and when the rocks smash into each other, they release segments of Earth which are also capable of damaging the opponent. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.
After Dean speaks he summons a clone that does it's usual thing. Keji then weaves rabbit boar rat horse hand seals and slamming both hands onto the earth to forcibly descend creating a trench. The clone stops and Dean proceeds with the next instruction and summons another clone. Keji does as instructed and creates three boulders in front of him seeing the clones begin to work together to cross the trench he begins his assault. The first boulder is launched directly at the clones the second right behind it while the third is sent towards the edge of the trench. As the first approaches the clones it begins to slow but distracted by this they do not notice the seconds increased speed until after it collides with the first causing a barrage of stone to hit them. Damage from the assault the clones smirk but don't see the third boulder crashing into their side of the trench causing it to collapse. This sends the clones to the bottom of the trench. Keji then drops a few hundred paper bombs in the trench and with a mental command cause them to explode killing the clones.

"Advantages and diadvantages. The first justu seems like it is a pure defensive jutsu by this I mean its ability to easily make trenches or defensive barricades that are normally used to defend bases in wars. Only down fall I can see is other then defensive fortifications it has no offensive capabilities and that the barricades can probably be taken down by raiton jutsu. As for the second jutsu it can be used in both offense and defense if the user wills it and can preform it's own combinations thanks to being contriled by chakra. Only down side to this would be raiton but even then I think it may still be effective."
 

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"Awesome, here you go."


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After forming the necessary hand seals Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse → Tiger , the user slams their hands into the ground which causes the earth to erupt upwards or downwards below their target's feet. This technique can also effectively create barricades by creating large trenches or linear elevations that would take quite some time for a regular person to surmount




Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage poinnts: 40
Description: The user manipulates their chakra creating three huge rocks infront of them. The user will then unleash the three huge rocks coming from three different angles from infront of the enemy to smash into each other causing segements to start protruding from the collision and damaging the opponent.



"Alright, now the A ranks. First off, a pretty useful technique where you will use your Earth based chakra and then slam your hands onto the ground. You will then focus your Earth based chakra into a pre-existing source of Earth, and create multiple walls of Earth, that act as a great defense against incoming attacks. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, bite your thumb and form the Boar → Monkey → Bird → Monkey → Ram hand seals, and then proceed to slam your hand onto a pre-existing scroll. This scroll contains designs of a terrain, that you had drawn previously, to immediately start forming, through rising and changing Earthen structures. For example, change the environment into that of a maze, or even a massive canyon. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.
 

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"Awesome, here you go."
"Alright, now the A ranks. First off, a pretty useful technique where you will use your Earth based chakra and then slam your hands onto the ground. You will then focus your Earth based chakra into a pre-existing source of Earth, and create multiple walls of Earth, that act as a great defense against incoming attacks. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, bite your thumb and form the Boar → Monkey → Bird → Monkey → Ram hand seals, and then proceed to slam your hand onto a pre-existing scroll. This scroll contains designs of a terrain, that you had drawn previously, to immediately start forming, through rising and changing Earthen structures. For example, change the environment into that of a maze, or even a massive canyon. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.
Eager to learn these new ranks Keji pulls out a scroll and does a quick drawing and throws it in the air. As Dean summons the first clone Keji slams his hands onto the ground creating multiple earth walls separating the two. He then uses his chakra to slip through the walls and once he reaches the first he places his hand on it. Using doton no jutsu he sends a spiked column into Deans clone. As Dean creates another clone Keji's previously airborne scroll floats down in front of him. Biting his thumb he weaves boar monkey bird and ram hand seals and proceeds to slam his hand on the scroll. This causes the earth around him to terror form into the drawing on the scroll. This traps the clone in an artificial structure with no escape. Keji then proceeds with part two of training and turns to Dean.

"Advantages and disadvantages. The first is a great defense like you said, having that many walls can easily defend against a wide range of frontal assaults but that brings me to it's down fall. While I can summon a multitude of walls in one direction a attack that can be controlled by the users chakra could easily go around them. The second jutsu is clever in which you essentially play temporary god with the landscaping. I can only see a few down sides to this one being using it without potential team members knowing of it which may cause them to get trapped of killed but other then that it seems like a pretty nice jutsu."

Keji then hands the his scroll to Dean. "You may want to release you clone technique because I don't think he will ever want to leave that area."

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Kenji knew more than what he was saying, as he handed Dean a scroll with questionable information on it. Dean released the clone, and smiled. He was indeed becoming a full fledged shinobi.

"Well done, Kenji. You surprised me there. Here you go."


Rank: A
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Like the parent technique, it creates a reinforced wall of earth to be used as a defensive mechanism. However, the technique works in a different manner. Using a pre-existing source of earth, it allows the user to create multiple walls of earth, further fortifying their defense instead of forming a single wall, by slamming his hands on the ground.




Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: The user will bite his thumb and perform the Boar → Monkey → Bird → Monkey → Ram hand seals, slamming their hand into a scroll on the ground. This technique is a combination of the Summoning Technique and an Earth Release technique. The user summons a large amount of rock from a giant canyon which, during the process of being summoned through this technique, he shapes into a design he outlined previously in a scroll. This allows the user to change the topography of the map and create any earthen feature he needs from pillars to gorges, canyons, mountains or simply plains. If the user wants to or is defeated, the alteration ends as any summon eventually does. Additionally he can use (Doton: Dimenshon Fuudo Shihai) - Earth Release: Dimension Topography Control at any point to change the design and alter the summoned terrain.
Note: can only be used once per battle



"Now, a follow up to the Wheel of Fortune technique and also used after it. You will start off by forming the Boar → Monkey hand seals, and slamming your hand onto the ground. As you focus your Earth based chakra, you will change the design of the battlefield. This can be done up to three times per fight. Use it against my clone, to disorient him, and confuse him."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, one of the most used Earth techniques around. You will focus your Earth based chakra, and expel from your mouth an Earthen material, which forms into a massive stone golem. This golem is capable of tearing off limbs with its immense strength, and even devour other techniques by crushing it with its mouth. One can even use this technique when above an opponent, in order to drop down upon them, and cause great damage as you do fall. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that stands proud, knowing that it will decimated.
 

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Kenji knew more than what he was saying, as he handed Dean a scroll with questionable information on it. Dean released the clone, and smiled. He was indeed becoming a full fledged shinobi.

"Well done, Kenji. You surprised me there. Here you go."

"Now, a follow up to the Wheel of Fortune technique and also used after it. You will start off by forming the Boar → Monkey hand seals, and slamming your hand onto the ground. As you focus your Earth based chakra, you will change the design of the battlefield. This can be done up to three times per fight. Use it against my clone, to disorient him, and confuse him."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, one of the most used Earth techniques around. You will focus your Earth based chakra, and expel from your mouth an Earthen material, which forms into a massive stone golem. This golem is capable of tearing off limbs with its immense strength, and even devour other techniques by crushing it with its mouth. One can even use this technique when above an opponent, in order to drop down upon them, and cause great damage as you do fall. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that stands proud, knowing that it will decimated.
Keji smiles back at Dean and weaves boar monkey hand seals and follows by slamming his hand on the ground creating various corridors. Keji repeats this two more times creating an elaborate maze no with no escape. As the second clone is formed keji uses doton no jutsu to launch himself in the air. He then focuses his earth chakra into his mouth and expels a golem. Using his chakra he attaches to the golem as it descends onto the battle field. Once it lands the area including the maze is utterly destroyed. Standing on top of the golem.

"Advantages and disadvantages. The first is basically the same as wheel of fortune minus the pre-drawn scroll. The only down side to this is that it can only be used 3x per-battle but combined with wheel of fortune possibilities could be endless. As for this golem this is just one big advantage in my book. The only downside I see to it is it's massiveness making it one big target for higher ranking jutsu to hit and destroy."
 

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"Awesome usage, here you go. As for the Golem, I forgot to mention, it needs constant chakra input to be animated, thus your hand should stay on it. Once devoid of chakra, it becomes like a massive statue. Here you go."


Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:This jutsu is used after Earth Style: Wheel of Fortune. The user will do the Boar → Monkey hand seals, slamming his hand on the ground and focusing his earth chakra. As he does this, he can change the design of the original technique. He can do this 3 times per battle.




Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user expels a large creature composed of stone from his mouth. The rock golem has a fair amount of stamina and brute strength, being able to bite and tear off flesh with its mouth and hands respectively. If used from above the target then the user can use the earth golem to drop down onto the opponent like a bomb and crush them. The golem can also devour earth structures and other enemy attacks, biting and chewing on it.



"Now, a technique used by almost everyone. It starts off by forming the Boar →Tiger hand seals, and manipulating your Earth based chakra. This allows you to change the ground beneath the opponent, into a thick, viscous, non-flammable swamp. The swamp can be huge, and extremely deep, and due to the chakra imbued in it, it will cause the opponent to sink very fast, and leave them drowning. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, form the Dog → Ram → Boar hand seals. You will then manipulate your Earth based chakra, to cause a wall to rise up in front of you. This wall is then manipulated to cascade into mud, which aims to ensnare the opponent. Use it against my clone.

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.
 
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"Awesome usage, here you go. As for the Golem, I forgot to mention, it needs constant chakra input to be animated, thus your hand should stay on it. Once devoid of chakra, it becomes like a massive statue. Here you go."

"Now, a technique used by almost everyone. It starts off by forming the Boar →
Tiger hand seals, and manipulating your Earth based chakra. This allows you to change the ground beneath the opponent, into a thick, viscous, non-flammable swamp. The swamp can be huge, and extremely deep, and due to the chakra imbued in it, it will cause the opponent to sink very fast, and leave them drowning. Use it against my clone."


Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, form the Dog → Ram → Boar hand seals. You will then manipulate your Earth based chakra, to cause a wall to rise up in front of you. This wall is then manipulated to cascade into mud, which aims to ensnare the opponent. Use it against my clone.

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.
"Understood sensei." Keji then awaits. Dean summon a clone once Keji notices the clone appear he weaves the boar and tiger seals then by manipulating his chakra into the ground beneath him turning it into a swamp. Because of the swamp the clone slowly begins to sink into the swamp and slowly drown. "That kinda makes me feel bad." After this Dean summons yet another clone that uses its chakra to run across the swamp. Hear the feet splash upon the water Keji weaves dog, ram, boar hand seals summoning a wall in front of himself. The clone notices the wall and begins to run up it but when he gets half way up the wall begins to turn into mud trapping the clone. Keji then releases the jutsu causing the wall, mud, and clone to fall into the swamp and so the clone sank to join his ally. "This is a really depressing way to go." Keji releases the swamp jutsu and turns back to Dean.

"Advantages and disadvantages. The first jutsu seems to be very useful in defending against ground based jutsu such as hiding like a mole technique. Also combined with wheel of fortune and/or dimension topography control combinations for catching an opponent in a trap are near endless. The second jutsu is a great defensive technique with a dual purpose of ensnaring the enemy but raiton jutsu like chidori may cause problems unless you dodge before it pierced you meaning the second purpose of snaring the enemy would still work."
 

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"Very good, and remember, in battle, the swamp alters the battlefield till its over, since it literally changes the terrain, like most Earth techniques. Here you go."

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.




Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a sequence of three hand seals Dog → Ram → Boar the user then creates a small wall of earth to rise up from the ground infront of them and cause a mud slide to form from the wall and directs it towards the enemy target/s to try engulf them.



"Okay, now, the next technique starts off by manipulating your Earth based chakra. You will then slam your hands onto the ground, and cause the ground in front of you, to form into a loose like quality. A landslide is then created, and directed towards the opponent, in the form of a wave. Pretty cool to stop projectiles, and the like. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, manipulate your Earth based chakra, and cause massive spikes of Earth to emerge from beneath the opponent. These earth formations are so big, they are capable of impaling even large summons. Due to their size, they can easily be recognized by the tremors they cause when they emerge. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.
 

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"Very good, and remember, in battle, the swamp alters the battlefield till its over, since it literally changes the terrain, like most Earth techniques. Here you go."

"Okay, now, the next technique starts off by manipulating your Earth based chakra. You will then slam your hands onto the ground, and cause the ground in front of you, to form into a loose like quality. A landslide is then created, and directed towards the opponent, in the form of a wave. Pretty cool to stop projectiles, and the like. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, manipulate your Earth based chakra, and cause massive spikes of Earth to emerge from beneath the opponent. These earth formations are so big, they are capable of impaling even large summons. Due to their size, they can easily be recognized by the tremors they cause when they emerge. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.
Keji begins to mold earth chakra into his hands. After he had focused enough he slammed his hands onto the ground turning the ground in front of him into liquid mud. This mud then began moving towards the clone that Dean had summoned and eventually turning into horizontal landslide like wave which hits the clone carrying it off into the distance. Dean creates another clone. As Deans clone begins running Keji manipulates the earth in front of him causing large spikes to emerge in attempt to impale the clone. As this is happening Keji readies various kunai and shuriken just in case the clone attempts to evade the spikes.

"Advantages and disadvantages. The first technique is a great defense and can also create distance between you and the enemy while providing a mud source for mud based jutsu, but I would have like if it was omni-directional. As for the second this provides a huge advantage when fighting summoned creatures but due to the massive tremors cased by the jutsu I feel that skilled ninja will be able to anticipate and dodge the technique."
 

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"Due to their size, they are quite difficult to dodge though, nonetheless, great job as usual. Here you go."


Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create the earth infront of them to turn to a lose like quality by slamming his hands on the ground to create a landslide that is directed towards the enemy target in the form of a wave of earth.




Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This jutsu causes gigantic pillars of rock to forcefully emerge from the ground. This is a even greater scaled Earth Release: Rising Spikes and is large enough to impale a summoning technique.



"Now for the next one, you will slam your hands onto the ground and use your Earth based chakra. This allows you to lower or raise the ground beneath the opponent, or yourself, depending on the situation. The greatest depth, or height, is 20 meters, either up or down. This allows you to avoid linear techniques by going downwards, or use it, to trap the opponent in a hole. Going up, also allows you to evade a massive amount of water perhaps, or simply to cause your opponent to crash into a projectile which is already moving down upon him. It has a variety of uses, and can be done quite fast. The area raised, or dropped, isn't changed in terms of its terrain like plants, and people on it. Use it creatively."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, a technique where you will form the Snake hand seal, and then, by using your Earth chakra, anything you touch will drastically increase in weight. The weight of the object can be increased for up to 10 times, its original weight. A pretty cool technique, as it can be used to add damage to techniques, by increasing their weight, and thus, their momentum. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.
 

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"Due to their size, they are quite difficult to dodge though, nonetheless, great job as usual. Here you go."

"Now for the next one, you will slam your hands onto the ground and use your Earth based chakra. This allows you to lower or raise the ground beneath the opponent, or yourself, depending on the situation. The greatest depth, or height, is 20 meters, either up or down. This allows you to avoid linear techniques by going downwards, or use it, to trap the opponent in a hole. Going up, also allows you to evade a massive amount of water perhaps, or simply to cause your opponent to crash into a projectile which is already moving down upon him. It has a variety of uses, and can be done quite fast. The area raised, or dropped, isn't changed in terms of its terrain like plants, and people on it. Use it creatively."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, a technique where you will form the Snake hand seal, and then, by using your Earth chakra, anything you touch will drastically increase in weight. The weight of the object can be increased for up to 10 times, its original weight. A pretty cool technique, as it can be used to add damage to techniques, by increasing their weight, and thus, their momentum. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.
Keji request that Dean send both clones and as they run towards him he waits. Once the they enter mid range Keji slams his hand on the ground manipulating the earth with his chakra causes the ground to drop around the clones. He then uses doton no jutsu to launch himself 10 meters in the air (now 30 meters above clones) and expels a stone golem from his mouth. Now on top of the golem Keji weaves the snake seal and places his hand on the golem making it 10 times heavier causing it to descend much faster. Keji then orders the golem to turn into a cannon ball shape and proceeds to jump off letting the golem crush the two clones while causing a cave in.

Approaching Dean "Advantages and disadvantages. The first technique you have already provided all of the advantages but one disadvantage I see is that if I were to descend couldn't I be vulnerable to certain doton and suiton jutsu? As for the second also like you said the extra weight and momentum would effectively increase the users damage input but I have a question that could be both advantage and disadvantage if true. Does the added weight slow down/make the object slower?"
 

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"You are right on both accounts, very good. Here you go."


Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user slams his hands on the ground and lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.




Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A (up to +20 if used to add damage)
Description: The user will perform the Snake handseal and touch a given target (he needs to use his hands in most cases but can release the technique through his whole body if needed) for a small time frame. Upon doing so, he'll use the earth chakra to increase the weight of the target drastically. The technique can increase the targets weight up to 10 times. One interesting side effect of the technique is that when its used on wood based techniques (such as Zetsu's spore clones or normal wood), the infusion of large amounts of earth chakra into it will actually petrify the target in addition to increasing its weight. A similar effect can be achieved in other earthen materials such as mud. The user can also add weight to a given attack (if feasible) to increase both momentum and impact force, effectively adding damage to it.
Note: The weight change lasts 2 turns or until countered.



"Now, the next technique is basically the counterpart of the Added Weight Technique. This technique uses the same principle, in order to drastically lower the weight of an object. You will once more use your hands as the medium for the Earth chakra to travel through, and whatever object you are touching will decrease in weight for up to 10 times less than what it had originally weighed. In this case, things would go faster, but carry less momentum or power behind them. It lasts two tuns, or until countered. Use it creatively against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, the last A rank (there is one we skipped, cause you don't have clones). Manipulate your Earth based chakra, and release an earthly material from your mouth towards the opponent. This material will then form into a large rock slab, which travels with great speed, and power. With impact on the ground, the earth is splintered, and the opponent decimated when hit. An overall straightforward attack. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.
 

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"You are right on both accounts, very good. Here you go."

"Now, the next technique is basically the counterpart of the Added Weight Technique. This technique uses the same principle, in order to drastically lower the weight of an object. You will once more use your hands as the medium for the Earth chakra to travel through, and whatever object you are touching will decrease in weight for up to 10 times less than what it had originally weighed. In this case, things would go faster, but carry less momentum or power behind them. It lasts two tuns, or until countered. Use it creatively against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, the last A rank (there is one we skipped, cause you don't have clones). Manipulate your Earth based chakra, and release an earthly material from your mouth towards the opponent. This material will then form into a large rock slab, which travels with great speed, and power. With impact on the ground, the earth is splintered, and the opponent decimated when hit. An overall straightforward attack. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.
As Deans first clone appears Keji smiles. Weaving the snake seal he crosses his arms lowering his weight. As the clone enters close range to attack Keji vanishes due to being 10x lighter his speed increased. After his evade Keji weaves another snake seal but this time it turns his body almost a pure black color. He then dashes back towards the clone and mid stride leaps arms extended. Keji weaves the snake seal one last time and quickly touches his arm just before grabbing the clones shoulders. This increased his weight and momentum just before he lands a knee into the spine of the clone. This completely bent the clone around backwards around Keji's knee and obliterated it's spine causing the clone to die instantly. (Speed from light weight + momentum from added weight + added damage from domu) As Deans second clone runs towards Keji he begins to mold chakra into his mouth. Keji wait for the clone to exit mid range and enter close range and at that moment releases his jutsu spitting out mud and forming a stone wall that hits the clone dead on killing it.

"Advantages of the first jutsu is that it makes you faster and it's ability would be able to be used to weaken enemies physical based attacks. The down side to this is that if used on oneself they while being able to evade have less damage output. The second jutsu like you said is very straight forward and has devastating power behind it but I get the feeling that you most catch the opponent of guard to successfully land this technique or risk it being dodged. I also think it will be vulnerable to a rank or above raiton jutsu."
 

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"Great job, nice usage of the technique by the way. Here you go."


Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A (up to -20 if used to boost speed of a physical attack)
Description: Contrary to its counterpart (the Earth Release: Added-Weight Rock Technique), instead of making the target heavier, this technique makes it much lighter, though still using the same principle and mechanics. The user will make direct contact with the given target (through his hands), infusing them with earth chakra and lowering their weight drastically. The technique can lower a targets weight up to 10 times less than it originally had. This allows freer manipulation of the affected objects, which would normally carry considerably more weight and as such, require a greater amount of exertion to move. The technique can be used on the user or other shinobi to increase their speed, but as a consequence of using it this way, it results in the decrease of the physical force of their blows. The same principle applies if used on a physical attack wich will be faster but will carry less momentum and as such, less physical damage. It doesn't change the "strength" of binding techniques (like Sand Release), where the user is manipulating a dynamic element but will decrease the impact damage of techniques that rely on it.
Note: The initial effects last for 2 turns or until countered.




Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will knead their earth chakra into their stomach and then release from their mouth earthly material that then forms into a large slab of rock, that can travel with incredible force. On impact with the ground the slab forces the earth to splinter and jab anyone caught in the vicinity.



"Now, the first S rank technique is merely an advanced version of the A rank one. You will manipulate your Earth based chakra and slam your hands onto the ground. This allows you to freely raise or lower the ground beneath the opponent, or yourself (if needed be for supplementary). In this version, you can raise or lower the ground up to 100 meters. Due to the speed, it rises or lowers, it pins the opponent to the ground. Due to the amount of chakra used for this technique, it can only be used twice. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, form the Horse → Dog → Bird → Ox → Snake hand seals. You will then manipulate your Earth based chakra to cause a massive dragon to emerge from the ground. The dragon would then blast towards the opponent, and cause devastating effects as it can crash into the opponent. You have to keep contact with the dragon to keep it active, unfortunately. Its nice to use it as an alternative source for Earth techniques. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"Lastly, slam your hands onto the ground and send a large amount of Earth based chakra into the ground before you. This allows you to cause the earth to forcefully bring up whatever from within it. It looks like a volcano, and brings up rocks and debris. Someone once used this to bring up materials from a previous failed swamp that I had done. The technique, in itself, is fairly open to interpretation. Nonetheless, use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.
 

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"Great job, nice usage of the technique by the way. Here you go."


Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A (up to -20 if used to boost speed of a physical attack)
Description: Contrary to its counterpart (the Earth Release: Added-Weight Rock Technique), instead of making the target heavier, this technique makes it much lighter, though still using the same principle and mechanics. The user will make direct contact with the given target (through his hands), infusing them with earth chakra and lowering their weight drastically. The technique can lower a targets weight up to 10 times less than it originally had. This allows freer manipulation of the affected objects, which would normally carry considerably more weight and as such, require a greater amount of exertion to move. The technique can be used on the user or other shinobi to increase their speed, but as a consequence of using it this way, it results in the decrease of the physical force of their blows. The same principle applies if used on a physical attack wich will be faster but will carry less momentum and as such, less physical damage. It doesn't change the "strength" of binding techniques (like Sand Release), where the user is manipulating a dynamic element but will decrease the impact damage of techniques that rely on it.
Note: The initial effects last for 2 turns or until countered.




Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will knead their earth chakra into their stomach and then release from their mouth earthly material that then forms into a large slab of rock, that can travel with incredible force. On impact with the ground the slab forces the earth to splinter and jab anyone caught in the vicinity.



"Now, the first S rank technique is merely an advanced version of the A rank one. You will manipulate your Earth based chakra and slam your hands onto the ground. This allows you to freely raise or lower the ground beneath the opponent, or yourself (if needed be for supplementary). In this version, you can raise or lower the ground up to 100 meters. Due to the speed, it rises or lowers, it pins the opponent to the ground. Due to the amount of chakra used for this technique, it can only be used twice. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, form the Horse → Dog → Bird → Ox → Snake hand seals. You will then manipulate your Earth based chakra to cause a massive dragon to emerge from the ground. The dragon would then blast towards the opponent, and cause devastating effects as it can crash into the opponent. You have to keep contact with the dragon to keep it active, unfortunately. Its nice to use it as an alternative source for Earth techniques. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"Lastly, slam your hands onto the ground and send a large amount of Earth based chakra into the ground before you. This allows you to cause the earth to forcefully bring up whatever from within it. It looks like a volcano, and brings up rocks and debris. Someone once used this to bring up materials from a previous failed swamp that I had done. The technique, in itself, is fairly open to interpretation. Nonetheless, use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.
As Keji return's to Deans teachings stronger he listens. Once finished Dean summons three clone that rush Keji. Confident in his new skills Keji slams his hands on the ground and by manipulating the earth beneath the clones causing the ground to raise them up 100 meters in the air. Keji then dashes towards the now raised earth while weaving the Horse, dog, bird, ox, snake seals and slams his hands onto the base of it. This causes a dragon to emerge from base and spiral all the way to the top and once at the top it hits the clones sending them even further into the air. Once Keji sees the clones sore he begins manipulating his doton chakra in the raised earth one last time causing lava from the earth to raise up through it turning his first jutsu into a active volcano. Keji retreats to a safe distance as he watches the clones fall into the mouth of the newly formed volcano just before it erupts.

"Advantages and disadvatages. The first technique shares the same advantages and dis advantages as it's a rank counter part but with the increased speed you can stop an enemies jutsu or movements and the distance it can be raised or lifted has increased x5. The second jutsu advantages are it's speed and manueverability by which I am comparing it to the golem even though they share the same weakness with having to have ones hand place on it to stay active. The final jutsu can be very creative since all kinds of things lie underneath the earths crust for example coal, oil, butane..." Keji coughs when he say's that "...and much more. The only default to it would be having to fight on a field with no earth such as water."
 

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"Awesome job, and that Butane reference U_U. Anyway, here you go."


Rank: S
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique grants the user the ability to freely lower or raise the terrain within a specific area surrounding them, in a similar manner to its parent technique, albeit on a much larger scale. The user will slam his hands on the ground which he can then lower or raise the ground up to 100 meters in a large section. The rise will be fast enough to pin enemies to the ground, restricting their movements as they struggle to get up and the drop will be fast enough to leave almost all enemies without a footing (albeit not airborne). Because of the large chakra needed to alter such a large area of the terrain, the user will be able to use it only a limited number of times.
Note: Can only be used twice.




Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Horse → Dog → Bird → Ox → Snake will create a large dragon of earth erupt from the ground and direct it towards the enemy with devastating force. This technique much resembles the Water Release: Water Dragon technique.




Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: With the technique, the user can bring up something from deep within the ground by slamming his hands on the ground and manipulating it to forcefully make whatever is contained in it to be expelled upwards. The result of this technique has the appearance of an erupting volcano and can vary in size depending on the users needs.



"Now for the next three. First, you will form the Tiger → Ram → Rat hand seals and slam your hands onto the ground. You will then manipulate your Earth based chakra, this will allow you to raise two massive rock formations that close in on the opponent from opposing sides, to crush them in between. This technique dwarfed even the Demonic Statue of Outer Path, and has to be used at least mid range from you. Its huge, its slow but its deadly. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Kenji.

"After that, use your Earth chakra to cause a burst of rock to form from your skin, and create an outer armor of rock, that's a bit bulky. Anyway, this creates a perfect defense, and one can even form some weapons from the armor itself, like a make shift sword or spear of Earth. Whilst the armor is sustained, only Earth based techniques can be used, and the armor can also be manipulated to only form at a specific part of your body, if needed. Anyway, use it to tank this!"

Dean releases a massive blast of Water.

"Lastly, basically just use your Earth based chakra to form a bigger, better Stone Golem. Slamming your hands onto the ground allows you to form it from the very Earth. The Golem is sustained as long as you keep your hand on it, or if you fuel chakra through the ground for it. This means you can't use any chakra related technique, whilst the Golem is active. It can reach heights of 30 meters, and is capable of moving quite fast, despite its size. Use it against my...40 clones ._."

Dean creates 40 clones (can't really do this) *cough* and unleashes them upon Kenji.
 
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