Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

[KCMNaruto]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

I lost it when the plot move toward Hamura that was RDS Shinigamixd

at least this could be entertaining and give a room for development .
Also I encourage you to skip/scan through rest of my 10 predictions which were about Kaguya: 680-690 ;P

 

[SUPERDEADLYKING]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

.....meow

 

[SatanicGod]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Yes it still is, because if I could do it then there is no reason why Kishi couldn't. It is not easy I agree but this is far from impossible. Kishi was just lazy or forgot to make shedule with chapters ahead so he would split material in equal parts .



Please elaborate why not ?

use comparisions and arguments


Too bad, because you may missed good arguments but your points stay valid .



that poor approaching way to such topic. I do not approve it.

Well for one from where you started off ONLY Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, Kakashi, Obito, and Kaguya/BZ were in the lava dimension, in the canon up until where your scene starts, those were the only people in the lava dimension. Yet, you made it so that somehow the Kages were there too, then the parts were the Edo's were able to regenerate after getting hit from Kaguya made no sense, since Obito had nullified that ability of theirs earlier...
Then the 512 strikes is actually impossible since there are only 361 tenketsu in the human body, and moves in that category strike at the tenketsu, not just random hits.

 

[Natsu Shazneel]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Couldn't read due to how it was written.

 

[KCMNaruto]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Well for one from where you started off ONLY Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, Kakashi, Obito, and Kaguya/BZ were in the lava dimension, in the canon up until where your scene starts, those were the only people in the lava dimension. Yet, you made it so that somehow the Kages were there too, then the parts were the Edo's were able to regenerate after getting hit from Kaguya made no sense, since Obito had nullified that ability of theirs earlier...
Then the 512 strikes is actually impossible since there are only 361 tenketsu in the human body, and moves in that category strike at the tenketsu, not just random hits.

Finally someone bringing good points:

1. I assumed Minato and Tobirama could get there by using FTG and Naruto being marked
2. True, but again I assumed incorrectly that Kaguya won't use Onmyoudon just TSB so I made it like that
3. 512 strikes yeah that was a bit Hyuuga wank but also we have known info about Kaguya's abilities to this point so that why I included possibility of such move but you correctly proved me wrong.

At least can you confirm that action and plot was more entertaining then canon one ?

Also if you like me to prove you it was just at the begining and then it went different then please check these:

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Couldn't read due to how it was written.

Can you eloborate why ?, do you mean grammar, spelling of what ?

 

[Bad Touch Yakushi]

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You fancy yourselves as writers, huh?

As far as I can tell, you just tried to make the fights prettier. The wording was a bit of a muddle, you tried too hard to give the readers an image to visualise, and it ended up confusing me (I read the thread).

Perfectly summarised. Smh at everyone thinking they can a.) be competent writers b.) have quality/appeal enough to sustain a best-selling manga. Sure Kishi dropped the ball at the very end, but nobody here me included could get to the stage he was at & holds today.

 

[Natsu Shazneel]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Can you eloborate why ?, do you mean grammar, spelling of what ?

It was cause you overused these brackets []. They were not pleasing on the eye.

Spoiler

Naruto(scared): uwaaah !
[Sasuke falling down in lava pool with his back turned in lava direction from Sasuke's POV].

 

[KCMNaruto]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Perfectly summarised. Smh at everyone thinking they can a.) be competent writers b.) have quality/appeal enough to sustain a best-selling manga. Sure Kishi dropped the ball at the very end, but nobody here me included could get to the stage he was at & holds today.

Of course Me too. as I said I greatly respect Masashi Kishimoto for his really long-lasting work. However I am not blind fan who accept anything writer bring on the table considering earlier applied rules to verse and what in the theory potential has one character and plot involing this character, that why I only call myself better then Kishi in Kaguya arc , JUST Kaguya arc.

Anything else was impressive but if only excusee was Kishi was tired or couldn't think it over and over due to time restrictions and weekly basis of manga release then he should take even one month hiatus but I am sure two weeks would be more then enough for him to rest and think about it.

It was cause you overused these brackets []. They were not pleasing on the eye.

Spoiler

Naruto(scared): uwaaah !
[Sasuke falling down in lava pool with his back turned in lava direction from Sasuke's POV].

OK, I understand but it shouldn't be big issue just matter of personal taste. isn't it ?

 

[Natsu Shazneel]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

OK, I understand but it shouldn't be big issue just matter of personal taste. isn't it ?

Well if you were going to present it to people. It should have been easy on the eye as in simple. Not everything has to be that complicating. You tried very hard to organize your text a proper way. You just don't need to over do it next time. Overall it is a simple matter. I as a reader should not be bothered to edit your text just to make it more pleasing on the eye.

 

[KCMNaruto]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Well if you were going to present it to people. It should have been easy on the eye as in simple. Not everything has to be that complicating. You tried very hard to organize your text a proper way. You just don't need to over do it next time. Overall it is a simple matter. I as a reader should not be bothered to edit your text just to make it more pleasing on the eye.

Fair enough . Thank your for all these words . I hope it will make me better .

 

[Bad Touch Yakushi]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Of course Me too. as I said I greatly respect Masashi Kishimoto for his really long-lasting work. However I am not blind fan who accept anything writer bring on the table considering earlier applied rules to verse and what in the theory potential has one character and plot involing this character, that why I only call myself better then Kishi in Kaguya arc , JUST Kaguya arc.

Anything else was impressive but if only excusee was Kishi was tired or couldn't think it over and over due to time restrictions and weekly basis of manga release then he should take even one month hiatus but I am sure two weeks would be more then enough for him to rest and think about it.

Yeah fair does to ya, i've said that exact same thing before too. I personally had a bash at rewriting the Kabuto VS Uchiha Bros fight before and I can see you're obvs not brash enough to think you're better than Kishi all-round so there's not problem here- it's a good chapter you wrote.

 

[Natsu Shazneel]

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Fair enough . Thank your for all these words . I hope it will make me better .

No worries glad I could help.

 

[KCMNaruto]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

No worries glad I could help.

Can you check more predictions with Kaguya presence of mine ?. I would like to know what do you think about them ?
Thanks

 

[Natsu Shazneel]

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Can you check more predictions with Kaguya presence of mine ?. I would like to know what do you think about them ?
Thanks

Where they maybe?

 

[KCMNaruto]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Where they maybe?

In USER SUBMITED PREDICTIONS section. However I posted links to them in my first post of this thread xd. Just uncover content of spoiler . I hope you will like it