Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

[KCMNaruto]

This is not hating, I just state truth. Just take a look at USER SUBMITED PREDICTIONS SECTION from page 9 to page 2 if I remember correctly .

Myself, Ahimmane, RinneBlitz and a few more guys wrote much better chapters with Kaguya involved then Kishi did and most likely would ever done.

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I wonder how shamefull it would be for him to find out, just waste so much potential.

I challenge you to prove me wrong with arguments.

MY OPINION:
EVERYTHING EXCEPT KAGUYA ARC: Kishi > everyone
KAGUYA ARC: MOST WRITERS > KISHI

Also it may be my humble opinion but the last Naruto vs Sasuke battle I think I put more efforts in it then Kishimoto. Anyway he is still greatest author with just one issue..., he has problem with ending/closure.

 

[Goetia]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

You fancy yourselves as writers, huh?

As far as I can tell, you just tried to make the fights prettier. The wording was a bit of a muddle, you tried too hard to give the readers an image to visualise, and it ended up confusing me (I read the thread).

 

[Xlad]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Lol At this guy's advertisement. How about show us your drawings while you're at it?

 

[TimothyTheTomato]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Yea but kishi was forced to end on 700

 

[Xlad]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

I can honestly feel that your next chapter will carry the usual wank.

 

[KCMNaruto]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

You fancy yourselves as writers, huh?

As far as I can tell, you just tried to make the fights prettier. The wording was a bit of a muddle, you tried too hard to give the readers an image to visualise, and it ended up confusing me (I read the thread).

why not , although I admit I have not even a bit of drawing talent as Kishi has, where I would be very bad in compare to Kishi. IN scale 1-10 I would say 1.

It is only due to me not being able to draw that good that why I had to use text to visualise some scenes if I had drawings made by someone else then my script would be much shorter.

Just make fight better ?, nope, dialogs, and depth of Kaguya character I would do much better then Kishi do.

Lol At this guy's advertisement. How about show us your drawings while you're at it?

Thanks for cheering . Sadly I am sucking at drawings or at least this is nothing impressive and that why I would never become mangaka or maker of comics any kind of.

My point is to prove Kaguya arc would be handled much better

Yea but kishi was forced to end on 700

so what, just remove some script where I used it to visualize each page and I would contain it to end on 700. That just shows how Kishi destroyed Kaguya arc. I am not buying not having time, because it is excusee and poor one.

Also I sucks on drawings, so that I would never do what Kishi has done.

I can honestly feel that your next chapter will carry the usual wank.

You mean fanboying over Hagoromo ?, sorry but nope it was limited to slight mention if even.

The only wank I have made was mention of Juubi Jin Hagoromo being imenssly powerfull but check all my threads of Kaguya chapters and you will see how Kaguya had upperhand and was dominating battle.

Also a threat element and dark art is what Kishi also forgot which made Kaguya arc not beliveable.

 

[Goetia]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

why not , although I admit I have not even a bit of drawing talent as Kishi has, where I would be very bad in compare to Kishi. IN scale 1-10 I would say 1.

It is only due to me not being able to draw that good that why I had to use text to visualise some scenes if I had drawings made by someone else then my script would be much shorter.

Just make fight better ?, nope, dialogs, and depth of Kaguya character I would do much better then Kishi do.



Thanks for cheering . Sadly I am sucking at drawings or at least this is nothing impressive and that why I would never become mangaka or maker of comics any kind of.

My point is to prove Kaguya arc would be handled much better



so what, just remove some script where I used it to visualize each page and I would contain it to end on 700. That just shows how Kishi destroyed Kaguya arc. I am not buying not having time, because it is excusee and poor one.

Also I sucks on drawings, so that I would never do what Kishi has done.

I am not berating you for the lack of drawings to go with your words, but your descriptive language was just difficult to interpret.

There is no depth to Kaguya's character at all. Adding bits and pieces of dialogue to make her less boring isn't going to add anything to her. You'd need to explore her backstory more, otherwise she's just a bland rock that has a bunch of feats and just wants to rule over everything.

 

[KCMNaruto]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

I am not berating you for the lack of drawings to go with your words, but your descriptive language was just difficult to interpret.

There is no depth to Kaguya's character at all. Adding bits and pieces of dialogue to make her less boring isn't going to add anything to her. You'd need to explore her backstory more, otherwise she's just a bland rock that has a bunch of feats and just wants to rule over everything.

Ok, then sorry I may misunderstood you or skipped that part. Yeah English is not my native language so that why I may suck at it a bit even while doing my best.

Also good point, but at least she is not mindless creature taking orders from black Shit(black zetsu), she is interacting with other character(main cast), she is speaking so reader may associate with her etc.

Honestly If I remember well in one of my predictions or even few of them I expanded on her backstory so that would be no point, but I would have to check it to make sure.

 

[TimothyTheTomato]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

why not , although I admit I have not even a bit of drawing talent as Kishi has, where I would be very bad in compare to Kishi. IN scale 1-10 I would say 1.

It is only due to me not being able to draw that good that why I had to use text to visualise some scenes if I had drawings made by someone else then my script would be much shorter.

Just make fight better ?, nope, dialogs, and depth of Kaguya character I would do much better then Kishi do.



Thanks for cheering . Sadly I am sucking at drawings or at least this is nothing impressive and that why I would never become mangaka or maker of comics any kind of.

My point is to prove Kaguya arc would be handled much better



so what, just remove some script where I used it to visualize each page and I would contain it to end on 700. That just shows how Kishi destroyed Kaguya arc. I am not buying not having time, because it is excusee and poor one.

Also I sucks on drawings, so that I would never do what Kishi has done.



You mean fanboying over Hagoromo ?, sorry but nope it was limited to slight mention if even.

The only wank I have made was mention of Juubi Jin Hagoromo being imenssly powerfull but check all my threads of Kaguya chapters and you will see how Kaguya had upperhand and was dominating battle.

Also a threat element and dark art is what Kishi also forgot which made Kaguya arc not beliveable.

Not a poor excuse when you have to fit the rest of the story including naruto vs Sasuke in less than50 chapters

 

[LordGamatatsu]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

It's not better in my opinion

 

[Pukkake Pokayo]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Didn't read but Kishi has more issues than just enclosure such as female characters and most pairings.

 

[Easter bunny]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

The best thing was to pretend that Kaguya arc was written by some troll.

 

[KCMNaruto]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Not a poor excuse when you have to fit the rest of the story including naruto vs Sasuke in less than50 chapters

Yes it still is, because if I could do it then there is no reason why Kishi couldn't. It is not easy I agree but this is far from impossible. Kishi was just lazy or forgot to make shedule with chapters ahead so he would split material in equal parts .

It's not better in my opinion

Please elaborate why not ?

use comparisions and arguments

Didn't read but Kishi has more issues than just enclosure such as female characters and most pairings.

Too bad, because you may missed good arguments but your points stay valid .

The best thing was to pretend that Kaguya arc was written by some troll.

that poor approaching way to such topic. I do not approve it.

 

[Pukkake Pokayo]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Too bad, because you may missed good arguments but your points stay valid .

I actually skimmed the first and last bit. Not a bad idea and it made more sense considering Kakashi was Minato's student using the RD seal, rather than the susano asspull everyone hates. Think I prefer a sharingan-less Kakashi to no Kakashi tho.

 

[KCMNaruto]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

I actually skimmed the first and last bit. Not a bad idea and it made more sense considering Kakashi was Minato's student using the RD seal, rather than the susano asspull everyone hates. Think I prefer a sharingan-less Kakashi to no Kakashi tho.

Thank you so much . I am glad you like it or at least find it better then Kishi made.

I encourage you to skim through my other predictions about Kaguya's appearance too because they are just 10 at the most so it wouldn't take long but it would prove how entertaining Kaguya arc could be .

 

[Ansatsuken]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

I read it over and over but still unable to understand how Edo Kages appeared so suddenly inside Lava dimension?:wut:

 

[LordGamatatsu]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Please elaborate why not ?

There's nothing to elaborate. I read it and didn't like it more than Kishi's ending. Just my opinion.

 

[KCMNaruto]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

I read it over and over but still unable to understand how Edo Kages appeared so suddenly inside Lava dimension?:wut:

Well Hagoromo has trasported them there or Minato teleported all of them thanks to marking on Naruto.
Just what I guess I meant.

There's nothing to elaborate. I read it and didn't like it more than Kishi's ending. Just my opinion.

Fair enough. Could you share your ending for Kishi's manga ?

 

[LordGamatatsu]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Fair enough. Could you share your ending for Kishi's manga ?

I didn't write an ending to Kishi's manga.

 

[Ansatsuken]

Re: Kaguya arc by best NB predictions writters > Kaguya arc at best Kishi could write

Well Hagoromo has trasported them there or Minato teleported all of them thanks to marking on Naruto.
Just what I guess I meant.



Fair enough. Could you share your ending for Kishi's manga ?

I lost it when the plot move toward Hamura that was RDS Shinigamixd