[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Konoha's Yellow Flash]

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(Kane no Tetsugatana) Kane?s iron sword

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Rank: S
Type:Offensive/ Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Uising the unique iron feathers of Kane the iron swallow, a very skilled blacksmith has been able to create this impressive sword. As soon as the user unsheats his sword, he will quickly channel massive amounts of wind chakra into it making a thin layer of wind around it.This sword is able to cut through incoming wind attacks(S-rank or lower) and (A-rank or lower) fire attacks wich will be mixed with the sword and be thrown back at the enemy with a mighty slash. By wielding this sword, the user can increase the amount of damage his wind attacks can do (+10).
Note: Can only be wielded by Konoha?s Yellow Flash
Note: The sword is indestructible.
Note: If the user chooses to put away his sword he must wait two turns before using it again.
Note:After putting away the sword, the user can only use wind attacks up to A-rank because of having previously infused wind chakra into the sword.

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~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

Kage Tsuiseki no Jutsu (Shadow Pursuit Technique)

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Rank: A
Type:Offensive/ Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A (10 if hit by the shadow)
Description:After forming the needed handseals, the shadow of the user will separate from him. Once the bond is severed, the shadow will hunt down the opposition's shadow and attempt to strike it/ attach to itself. If it lands a blow, the victim will suffer the damage as if he himself had been hit but if he gets attached to the other shadow, the opponent will be trapped as always in a Kage Mane Jutsu.
Note: the user is freely to move around while the shadow is in pursuit but must mantain a handseal while doing it so, don?t doing this will cancel the jutsu and make the shadow quickly return to the user.
Note: if done by a clone, this will have to stay still while doing this and continue doing the handseal during the whole process.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

Fuuton: Tenkuu Seireikoutai (Wind Release: Air Spirit Shift)

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Rank: S
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user forms the seals needed, then condenses the air around him with chakra until a veritable tornado forms around the user that extends up to 10 feet from the user. Visibility from the outside is very limited, while from the inside, the user's surroundings can easily be seen. Any thrown weapons are instantly deflected, all Lightning jutsus that do not strike from directly above are annulled,B-rank Fire jutsus or lower are deflected, and anyone making contact with the tornado besides the user suffers severe damage, as the high speed winds cause hundreds upon hundreds of small cuts to the body.
Note:Usable only twice per battle
Note: the user cannot go out of the vortex untill the turn has finished, at this time, the vortex will vanish.
Note: must wait one turn before using another wind jutsu.

~ Declined, similar techniques exist ~

 

[Azaghast]

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( Byakuren Furyu Ken ) - White Lotus Wind Dragon Fist

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Rank: A
Type:Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
The user coats both fists with wind chakra, and then begins a barrage of punches. With each punch, the wind surrounding the fist suddenly expands outward, slicing the area around it with destructive fury. When numerous punches such as this are used, the area for a good distance around the user becomes gouged and slashed to pieces.
Technique Notes: Can only be used once per battle.

( Furyu: Ichikogakkin ) - Wind Dragon: One Shining Platinum

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Rank: A
Type:Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
The user coats both arms with wind chakra, and rushes at the opponent. While the opponent is focusing on the rush, the wind chakra releases itself from his hands, unseen as air, into nine blades of wind that strike the unwary opponent from different directions, slicing him up.
Technique Notes: Can only be used once per battle. Dojutsu users or sensors can see the blades forming.

~ Both Approved ~

 

[Passion]

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Custom weapon: ( Go-ruden Kazemaru ) - Golden Wind

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive - Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A ( - 10 per turn when activated )
Damage points: N/A ( + 10 to user's fuuton. - 10 to opponent's raiton )
Description: Kazemaru is a special ring that user carries with him. The weapon's origins are unknown but the known thing is that the ring's forged in country of birds from unknown wind chakra metal. The ring's indestructible and once wind chakra is guided with in it it'll take form of floating ring ( this allows it to work without distrupting handseal speed ) that has blade attached to it. The ring itself is golden but once activated the blade part is made from silver and has 5 holes on it. If user spins this ring in its activated form very fast while guiding wind chakra the user is capable of blocking any A - Ranked lightning attack once per battle. Even though there's wind chakra guided the ring it can be ignited but that wont affect to user since the weapon is floating in air. It can twice per battle send two wind shurikens at opponent which are made from pure chakra. Each one of them counts for one demon windmill shuriken

• Costs - 10 chakra per turn
• It's indestructible
• It's golden from the ring part and silver on blade part
• It can be reverted back into ring anytime
• It doesn't have handle and floats around user's hand once it's activated by infusing wind chakra into it
• Only Teh-Tobz is able of wielding it and it cannot be wielded by anyone else.
• Boosts user's wind attacks by + 10 and user's raiton goes - 10.
• If the wind surrounding the blade is ignited by an S ranked fire technique or an elemental combination, the heat will burn the user's hands since they are in such close proximity.

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~ Approved ~

( Genjutsu: Akeru Metsuki no Satsujin honi ) - Illusion technique: Empty eyes of killing intent

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive - Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: User will rest his head in nodding like position for three seconds, charging chakra into eyes. Once this is done user will raise own head and gaze into opponent's eyes with completely empty eyes expect that they're filled with urge to kill. This causes the opponent to flinch and fall on their knees, paralyzed from fear. The paralyzing can be removed by creating feeling that's stronger than fear like pain or love.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- No S - ranked genjutsu for two turns after usage
- Works on multiple enemies but they must be ahead of user as he/she uses this jutsu
- Requires eye contact.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

( Katon/Doton: Dangan no Suzumebachi ) - Fire/earth release: Missile of Hornet

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: User makes Dog - Snake handseals with one hand ( They aren't full handseals. Just one handed ) while focusing Fire and Earth based chakra on right hand at the same time as sword is in that hand. This creates compressed fire missile around the sword. The missile can be fired at opponent with the speed of A - Ranked Wind techniques. When the missile hits something it'll create very big explosion that cannot harm anything else than the target and 3 X 3 meter space around him/her. Even though it cannot harm anything out of that range it creates massive smokescreen and sends small rocks flying in air. The smokescreen will stay in air for one turn.
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  - It requires some time for aiming the missile, upwards of ten seconds before it can even be sent toward a stationary opponent. For a moving target, this figure rises to above twenty.
  - The recoil force from the missile blows the user backwards a good twenty feet, where he then takes about five seconds to recover.
  - This technique requires a sword to perform. Though the sword is not lost after the technique, the sword is so heated that it cannot be wielded for one turn until it cools off.
  - No handsealed jutsus can be used while holding the missile
  - No S - Ranked fire and earth can be used in next two turns
  - Can be used only twice.

~ Approved ~

( Genjutsu: Tsuyoi ishi no Ai ) - Illusion technique: Strong will of Amor

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive - Supplementary
Range: Short - Long ( It takes longer time to take effect and can be avoided )
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 15 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 30 to user )
Description: User makes Snake - Bird - Dragon - Ox handseals and slam hands together ( this stance has to be kept all the time when genjutsu takes effect ) while focusing chakra into own eyes and aiming at opponent. Once this is done user will release illusion similar to Yamanaka clan's mind controlling by creating flash from user's eyes made from pure chakra. When the flash is created the object or person that user's aiming at will be marked with chakra tattoo ( 愛 ) with mark of love on the area. The area/limb it hit is now controlled by user. The chakra tattoo lasts for max one turn and the controlling can be prevented by slicing the area where it hit, separating nerves from muscles. As the illusion takes effect the user must constantly look at opponent with other eye and doujutsu cannot be used while doing so. Once the illusion ends the user suffers - 30 damage due the eye strain and the eye that gazed at opponent will be blinded for one turn. During that time the user will lose the ability to evaluate distances.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- Damages user - 30
- Causes the eye to be blinded for one turn that aimed opponent
- No genjutsu for 5 turns
- Doujutsu isn't affected
- User loses the ability of using doujutsu while using this technique for 3 turns
- Opponent can be caught in this technique max one turn
- User cannot move while using this jutsu and hands must be together.

~ Declined ~

 

[Azaghast]

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( Furyu: Kofuku Araiso ) - Wind Dragon: Blessed Windswept Shore

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Rank: A
Type:Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
The user begins spinning in position, building up massive amounts of inertia. The user makes a sudden stop, all the motion transferring into his wind chakra and creating a sudden whipping tornado around him, devolving into huge gusts of wind that blow across the arena with force enough to knock a person away and tear into their flesh.
Technique Notes: Can only be used once per battle.

~ Declined ~

 

[Ryuji]

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(Katon:hoippu)-Fire Release: Whip
Type: Offense/Defense
Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user will concetrated his fire chakra and raised his rigth arm to the air to create a whip of fire chakra that can extend at the user?s will to incredible distances. This fire based whip can be used to atack such as defend.
Note: *Usable 4 times per battle*

~ Bad Description ~

 

[The Seven-Scaled boy]

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(Suiton:gekido mizu se)-Water style: raging water torrent
Rank: B
Type:Offensive
Range: Short-mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description:The user concentrates suiton chakra in his mouth until it can't hold it any longer. Then, the user spits a wide, powerful, raging torrent of water.
Notes:can only bu used 4 times per battle.

(Suiton: Gekido suingadan)-Water style: raging water-fang bullet
Rank: A
Type:Offensive
Range: Short-mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description:The user concentrates as much suiton chakra as he can on his mouth. When it can't hold anymore, he releases the suiotn chakra in the form of various sphere shaped porjectiles of raging water.
Notes:may only be used twice per battle.

(Suiton/Futon:Kyokusen Gekido Mizu Se)-Water/wind style: Polar raging water torrent
Rank: S
Type:Offensive
Range: Short-mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user concentrates as much suiton chakra as he can on his mouth. When it can't hold anymore, he releases the suiton chakra in the form of a wide, raging water torrent. While spitting this water, the user will infuse it with futon chakra to cool it to near freezing temperature and empowring it.

Notes:If the water touches the opponent, he'll get very slow due to the cold temperatures.
Notes:No futon A-rank or higher next turn.
Notes:No suiton A-rank or higher next turn.
Notes:May only be used three times per battle.

(Katon/Raiton: Gian Enkou)-Fire/lightning style: False darkness flames
Rank:S
Type:Offensive
Range:Short-mid range
Chakra cost:40
Damage points:80
Description:the user launches a huge burst of fire from his mouth. While the fire comes out, the user launches from both of his hands raiton chakra, which take the shape of constantly splitting spears, which sourround the fire burst.

Notes:May only be done three times per battle.
Notes:No raiton B-rank or higher next turn.
Notes:No katon B-rank or higher next turn.

~ All Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Azaghast]

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( Gimanteki Furyū ) - Deceptive Wind Dragon
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
The user releases wind chakra into the atmosphere. With the formation of three handseals, the air around the opponent's ears enters their ear canal and shifts subtly each second, throwing off the opponent's balance until he finds some way to get rid of it. The opponent can stand unsteadily, and keeps collapsing to his knees every few seconds, and falls down whenever he tries walking or other physical activities.
Technique Notes: Can only be used once per battle. No Wind jutsu for two turns after.

~ restrict it, reduce power ~

( Furyū no Habataki ) - Wingbeat of a Wind Dragon
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
The user releases wind chakra, the figure of a huge dragon forming behind him. The dragon then beats its wings once, creating a huge gust in the arena, blowing up rocks, sand or whatever substance the floor is made of, blowing away the opponent and grinding him with the substances taken from the ground.
Technique Notes: Can only be used once per battle.

~ Declined ~

 

[Typhon]

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Wind Style: Endless Breath
(Fuuton: Hateshinai Kokyuu)
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user preforms a short series of hand seals while inhaling a large amount of air. They then bring their hands to the mouth and form a triangle around their lips while blowing the air out in a steady stream that can be held for 1 full turn. This produces a strong gust of wind that can blow back thrown items or be used to increase the strength of fire attacks. The attack carries the usual sharpness of the wind element causing it to cut the opponent, though these cuts are not life threatening.
~Can only be used three times per battle.
~Can only be taught by Hypnotiq.

~ Frankly, if this is going on, you can't use an other techs. O_O ~

 

[UzumakiJake]

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Nezumi: Rat flesh surface
Rank: S
Chakra: 70
Damage: NA
Description: By fusing you chakra into the ground you can summon a layer of rat flesh over the surface of the ground basically turning the ground you walk on rat flesh. (Not litterally turning the surface into rat flesh) Much like the toad stomach where you summon toad flesh all around you, you have control of the flesh and can move it at your will to bind or trap opponents. The rat flesh is quite durable, but can be broken through by S ranked techniques. It cannot be repaired in broken areas.

Note: must have a contract with the rats
Note: Only usable 1 time a game
Note: Lasts 3 turns

~ Approved ~

 

[Pain..]

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( Katon: Kyousei Hidama ) Katon: Great Fireball

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 ( - 5 When the opponent is under ground )
Range: Short-Long
Description: The user throw five Fireballs at the sky and put it together witch make a ultimate fireball attack and defense bigger then any fireball.

NOTE: - 5 When the opponent is under ground
NOTE: Only twice per battle

~ Declined, WTF dude ~

 

[Sin]

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(Fuuton: Subayaikaze) - Wind Release: Fast Wind -
Type: Supplementery
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Focusing chakra throughout the air, the user will quickly make fast currents and using this wind they will focus it either behind themself or use the wind to change the opponent's direction.
The wind current doubles current speed so the user will then be able to quickly speed towards the opponent. If the user needs to by focusing through the wind they will be able to change direction by changing the wind current by chakra.
This jutsu is a fast acting wind release jutsu.
- Only Taught By -Sin- -

(Suiton: Mizu Bunshin Samehada) - Water Clone Shark Form
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Any water clones that are on the field will be effected as they will switch into sharks that will automatically find the opponent and attack. Vice Versa as Sharks on the field will be turned into water clones and can be used to attack the opponent even if they are originally the opponents. These transformations last until they are destroyed.
- Only Taught By -Sin- -
- Usable Once Per Battle -

~ Both Declined ~

 

[Passion]

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( Genjutsu: Tsuyoi ishi no Ai ) - Illusion technique: Strong will of Amor

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive - Supplementary
Range: Short - Long ( It takes longer time to take effect and can be avoided )
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 15 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 30 to user )
Description: User makes Snake - Bird - Dragon - Ox handseals and slam hands together ( this stance has to be kept all the time when genjutsu takes effect ) while focusing chakra into own eyes and aiming at opponent. Once this is done user will release illusion similar to Yamanaka clan's mind controlling by creating flash from user's eyes made from pure chakra. When the flash is created the object or person that user's aiming at will be marked with chakra tattoo ( 愛 ) with mark of love on the area. The area/limb it hit is now controlled by user. The chakra tattoo lasts for max one turn and the controlling can be prevented by slicing the area where it hit, separating nerves from muscles. As the illusion takes effect the user must constantly look at opponent with other eye and doujutsu cannot be used while doing so. Once the illusion ends the user suffers - 30 damage due the eye strain and the eye that gazed at opponent will be blinded for one turn. During that time the user will lose the ability to evaluate distances.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- Damages user - 30
- Causes the eye to be blinded for one turn that aimed opponent
- No genjutsu for 5 turns
- Doujutsu isn't affected
- User loses the ability of using doujutsu while using this technique for 3 turns
- Opponent can be caught in this technique max one turn
- User cannot move while using this jutsu and hands must be together.

~ Declined ~

( Genjutsu: Mahou ) - Illusion technique: Witchcraft

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: N/A ( - 30 to user )
Description: User remains stationary while focusing chakra all over own body and having eye contact with opponent. Once this is done the user will pull out sword and hold it horizontally in air with one hand. Once this is done the user will let go of the sword with the hand that's holding it - finger by finger. Once that is done the opponent is already caught inside of the illusion and the opponent sees as if the blade would start bending into triangle that hovers in air. At this point user can activate special move of this jutsu
Amor:
Once activated the Witchcraft user gains the ability to cast illusion at opponent where the user stares at opponent's limb or body part, causing opponent to see if a tattoo would appear on it if not dodged. Once the opponent sees the tattoo user can force him to do what ever user bids with the body part the user has gazed at. The gaze can also be avoided with extreme burst of speed that avoids the ''tattoo''. The amor can be used as many times as the user has eyes. So usually two times as the genjutsu can be used once. Each of the eyes that are locked at something are now unable to use doujutsu or move fast
Note:
- Can be used only once
- No genjutsu for six turns
- Must remain stationary while using this jutsu
- User cannot use any other jutsu while this is in play
- Can capture opponent max 2 turns in it and once its over it causes pain to user's eyes
- Can only be negated with chakra flow distruption. No pain is enough to negate this

~ OPed ~

 

[Lili-Chwan]

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The Restriction Strike Taijutsu came from strudying the Gentle Fist Style. It mixes knowledge of the Human Anatomy and it's weak points with great agility and speed. With a set of fast strikes on specific nerves or joints, the user paralizes the said area. The effect's are permanent if the strikes are caused by sharp objects, the Taijutsu itself last only 1 turn.

Taijutsu: ( Kassha Dageki: Soji no Mokuren ) Restriction Strike: Magnolia's Foundation

Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
In order to paralize both or one of the opponent's legs, the user strikes the Sciatic Nerve (Causes weakness of knee flexion (bending), weakness of foot movements, difficulty bending the foot inward (inversion), or bending the foot down (plantar flexion)), the Tibial Nerve (Causes Numbness, Pain, Tingling, and Weakness of the knee or foot) and the Peroneal Nerve (Causes Loss of Movement or sensation of the foot and leg).
Basically, a blow on the lower back, another on the back of the leg and another on the side of the knee.
*Lasts 1 turn*


Taijutsu: ( Kassha Dageki: Ya no Momo ) Restriction Strike: Peach's Arrows

Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: In order to paralize one or both arms, the user strikes the Distal Median Nerve (Causes lost of sensation on the hand, tingling and burning sensation on your wrist, and from the thumbs to the first two fingers, and difficulty in grasping objects), the Ulnar Nerve (Causes impairment or sensation on the wrist and hand) and the Radial Nerve (Causes the lost of movement throughout the arm and wrist).
Basically, a strike to the front shoulder joint, another to upper arm and another to the elbow. (Doubled to affect both arms)
*Lasts 1 turn*

Taijutsu: ( Kassha Dageki: Bachi no Tsubaki ) Restriction Strike: Camelia's Curse

Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: In order to paralize the neck and leave the opponent unconscious, the user strikes the Accessory Nerve (Causes the lost of the act of flex and rotate the head, and weakens the shoulder area) and the Occipital Ridge (Causes immediate blackout).
Basically, a blow to the side of the neck and another to the back of the head.
*Lasts 1 turn*

Taijutsu: ( Kassha Dageki: Issui no Hasu ) Restriction Strike: Lotus' Overflow

Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: in order to temporarily block the ability to release chakra, the user injects a small amount of chakra on especific areas of the opponent's body, where there is a more density of Chakra Points.
Basically, the user strikes the left shoulder, the stomach and the right elbow.
*Lasts 1 turn*

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~ All Declined. Too similar to existing techniques and the Jyuuken ~

 

[-Mugen-]

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(Genjutsu:kuuhaku nare ) - Illusion technique: space experience

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Rank:S
Type:Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points:80(40 to user,and blinds him for 1 turn)
Description:this genjutsu is made by eye contact.This is a very powerful genjutsu because once caught the opponent cant get out of it,thats why it can only be used in short range.Once caught the opponent will think his arms and legs are gone (thats why the opponent cant get away,since kai doesnt work and he cant stab himself) and he is tied to a pole in space.Than the user makes handseals and makes the opponent get sucked in a black hole.After the user releases the jutsu thier opponent will be too shocked and in pain to walk or do anything giving the user a chance to kill him
*once caught the opponent cant get out of it and after will be stunned for 2 turns
*The user will go blind 1 turn and get a aditional 40 damage
*3 tomoa sharingan and renningan can see through the genjutsu
*Only Mugen-sama can teach this.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Emperor]

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( Ōdoen'you: Enjin no Hiyoke ) - Royal Domain Invocation: Protection of the Blaze God

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Type: Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
This chakra based technique is basically a marvel of reverse-engineering, turning the process of causing destruction into one saving life. The user, when touched by flames composed of chakra, reverse-engineers the flames, turning them back into pure chakra, which is then sucked in through the user's mouth, preventing them from doing damage.
However, this technique has numerous flaws and limitations. Firstly, the technique works only against flames, and not against heated objects such as lava or hot metal. Secondly, the sudden increase of chakra within the user's body means that his body suffers damage from the inside, causing -20 damage, preventing Taijutsu for one turn and also prevents his control from being good enough to perform Genjutsu or Medjutsu for the next turn until the chakra is assimilated. He also leaks out chakra, a defense by his body to get rid of excess, signaling his position easily even when he is hidden by mist, smoke or other substances for the entire remainder of the battle.

~Pending~Limits... O_O

 

[-Mugen-]

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(Taijutsu:seiyuuki youshiki) - gorilla style

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Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will use a style that gorillas taught him.Gorilla style uses chakra and powerful physical strength to defeat there opponent.The user will use his chakra to first boost himself to the opponent and than make a very fast 30 hit combo that includes- knee hits,elbow hits,upper cuts,jabs and kicks.
*must have gorilla summon from mugen-sama
*Only sharingan,beakugan or renningan can keep up with the users movement that allowes them to dodge
*Can only be used once per battle
*can only be taught by mugen-sama

Declined~Incorrect Chakra Cost and how is it unavoidable if you literally throw yourself at the opponent?

 

[Zenryoku]

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(Han Sochi jutsu)- Half Step technique

Rank: S
Type: offence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is a style of Chinese martial arts where the user uses precise chakra control to move half a step out of the way when being attacked at close range. The user is then facing the side of the enemy. The enemy can only react to this attack and counter if they are advanced taijutsu users because they have been trained in advanced levels. This advanced technique can be followed up with an attack to counter their move.

Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
Note: Can only be used twice per battle

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(Han Sochi no Jutsu)- Half Step Technique

Rank: S
Type: Offence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is a style of Chinese martial arts where the user uses precise chakra control to move half a step out of the way when being attacked at close range. The user is then facing the side of the enemy. The enemy can only react to this attack and counter if they are advanced taijutsu users because they have been trained in advanced levels. This advanced technique can be followed up with an attack to counter their move.
Note: Must be above sannin level to react intime to counter speed
Note: Can only be used twice per battle

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(Shouhekifuu: Enchou Seichi Ranpu): Barrier Method: Dome of Holy Light

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 per turn to keep active)
Damage points: N/A
Description: After the user makes 3 shadow clones they will surround the target/s and make a few hand seals then release chakra to create a dome surrounding the target/s. With chakra manipulation and chakra control the user is then able to make the chakra dome absorb natural light and create the target/s to see a white enclosed room surrounding them 10 meters wide and high. The user may see inside the dome though inside the dome the trapped target/s only see a white room and cant properly judge the exact size of the room because of the light giving off a misjudgement of bigger space. The only way to break out of the dome is to use a large scaled attack covering all the walls. (Barrier Lasts for 3 turns costing +10 chakra each turn to keep active)

Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Co-produced by HellsBadass.

to change name ownly

(Kekkai: Enchou Seichi no Ranpu): Barrier Method: Dome of Holy Light

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 per turn to keep active)
Damage points: N/A
Description: After the user makes 3 shadow clones they will surround the target/s and make a few hand seals then release chakra to create a dome surrounding the target/s. With chakra manipulation and chakra control the user is then able to make the chakra dome absorb natural light and create the target/s to see a white enclosed room surrounding them 10 meters wide and high. The user may see inside the dome though inside the dome the trapped target/s only see a white room and cant properly judge the exact size of the room because of the light giving off a misjudgement of bigger space. The only way to break out of the dome is to use a large scaled attack covering all the walls. (Barrier Lasts for 3 turns costing +10 chakra each turn to keep active)
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Co-produced by HellsBadass.

then a new technique

(Fūton: Kekkai Kanbou no Enryo) - Wind Release: Barrier Cell of Restraint

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will make a set of two hand seals and create a torrent of wind to sweep down around the target and encase them in a near-invisible square cell of wind trapping them and restricting their movements.
Note: restraining affects last 1 turn and user must wait two turns before each use.

(Fūton: Ryu Shushou no Shinkou) - Wind Release: Rising Dragon Palms

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user focuses some wind chakra into their palms creating orbs which are then molded as the user thrusts their palms into the air infront of them and molding them into the shape of two dragon claws that criss-cross each other in a single point and exploding on impact causing a strong shock wave that sends any targets within range flying backwards.



~All Approved~

 

[Typhon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Wind Style: Endless Breath
(Fuuton: Hateshinai Kokyuu)
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user preforms a short series of hand seals while inhaling a large amount of air. They then bring their hands to the mouth and form a triangle around their lips while blowing the air out in a steady stream that can be held for 1 full turn. This produces a strong gust of wind that can blow back thrown items or be used to increase the strength of fire attacks. The attack carries the usual sharpness of the wind element causing it to cut the opponent, though these cuts are not life threatening.
~Can only be used three times per battle.
~Can only be taught by Hypnotiq.

~ Frankly, if this is going on, you can't use an other techs. O_O ~

Yes, I know. ^_^
Guess I should add that to the restrictions to clarify though....

Wind Style: Endless Breath
(Fuuton: Hateshinai Kokyuu)
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user preforms a short series of hand seals while inhaling a large amount of air. They then bring their hands to the mouth and form a triangle around their lips while blowing the air out in a steady stream that can be held for 1 full turn. This produces a strong gust of wind that can blow back thrown items or be used to increase the strength of fire attacks. The attack carries the usual sharpness of the wind element causing it to cut the opponent, though these cuts are not life threatening.
~Can only be used three times per battle.
~Can only be taught by Hypnotiq.
~Can't use other techniques while in use.

~ Approved ~

Water Style: Water Spout
(Suiton: Mizu Torune-do)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses wind chakra into a source of water and causes it to swirl rapidly. They then cause the swirling water to rise up in the form of a vortex combo of water and wind that cuts and drowns the opponent simultaneously. This attack forms very quickly so it can be difficult to avoid, but there is a moments warning because the water swirls below the opponent before the vortex forms.
~Can only be used three times per battle.
~Must be taught by Hypnotiq.

~ Declined ~

 

[-Mugen-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Taijutsu:seiyuuki youshiki) - gorilla style

Spoiler

Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will use a style that gorillas taught him.Gorilla style uses chakra and powerful physical strength to defeat there opponent.The user will use his chakra to first boost himself to the opponent and than make a very fast 30 hit combo that includes- knee hits,elbow hits,upper cuts,jabs and kicks.
*must have gorilla summon from mugen-sama
*Only sharingan,beakugan or renningan can keep up with the users movement that allowes them to dodge
*Can only be used once per battle
*can only be taught by mugen-sama

Declined~Incorrect Chakra Cost and how is it unavoidable if you literally throw yourself at the opponent?

(Taijutsu:seiyuuki youshiki) - gorilla style

Spoiler

Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will use a style that gorillas taught him.Gorilla style uses chakra and powerful physical strength to defeat there opponent.The user will use his chakra to first boost himself to the opponent while moving in different directions to confuse the opponent and than make a very fast 30 hit combo that includes- knee hits,elbow hits,upper cuts,jabs and kicks.
*must have gorilla summon from mugen-sama
*Only sharingan,beakugan or renningan can keep up with the users movement that allowes them to defend
*Can only be used once per battle
*can only be taught by mugen-sama

~ Declined, no resubmit ~

I edited

 

[Lord of Kaos.]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Fire style: Rain Of Hell(katon:Ame heru)
Range:mid and long at the same time but not short
Rank:S
TYpe:Attack
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:80(-20 to user)
Description: THe user gathers immense amounts of fire chakra in his hands the nthe user sends the fire into the sky creating a giant flame ball in the sky. Then many small fire balls come out of the giant flame ball in all directions. It effects every where except for the area in short range of the user. The small fire balls come very rapidly and leave holes in the ground caued by the power of their impact. The fire balls are exteremly hot and burn at 3000 degrees Celcious.
*The user cant use Wind or Fire attacks For the fallowing 4 turns
*Can only be used once per battle
*Cant be used by a clone of the user(2 bodys are ok)
*The user takes 20 damage because of the burns in his hand
*The user cant move from his location untill the next turn

~ OPed ~