Black despair Part 7 "Obscure"

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BLACK despair

PART SEVEN
"OBSCURE"

Narrator: Ryuuta had not a single reaction from Natsuyo’s words. The enemy ninja then gradually covered his face. The ANBU thought that the info provided by Natsuyo was sufficient enough to report back to his leader with. However, there could have been a little more that could be extracted from him.

Ryuuta: (In thought) This nuke-nin could pose useful with more valuable info..I must take him back to Danzou-sama at once

Ryuuta: (Continued in thought) I cannot let him escape me as it will prove disastrous for Danzou-sama thus all of his sacrifices for the village

Natsuyo: Your silence continues to amaze me even so I know that you are an ANBU

Ryuuta: …

Natsuyo: It is time for your long awaited death *snickers*

Ryuuta: As it is yours..

Narrator: A big smirk then formed upon the enemy’s face. Natsuyo manipulated his right arm through the use of his Smoke Transformation Technique in which formed a long slender blade.

Ryuuta: (In thought) No hand seals..

Narrator: The nuke-nin lunged himself towards the ANBU at full throttle. Ryuuta drew his tantou and charged is his direction. Their sharp weapons collide as they clashed.

Natsuyo: (Shouts) You are arousing me to know end!

Narrator: The two stand their ground as the weapons grind. Sticking out his tongue, the shinobi leaned forward and proceeded to lick his formed blade. They both then pullback to thrusting against one another in a back and forth motion. Too fast to even be seen by the naked eye. Panting, sweat and chakra reserves running mid to low on both parts as the two stood on a branch.

Natsuyo: Can it be that I have met my equal?

Natsuyo: (Shouts) No!!! I will not concede!

Narrator: An ever unstable growing Natsuyo decided to end it all by using his ace. He launched himself straight towards Ryuuta while invoking a few words out loud.

Natsuyo: (Shouts) Ikigurushii Kan no Jutsu!

Jutsu InsightNatsuyo:

● Jutsu Name: Ikigurushii Kan no Jutsu (Suffocating Coffin Technique)
● Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Muriton
● Class: Offensive
● Range: Short-long range
● Hand seals: Unknown
● Description: The user breaks their entire body down and transforms into a fatal poisonous gaseous smoke. This jutsu grants the user incredible speed. When initiated, the user can trap their opponent within themselves. The victim once trapped will not be able to move due to the toxins which cause paralysis and will ultimately suffocate till death.

Narrator: The shinobi proved successful as he was able to capture the ANBU.

[Setting change: Danzou’s chamber]

Akio: I found Kou unconscious and the child you recently recruited passed out shortly after my arrival although, just before I arrived there was a light that surrounded their area and it quickly faded

Danzou: Oh…

Akio: I took them both down to the infirmary however; the iryou-nin could not identify the cause of this outbreak and the two are in a comatose state..

Akio: (Continued) With the exception of the child having brain trauma as well

Danzou: I see..

Danzou: (Continued) The culprit?

Akio: Status unconfirmed but I have suspicions..

Danzou: What is it?

Akio: The child

Danzou: You are placing sole responsibility on this child?

Akio: It is only an assumption but I am not entirely certain Danzou-sama

Akio: (Continued) I attempted to search out the enemy but it would have been at the risk of our men and if it was truly the child we possibly would never come to know it if he died

Danzou: Under other circumstances you would have been punished yet you did the correct thing by saving the child’s life for future reference

Akio: Yes

Danzou: You are to keep an eye on these two especially the child and if the child awakes he is to be brought to me personally for interrogation

Akio: (In thought) This is unlike Danzou-sama

Danzou: I must know the meaning of this..

Akio: Understood Danzou-sama

Danzou: You are dismissed

Akio: Yes

Narrator: The ANBU after leaving his leader informed, moved out to the infirmary.

[Setting change: Root sub-department infirmary]

Narrator: Kou and child both lied comatose and the iryou-nin kept surveillance. Though, all of a sudden a finger slightly wiggled. An iryou-nin caught sight of it and began to conversate with the Head Iryou-nin.

Akio: Excuse me, is there any change?

Head Root Iryou-nin: Maybe..with one of the patients

Akio: (In thought) Could it be the child?

[Setting change: Konohagakure no Sato forest]

Natsuyo: (Shouts in crazed tone) I win and you lose!

Natsuyo: (Continued shouting in a crazed tone) I live…and you die!!!

Narrator: Moments later, the confident nuke-nin decides to de-activate his jutsu. As he begins to undergo the change back into his physical body, he then abruptly began to writhe.

Natsuyo: (Shouts) What is happening to me?!

Narrator: In much excruciating pain did Natsuyo release Ryuuta and glided downwards onto the ground. Once landed, his jutsu de-activates and he inspects himself. What he witnesses next is horror.

[Setting change: Root sub-department infirmary]

Head Root Iryou-nin: It was the child

Akio: Has he awakened?

Head Root Iryou-nin: No not yet but he moved a finger which could mean that he may be coming out of his coma

Akio: …I was sent here by Danzou-sama to join in the observation of these two

Head Root Iryou-nin: Understood

Akio: I must also inform you tha..

Root Iryou-nin #2: Head-san…the child is beginning to wake up

Narrator: He awoke in a violent frenzy. Iryou-nin #1 and 2 rushed over to his side to contain him whilst Head iryou-nin retrieved a sedative. Grasping the child’s flailing arm, Head then administrated the drug into his vein. The thrashing child gradually began to calm down.

Akio: How long will he be out?

Head Root Iryou-nin: I instead dispensed him a mild sedation and he is still awake

Akio: I have authority to transport him to Danzou-sama for interrogation

Akio: (Continued) Will he be able to comply with the inquiry requirements?

Head Root Iryou-nin: Yes but we do not know what this will do to him..if he truly is the one responsible, certain questions could trigger emotional memories and he could lose control, etc.

Akio: Understood…I will inform Danzou-sama

Narrator: The Head nodded, Akio collected the child and was off.

[Setting change: Danzou’s chamber]

Narrator: Akio arrives with the sedated child in arms *knock*

Danzou: Come in

Narrator: The ANBU steps in to face his leader and an assailant by his side

Character Insight - Assailant #5:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Unmasked

Akio: The child recovered faster than what we could have imagined and he is ready

Danzou: Good...

Danzou: (Continued) Haru

(Assailant #5’s identity revealed)

Character Insight - Assailant #5:

● Classification: ANBU (added)
● Occupation: ANBU Root shinobi (added)
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root (added)
● Hair color: Black (added)
● Eye color: Unknown (due to mask) (added)
● Face: Masked (Porcelain animal mask worn in missions only) (added)
● Name: Haru (a code name given to the shinobi Hyou in present time) (added)
● Weapons: Tantou (added)

Haru: Yes Danzou-sama

Danzou: You are to bring me the interrogator

Haru: Understood

[Setting change: Konohagakure no Sato forest]

Natsuyo: (Hysterical scream) AHHHHHHHHH!!!

Natsuyo: (Shouts in a hysterical tone) What did you do to me!!!

Narrator: This situation befell the enemy shinobi as his gaseous body came in contact with Ryuuta’s Nanosaizu no Dokumushi. Ryuuta stood up from a branch with his entire skin colored light gray.

Jutsu InsightRyuuta:

● Jutsu Name: Sanagi (Chrysalis)
● Classification: Hiden, Ninjutsu
● Class: Supplementary
● Range: Unknown
● Hand seals: Unknown
● Description: The user hardens their body via the insects within. It is a defensive jutsu as it can withstand destructive and physical attacks. This defense is almost unbreakable.

Narrator: Natsuyo struggled with the poisonous pain until he could no more and what appeared to be passed out.

Ryuuta: (In thought) Mission accomplished Danzou-sama

Narrator: The ANBU leaped downwards and walked over to the fallen shinobi. Ryuuta kneeled down and placed a finger on the infected male. In seconds did his infectious body heal as he distributed the antidote.

Ryuuta: (In thought) Danzou-sama you will have your answers

Narrator: Ryuuta picked Natsuyo and placed him over his shoulders. He then leaped onto a tree and proceeded to make his way to Root’s underground sub-department. Suddenly an explosion occurs.

Eighth part will be released next week, same day, titled Deviant (Look for it!).

Part 8: Deviant
 
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I read the 3 latest chapter in one go...
and it was totally awesome...i captured the meaning
and intensity easy due to reading the chapters simultaneously.
All chapters were a joy to read and very entertaining...so thanks and
keep em coming friend...
 

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I read the 3 latest chapter in one go...
and it was totally awesome...i captured the meaning
and intensity easy due to reading the chapters simultaneously.
All chapters were a joy to read and very entertaining...so thanks and
keep em coming friend...
You truly surprise me every time you comment. I am also amazed at the confidence that you have in me ;) Arigatou gozaimasu (thank you formal) very much for your subarashii (wonderful) compliments and as well as for continuing to follow my work.​
 

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Again you astound me with your incredibly emotive and powerful language are a pleasure to view and once again I cannot wait until the next thrilling installment of Black Despair
 

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A little late but better than never i guess. Each chapter that goes by, and you still manages to come up with the most fanciest and astonishing things. How do you even come up with all of this? I mean all the insights and details.. Amazing! Chapter 8, next;)
 

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Again you astound me with your incredibly emotive and powerful language are a pleasure to view and once again I cannot wait until the next thrilling installment of Black Despair
Thanks ;)

A little late but better than never i guess. Each chapter that goes by, and you still manages to come up with the most fanciest and astonishing things. How do you even come up with all of this? I mean all the insights and details.. Amazing! Chapter 8, next;)
Exactly-I would rather have your insight late than not at all lol Thank you so much. I don't know, I suppose when I take my time to think the thoughts pop in my head and develop. The manga is a big help as well in my opinion.​
 
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