"Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter 9.. **** Liquor - Open till Dawn
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I must keep "Low Profile" in the next few weeks or else i get banned for good xd
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I have hidden the file, so don't even bother.
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I have hidden the file, so don't even bother.
ready with reading your chapters...i?m realy impressed of it^^...nice to see that you implement the story-line in climaxes(like the fight with cho),built-ups(like the funny "fart"-chapter) and special story side trips like the **** liquor bar(..also built up^^)!!....also the partly dirty writing style suits to this apocalyptic-scenario..."there isn?t the healthy and beauty world...in this world the life s**t on you..even you don`t s**t back" you could say^^... in another point the story-stuff wouldn?t never go out of ressources...the senario is well chosen(sry for repeating)....enough with throwing honey around...i give you 4 of 5 stars(8 of 10 points if this sounds better)...why this?..nothing is perfect...i beleave/think that you could bring out more details to bring the reader more partly to this world...f.e. as fan of fight club..remember the describtion of its ikea-citchen or astronautflight over its trash bin" the starbucks empire.."xd a funny way to critizise the society...that was only a brainstorming idea...i hope there will be more of this FF it`s pretty good
p.s. sry for my english out of practise
p.s. sry for my english out of practise
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ready with reading your chapters...i?m realy impressed of it^^...nice to see that you implement the story-line in climaxes(like the fight with cho),built-ups(like the funny "fart"-chapter) and special story side trips like the **** liquor bar(..also built up^^)!!....also the partly dirty writing style suits to this apocalyptic-scenario..."there isn?t the healthy and beauty world...in this world the life s**t on you..even you don`t s**t back" you could say^^... in another point the story-stuff wouldn?t never go out of ressources...the senario is well chosen(sry for repeating)....enough with throwing honey around...i give you 4 of 5 stars(8 of 10 points if this sounds better)...why this?..nothing is perfect...i beleave/think that you could bring out more details to bring the reader more partly to this world...f.e. as fan of fight club..remember the describtion of its ikea-citchen or astronautflight over its trash bin" the starbucks empire.."xd a funny way to critizise the society...that was only a brainstorming idea...i hope there will be more of this FF it`s pretty good
p.s. sry for my english out of practise
Thanks.. I always "lol" when Tyler calls Narrator Ikea Boy.
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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter 9.. The Infamous Chapter that was banned by the Forums
your the thread hero caliburn
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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter 9.. The Infamous Chapter that was banned by the Forums
I'll try to post the Chapter tomorrow. Unfortunely you can't get the chapter you really want. The "Other" one.
your the thread hero caliburn
I'm the thread hero. You shouldn't forget the importance of entertainment.
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Maybe he`s more of a fan of this FF than the other
EDIT: Lets hope for a chance in the future...
No I amxd.. No seriosly the thread is the thread hero..
He`s always been and so will he also always be.
Sneaky ones, sneaky twice, sneaky forever..
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Naruto_Lee
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agreed with you dude...........kenshin we want chapter 10 as soon as possible may be by this week...........makee sure you release it.......
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King Dante
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He did wrote chapter 11 already.So when will you release chapter 10?
I thought you said that you`ve already written chapter 11 as well?
Great job, looking forward to UM again
King Dante
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The most popular Fanfiction of this section is enough to tell you that you should start reading it.
Also we will have to wait awhile before chapter 10 comes out, so you litterally got all the time in the world to read the 9 first chapters
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You will only know if you try it. The feedback is mainly Positive.
As for the Next Chapter it takes me roughly 30 minutes to post it with all the codes and stuff, so it will take a few days to weeks.
It's when i have some spare time and more carbs on my system.
Chapter 11 is written too by the way.
As for the Next Chapter it takes me roughly 30 minutes to post it with all the codes and stuff, so it will take a few days to weeks.
It's when i have some spare time and more carbs on my system.
Chapter 11 is written too by the way.
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I hope that the MODs will allow chapter ten and eleven to be posted or else it will be very disappointing for us fans -_-