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Black despair Part 6 "Revelation"
BLACK despair
PART SIX
"REVELATION"
Narrator: The figure Kou saw grew nearer as he laid passed out on the floor and the child emerged out of the eccentric occurrence of the light in which was protruded out from within and then back in.
Initial Character Insight revisted - Child:
Jutsu Insight - Child:
Child: (In thought) Ahh..my head….where am I?
Assailant #4: (In thought) Kou?
Character insight – Assailant #4:
Narrator: The assailant quickly headed for the swooned ANBU placing two fingers against his neck.
Assailant #4: (In thought) He is still breathing..but it is shallow
Assailant #4 (Continued in thought) Who did this and are they still here?
Narrator: Realizing that Kou needed medical help as soon as possible the assailant began to pick his body up when he catches a glimpse of the child’s foot.
Assailant #4: You!
Narrator: Placing Kou back down, he moved over to the corridor’s intersection and viewed the child in pain.
Assailant #4: (In thought) The child Danzou-sama mentioned about…
Assailant #4: Are you responsible?
Child: *pant* *pant* I..I….
Narrator: The child abruptly faints from his ordeal and the assailant was left with no answers. He reached for his Tantou’s guard and walked over to the child. Kneeling down, he then checked for a pulse and found one.
Assailant #4: (In thought) He lives…
Narrator: Throwing the child over his shoulder, he then walked back to Kou and grabbed his arm. Picking him up, his arm is placed over the other shoulder and the assailant vigorously paced through the corridors for help.
[Setting: Root sub-department infirmary]
Root Iryou-nin #1: What is there status?
Character insight – Root Iryou-nin #1:
Note:
Narrator: Kou and child were both placed over slabs and examined whilst the assailant explained.
Assailant #4: One was lying unconscious and the other passed out not too long after I arrived..
Assailant #4: (Continued) There was something more..before I reached these two I saw a light consume their area
Root Iryou-nin #1: ..Understood
Root Iryou-nin #2: I will assist
Character insight – Root Iryou-nin #2:
Root Iryou-nin #1: Roger
Narrator: A few moments pass.
Root Iryou-nin #1: His vitals are low but he is stable
Root Iryou-nin #2: This child’s vitals are stable though, he has sustained brain damage and that extent I cannot answer
Root Iryou-nin #1: However, I do not know when he will wake up from what seems to be an induced coma
Assailant #4: (In thought) What?
Root Iryou-nin #2: …
Narrator: The two iryou-nin then make eye contact
Narrator: Both iryou-nin then walked over to their supervisor who lied towards the back of the infirmary room.
Root Iryou-nin #2: May we both have a word with you?
Head Root Iryou-nin: Yes
Character insight – Head Root Iryou-nin:
Narrator: The three iryou-nin begin to converse with themselves. Several moments pass and they conclude.
Head Root Iryou-nin: With our examinations and analysis we simply could not identify the cause
Head Root Iryou-nin: (Continued) The incident that involved these two might be the reason for their outcomes..however we are not entirely sure
Assailant #4: Understood…I will report this to Danzou-sama
Head Root Iryou-nin: We will continue with our observations
Assailant #4: Yes
Narrator: The assailant makes his way post haste. Upon arriving a thought crosses his mind.
Assailant #4: (In thought) Could this have all been the child’s doing?
Setting change: Danzou’s chamber
*knock*
Danzou: Come in
Danzou: (Continue) What brings you back Akio?
Character Insight - Assailant #4's identity revealed:
Akio: Urgent news concerning Kou and the recruited child
Danzou: Inform me…
[Setting change: Konohagakure no Sato forest]
Unknown Shinobi: I instead found you and could not resist my blood thirst
Unknown Shinobi: (Continued) The child was trained and sent to Konoha for intel…have you seen him?
Unknown Shinobi: *snickers* Wait..why the silence?
Ryuuta: (In thought) The child was incognito
Unknown Shinobi: Have you seen him or are you simply not interested in my history? *snicker*
Ryuuta: ..Continue
Unknown Shinobi: Alright…you see this headband of mine
Narrator: The shinobi raised his arm and placed a thumb onto the slashed forehead protector.
Unknown Shinobi: This child and I are formerly from the Dokugakure no Sato (Village of Hidden Poison)
Setting Insight – Dokugakure no Sato revealed:
Unknown Shinobi: That small infernal country; Shi no Kuni (Land of Death) always involved in coup d’états throughout the years
Setting Insight – Shi no Kuni revealed:
Unknown Shinobi: Many of our own people died all for their selfish desires of control over the country
Unknown Shinobi: (Continued) Me along with other powerful shinobi aligned ourselves and created an organization; Dokueki (Venom)
Organization insight - Dokueki revealed:
Note:
Unknown Shinobi: You should know that an organization maintains silence and I suppose my name is all there is left unsaid
Unknown Shinobi: (Continued) My name is Natsuyo and no it is not an alias but my given name
Narrator: Natsuyo then unveiled his mask exposing his face.
Character Insight - Unknown Shinobi’s identity revealed:
Natsuyo: You might be asking yourself why would I reveal myself, no?
Natsuyo: (Continued) Well the reason is because you will not be leaving this forest alive…
Seventh part will be released next week, same day, titled Obscure (Look for it!).
PART SIX
"REVELATION"
Narrator: The figure Kou saw grew nearer as he laid passed out on the floor and the child emerged out of the eccentric occurrence of the light in which was protruded out from within and then back in.
Initial Character Insight revisted - Child:
● Kekkei Genkai: Hiton (Light release) (added)
● Nature Type: Hi (Light) (added), unspecified first & secondary nature (added)
● Hair color: Gray (due to the light’s side effect and was black originally) (added)
● Eye color: Dark slate (added)
● Nature Type: Hi (Light) (added), unspecified first & secondary nature (added)
● Hair color: Gray (due to the light’s side effect and was black originally) (added)
● Eye color: Dark slate (added)
Jutsu Insight - Child:
● Jutsu Name: Unknown
● Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Hiton (Light release)
● Class: Offensive, defensive
● Range: All ranges
● Hand seals: Is not initiated through this use but rather by any emotional outburst.
● Description: This jutsu can only be unleashed through the requirement of emotional distress where bright light is released through the user’s entire body. It acts as a barrier and can leave the opponent unconscious. If this jutsu is discharged with all of your emotions out of control may the result lie in memory loss, migrating headaches and or genetic mutation. This is due to not yet perfecting the kekkei genkai.
● Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Hiton (Light release)
● Class: Offensive, defensive
● Range: All ranges
● Hand seals: Is not initiated through this use but rather by any emotional outburst.
● Description: This jutsu can only be unleashed through the requirement of emotional distress where bright light is released through the user’s entire body. It acts as a barrier and can leave the opponent unconscious. If this jutsu is discharged with all of your emotions out of control may the result lie in memory loss, migrating headaches and or genetic mutation. This is due to not yet perfecting the kekkei genkai.
Child: (In thought) Ahh..my head….where am I?
Assailant #4: (In thought) Kou?
Character insight – Assailant #4:
● A main character
● Gender: Male
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Masked
● Gender: Male
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Masked
Narrator: The assailant quickly headed for the swooned ANBU placing two fingers against his neck.
Assailant #4: (In thought) He is still breathing..but it is shallow
Assailant #4 (Continued in thought) Who did this and are they still here?
Narrator: Realizing that Kou needed medical help as soon as possible the assailant began to pick his body up when he catches a glimpse of the child’s foot.
Assailant #4: You!
Narrator: Placing Kou back down, he moved over to the corridor’s intersection and viewed the child in pain.
Assailant #4: (In thought) The child Danzou-sama mentioned about…
Assailant #4: Are you responsible?
Child: *pant* *pant* I..I….
Narrator: The child abruptly faints from his ordeal and the assailant was left with no answers. He reached for his Tantou’s guard and walked over to the child. Kneeling down, he then checked for a pulse and found one.
Assailant #4: (In thought) He lives…
Narrator: Throwing the child over his shoulder, he then walked back to Kou and grabbed his arm. Picking him up, his arm is placed over the other shoulder and the assailant vigorously paced through the corridors for help.
[Setting: Root sub-department infirmary]
Root Iryou-nin #1: What is there status?
Character insight – Root Iryou-nin #1:
● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Root iryou-nin, shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown (due to a flat beret-like cap)
● Eye color: Chocolate
● Face: Porcelain animal mask (only in missions)
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Root iryou-nin, shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown (due to a flat beret-like cap)
● Eye color: Chocolate
● Face: Porcelain animal mask (only in missions)
Note:
Iryou-nin translates to medical care ninja.
Narrator: Kou and child were both placed over slabs and examined whilst the assailant explained.
Assailant #4: One was lying unconscious and the other passed out not too long after I arrived..
Assailant #4: (Continued) There was something more..before I reached these two I saw a light consume their area
Root Iryou-nin #1: ..Understood
Root Iryou-nin #2: I will assist
Character insight – Root Iryou-nin #2:
● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Root iryou-nin, shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown (due to a flat beret-like cap)
● Eye color: Celadon
● Face: Porcelain animal mask (only in missions)
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Root iryou-nin, shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown (due to a flat beret-like cap)
● Eye color: Celadon
● Face: Porcelain animal mask (only in missions)
Root Iryou-nin #1: Roger
Narrator: A few moments pass.
Root Iryou-nin #1: His vitals are low but he is stable
Root Iryou-nin #2: This child’s vitals are stable though, he has sustained brain damage and that extent I cannot answer
Root Iryou-nin #1: However, I do not know when he will wake up from what seems to be an induced coma
Assailant #4: (In thought) What?
Root Iryou-nin #2: …
Narrator: The two iryou-nin then make eye contact
Narrator: Both iryou-nin then walked over to their supervisor who lied towards the back of the infirmary room.
Root Iryou-nin #2: May we both have a word with you?
Head Root Iryou-nin: Yes
Character insight – Head Root Iryou-nin:
● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: Highest ranking Root Iryou-nin, shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown (due to a flat beret-like cap)
● Eye color: Ash grey
● Face: Porcelain animal mask (only in missions)
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: Highest ranking Root Iryou-nin, shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown (due to a flat beret-like cap)
● Eye color: Ash grey
● Face: Porcelain animal mask (only in missions)
Narrator: The three iryou-nin begin to converse with themselves. Several moments pass and they conclude.
Head Root Iryou-nin: With our examinations and analysis we simply could not identify the cause
Head Root Iryou-nin: (Continued) The incident that involved these two might be the reason for their outcomes..however we are not entirely sure
Assailant #4: Understood…I will report this to Danzou-sama
Head Root Iryou-nin: We will continue with our observations
Assailant #4: Yes
Narrator: The assailant makes his way post haste. Upon arriving a thought crosses his mind.
Assailant #4: (In thought) Could this have all been the child’s doing?
Setting change: Danzou’s chamber
*knock*
Danzou: Come in
Danzou: (Continue) What brings you back Akio?
Character Insight - Assailant #4's identity revealed:
● Name: Akio (a code name given to the shinobi Terai in present time) (added)
● Classification: ANBU (added)
● Occupation: ANBU Root shinobi (added)
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root (added)
● Hair color: Unknown (due to mask) (added)
● Eye color: Unknown (due to mask) (added)
● Face: Porcelain animal mask (only in missions) (added)
● Weapons: Tantou (added)
● Classification: ANBU (added)
● Occupation: ANBU Root shinobi (added)
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root (added)
● Hair color: Unknown (due to mask) (added)
● Eye color: Unknown (due to mask) (added)
● Face: Porcelain animal mask (only in missions) (added)
● Weapons: Tantou (added)
Akio: Urgent news concerning Kou and the recruited child
Danzou: Inform me…
[Setting change: Konohagakure no Sato forest]
Unknown Shinobi: I instead found you and could not resist my blood thirst
Unknown Shinobi: (Continued) The child was trained and sent to Konoha for intel…have you seen him?
Unknown Shinobi: *snickers* Wait..why the silence?
Ryuuta: (In thought) The child was incognito
Unknown Shinobi: Have you seen him or are you simply not interested in my history? *snicker*
Ryuuta: ..Continue
Unknown Shinobi: Alright…you see this headband of mine
Narrator: The shinobi raised his arm and placed a thumb onto the slashed forehead protector.
Unknown Shinobi: This child and I are formerly from the Dokugakure no Sato (Village of Hidden Poison)
Setting Insight – Dokugakure no Sato revealed:
● Village: Doku (Poison)
● Founder: Unknown
● Founder: Unknown
Unknown Shinobi: That small infernal country; Shi no Kuni (Land of Death) always involved in coup d’états throughout the years
Setting Insight – Shi no Kuni revealed:
● Land: Shi (Death)
● Description: Appears like a wasteland
● Description: Appears like a wasteland
Unknown Shinobi: Many of our own people died all for their selfish desires of control over the country
Unknown Shinobi: (Continued) Me along with other powerful shinobi aligned ourselves and created an organization; Dokueki (Venom)
Organization insight - Dokueki revealed:
● Nuke-nin subsidiary
● Founder: Unknown
● Purpose: Unknown
● Priority: Unknown
● Activities: Training
● Founder: Unknown
● Purpose: Unknown
● Priority: Unknown
● Activities: Training
Note:
Nuke-nin translates to missing ninja.
Unknown Shinobi: You should know that an organization maintains silence and I suppose my name is all there is left unsaid
Unknown Shinobi: (Continued) My name is Natsuyo and no it is not an alias but my given name
Narrator: Natsuyo then unveiled his mask exposing his face.
Character Insight - Unknown Shinobi’s identity revealed:
● Name: Natsuyo (added)
● Classification: Nuke-nin (added)
● Affiliation: Dokugakure, Dokueki (added)
● Hair color: Red velvet (added)
● Eye color: Indigo (added)
● Face: Unmasked (at the moment) (added)
● Weapons: None (added)
● Classification: Nuke-nin (added)
● Affiliation: Dokugakure, Dokueki (added)
● Hair color: Red velvet (added)
● Eye color: Indigo (added)
● Face: Unmasked (at the moment) (added)
● Weapons: None (added)
Natsuyo: You might be asking yourself why would I reveal myself, no?
Natsuyo: (Continued) Well the reason is because you will not be leaving this forest alive…
Seventh part will be released next week, same day, titled Obscure (Look for it!).
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