Well I gotta say the atmosphere is amazing, the issue I have is that Mikasa doesn't fit in there. Also the lighting is a bit off, its hard to be harsh to your friends. But in all honesty I know you can do better, after all you won first place with a piece that has the same style as this over on DA. I like the colors!! I think the depth could be worked on more, and I also feel the water could be highlighted more. Sorry bud, I know you would have worked hard on this which is why it pains me to give negative comments. But I just know you can do better.
Btw I just signed up at PP see you there