I'd make the render more distinguished with more lights. What'd been really awesome is if she'd got her own shadow on one of the walls saying the lighting matches. That'd be really sophisticated blending with the atmosphere indeed. The lights doesn't make great sense as they seem to be reflections of something far behind that bounces on the walls because there's an opening in the background but it's all damp in light so the lights are pretty much there to make it seem blend better. While they do look good there isn't much thought put behind them it seems. Or i am just nitpicking xO. I'd love some random fractals blending and more a mysic atmosphere. The render is kinda damp and dark with not much highlights. Feels like you used the burn tool too much or.. W/e you used. The text's nice but i'd have it more centered

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