Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopath"

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

its awesome but you r making the main character a psycho .
still i like it :xd
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

Update:
As most people may know by now, chapter 4 will be released tomorrow(25th.)

Head to Utopic Monkeys chapter 9 for update on chapter 10..
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

First will have to discuss the chapter with Rei again and in a more detailed manner as it's something BIG.. So might not come out today after all.
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

you are back ah???
He is but he just left. He sended the chapter 4 to Rei for approval, he told me.
I certainly think that it might come or not come out as it was originally writen.
I read it and it's mind blowing but Rei is much more flexible in that aspect, so there's hope.
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

He is but he just left. He sended the chapter 4 to Rei for approval, he told me.
I certainly think that it might come or not come out as it was originally writen.
I read it and it's mind blowing but Rei is much more flexible in that aspect, so there's hope.
thats good to hear.............
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

thats good to hear.............
Don't know when the chapter can come out. He's waiting for Rei's approval and she's usually very busy.
Might take days..
Since the Lazy f*ck does not make the updates, me and Ruler do LOL
 

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Don't know when the chapter can come out. He's waiting for Rei's approval and she's usually very busy.
Might take days..
Since the Lazy f*ck does not make the updates, me and Ruler do LOL
ya you can ask me any help if you think i can!!!!!!
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

Updates, as i expected Rei cannot approve Chapter 4 for the Obvious reasons and i do respect her decision as it's real something "OUT IN YOUR FACE SHOCKING".
Be all happy that Chapter 1 is not trashed by now as well (might be in future), eventhough Lawliet approved it, Rei said Chapter 1 probably has to be deleted, it probably wasn't because she didn't wanted to mess the storyline since we are already in Chapter 3.
Once again i have to say Rei is awesome as she can do things in a discreet way without any bias or acting prematurely leaving everyone pissed.
As of now the future of this FF is unsure. I'm pretty sure you guys don't want me to change my style and the Chapter would have to be probably 75% cut it out.
So i really don't know as of now, "Utopic Monkeys" can continue without problems,though.
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

Updates, as i expected Rei cannot approve Chapter 4 for the Obvious reasons and i do respect her decision as it's real something "OUT IN YOUR FACE SHOCKING".
Be all happy that Chapter 1 is not trashed by now as well (might be in future), eventhough Lawliet approved it, Rei said Chapter 1 probably has to be deleted, it probably wasn't because she didn't wanted to mess the storyline since we are already in Chapter 3.
Once again i have to say Rei is awesome as she can do things in a discreet way without any bias or acting prematurely leaving everyone pissed.
As of now the future of this FF is unsure. I'm pretty sure you guys don't want me to change my style and the Chapter would have to be probably 75% cut it out.
So i really don't know as of now, "Utopic Monkeys" can continue without problems,though.
I have an idea, but it might be a lot of time spending for you:

Have everyone who wants chapter 4 write: I want her, and the you can send it by PM to them and let them reply there.

And when chapter 5 is done, you post an update here, and we repeat the progress.. What do you think?

EDIT:
Since the Lazy f*ck does not make the updates, me and Ruler do LOL
Hahaxd It might seem so, but its basicly because your brother is banned "all" the time;):p
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

I have an idea, but it might be a lot of time spending for you:

Have everyone who wants chapter 4 write: I want her, and the you can send it by PM to them and let them reply there.

And when chapter 5 is done, you post an update here, and we repeat the progress.. What do you think?

EDIT:

Hahaxd It might seem so, but its basicly because your brother is banned "all" the time;):p
that might be a good idea............it might work.......i'm on!!!!
 

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Let's not make any confusions. It's not that i can't continue this FanFiction, Rei never said i had to stop it. I just can't post the Chapter 4 like it was writen.
It's like when a studio censures scenes from a certain movie to make it to theaters.
 

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Let's not make any confusions. It's not that i can't continue this FanFiction, Rei never said i had to stop it. I just can't post the Chapter 4 like it was writen.
It's like when a studio censures scenes from a certain movie to make it to theaters.
then can you send me the original thing?????
 

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I have read it and really would love to see the Original thing posted. I guess the only way would be for an Administrator to open a sub-section in this Section for more Mature type of fanfictions.
I really think that's a really good idea, let's face it Ken brings something much better and new for the table other than the other typical fanfictions on this section and there's alot of 18+ people on this site that want to read complex stuff and not the usual "soft" thing in this section.
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

Ok guys. Unfortunely for some of you and after speaking with Zise on MSN it was combined that i would not continue with this specific Fanfiction.
Mostly for respect to Rei and off course graphic reasons.
I will not change my way of writing so rather to do a "softer" thing i prefer to end it in the middle.
For respect to Rei i will not Private Message the Chapter either because it is "Grotesque shocking" in a sense like she told me on her Private Message.
So please don't ask me for the chapter.
It was fun writting this but that's all that you will get from this story.
From now on Zise stated that i don't need aprovals so i'm free to release Utopic Monkeys under the rules whenever i want.
Thanks to all.
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

Ok guys. Unfortunely for some of you and after speaking with Zise on MSN it was combined that i would not continue with this specific Fanfiction.
Mostly for respect to Rei and off course graphic reasons.
I will not change my way of writing so rather to do a "softer" thing i prefer to end it in the middle.
For respect to Rei i will not Private Message the Chapter either because it is "Grotesque shocking" in a sense like she told me on her Private Message.
So please don't ask me for the chapter.
It was fun writting this but that's all that you will get from this story.
From now on Zise stated that i don't need aprovals so i'm free to release Utopic Monkeys under the rules whenever i want.
Thanks to all.
I'm guessing i was the only one to ever read it other than you and Rei. That chapter is a thing of beauty, the shocking value is so huge..
 
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