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We'll have to wait at least 2-4 weeks for Chapter 10 of Utopic Monkeys
Not entirely true. Maybe 2 weeks or less.
"Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter 9.. **** Liquor - Open till Dawn
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Guys i'm very satisfied with the feedback that i'm receiving from "The Past creates The FUTURE".. So i may have to stretch out those final 3 chapters in a row.
Unfortunely Chapter 10 will have to wait 4-6 weeks but it will be worth it I PROMISSE.
Thanks my kind readers.
Unfortunely Chapter 10 will have to wait 4-6 weeks but it will be worth it I PROMISSE.
Thanks my kind readers.
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Great news people. He finally finished writing chapter 10 of Utopic Monkeys and will be releasing it soon.
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I agree with someone saying this perfectly depicts the movie, From Dusk till Dawn. And yea, Salma Hayek fits the role of Sanatica Pandemonium to a T.
Can't say much as this chapter's more of a buildup the to succeeding chapters. But, I'm feeling that there's some big trouble impending involving Shura and Sujiro.
OTOH, I happen to wonder if they'll be able to meet the point-person in time. Or, whether the duo are actually gonna meet the person within the vicinity of the bar.
I'd like to think that this Sanatica will end up as the point-person Capt Ken's talking about (though I think it's resolved that such person's a "HE"), but it'd be much cooler if she ends up being one of the fiercest villains Shura and Sujiro have to face with. Hmm... there's a chance that she could be Shura's ladylove.
Can't say much as this chapter's more of a buildup the to succeeding chapters. But, I'm feeling that there's some big trouble impending involving Shura and Sujiro.
OTOH, I happen to wonder if they'll be able to meet the point-person in time. Or, whether the duo are actually gonna meet the person within the vicinity of the bar.
I'd like to think that this Sanatica will end up as the point-person Capt Ken's talking about (though I think it's resolved that such person's a "HE"), but it'd be much cooler if she ends up being one of the fiercest villains Shura and Sujiro have to face with. Hmm... there's a chance that she could be Shura's ladylove.
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I agree with Shunsui there. Ken said it was only an homage to the environment of the bar because...
If you watch the movie and read this chapter.. Things are completely different that what happens in the movie.
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It's not that they are completely different. It's just that some elements have this certain resemblance, i.e. the bar, vampire thingies, some star dancer, the grungy feel/atmosphere. The depiction of the bar thing from the movie fits the depiction of the bar described in this chapter. Hence, I didn't say that they're very similar in every nitty-gritty detail.
Also, the chapter is more of a new arc starting off. There's still a lot of things that may transpire which clearly differs from whatever happens to the movie. I would have said it was more of a movie-inspired scenario. I know that writers pull off inspiration from certain things, hence the "incidental" (or more often, deliberate) resemblance on plots and setting.
And, yea. I did watch the movie. =)
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I guess he has to be the one replying to this matter, tomorrow. The consensus is that was only an homage and Ken himself said that he based the environment of the bar in From dusk till dawn.
He says that in the end of the chapter.
As i said, when you see the movie everything that happens in the chapter is much different and as Shunsui said even better.
Update:
Chapter 10 and chapter 11 of UM is already written, and chapter 10 will be released on Saturday or Sunday,~Kenshin.
"Original" Quote:
"I have good news:
I have written chapter 10 & 11
10 will be released sunday
10 is more build up
11 is a shitload of death and fighting
Tomorrow(25th.) is time for the shocking chapter 4 of the newest FF(The Past Creates The Future)".
Chapter 10 and chapter 11 of UM is already written, and chapter 10 will be released on Saturday or Sunday,~Kenshin.
"Original" Quote:
"I have good news:
I have written chapter 10 & 11
10 will be released sunday
10 is more build up
11 is a shitload of death and fighting
Tomorrow(25th.) is time for the shocking chapter 4 of the newest FF(The Past Creates The Future)".
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This maybe will be the one Fanfiction i have to stick with as i find it very hard for Chapter 4 of "The Past Creates the Future" to be approved.
So Chapter 10 maybe can be released sooner, it will depend if the other gets approved or not.
So Chapter 10 maybe can be released sooner, it will depend if the other gets approved or not.
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To bad to hear about your other FF, but consider my idea that i put on that thread
At least you can continue this one
man but that was more interesting than this one............
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I actually prefered this one at first but after reading Chapter 4 i "falled in love" for the other fanfiction. So i agree with you.
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I will post chapter 10 tomorrow. If you ask for the other Fanfiction.
Well,it's over, infracts the rules by having adult material so i can't post it, so don't ask for it and read the rules.
Well,it's over, infracts the rules by having adult material so i can't post it, so don't ask for it and read the rules.