"Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter 9.. **** Liquor - Open till Dawn
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I will definitely check it out when I get the chance lol Maybe I will be able to relate
Oh I have observed Kenshin-dono, my friend you taking in people?s usernames and adding them into your Fanfic. However, I have not been offered a role?
yow ken n the geng...nice chap...i dont knw what else to say bcoz all the good comment already posted...so overall i give u 8/10...i think still need some built up to make the story even better...good luck..
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I will definitely check it out when I get the chance lol Maybe I will be able to relate
Who's to say you will not feature in the future? but i really can't use Kuroi Honoo, you have to give me another name.
Thanks, see some people say i do to much "Build-Up", others like you say it needs more. xd
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As people said on the other Fanfiction. They want Utopic Monkeys and not the other shit kissing the moderators and administrators asses that you are doing.
You use to criticize that procedure and now you do the same? You being an hypocrit Jon.
Hey go easy on him now.. He`s the famous Golden Boy afterall. He can do whatever he wantxd
Anyway, Kenshin I`m hearing that you`re quite busy next week. Does that mean no UM next week?
SO we will have to wait another week after the next one?John Constantine
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Hey go easy on him now.. He`s the famous Golden Boy afterall. He can do whatever he wantxd
Anyway, Kenshin I`m hearing that you`re quite busy next week. Does that mean no UM next week?
I have like 3 frequencies and don't even do works and relatories as my grades are already very good, so i just say screw to those.
It's hard because to do a quality chapter i need to be focus in every aspect.
- Descriptions
- Detailed and natural convos
- Psychology of characters
- Description of scenarios (which is freaking hard)
- Storyline
- English is not my first language so it's extra hard with grammar
- Build up of situations
- Takes a long time with the codes to deliver something pretty
It's too many stuff, sure if i want to release a chapter like the first 5 of UM (despite the huge praise i think they don't compare to the others onwards), i could squeeze one but i want to do a good job in the next chapter since people have been waiting for so long since chapter 9 and seem to be anxious.
I can probably make one but i will not promisse i can release one as third chapter of my other FF takes priority due to being the one that will contest on the FF of the month.
It's hard because to do a quality chapter i need to be focus in every aspect.
- Descriptions
- Detailed and natural convos
- Psychology of characters
- Description of scenarios (which is freaking hard)
- Storyline
- English is not my first language so it's extra hard with grammar
- Build up of situations
- Takes a long time with the codes to deliver something pretty
It's too many stuff, sure if i want to release a chapter like the first 5 of UM (despite the huge praise i think they don't compare to the others onwards), i could squeeze one but i want to do a good job in the next chapter since people have been waiting for so long since chapter 9 and seem to be anxious.
I can probably make one but i will not promisse i can release one as third chapter of my other FF takes priority due to being the one that will contest on the FF of the month.
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Okay i see. Hard to be the peoples man
Golden boy as you guys "dearly" put it.
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It was actually several guys calling me that from what i read when i got banned.
I guess people both love me and hate me on this section.
I guess people both love me and hate me on this section.
i think those who hate u,they dont appreciate wht u guy work for...or maybe jeolous hehexdxdxd..no offence k 4 those person hehe....
hmm juz wondering when the next chap will come out???hope to be the 1st 10who read it hehe
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Read this for more intel. I MIGHT be able to do one next week but i can't PROMISSE one.
i think those who hate u,they dont appreciate wht u guy work for...or maybe jeolous hehexdxdxd..no offence k 4 those person hehe....
hmm juz wondering when the next chap will come out???hope to be the 1st 10who read it hehe
I too agree but i can't speak my mind or else people call me cocky and conceded but i have some facts to back that up.
Some type of success or recognition many times gets you alliegnated and it's not all that's cracked up to be.
But i'm used to success by now i had to live with it in my Basketball days and only hope my career as Psychologist when it starts it gets just as good.
Some type of success or recognition many times gets you alliegnated and it's not all that's cracked up to be.
But i'm used to success by now i had to live with it in my Basketball days and only hope my career as Psychologist when it starts it gets just as good.
okey dokey...i knw a lot of thinking hv to be done when we want to make story good..good luck 4 tht..i knw u guy can do it...
yup sometime it juz better to keep ur feeling juz to ur self...bcz telling someone else would only make thing even worse(maybe hehe)...psychologist..wow tht an awesome job man...
yup sometime it juz better to keep ur feeling juz to ur self...bcz telling someone else would only make thing even worse(maybe hehe)...psychologist..wow tht an awesome job man...
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I'm in my third year degree taking Psychology but i'm deeply involved in Forex currency trading business, so with all the money i'm making out of Forex and be possibly making more in the future because i'm investing more now, i dunno if i would want to even go to the trouble to exerce Psychology but let's see what future holds.
It's a little off topic but you guys get to know a little more about the author of this work.
It's a little off topic but you guys get to know a little more about the author of this work.
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I sure hope so but it really puts high standards for the upcoming Chapter 10.