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Black despair Part 1 "Orphan"
BLACK despair
PART ONE
"ORPHAN"
Introduction: This is a story of a
youthful shinobi empty, sorrowed and painful past. You as the reader will explore this individual’s cloudy background.
Note:
Initial Character Insight - Child:
[Setting: A forest]
Narrator: A small child had been wondering around in a dense forest. Tears began to stream down his face as he leaned against a large tree. He then wiped his eyes but couldn’t stop sobbing. Unanswered thoughts about his origin surfaced which seemed to only depress the child further. This desolate child day after day yearned for a mother and father, someone to love him and to love back, the family he never had. Unwilling to move any further, the child slid down the side of the tree, crisscrossed his arms above the knees, lowered his head onto his arms and cried himself to sleep.
Assailant #1: *whispers* I’ve cleared this area and you?
Character Insight - Assailant #1:
Assailant #2: *whispers* Cleared here as well…
Character Insight - Assailant #2:
Narrator: A soaring hawk’s loud cry wakes the child. Rubbing his eyes, he ponders how long he had been asleep. Raising his head upwards, he gazes into the orangey sky revealing the setting sun. Worries of the night and the things that inhabit it pushed the child to move onwards. As he stood up from the tree, he began to walk and came across a twig on the ground *snap* unbeknownst to him this normal happening would change his life forever.
Assailant #1: Rog-
Assailant #2: Wait..
Assailant #1: …
Narrator: All of a sudden, a single shuriken was launched skinning the child’s face. Eyes widened as he stopped dead in his tracks. Shivers are sent down his spine as he stood frightened and frozen. In an instant, leaves are heard flickering on the ground as someone appears from behind, placing a hand over his eyes and mouth.
Assailant #2: Are you a spy?
Narrator: Slightly moving his hand, the child is then enabled to reply.
Child: Nnn..no
Assailant #1: I don’t believe you…
Narrator: Someone else abruptly lands onto the ground from a tree branch.
Assailant #1: What is the status?
Assailant #2: It is a young child however, I do not think he is being truthful with me..what should we do with him?
Child: *gasp*
Assailant #1: Take him back, I think he might be a useful edition as I have little doubt that he is a threat, I’ll stay here and double scope the area
Assailant #2: Understood
Narrator: As assailant #2 and captive child fade away into the deep forest, assailant #1 swiftly leaps back onto a tree branch high up in the canopy whilst keeping an eye out.
Second part will be released next week, same day, titled Hostage (Look for it!).
PART ONE
"ORPHAN"
Introduction: This is a story of a
youthful shinobi empty, sorrowed and painful past. You as the reader will explore this individual’s cloudy background.
Note:
First and foremost, this is my very first Fanfic and so yoroshiku onegaishimasu (please treat me well). Next, I will not be informing you all (the readers) of the main character’s identities and descriptions. All other introduced characters, will contain minor details and with every part released, will their descriptions be revealed. Please be patient. –Arigatou
Initial Character Insight - Child:
● Main protagonist
● Gender: Male
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Gender: Male
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
[Setting: A forest]
Narrator: A small child had been wondering around in a dense forest. Tears began to stream down his face as he leaned against a large tree. He then wiped his eyes but couldn’t stop sobbing. Unanswered thoughts about his origin surfaced which seemed to only depress the child further. This desolate child day after day yearned for a mother and father, someone to love him and to love back, the family he never had. Unwilling to move any further, the child slid down the side of the tree, crisscrossed his arms above the knees, lowered his head onto his arms and cried himself to sleep.
Assailant #1: *whispers* I’ve cleared this area and you?
Character Insight - Assailant #1:
● A main character
● Gender: Male
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Masked
● Gender: Male
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Masked
Assailant #2: *whispers* Cleared here as well…
Character Insight - Assailant #2:
● A main character
● Gender: Male
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Masked
● Gender: Male
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Masked
Narrator: A soaring hawk’s loud cry wakes the child. Rubbing his eyes, he ponders how long he had been asleep. Raising his head upwards, he gazes into the orangey sky revealing the setting sun. Worries of the night and the things that inhabit it pushed the child to move onwards. As he stood up from the tree, he began to walk and came across a twig on the ground *snap* unbeknownst to him this normal happening would change his life forever.
Assailant #1: Rog-
Assailant #2: Wait..
Assailant #1: …
Narrator: All of a sudden, a single shuriken was launched skinning the child’s face. Eyes widened as he stopped dead in his tracks. Shivers are sent down his spine as he stood frightened and frozen. In an instant, leaves are heard flickering on the ground as someone appears from behind, placing a hand over his eyes and mouth.
Assailant #2: Are you a spy?
Narrator: Slightly moving his hand, the child is then enabled to reply.
Child: Nnn..no
Assailant #1: I don’t believe you…
Narrator: Someone else abruptly lands onto the ground from a tree branch.
Assailant #1: What is the status?
Assailant #2: It is a young child however, I do not think he is being truthful with me..what should we do with him?
Child: *gasp*
Assailant #1: Take him back, I think he might be a useful edition as I have little doubt that he is a threat, I’ll stay here and double scope the area
Assailant #2: Understood
Narrator: As assailant #2 and captive child fade away into the deep forest, assailant #1 swiftly leaps back onto a tree branch high up in the canopy whilst keeping an eye out.
Second part will be released next week, same day, titled Hostage (Look for it!).
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