Bleeding Heart (poem)

[Chibiusa]

Our love was fleeting,
Yes I loved you.

But now you're leaving,
That's just what you do.

You left me bleeding,
I can't continue.

With this razor called agony
I bleed what is known as heartbreak​

Disclaimer: this is completely unrelated to THAT incident (if you know, you know)

 

[King of Camelot]

I loved the simplicity yet effectiveness of the poem.

Great to see more people starting to make poems, a good change of pace.

 

[Pumpkin Ninja]

It's related to that incident.

 

[~Ethereal~]

More like stabbing, burning and bleeding all at the same time. ¬___¬

 

[Chibiusa]

More like stabbing, burning and bleeding all at the same time. ¬___¬

Someone gets it

 

[Koto Amatsuyomi]

Gr8 poem U & SDO have made me like this section more

 

[ShadowACS]

good job

 

[iNotorious]

This poem, i'm going to say it to my girlfriend, i hope she likes it as much as i did. 10/10

 

[Chibiusa]

I loved the simplicity yet effectiveness of the poem.

Great to see more people starting to make poems, a good change of pace.

Ty. Simplicity is what I was going for. I wanted the audience to feel my emotion but not in an overbearing way.

Gr8 poem U & SDO have made me like this section more

Variety is healthy

This poem, i'm going to say it to my girlfriend, i hope she likes it as much as i did. 10/10

Let me know if she likes it <3

 

[Conspirator.]

Superb poem. You should keep on making more, this section will be ten times more interesting that way.

 

[Ryóma]

It feels like it is missing something...