"Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Five.. " Ch? The Avenger, The Revelation "

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"Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Five.. " Ch? The Avenger, The Revelation "

"Utopic Monkeys"

Utopic Monkeys - Chapter 1 - " The Legendary Knight "



Utopic Monkeys - Chapter 2 - " Ch? The Avenger, Introduction "



Utopic Monkeys - Chapter 3 - " Ch? The Avenger, Medusa Spit "



Utopic Monkeys - Chapter 4 - " Ch? The Avenger, Shukuchi "


Chapter Five.. " Ch? The Avenger, The Revelation "

" When the world is filled with evil. Warriors of hope appear.
The Utopic Knights.
Long ago a virus has spread over the entire Earth. Most of the population
was dizimated. Only the stronger & the richer survived.
Chaos begun to rule the world. Destruction is the every day breath of the sole survivors and the richer got even richer and more corrupt, creating an entire new Utopic world shaped to their greed, desires and interests.
That's when the Knights of Hope appeared. They were called Space Monkeys.
With their bodies as their weapons; Their fists can rip the sky and reach the gods.
Their feet can split the ground and cause an Earthquake. And now,
these Knights with Bravery, proud and power have appeared once again as the new Space Monkeys.."​

Babilon A.D. , 2287 ( Utopic Future )

- Back in Bunny Larry's place. In a giant dark, messy living room filled with water. Near and near
mutilated, deformed creatures groaning and screaming in hunger by flesh trying to break in by force.
A path of destruction in Bunny Larry's residence is disposed. A battle to death is happening between 2 knights..

Ch? - THUNDER EARTHQUAKE

Thunder Earthquake

Element Style:Lightning
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short/Mid/Long
Speed: Mach 1.5​


Thunder Earthquake is a punch on the ground filled with electricity power by the user that will cause an impact full of electricity
and will hit everyone located in a 50 meter space surrounding the executer with 20.000 Volts of electricity.
The combination of this technique with water will amplify his effects to an higher degree.​

Sujiro ( Screams ) - Shitttttttt!!!

A Huge Electrical Explosion occur inside the room. Destruction and devastation is displayed everywhere in
Bunny Larry's Living room!!

Sujiro gets hit it full Edge by a huge discharge of the Thunder Earthquake and falls inanimate in the floor.
His body was just caught with 20.000 Volts of Pure Lightning and the effects magnified by the water surrounding the
area.
Sujiro's inanimate body is emanating Electricity and smoke.
No expression,no cardiac pulsations or any type of life seems to flow out of Sujiro.

Ch? falls on his knees in the ground and releases a little smirk of happiness and satisfaction.

Ch? ( Screams in happiness ) - I won!! I just killed you.

A voice is heard

Voice - I wouldn't celebrate this early..

An instant flash attack at the speed of light is executed..​

Shukuchi Level 3 = One step below the speed of the Gods.

Ch? cannot believe..​

Ch? - An omni-directional attack, using not only horizontal but vertical space.

Sujiro - There's nowhere to run now!

Sujiro just hits Ch?'s shoulder with The Sword of Heaven filled with Electricity and with such brutal force
that his arm his cutted out of his shoulder and separated from his body.

Ch? arm just falls in the ground that is filled with water. Blood dripping from the huge and deep cut is beginning
to mix with the water and creating a vision that resembles a pool of blood forming.
Ch?'s armless shoulder seems a waterfall of blood rapidly dropping and flowing over a cliff deep into a river.
Ch? ( Screams in pain ) - AHHHHHHHHH!!! MOTHER OF GODDDDD!! FUCKINGGG HELLLLL!!

Sujiro - I am the winner of this fight..

Ch? - I... Saw you... How can..??

Sujiro - You think you saw..

Sujiro - You acted just like i wanted and predicted.

Ch? - How in the hell..?? You avoided the Thunder Earthquake and managed...to save your friend as well.

Ch? - I saw you die right in front of me... Hit by the 20.000 Volts of the Thunder Earthquake.

Sujiro - Who you seen die right in front of you was one of my human clones that i summoned right before you gathered enough energy to perform the Thunder Earthquake.

Sujiro - I actually summoned 2 of them!!

Ch? - But... When?? I had my eyes on you the all time.

Sujiro - After i started to test your senses with my Shukuchi Level 1.

Sujiro - I summoned 2 clones and ordered for them to hide, just in case.

Sujiro - anyway..

Sujiro - I could only perform Shukuchi with my real body.
Human Clones have only 5% of our actual energy and can only perform weak attacks that do not use much of our energy.

Sujiro - One of them would be quick enough to save Dante from being hit by the Thunder sacrificing himself as a shield.

Look at little Dante there. He's fine and in good form. ( Sujiro points out in Dante's direction )

Ch? looks to a Dante that stands safe in the background.
Ch? displays a deep, angry look in his big brown eyes.

Sujiro - The other served as sacrifice as well but with other purposes.
He served as a decoy for me to be able to hide in that giant medieval lamp right on top of us.

Sujiro points for the Giant Medieval Lamp in top of them.​

Sujiro - You fell right into my little charade.
I made sure i used Shukuchi Level 3.
That way i would assure that you would be unable to see me hiding in the lamp.
Then, i just predicted that you would let your guard down after see "me" die in front of you.

Sujiro - It was as simple as that.

Sujiro - I have to congratulate you though.
You pushed me into using Shukuchi in Level 3. Which puts a huge strain on my legs
due to the amount of speed i gain out of it.
The strenght i have to use to move so fast destroys many red fibers in my legs and i can only fully recover from it in a lenght of days.

So, Congratulations..!!

Sujiro - Long story short and i just applied a powerful hit with my Sword From Heaven to your right shoulder and left you armless and crippled.
Incapacitaded to keep this fight going.

Sujiro - I could have killed you but i prefer to spare your life.

Sujiro - You also did a good job in killing some of those creatures with the impact of your Technique but your Earthquake also broke the door and several windows.
They will be here in a matter of seconds.

Ch? looks down to his feet. Seemingly disappointed with himself and starts to grab and pull out his own hair with his fingernails in a deranged, psychotic manner.
Ch? is starting to act like a lunatic and plucked amounts of his blond hair can be seen in his fingernails.​

Ch? - I guess you were a fair winner.. I was totally defeated and outsmarted.. ( Ch? says it with a deranged look and a psychotic smile on his face.. Seemingly lost of any sanity at this point.)

Ch? ( Screams to Sujiro ) - Kill me now. Don't humiliate me any further than you already did.

Sujiro responds in a calm tone.​

Sujiro - I don't feel any pleasure in killing.. Furthermore, SweetHearted Dante over there hates violence.
So..I think you will have to live to see another day.

Ch? raises his left hand and screams.. Ch? tries a punch at Sujiro with his broken left hand ( The only one left )​

Ch? ( Screaming ) - KILL ME YOU BASTARD!!

Sujiro blocks Ch?'s attack and grabs his hand with some applied pressure and lightning charges to calm him down.

Ch? falls in the wet ground,short of energy and breath.
Losing more and more blood.​

Sujiro - Why did you killed Bunny Larry??

Dante approaches the two in the middle of the destructed Living Room.​

Ch? - It's none of your business.

Dante - We have the right to know. We were his friends.
Would you enjoy if one had killed someone close to you without giving you a reason?

Ch?'s face gets filled with rage​

Ch? ( Screams to Dante ) - SHUT UP!!! I PROMISE I'LL MAKE YOU SUFFER. YOU little brat!!

Sujiro - Come on..!! I just beated you fair and squair..
Give us the reason. Be a man, a proud man. You are better than this.

Ch? - That piece of crap, Bunny Larry.
Sold out my master to Saga in trade for a position in Saga's Babilon Council.

Sujiro and Dante express a very surprised look.

Sujiro - Wait!! wait! Wait!! First of all who was your Master??..
I have a wild guess but please say it out loud.

Ch? trembles with a nostalgic Dej? Vu on his heart.

Ch? - The most honorable man!! Katana Joe..

Sujiro - I knew it!!

Katana Joe a deceased powerful Shinobi that created a huge reputation for himself around the world by mastering 3 different Elements and beating well known Fighters.
A proud and honorable man that devoted his life to try and discover the thruth about the Mayhem Virus that turned the world into chaos and misery.​

Dante - What did he knew??
What did Katana Joe knew??
And how was Bunny Larry involved..??
To be able to sell Joe out?

Ch? - I honestly...could not get all the details but it seems like.. it was something very important and serious...related with Saga and the Mayhem Virus.

Mayhem Virus - A fatal virus that was spreaded a long time ago throught the entire world starting in Mexico back in 2024 that propagated to the entire world.
It suffered various mutations over the decades and it's known by instantly killing the weakest. And transforming into living dead corpses without reasoning and conscience the humans with stronger body immune systems.


Ch? - Something so serious..that when Saga knew.. He immediately ordered for my Master to be hunted down and killed.

Sujiro - but.. Who could be strong enough to kill Katana Joe?? I mean, Katana Joe was known for his huge experience and brute force.
Plus, He could master 3 elements to perfection.

Ch? - From the information i gathered... It was one of Saga's Knights..

Ch? is finding harder and harder to speak and breath and his vision starts to get cloudy as he loses more and more blood.​

Ch? - The Knight known as... the most Loyal one out of his army.
A man who... can cut through everything with his right arm at... any distance.

Sujiro - the loyal one..??

Dante - but how did Bunny Larry knew about that secret?? ( Dante inquires )

Ch? - My Master, the one who raised me since child and... that i considered my real father heard a strange rumour about Saga and resolved to take matters into his own hands... in discovering what Saga was really hiding.

Ch? - Joe was friends with Larry since childs...

Dante - I know what that is.. ( Thinking about Shura while he says that!! )

Ch? - It seems with his experience and Spy qualities.... He was able to dig deep in Saga's muddy past and discover...something big and important concerning the whole world and the origins of the Mayhem Virus...

Ch? - He later told Larry all about it... and requested for Larry to mark a meeting with Captain Ken with extreme urgency.

Captain Ken is the Chief & leader of Babilon's Police. And works often with Free Agents like Shura & Sujiro.​

Ch? - Larry said that would arrange a... meeting in a private place with urgency but...it was all a damn set up.

Ch? - When my master arrived at the RendezVouz... Only Saga and that Knight i talked about were awaiting him...

Ch? starts to show a sad emotional look in his face, never revealed before..​

Ch? - The next day.. I didn't knew the location of my master and started to get worried... That's when someone told me about the terrible news.. I WAS SHOCKED!!!

Ch? - I... Started to investigate on my own what really happened and got to know the real truth with much work and sleepless hours... I was enraged... I was a changed man..

Sujiro and Dante are starting to understand the sadness on Ch?'s soul.​

Ch? - Since that day i promised that...i would kill Larry, Saga and that damned Knight.

Ch? - One is done..

Ch? is almost passing out with the lost of blood from his wounds and coughing huge amounts of Blood.​

Sujiro - We must get you out of here.
Unfortunely i don't possess the fire element to stop that never ending bleeding that i inflicted you.

Dante watches around and gets very worried.​

Dante - Sujiro, seems like we are in a world of trouble.
Look behind you and for the windows and back doors..

Dante - We are surrounded!!

Sujiro turns around just to see about 60 Zombies behind them groaning and screaming.
Mutilated and deformed hungry for human flesh.
More Zombies clibbing the windows and kicking and breaking throught the doors.​

Sujiro ( Thinking ) - Holy Crap!!
That's too many of them...
I spent up all my energy fighting Ch?.
I could save my ass if i was alone but i have to watch out for Dante as well.
And i now wanna save Ch? as well.
This is bad!!
Very bad!!
A single scratch from them and we get to join their club as well.


Sujiro ( Thinking ) - What should i do??
I have to find a solution out of this mess..


Dante screams while the Zombies are approaching near and near the 3 warriors.​

Dante ( Screaming ) - WE ARE DOOMED!!!

Our Heros are surrounded by Living Dead People.
Sujiro has no energy left and Dante cannot defend himself.
Ch? is almost passing out and lost an arm in battle.
What will happen??
Stay tuned for the Next chapter of "Utopic Monkeys"..
 
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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Five.. " Ch? The Avenger, The Revelation "

Chapter 6 will only be OUT, Thursday or at latest in Friday!!

I left you guys a little present,thought. The Chapter is named :

"Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Six.. " Ch? The Avenger, The Sacrifice "
 

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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Five.. " Ch? The Avenger, The Revelation "

very cool fight man! shura has fire huh!!! :) you mentioned how they need fire to cauterize the wound to stop the bleeding and sujior is out of juice so will we get to see shura? :D i love that there's TONS of zombie fodder for the guys to lay waste too lol now i feel bad for wanting cho to get beat up though... but it sounds like you're going to kill him *sigh* c'est la vie

OH! wait, maybe a new character! we haven't seen the hot chick yet! maybe it's not shura but a smokin hot chick. man, so many choices... can't wait to read the next chapter!
 

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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Five.. " Ch? The Avenger, The Revelation "

very cool fight man! shura has fire huh!!! :) you mentioned how they need fire to cauterize the wound to stop the bleeding and sujior is out of juice so will we get to see shura? :D i love that there's TONS of zombie fodder for the guys to lay waste too lol now i feel bad for wanting cho to get beat up though... but it sounds like you're going to kill him *sigh* c'est la vie

OH! wait, maybe a new character! we haven't seen the hot chick yet! maybe it's not shura but a smokin hot chick. man, so many choices... can't wait to read the next chapter!
:D Surprised how you didn't mention that Ch? is without an arm now.
Free violence is fun xd
 

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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Five.. " Ch? The Avenger, The Revelation "

OHHH another 5 Stars Chapter!

Kinda feel bad for Ch? now :( . He seems likes an knight of honor and he seems basically screwed and he lost an arm :eek:

More insight about the Virus.

The mention of Ch?'s master.

Can Katana Joe be the legendary knight and he's not really dead after all?

Zombies everywhere :D

THIS CAN'T GET MORE BADASS

I agree with the other poster a FanFiction as good as this will definetely have THE HOT CHICK of the group.
 

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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Five.. " Ch? The Avenger, The Revelation "

Chapter 6 will only be OUT, Thursday or at latest in Friday!!

I left you guys a little present,thought. The Chapter is named :

"Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Six.. " Ch? The Avenger, The Sacrifice "
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
We need our daily dose of "Utopic Monkeys".
At least we have Naruto coming out tomorrow.
 

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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Five.. " Ch? The Avenger, The Revelation "

:D Surprised how you didn't mention that Ch? is without an arm now.
Free violence is fun xd
that was so cool! i liked that you had him almost pass out due to blood loss. someone should pick up his arms to beat back the zombies lol. is he really going to sacrifice himself for them? i mean, sujior just cut off his arm and forced him to explain himself. did they really bond enough for cho to sacrifice himself for them?
 

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that was so cool! i liked that you had him almost pass out due to blood loss. someone should pick up his arms to beat back the zombies lol. is he really going to sacrifice himself for them? i mean, sujior just cut off his arm and forced him to explain himself. did they really bond enough for cho to sacrifice himself for them?
Who's to tell that is Ch? who's going to sacrifice himself??

The title is : Ch? The Avenger because that's the name of the current segment of the Arc but what's next might have nothing to do with Ch?..

For example, in chapter four we have: "Ch? the Avenger, Shukuchi ", but Shukuchi has nothing to do with Ch? for example. As it's Sujiro's technique.
 

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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Five.. " Ch? The Avenger, The Revelation "

Who's to tell that is Ch? who's going to sacrifice himself??

The title is : Ch? The Avenger because that's the name of the current segment of the Arc but what's next might have nothing to do with Ch?..

For example, in chapter four we have: "Ch? the Avenger, Shukuchi ", but Shukuchi has nothing to do with Ch? for example. As it's Sujiro's technique.
I'm betting it's Sujiro. Ch? is an even worse state then Sujiro.
 

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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Five.. " Ch? The Avenger, The Revelation "

Who's to tell that is Ch? who's going to sacrifice himself??

The title is : Ch? The Avenger because that's the name of the current segment of the Arc but what's next might have nothing to do with Ch?..

For example, in chapter four we have: "Ch? the Avenger, Shukuchi ", but Shukuchi has nothing to do with Ch? for example. As it's Sujiro's technique.
ah i read "Cho The Avenger, The Sacrifice " and assumed it was cho making the sacrifice, my bad. are you still working on the art?
 

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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Five.. " Ch? The Avenger, The Revelation "

ah i read "Cho The Avenger, The Sacrifice " and assumed it was cho making the sacrifice, my bad. are you still working on the art?
I have the sketche of Shura & Dante made but don't have Photo Cam at the moment in home but next week will post it for sure.
Need to work on getting Ch? & Sujiro done.
 
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