"Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter One.. " The Legendary Knight "

[John Constantine]

Oh! Give me an exlucive early release on it please

You can start your predictions instead..​

 

[John Constantine]

You are trully on a league of your own when it comes to writing.
That is just marvelous stuff and very creative and left us really salivating for more.
Please, write more then one for week.
Writing just one for week? Don't do that to us.

Thanks..​

 

[King Dante]

The second Chapter is actually complete already but won't be posted untill Monday..​

Post it, man. I can't wait.
Shura is the man

 

[John Constantine]

Post it, man. I can't wait.
Shura is the man

Ok.. Since some of you insist that much, I'll post it when this chapter reaches 100 views.​

 

[Emperor]

It's nice, but the characters are pretty stereotyped =/
Hero is a "determined guy" [ any one else seeing a grown up Naruto with addictions here ? ] , friend is "kind" - these are all standard stuff for the characters' personalities.

Though the amount of detail put into the story and the conversations are extremely well-written.

 

[John Constantine]

It's nice, but the characters are pretty stereotyped =/
Hero is a "determined guy" [ any one else seeing a grown up Naruto with addictions here ? ] , friend is "kind" - these are all standard stuff for the characters' personalities.

Though the amount of detail put into the story and the conversations are extremely well-written.

Yes, most characters will be very stereotyped as it's the deja vu of most mangas.
I'll be following a simple formula for the characters. It's easier for the readers to keep tracks of their favourites this way as it doesn't has images of the characters.

Shura is more like an Hardcore version of Pegasus Seiya rather then Naruto.
The kind best friend has a reason to be so.. As you may understand in the future, i'm not all that sold on "kind fags" best friends but i had to write Dante this way for a specific future script reason.​

 

[John Constantine]

Chapter 2 revealed..
The Introduction of Ch?..

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[curse seal sasuke 2]

hey nice fanfic!

 

[Akeno]

Awesome story i liked it ^^

 

[Michael92]

Yes, nice. Over 100 views! Next chapter, here we come. I`ll read it as soon as i get some free time

 

[John Constantine]

Yes, nice. Over 100 views! Next chapter, here we come. I`ll read it as soon as i get some free time

Ok.. Then comment about Ch?.​

 

[Kazamori]

Nice one. Keep up, I'll read second later, thanks

 

[John Constantine]

Nice one. Keep up, I'll read second later, thanks

Thanks.. Comment when you do.​

 

[Deidara...]

i like it. it's well plotted and versatile
10 points

 

[John Constantine]

i like it. it's well plotted and versatile
10 points

Thanks..
Chapter 2 is out.​

 

[Dean-Winchester]

AMazing

 

[Michael92]

It looks like this FF became more popular than i expected my friend. Nice work

I finally got some time now, so i`m going to read part two, so be prepared for judgement day when i`m finished!

 

[Kiona]

Good job!

 

[John Constantine]

Yes, nice. Over 100 views! Next chapter, here we come. I`ll read it as soon as i get some free time

Seems like you liked it alot.​

 

[John Constantine]

AMazing

Thanks my friend Castiel.​