Childhood.

[Kagerou]

Under the sweltering summer
and the luminous sky
What was concluded on that day
I will never forget.
We danced in the heat
With our own naive minds.
That was us.
I will never forget.
​

 

[Sir Blades]

Very odd.

 

[Kagerou]

Very odd.

Just like your comment.

What do you mean by "odd"?

Anything I should fix? o:

 

[Sir Blades]

Just like your comment.

What do you mean by "odd"?

Anything I should fix? o:

Absolutely not, when i read the poem it gave me a mixed array of emotions. Some that I liked and others I didnt.

Ive always thought that there isn't such thing as a right or wrong poem, because they come from oneself, and are not susceptible to others opinions.

That's all

 

[Pumpkin Ninja]

I genuinely think your poems are good.

 

[Kagerou]

Absolutely not, when i read the poem it gave me a mixed array of emotions. Some that I liked and others I didnt.

Ive always thought that there isn't such thing as a right or wrong poem, because they come from oneself, and are not susceptible to others opinions.

That's all

I definitely see what you mean lol, +1 for that.

Thanks for the input. ^^

I genuinely think your poems are good.

Hehe thanks, I have only written a few poems myself. xD