[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Robot Boy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

-New Submission-

(Joushou Doriru Dageki) – Rising Drill Shock
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Rank:S
Range:short-mid(made short-range with a mid-range reach)
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: Is a technique developed by Caius of the Inuzuka clan. While gathering large amounts of chakra, the user will jump into the air and spin furiously and shape the chakra around him into a spear similarly to the second method of lightning release: ascending earth. He then dives down and drills straight into the ground, releasing the chakra under the targets, and having it shot upward and divided in the form of two lightning release: ascending earths but, resembling the Gatsūga in appearance as it rises and made of regular chakra instead of lightning, granting the columns piercing and shredding capabilities. Alternatively the columns can be used to shield the user and an ally.
-Can be used twice per battle
-No S-rank or above Inuzuka techniques next turn
-Can be performed by an Inuzuka or his ninken
-Physical contact with the ground must be made

☼ Declined ☼

This needs a better description. Referencing similar techniques is fine, but it can't be used as a substitute for giving detailed descriptions.

-Resubmitting-

(Joushou Doriru Dageki) – Rising Drill Shock
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank:S
Range:short-mid(made short-range with a mid-range reach)
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: Is a technique developed by Caius of the Inuzuka clan. While gathering large amounts of chakra, the user will jump into the air and spin furiously and shape the chakra around him into a spear similarly to the second method of lightning release: ascending earth. He then dives down and drills straight into the ground, releasing the chakra under the targets, and having it shot upward and divided in the form of two large vertical columns of chakra but, resembling the Gatsūga in appearance as it rises and made of regular chakra instead of lightning, granting the columns piercing and shredding capabilities. Alternatively the columns can be used to shield the user and an ally.
-Can be used twice per battle
-No S-rank or above Inuzuka techniques next turn
-Can be performed by an Inuzuka or his ninken
-Physical contact with the ground must be made

-New Submission-

(Suraishingu Kiba) – Slicing Fangs
Type:Attack/Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:short
Chakra:40
Damage:n/a(-15 to the user)
Description: The user will channel chakra into and around their tail, 'enlarging' it , and creating a dense coat as well as a second ‘tail’ before twirling the tails around like rotary blades, spinning them furiously and causing air currents to form around it, making it resemble a Tsūga. The user then sends wind chakra through the tail, releasing a surge of wind as the tail ‘rotates’ and giving it the same effects as the fang wolf fang technique, creating a vacuum vortex in its surroundings, that cuts the enemy even without touching them upon thrusting their attack. If the user keeps the tail close to them, they will be cut every turn while it’s active but, it’s also a useful method for releasing them from illusionary techniques (A-rank and below).

-Lasts for three turns
-Its best suited in one of the wolf transformations
- Can only be used once per battle


( Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Terra soshite Roxie)- Summoning Technique: Terra and Roxie
Type:Summon
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:n/a
Description: Are the daughters of Mine and are moles from Furui rokkīton'neru. Terra and Roxie are the same size as Gamariki except the older sister Terra is a few inches taller than her younger sister Roxy. They have a slender and a humanoid-like figure and wear the same standard attire that Sunagakure ninja have except they don’t wear anything on their hands or feet, and each have a mole tattoo over their eye, Terra having it on her left and Roxy having it on her right. They can perform earth techniques up to and including S-rank and both are needed to perform the techniques. Their favored weapons seem to be a pair of hammers and they are never seen in battle without one. They can perform techniques that revolve around or allow the use of their favored weapon. Once per battle, the sisters can release their earth chakra from their mouth and combine them to cause a giant titan of stone, 35 meters in height to form and move towards the enemy at a slow pace and walks over whatever is front it, should it be within range. Once the titan is within range of the intended target, the sisters will have the titan shoot both of its arms like rockets, causing an immense explosion that blasts away anything at mid-range while crushing anything that came in contact with the arms. (Counts as an S-rank move and using this reduce the number of turns they can stay on the field by 2.)
-They count as two moves
-Requires a ground source
-Lasts for 4 turns
-Must have signed the mole contract
-can only be summoned once per battle

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‡ All Pending ‡ Leaving for another mod.

☼ All Declined ☼

You're still having issues with the descriptions. Drop the references and just describe what the techniques actually look like and what they actually do.

 

[Nathan]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kenjutsu: Kyōjin) - Sword Arts: Assassin's Dagger
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short - Mid (when thrown)
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique is an alternative performance of the Shadow Clone Technique in which the user channels the chakra necessary for the aforementioned clone into a one of their bladed weapons before the blade pasts their target. When the blade is just behind the victim the user will trigger the creation of a shadow clone at the location of the thrown blade. Upon forming the clone, the clone will grasp the projectile blade and stab the opponent in the back, effectively finalizing the assassination. The speed at which the user performs this technique has given the illusion that the user is using Space–Time Ninjutsu on more than one occasion. Additionally, by manipulating the position of the blade via wire strings he can more easily position his blade behind an opponent.
Notes:
- Only usable four times per-match.
- Bladed weapon can range from anything from a kunai to a longsword, tanto, etc...
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

‡ Approved ‡ On the condition you teach me

‡ Declined ‡ Ok, this is a cool technique. Pseudo-FTG for us people who can't teleport. Materializing clones outside of short-range is possible but not like this. You would need some sort of medium. Water, earth or something to form the clone form. Either you can do that or wait until you have Fuuinjutsu to seal a clone inside of your kunai and release it with a single handseal or something.

(Yousobetsushori Ninjutsu: Rongu Karakuri) - Elemental Ninja Arts: The Long Con
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short - Long (if thrown)
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique is a rather creative technique. This technique is an alternative performance of the Shadow Clone Technique in which the user will create a bladed weapon out of one of the basic five elements, but with a twist. It gives of the impression of a normal elemental bladed weapon, but hidden within the chakra is a shadow clone of that decided element. Once the weapon is created within the users hand (at this time depending on the element chosen the user will receive some effects from it, example if they picked fire they would receive minor burns from holding the weapon) - from there the user will throw the elemental bladed weapon, at any time the user can perform one hand seal to release the elemental shadow clone from the elemental blade, if so the clone will grasp hold of the blade and fight. This technique is best used as an assassin technique; getting the sword behind the opponent and stabbing them from behind. The speed at which the user performs this technique has given the illusion that the user is using Space–Time Ninjutsu on more than one occasion. Additionally, by manipulating the position of the blade via wire strings he can more easily position his blade behind an opponent.
Notes:
- Only usable four (4) times per-match, and one clone per-usage.
- Bladed weapon can range from anything from a kunai to a longsword, tanto, etc.
- Follows the rule of only four (4) clones per-match.
- If not thrown, the weapon stays active for four (4) turns. If thrown the weapon and the clone within the blade stay on the field for three (3) turns.
- Any of the basic five (earth, fire, wind, water, or lightning) can be used to create the weapon, and cannot be a mixture of two elements unless the user has the required training (Yin-Yang Release).
- The user will receive minor damage holding the elemental blade, depending on the nature of the chakra (fire - minor burns, lightning - small shocking, wind - minor cuts, earth & water - no effect)
-The clone can only use the element(s) its composed of and non-elemental abilities.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.


‡ Approved ‡ Made some slight edits.

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(Gurifon Gijutsu: Burōkunriariti) - Griffin Art: Broken Reality
Type: Supplementary
Rank: E-Rank
Range: N/A
Chakra: 5
Damage: N/A
Description: As with many other mythic creatures, certain parts of the griffin were believed to possess special qualities - like how their claws were rumoured to possess the ability detect poison by changing colour in it's presence, while other stories tell of how their feathers could be used to heal blindness. Though, while the overall gist of this ability has been properly represented in the legends, time and the retelling of the Griffin's abilities through the ages have misconstrued the truth, creating false accounts of their abilities in the process. The truth about Griffin feathers are they were actually once used by Shinobi, as a counter to Genjutsu and other forms of Illusions. The legends about their feathers curing blindness were stemmed from this ability, with the false accounts putting the truth of Griffin's feathers to rest, until now. With Castiel and John Reese leading the Summons, the true nature of Griffin's feathers will be revealed once more. Signers of the Griffin CSC may choose to carry a single feather with them at all times, it's purpose is to alert the user when they fall under the effects of a Genjutsu. Once the user's Chakra Flow has been disturbed or disrupted by the effects of a Genjutsu, more specifically a Visual Genjutsu, the feather will automatically react, expending a small amount of the users own Chakra to layer it's own visual "illusion" on top of the Genjutsu the user is under the effects of, displayed by a sea of Griffin's feathers descending from the sky. Signers of the Griffin CSC who decide to have this feather on their person will be fully aware of it's effects, and can use this descending of unique feathers as a logical means of assuming they are caught in a Genjutsu. The Feather can only be used once per battle, will vanish upon it's use, and must of course be in the user's possession to be activated.
Note: Must have signed the Griffin CSC.
Note: User must mention this technique in their bio.

‡ Declined ‡ I'm not keen on this idea to be perfectly honest. Always being aware that you're in an illusion effectively removes the main bulk of countering them (logically deducing you're in one is most of the work). I feel like we have enough people/bios who can see through genjutsus or are immune to them altogether.

(Ototon: Kakki ni Michita Ken) - Sound Release: Vibrant Fist
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique begins with the user attacking the enemy with a punch or a slap towards either side of the enemies head. The moment that his his hand connects with the enemies body, inaudible sound waves will be released, from the hand, towards the user’s skull. These sound waves will travel through the canals in the ears heading towards the

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which controls the balance of the body is very important for taijutsu techniques and perceiving the location of the individual properly. The soundwaves will damage this organ, so that the enemies body movements will not match with what the other senses tell the body to do. They in short can’t make out the correct location so that the hits that the enemy intends to land, won’t connect.
Notes:
- Can only be used once per-match, twice per Ninja World event.
- Unless healed the enemies Semicircular Canals won’t work properly during the course of battle.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

✦ Declined, as a C rank I can't allow this to lasts forever if used against someone, only for a set number of turns. That would require this to be a more dangerous jutsu, raising it's rank. Perhaps a lower ranked, less effective version and then a more powerful, longer lasting version would work. ✦

 

[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Shadow of the Raging Storm - Reijingusutōmu no kage
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15(-5 per turn)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Derived from Konoha's Shadow of the Dancing Leaf, Shadow of the Raging Storm follows the same basic principle. This entails following the opponent's movements exactly like a falling leaf and its shadow. Kumo needed a way to replicate this technique and make it better in all ways. The original Shadow of the Dancing Leaf has an offensive capability that lacks chakra for easy use. Shadow of the Raging Storm allows the user to mimic the opponent's exact movement like a mirror image. Following the movements the opponent does allows the user of this technique to mimic the rate of motion at which the movement is happening it. This is used to achieve the ultimate mirror effect. For example, if the opponent throws 3 quick right jabs at the user the opponent can replicate these three jabs, at the same pace, automatically, making their fists clash. Unlike Shadow of the Dancing Leaf, Shadow of the Raging Storm requires chakra to be used and it is only for this fact that it can be used for extended periods of time. Because it is used for an extending period of time, the user can cancel the technique whenever it is necessary. Unlike the brief movement of a leaf through the air, storms can last for hours and in extreme cases, days.
Note; This can be used 4 times per battle; Lasts for 3 turns
Note: Can only be taught my Daemon

‡ Declined ‡ Wrong template...ok no, I won't auto-decline you this time. Mostly because you only made one submission. This is just a stronger version of an existing technique.

 

[Leathercandle]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Otome no namida) - Maiden's Tears
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
Maiden's Tears is a necklace with a single blue gem fastened to a silver chain. The wearer of the necklace can focus their suiton chakra into the gem to activate it's effect. The gem sends an omnidirectional burst of suiton chakra outwards which in turn creates numerous water particles in the surrounding atmosphere. Within a moment after the user focuses their chakra into the necklace, the number of water molecules in the air have increased dramatically, though the new ones all have the users chakra in them. The increased number of water molecules allows the wearer to preform water techniques that require water sources by using the large number of water molecules. The number of water molecules in the air allows the user to preform four techniques which require a water source by using them as a substitute to a water source. After the fourth has been preformed, all of the water molecules which were created from the necklace would be gone.
-The opponent cannot utilize the water molecules to preform techniques which require a water source off of them because the user's chakra is in them
-The increase of water molecules can only be done twice per battle or three times per event
-Even though the water molecules are all over the place in the air, a water technique which is created by using them as a water source must touch the ground in some way (a water dragon jutsu's base cannot be floating in mid air, but must be on the ground, for example).
-Can only be used by Leathercandle

‡ Declined ‡ This is a copy of a technique Edward is working on.

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(Suiton: Aoi Mizu No Sureddo) Water Style: Blue Water Threads
Type: Supplementary/ Offesnive
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user forms 5 hand seals and then aims his/her arms in a direction. Blue threads of water form and then shoot out of their fingers (up to 10, 1 per finger). These threads can grab onto objects and pull the user towards them if they are heavier, or pull the object towards the user if they are lighter. Like ninja wire, the threads can be used to simply bind opponents as well. The user can wrap the threads around solid objects and move their arms and hands accordingly to move them out of the way. If the user so desires, they can push themselves off the ground using the threads. These threads can pierce through objects to deal damage as well.

-The threads can last for a maximum of two turns
-Can only be preformed thrice per battle
-No S rank or above water techniques can be used for the remainder of the turn and for the user's next turn
-Can only be taught by Leathercandle

‡ Declined ‡ Similar to many techniques.

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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I am the current contract holder still since kamshiro gave it to me (and I am listed as the contract holder in the thread if you need proof)

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Hiraishin)- Summoning Jutsu: Flying Thunder God
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Hiraishin is a Hoopoe from ancient times. Tobirama named his technique after this bird after seeing it soar in the skys during a thunder storm. Hiraishin is a large summon able to carry 2 people without being slowed down. His feathers are light blue and his beak is gold. He has a rather short temper and is quick to snap out against his summoner if they don't show him proper respect. His name was given to him because of his ability to control thunder (Lightning release). Being able to preform all lightning style ninjutsu that the user knows with a flap of his wings or by shooting it from his beak (with the exception of ones that require a human hand such as chidori).

Note: can only be summoned for four turns
Note: Can only be summoned once per battle

‡ Approved ‡

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(Hyouton: Koori Yoroi)-Ice Release: Ice Armor
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30(-10 per turn to keep active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will make the hand seals tiger dog boar and focus his wind and water chakra to every cell in his body he will then make the tiger hand seal once more and release the chakra and the chakra will take a form around the users entire body in the form of armor ( like the armor in the the land of iron only made of ice) The special part about this armor is that where the joints are, the armor is made of movable snow so that his movement is not hindered.
Note: Only lasts Five turns
Note: User is unable to perform fire style ninjutsu While this jutsu is active
Notelus 10 damage to Water,Wind,Ice and Taijutsu while active
Note: Minus 20 from fire style ninjutsu for 2 turns after jutsu ends


‡ Update Declined ‡ Armours like this tend to last a maximum of four turns. Those damage boosts are baseless and won't be allowed. This armour would restrict you to Water, Wind, Ice and any/KG elements based on Water and or Wind as well as any non-elemental abilities (Nin, Tai, Gen, etc). This also needs a usage restriction.

(Hyouton: Kyokudo Fuyu ) Ice Release: Extreme Winter
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: short-long.
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 perturn)
Damage Points: -
Description: The user will form one handseal (Bird) and focus his Hyouton chakra into the air and clouds dropping the tempature of the area around them to -200°C. This will cause it to snow and will keep any fire jutsu from being used as oxygen liquefies at -183 thus preventing any fire style ninjutsu from being used from either party. Water jutsu will also instantly freeze. This jutsu also affects the moisture cooling it down and removing anything that would warm up the air such as salt.
Note: Only lasts 4 turns
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: No fire jutsu can be used and all water jutsu will freeze
Note: Both parties will get frost bite from being in this cold for the full 4 turns.
Note: the air cannot be warmed up jutsu lasts until the full 4 turns have happened.

‡ Declined ‡ So you decrease the temperature of the battlefield to -200°C, liquefy all of the oxygen in the air and all the user/opponent suffers from is frostbite? Even if you could survive such low temperatures, how would you breathe? DNR.

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(Hyouton: Koori Yoroi)-Ice Release: Ice Armor
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30(-10 per turn to keep active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will make the hand seals tiger dog boar and focus his wind and water chakra to every cell in his body he will then make the tiger hand seal once more and release the chakra and the chakra will take a form around the users entire body in the form of armor ( like the armor in the the land of iron only made of ice) The special part about this armor is that where the joints are, the armor is made of movable snow so that his movement is not hindered.

Note: Only lasts Four turns
Note: Usable three times per battle
Note:After the jutsu wears off the user can't use it again for 2 turns
Note: User is only able to use Water,Wind, Ice,ninjutsu and taijutsu while using this armor.
Note:After the jutsu wears off the user can't use it again for 2 turns

‡ Updated Approved ‡ Added a usage limit.

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(Futon: Fogu Waipu)-Wind Release: Fog Wipe
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will make the tiger handseal and slowly breathe in gathering futon chakra in his chest. The user will then exhale slowly. By doing this the user will constantly release this wind style chakra into the air spreading it across the field pushing anything in the air out of the battle field such as mist,poison,pollen,salt or anything that was not naturally in the air at the start of the battle.
Note: For the user to use this to remove poison smoke from the air he must be mid range away from it as to not inhale it.
Note: Can only be used once every other turn.

‡ Declined ‡ There is literally nothing special about this. You can do this with virtually any wind technique.

(Raiton: Tenka Engo Hara)-Lighting Release: Lighting Protection Field
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will form a single handseal (Bird) and focus his raiton chakra onto the surface of his own chakra. Meaning any jutsu under his control. After placing this raiton chakra onto the surface of his own jutsu the user will preform one final handseal and the chakra will sprout into a field of lighting covering the users jutsu. The user will focus his chakra so the lighting does not hit his own jutsu only cover it protecting the jutsu from Earth style,Ice style,clay, Lighting style and any element weak to lighting style attacks.
Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: Can only protect a jutsu from one attack after which the lighting will disperse.
Note: Can't be used on lighting jutsus
Note: Lighting is A ranked, while ontop of another jutsu it will not add to the jutsus power only give it a layer of protection from elements weak to lighting.

‡ Declined ‡ DNR.

 

[Summer]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ninpo Danku) Ninja arts Splitting Void
Type:Defense
Rank:C rank
Range:short
Chakra:15
Damage:/
Description:
This jutsu in a defensive type of jutsu while in close quarters combat. The user releases a thin clear wall of raw chakra to deflect an enemies Kunai/shuriken( even explosive tags and or D rank Taijutsu.
The wall is not visible unless you have doujutsu or sensory perception, it only spans to the 2 meters in height and 2 meters from side to side. This is a form of basic ninjutsu which revolves precisely around flattening your chakra and spreading it out like that of a bed sheet. Danku will maintain for one full turn if need be and can be used multiple times per battle.
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Can only be taught by Juha.

‡ Declined ‡ Similar to existing techniques.

(Erimaki Kiji Douka) Scarf Cloth absorption
Type:supplementary
Rank:Brank
Range:short
Chakra:20
Damage:(removes 40 chakra from enemy)
Description:
Users of this jutsu are normally women who enjoy fashion and accessorizing. The user wearing a scarf or having one in a ninja pouch will use it in close range combat wrapping up one of the enemies limbs with it. The user will then form the confrontation sign and will begin removing chakra from that binded limb. The scarf once infused with chakra cannot be cut by normal means and will have a tight bind on the enemy making it harder to slip away.

Can only be used 5 times per battle.
Can only be taught by Juha

‡ Declined ‡ Other than being similar to a Scarf CW someone is working on, I only allow chakra absorption through Water Release techniques.

 

[Glad Of War]

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(Jiton: Hanpatsu kōgeki) Magnetic release: All Repelling Attack.
Type: Supplementary.
Rank: C-S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15-40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Due to the fact most techniques are made up of raw chakra, An alternative way was devised to repel this Techniques. The user will mold their Lightning chakra, and channels it through the ground towards the target using the earth crust as a conductor. This lightning chakra would be extremely low insomuch the opposing target won't even sense it. This method would enable the user to magnetize the opposing target chakra (Positive), by linking their Magnetic chakra through the dormant Lightning chakra. Once a Fire/Wind jutsu is released, the user would simply thrust forth their dominant hand whilst magnetizing it (Positive) and repelsthe opponent's jutsu back at them. This technique is quite similar to Toroi's Magnetism Jutsu. However, the repelling Jutsu in question should be made up of the opponent's chakra.

Note:
• Can only be used once.
• Can repel raw chakra elements such as Fire, Water and Wind up to S-rank
• The opponent must be on a conducting platform such as Earth or water.
• Can only be taught by Savage.

‡ Declined ‡ This makes no sense. Something like this would only work for Lightning techniques or tangible elements, both of which have been done before.

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(Doton: Kujira no beringu) - Earth Release: The belling of the whale
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid-range
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: As the name suggest, the user would mold their doton chakra whilst slamming both hands on the ground below creating a huge whale completely made of earth properties, having a diameter of 3 meters. Thereupon, this whale will merge itself into ground enabling it to somewhat appear itself from anywhere at Mid-range. Logically It would seems the whale is swimming through the earthcrust However, once the whale merge itself into ground, it's chakra would be disperse at a radius of 10meters (Mid-range) enabling it to appear itself anywhere on this range and swallowing the opposing target whole. Additionally, if the target manages to escape the whale, another whale can simply appear itself from another direction similar to a clone.

Note:
• Can only be used once per battle.
• Last for two turns.
• No S-rank Earth jutsu after this for three turns.
• Once swallowed, the target is crush inside the whale's stomach and has a 1 clone limit.
• Can only be taught by Savage.

‡ Declined ‡ Similar to existing techniques.

(Genjutsu: Totsuzen no hadaka) - Illusion arts: Sudden Nakedness.
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: To attain this technique, the user would force their chakra into the opposing target, putting them on a Genjutsu where they think, they are naked. This little distraction will open a way for the user to launch their offensive attacks.

Note:
• Can be use three times per battle.
• Can only be taught by Savage.
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‡ Declined ‡ Similar to existing techniques.

 

[Zaphkiel]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Reworded almost everything so I didn't bother to bold it all:


(Fūton: Iongēto)- Wind Release: Aeon Gate
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Mid-long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user initiates this technique by first holding the Snake hand seal, this will allow him to focus his Fūton chakra in and around his body, the chakra will emanate from him starting at short range and then grow to mid ranged using the air as a medium. Following this the chakra will then compress the air that is present within short ranged of the user to form a flattened, circular, 2-D disk of having only a height and diameter of 2x2m. It can be formed either in front, behind, above, below, or beside the user, given it has the necessary space to do so and appears to be a small barrier of the sort complete with elaborate green glowing patterns, all formed by shaping the air to produce these cosmetic effects. Once the disk is formed the user will then place an object into the 'gate' and watch as his chakra that had spread to mid ranged prior form an identical gate of the same 2-D dimensions (2x2m) open up on the battlefield. This second gate will reproduce exactly the same object that was placed into the previous gate in the form of compressed wind shaped by Fūton, meaning, if the user placed a kunai in the first gate the second gate will open and release a pure Fūton replica of the kunai. The technique is very specific and only relies on the exact instructions given to the first gate, if the user only places half a kunai inside gate #1 gate #2 will only release half a kunai and similarly, if the user inserts a full kunai the second gate will emit a full kunai. Objects placed in the first gate remain unaffected whatsoever as they aren't physically altered in any way, instead the object will just pass through the gate to end up on the other side like shining light through a glass. This means even body parts can be placed in the gate to create pure Fūton replicas elsewhere up to mid ranged. Once the second gate releases its Fūton replica it then closes as it can only replicate one object each time it is used, after this one object is replicated the first gate will also close as its job is now done. However, only physical objects can be sent through this gate, energy based objects and attacks such as fire, lightning, or even raw chakra will simply disrupt the delicate balance of chakra that composes it. Only the first gate is capable of copying objects and the second is the only one capable of replicating said objects. The Fūton replica that would be created by the second gate is green in hue with a slight visibility, it is perfectly shaped wind that houses tangibility and can interact with solid objects as well as intangible attacks such as Raiton and Katon.Note(s):- Can only be used three times per battle- Only one object can replicated at at time and only once per use- Requires a 2 turn cool down

‡ Declined ‡ My only problem is how you could create the second gate mere centimeters away from the opponent and send a kunai through to stab them (with virtually no room to react/defend).


(Fūton: Tokui-ten)- Wind Release: Singularity
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80 (-10 to user if caught)
Description: The user will bring both hands before his chest and concentrate his Fūton chakra through his palms. The chakra will cause the air in between his palms to condense greatly forming a small ball of the sort looking like a dark green tennis ball. It is comprised of an immense amount of air, compressed into such small dimensions that it begins to vibrate violently along with a distinctive humming sound. Through concentration the user will have the ball grow to reach the size of a size 5 football where it will take control of the air around the user up to mid ranged to form a sphere of tangible wind. This second sphere is influenced by the smaller much more focused wind ball and is tangible enough to push away enemies and objects. However, after the second sphere forms the user will release the condensed ball from his palms and through hand movements guide it around the field. Then, with a snap of his fingers the secondary outer dome will collapse with a powerful suction motion, pulling any and everything that isn't firmly rooted in the vicinity of the outer dome which is mid ranged from the smaller core. As sudden as the pull happens the smaller more condensed ball will then explode violently releasing all the stored chakra and compressed wind that had constructed it. As it explodes it releases a omnidirectional barrage of tiny wind shards along with a concussive force that can reduce rock to sand in seconds. This omnidirectional blast happens within mid ranged of the technique and as such it is advised that the user stays at least 15 meters away from the technique as he activates it.Note(s):
- Can only be done 2x
- No Fūton techniques higher than A ranked next turn
- Requires a 2 turn cool down between usages

‡ Declined ‡ The description needs a lot of work. Having a hard time picturing this.

Wind Release: Aeon Gate
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Mid-long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user initiates this technique by first holding the Snake hand seal, this will allow him to focus his Fūton chakra in and around his body, the chakra will emanate from him starting at short range and then grow to mid ranged using the air as a medium. Following this the chakra will then compress the air that is present within short ranged of the user to form a flattened, circular, 2-D disk of having only a height and diameter of 2x2m. It can be formed either in front, behind, above, below, or beside the user, given it has the necessary space to do so and appears to be a small barrier of the sort complete with elaborate green glowing patterns, all formed by shaping the air to produce these cosmetic effects. Once the disk is formed the user will then place an object into the 'gate' and watch as his chakra that had spread to mid ranged prior form an identical gate of the same 2-D dimensions (2x2m) open up on the battlefield, however, when using it to attack/affect an enemy the user can only form this second gate 3 meters from the opponent in any direction (above, beside, below, etc) given it has the space to do so. This second gate will reproduce exactly the same object that was placed into the previous gate in the form of compressed wind shaped by Fūton, meaning, if the user placed a kunai in the first gate the second gate will open and release a pure Fūton replica of the kunai. The technique is very specific and only relies on the exact instructions given to the first gate, if the user only places half a kunai inside gate #1 gate #2 will only release half a kunai and similarly, if the user inserts a full kunai the second gate will emit a full kunai. Objects placed in the first gate remain unaffected whatsoever as they aren't physically altered in any way, instead the object will just pass through the gate to end up on the other side like shining light through a glass. This means even body parts can be placed in the gate to create pure Fūton replicas elsewhere up to mid ranged. Once the second gate releases its Fūton replica it then closes as it can only replicate one object each time it is used, after this one object is replicated the first gate will also close as its job is now done. However, only physical objects can be sent through this gate, energy based objects and attacks such as fire, lightning, or even raw chakra will simply disrupt the delicate balance of chakra that composes it. Only the first gate is capable of copying objects and the second is the only one capable of replicating said objects. The Fūton replica that would be created by the second gate is green in hue with a slight visibility, it is perfectly shaped wind that houses tangibility and can interact with solid objects as well as intangible attacks such as Raiton and Katon.
Note(s):
- Can only be used three times per battle
- Only one object can replicated at at time and only once per use
- Requires a 2 turn cool down

‡ Declined ‡ Wrong template. Also, when you use this with projectiles, are they "fired" out of the portal? Another thing. Are the replicas you create ranked? I see both portals being B-Ranked but what rank would your replicas take?

(Fūton: Tokui-ten)- Wind Release: Singularity
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80 (-10 to user if caught)
Description: The user will bring both hands before his chest and concentrate his Fūton chakra into his palms. The chakra will cause the air in between his palms, approximately 4 inches apart to condense greatly forming a small ball of the sort looking like a dark green tennis ball. It is comprised of an immense amount of air, compressed into a very small 4 inch diameter where it begins to vibrate along with a distinctive humming sound. Through concentration the user will have the ball grow to reach the size of a size 5 football (roughly 6 inches in diameter) where it will emit a slight shock wave of air that extends up to mid ranged of the user, this shock wave is actually carefully manipulated wind being controlled by the small humming core between the user's hands. The shock wave will then linger in the air, as a tangible barrier of wind, tangible enough to push away small enemies and objects. However, after this spherical barrier forms the user will release the condensed ball from his palms and through hand movements guide it around the field up to long ranged. Then, with a snap of his fingers the outer spherical shape of tangible wind will collapse with a powerful suction motion, pulling any and everything that isn't firmly rooted in the vicinity inside of it (which is mid ranged from the smaller core). As sudden as the pull happens the smaller, more condensed sphere will then explode violently releasing all the stored chakra and compressed wind that had constructed it. As it explodes it releases a omnidirectional barrage of tiny wind shards along with a concussive force that can reduce rock to sand in seconds. This omnidirectional blast happens within mid ranged of the core, which is also the effective range of the outer sphere. This means, anything caught inside this outer sphere is subjected to the wind explosion of the inner sphere. technique and as such it is advised that the user stays at least 15 meters away from the technique as he activates it.
Note(s):
- Can only be done 2x
- No Fūton techniques higher than A ranked next turn
- Requires a 2 turn cool down between usages

☼ Declined ☼

Tone it down a bit. And as it is now it seems like you yourself will need to defend against it as well, not sure if that is the intention.

(Tokei shikake no dageki) Clockwork Strike
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: 40
Description: The user will advance on the enemy, closing the distance in one powerful lunge using the left leg to anchor himself. He'll then bring the right leg, which would be hanging behind, towards the opponent's ankle(s) in a short, horizontal instep kick sending them off their feet while his left hand in the form of a Shuto strike or a punch will crash down on the opponent's neck or head area from the user's upper left towards the lower right in a diagonal motion. This is done simultaneously and sends the opponent's body spinning in a clockwise motion with great force, capable of up to 4 revolutions spinning on the spot. This blow also knocks them unconscious for a complete turn if performed perfectly.
Note(s):
- Can only be done 3x
- Requires a turn cooldown

Declined
Asides from the "unconscious" aspect, exactly what is special about this that you can't achieve in freeform?

(Tokei shikake no dageki) Clockwork Strike
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: 40
Description: The user will advance on the enemy, closing the distance in one powerful lunge using the left leg to anchor himself. While doing this the user will channel Futon chakra in his right leg and left hand respectively. He'll then bring the right leg, which would be hanging behind, towards the opponent's ankle(s) in a short, horizontal instep kick but he won't complete the motion, instead he'll cease movement in the right foot as soon as it reaches about 5-6 inches from the opponent's targeted foot where he will release a small gust of wind with just the right amount of force to send them off their feet while his left hand in the form of a Shuto strike will come crashing down on the opponent's neck or head area but he won't complete this motion either, instead he'll stop his own hand a few inches from the target to have a more powerful gust of wind fire from his hand onto the targeted area from the user's upper left towards the lower right in a diagonal motion. The small gust supplied by the sweeping kick combined with the more powerful gust from the hand will cause an imbalance in the force applied on the opponent's body and send the opponent spinning in a clockwise motion with great force, capable of up to 4 revolutions spinning on the spot.
Note(s):
- Can only be done 3x

‡ Both Pending ‡ Leaving for another mod.

☼ Approved ☼

Removed the unconscious bit, this doesn't seem like it would achieve that especially considering in our RP being knocked unconscious might as well be death.

 

[Baba Yaga]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Himo riron||String Theory
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank:C-S
Range:Short-long
Chakra:Varies: (15 when C, 20 when B, 30 when A, 40 when S) +5 for mid range applications and +10 for long rang applications
Damage:Varies: 30 when C, 40 when B, 60 when A, 80 when S.
Description: Using hand movements, The user releases wind chakra from his fingertips to engulf the air molecules around. Then my manipulating his/her chakra, he/she molds the air molecules in a straight ultra thin line temporarily forming several thin threads of wind. The chakra then super coils the threads, much similar to how DNA is, while inducing cutting properties on it. This creates several nearly invisible strings of cutting wind that can be controlled by hand movements to cut stuff. Because of the small nature of the threads, they interact with objects on a near molecular level, at which stage their inherent sharpness allows them to easily slice through bonds that hold stuff together. Indeed this is their only function: to alter the structural integrity of objects by cutting their particles apart. When created, the strings are capable of cutting through most materials. They are less effective when used against metals or crystals due to their stronger structure.
-The threads will easily go through water(none affecting each other) or lighting(inherently stronger) or lightning, both affected only temporarily at the point of contact. However, fire of one rank lower would consume the strings. Solid objects of equal rank can be sliced by the strings.aren't. It would pass through wind of the same rank unaffected. The strings are particularly strong against wood, being able to slice through one rank higher wooden structures.
The technique has 5 variations which all rely on creating the thin ultra sharp threads/strings:
Free form String arts:[C-A rank, short-long]
After creating the strings a user attacks a target using hand and finger gestures to move the sharp strings accordingly. The strings move with hand movements at the speed the user makes the gestures. However the strings lag behind the movements by a second or two. ( This means that if a user raises his hand, creates the strings and then swipes his hand downwards, the strings will begin to move one or two seconds after the swipe has been initiated. However they will move at the speed the swipe was made. (mid range applications lag one second, long range lags two)
Shredding fists: [C-rank, short]
The user forms sharp strings connecting each finger on one hand to those on the other(or just a pair of fingers).
Embrace: [B-rank, short-long]
The user creates up to 5 strings and manipulates them to immediately wrap around an object/opponent. He/she can then control the strings by hand movements to fling the object/opponent around and into things. This application is limited to objects of moderate size such as limbs, but it is powerful enough to fling the target's entire body around after wrapping around his limb. It also deals shallow slice wounds on the body. However the greater the size the slower the technique.
It can only be used on objects of up to 10x the users size.
Can be used three times.(Only twice if Sliced and Diced has been used even once)
Sliced and Diced: [A-rank, short-long]
A variant application of Embrace. After wrapping around the target, the user clenches his fist causing the strings to constrict around what they hold and hence slice clean through. This application can be used on objects up to 10x the users size.
-Can only be used twice. (Only once if Embrace is used 3 times)
String Maze: [S-rank, short-mid]
The user releases his wind chakra into the ground and manipulates it to create a number of strings on the battlefield that form an intricate maze around him. The strings are anchored to the ground and are crisscrossed randomly moving upwards. The effect is a sort of labyrinth of sharp strings that any sizable object would find impossible to clear without damage. The strings can span from short range to mid range in all directions. Once an object gets into the radius of the maze, it is able to travel about 2 feet deep before new stings emerge and wrap around it in conjunction with the old ones to stop it dead in its tracks. All strings deal sharp cuts to trapped objects. The user can then decide to contract the strings around the object slicing the object into many several pieces.
-It is only capable of stopping objects 3x the user's size or less.
-Can only be used twice.

-Note: The strings aren't invisible. They give off a faint blue glimmer. However, due to the small size of the strings, a moving person's eye lens wouldn't be able to focus on them if the technique is performed after motion was started. Dojutsu would clearly see them as well as any other sensory ability.
-Note: Since the technique doesn't produce wind but simply relies on utilizing chakra to manipulate air molecules, its commencement is as fast as other techniques like swamp of the underworld albeit needing finger and sometimes hand gestures to control the movements of the strings. Although their creation is almost instant, after they are created they lag a second or two before they move(mid range applications lag one second, long range lags two). However they will move at the speed the hand/finger gestures controlling them is made.
-Note: The strings are controlled by finger/hand gestures because on creation, no matter how far away they materialize, one end is always attached to the user's fingers.
-Note: Can only be taught by Sherlock Holmez.

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‡ Declined ‡ Clashes with a lot of existing things.

 

[Vegeta]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton/Fuuton - Hādo haisen) - Lighting/Wind Style - Hard wiring
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S-Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40/50
Damage Points: 80/90 (-20 to user if Forbidden)
Description: As seen with Swift release, lighting and wind can indeed be combined with precise chakra control. This jutsu acts upon that notion but in a different form. The user begins by molding Raiton chakra through their body releasing it outwards unfocused. The user then quickly makes one seal and molds their fuuton chakra through out their body as well, releasing and manipulating it to closely surround the lightning chakra, like the rubber insulation around electrical wiring. Once achieved, the wind will act to shape the lightning into any form the user desires, as the lightning will be trapped inside the wind chakra unable to penetrate thru it's natural insulation (Could be in a spherical shape, or like a whip, or could surround the users body like Lighting armor). The user can extend it outwards in an attack up to mid range, the wind chakra carrying slicing properties like a sword however, once the attack strikes anything, the wind chakra, while cutting, will split an opening, like a break in an electrical wire, allowing the lightning chakra to escape the break and shock anything it touches (comes out as an unfocused blast, and the user can will the wind chakra to split on it's own without contacting anything). Another usage would be surrounding oneself in the lightning/wind chakra as protection, however doing so slices up the user as the wind chakra surrounding the lightning is dangerously close to them making this usage Forbidden.
~Notes~
- Must be taught by -Vegeta
- Usable 3x per battle at S rank
- Usable 1x per battle at Forbidden rank
- Uses 2 moves, meaning only one other jutsu may be used the same turn
- No other lighting or wind the turn this is used, and none above A rank the next turn
- Must have Lighting/Wind/Ninjutsu completed to use as precise chakra control is needed
- If Forbidden Ranked in strength, the user takes slicing damage to the body and will not be able to use wind/lightning elements for 2 turns after

‡ Declined ‡ You need Yin/Yang to control two natures at once.

-resub-
(Raiton/Fuuton - Hādo haisen) - Lighting/Wind Style - Hard wiring
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S-Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40/50
Damage Points: 80/90 (-20 to user if Forbidden)
Description: As seen with Swift release, lighting and wind can indeed be combined with precise chakra control. This jutsu acts upon that notion but in a different form. The user begins by molding Raiton chakra through their body releasing it outwards unfocused. Once released the user no longer has control over it. The user then quickly makes one seal and molds their fuuton chakra through out their body as well, releasing and manipulating it to closely surround the unfocused lightning chakra, like the rubber insulation around electrical wiring. Once achieved, the wind will act to shape the lightning into any form the user desires, as the lightning will be trapped inside the wind chakra unable to penetrate thru it's natural insulation (Could be in a spherical shape, or like a whip, or could surround the users body like Lighting armor). At this point the user can only control the wind chakra, not the unfocused lighting trapped inside. The user can extend it outwards in an attack up to mid range, the wind chakra carrying slicing properties like a sword however, once the attack strikes anything, the wind chakra, while cutting, will split an opening, like a break in an electrical wire, allowing the lightning chakra to escape the break and shock anything it touches (comes out as an unfocused blast, and the user can will the wind chakra to split on it's own without contacting anything). Another usage would be surrounding oneself 1 foot away in the lightning/wind chakra as protection, however doing so slices up the user as the wind chakra surrounding the lightning is dangerously close to them making this usage Forbidden.
~Notes~
- Must be taught by -Vegeta
- Usable 2x per battle at S rank
- Usable 1x per battle at Forbidden rank, using this at this rank will make the technique unusable for the rest of battle and can't be used if even 1 S rank version has been used already
- Uses 2 moves, meaning only one other jutsu may be used the same turn
- No other lighting or wind the turn this is used, and none above A rank the next turn
- Must have Lighting/Wind/Ninjutsu completed to use as precise chakra control is needed to form the wind chakra over the lightning chakra before it can dissipate
- If Forbidden Ranked in strength, the user takes slicing damage to the body and will not be able to use wind/lightning elements for 2 turns after

‡ Declined ‡ This simply isn't possible. DNR.

(Raiton - Jaakuna Keikaku no Z) - Lightning Style - Evil Plan Z
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user begins by molding their raiton chakra inside their abdomen region, manipulating it thru both their legs in 2 streams to the ground, the chakra then goes down 1 meter before quickly heading straight forwards at a 45* angle left and right to approximately 10 meters apart of the intended target. By forming the Dragon seal, both streams of lightning will rise from the ground in the form of lightning dragons that rush towards each other, 1 meter in diameter each and 5 meters long. One will shoot across at just above 2 meters above the ground while the other crosses 1 meter above, making them cross paths but not touch forming a sort of barrier of lighting momentarily as they do, that would shock and paralyze someone for 1 turn if they were to come into contact with hit. If the target is hit in the middle of the 2 dragons there would be piercing damage as well as shocking/paralyzing effects and severe burns from the electrical discharge. This can be used as a surprise attack from someones sides or to stop someone/somethings forward progression.

~Notes~
- Each Dragon is A rank in strength individually
- The lightning chakra can lay dormant underground for 2 turns at an extra 10 chakra cost, however after the 2nd turn it is unusable
- Can be used 2x per battle
- Must be taught by -Vegeta

‡ Declined ‡ Similar techniques exist.

(Doton Taijutsu - Supēdo no 3) - Earth Style Body Arts - 3 of Spades
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: By molding doton chakra to their feet, the user releases it below each foot manipulating the ground just below each one, about 4 inches deep in the exact shape of their shoes/boots/whatever they are wearing or their bare feet. As they do so, they use the chakra to stick each foot to this section of ground while also dislodging the piece of earth, manipulating it hardening it's consistency to stone like. When the user lifts their feet, they will have the earth stuck to the bottom and can strike with kicks, either smashing the target with direct blows or striking towards someone releasing the chakra sending the piece of rock flying off up to short range.

~Notes~
- Can be used 3x per battle
- No A rank or above Taijutsu the same turn
- Must be taught by -Vegeta

‡ Declined ‡ Similar to Darth's Crippled Pride.

 

[Selendrile]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Geishin no Nami Kikku)- Whale God Wave Kick
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Either from a position falling towards the ground, or from the user jumping high into the air, some sort of descending movement in needed for this taijutsu technique. The user, as he falls towards the ground, spins rapidly on his sides (horizontally) in order to produce massive amounts of spinning momentum. Further covering their leg with a layer of water chakra, the user creates a localized, spinning vortex of water around their leg.The user then performs a devastating, spinning S-rank kick aimed from above the target. If the target intended to be hit somehow evades, the user can also release the water vortex upon contact with the ground (or any other medium they strike) from the miss. From where the user initially strikes, a large crater is created due to the force of the strike. The water vortex is then released in a wave (the direction decided by the user) from the epicenter of the technique which is intended to catch the fleeing target. The incoming wave of water is considered to be A-rank if released.
- Usable twice per battle
- No taijutsu A-rank or above for the same turn
- Requires mastery of NB taijutsu (non-restricted)

Spoiler

Basically the movement below:

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‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for another mod.

☼ Declined ☼

This is another taijutsu that borders on becoming ninjutsu, been seeing a lot of these. I'm okay with that in this one as long as the wave of water is considered distinct from the kick, meaning if you were to have a ton of taijutsu damage bonuses, the wave would remain a standard A-rank. On top of that if released it needs to count as a move. Can't allow a free A-rank.

(Geishin no Nami Kikku)- Whale God Wave Kick
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Either from a position falling towards the ground, or from the user jumping high into the air, some sort of descending movement in needed for this taijutsu technique. The user, as he falls towards the ground, spins rapidly on his sides (horizontally) in order to produce massive amounts of spinning momentum. Further covering their leg with a layer of water chakra, the user creates a localized, spinning vortex of water around their leg. The user then performs a devastating, spinning S-ranked kick aimed from above the target. If the target intended to be hit somehow evades, the user can also release the water vortex upon contact with the ground (or any other medium they strike) from the miss. From where the user initially strikes, a large crater is created due to the force of the strike. The water vortex is then released in a wave (the direction decided by the user) from the epicenter of the technique which is intended to catch the fleeing target. The incoming wave of water is considered to be A-rank if released and counts as a move of the user. The wave would be unaffected by taijutsu damage bonuses, remaining at A-rank unless the user also possesses an additional water release bonus (such as a CW, 7SM, etc).
- Usable twice per battle
- No taijutsu A-rank or above for the same turn
- Requires mastery of NB taijutsu (non-restricted)

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for Typhon.

☼ Approved ☼

 

[Omega]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Kuroi Gia)-Black Gear
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will release smoke from his wrist launchers and manipulate it into spherical spinning cloud of smoke around their hands. Within the smoke the user will have released multiple small shuriken from their hand. The shuriken will move through the smoke though visually this would be unknown to the enemy, as all of the chakra is rotating around their fist. The user will then punch the enemy as the spinning shuriken slice the enemy once contact Is made.

‡ Declined ‡ The coloured bit needs defining.

(Sakashima Ro-do)- Pillars of Rebirth
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: After peforming the Ox, Boar, Rabbit, Bird handseals The user will channel their Fuuton chakra into the ground around the enemy and then cause 4 pillars of wind to form around the enemy. The pillars will be in a diamond formation about 3 meters from the enemy in all directions. The 10 foot pillars will be emitting powerful winds that cause the enemy to be lifted up from the ground but also render any movement from the enemy useless as the winds press the enemy from all directions. Although the enemy might feel some slight discomfort from the pressure, the attack itself does no real harm. This creates a zero gravity effect allowing the user to exploit the enemies position.

Restrictions:
Can only be taught by Omega
Can only use A rank Fuuton and below next turn

‡ Declined ‡ Wrong template.

(Kuroi Gia)-Black Gear
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will release smoke from his wrist launchers and manipulate it into spherical spinning cloud of smoke around their hands. Within the smoke the user will have released multiple small shuriken from their hand. The shuriken will move through the smoke, though this would be unknown to the enemy. As the smoke and shuriken are rotating around the users fist the user will then punch the enemy and the spinning shuriken slice the enemy once contact is made.


‡ Approved ‡

(Fuuton:Sakashima Ro-do)- Wind Style|Pillars of Rebirth
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: After performing the Ox, Boar, Rabbit, Bird handsels The user will channel their Fuuton chakra into the ground around the enemy and then cause 4 pillars of wind to form around the enemy. The pillars will be in a diamond formation about 3 meters from the enemy in all directions. The 10 foot pillars will be emitting powerful winds that cause the enemy to be lifted up from the ground but also render any movement from the enemy useless as the winds press the enemy from all directions. Although the enemy might feel some slight discomfort from the pressure, the attack itself does no real harm. This creates a zero gravity effect allowing the user to exploit the enemies position.

Restrictions:
Can only be taught by Omega
Can only use A rank Fuuton and below next turn

(Katoneddo Gosunkugi)- Fire Style|Dead Spike
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will either do a rising slash or upper cutting motion, and release a fairly large Katon comprised beast head that explodes out of the ground (short range from the user) and travels up to mid range. The beast head, which is about double the size of an average human, swallows all opponents in its path and consumes them within its engulfing flames.

Restrictions:
-Can only be taught by Omega
-Can only be used 5 times

‡ Both Declined ‡ Similar techniques exist.

 

[Gutsy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Jiraiya bio showing Toad Contract and full mastery of it:

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Hikigaeru no Ibo | Toad Warts
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A unique toad technique, where the user will perform the Boar hand seal. This will cause warts to appear all over the user. These warts will rapidly grow in size. The warts may all vary in size so that they can range from the size of a fingertip to the size of a hand. These warts can be created all over the user’s body or simply in specific parts. These warts all contain a unique acid similar to that of the acid that is found within the toad’s stomach as seen when Jiraiya drags one of Peins bodies into the pit of a Toads stomach, filled with Acid. These warts will protect the user from incoming Taijutsu attacks as well as being compatible with Taijutsu moves, making your moves more lethal. As said if the warts hit a surface like the opponents body or cloth, or if the opponent hits the warts with an attack it will splash open releasing the acid upon the surface that hit it, causing immediate acidic damage upon the area. Another way of using this technique is more used by the Toads, where they will utilize the Toad Warts jutsu on their tongue while using it in combat, to make their tongue dangerous and maybe even lethal. A side note to this technique may be that Toads have a natural resistance to their own acidic insides and due to the signers of the contracts having been trained by the toads and having spent many months with them on Mount Myoboku, they have gained the same resistance towards the acidic substance so as to say they take no damage if any acidic liquid were to touch them. This technique has a short ranged reach, but when utilized with the reach of the toads tongue as an example, it would have the same reach.
Note:
- The Toad Warts technique can be used both by signers of the toad contract and the toads themselves
- The technique may only be used trice per battle
- Resistance to the wart acid does not extend to any other substance or acid.

☼ Approved with added note ☼


Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Meikai no Otamajakushi | Summoning Technique: Tadpoles of the Underworld
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will perform the summoning technique ending it with slamming their palm upon the ground. The ground beneath and around the opponent will begin to swarm with tiny tadpoles no larger than the thumb of a human. These tadpoles have but one purpose, that purpose being to swarm the opponent or other summoning animals, attaching themselves to them, consuming them inside a massive swarm of tadpoles. Besides consuming the target making it very difficult for them to move as well as suffocating them and adding significant amount of weight to their entire body, the tadpoles hold a unique ability to suck out the chakra of any living being that they attach themselves to, effectively draining the target from chakra. Furthermore these tadpoles when consuming the targets chakra they will grow in size, adding more weight and pressure on the target over time. This technique may also be used in a more stealth way, where the user only makes a few tadpoles that will attach to the targets feet or clothes. From there the tadpoles will create a resonating yet very low frequency of sound similar to that of the chatter between toads. This will make for a unique way of locating the target, as the user will be capable of hearing this sound due to his knowledge and training with the toads, so that he can during anytime find his target even if vision is taken away. Yet this sound coming from the tadpoles are on such a low frequency that only the user and those who have signed the toad contract can hear it, and some special shinobi whom have higher level of hearing than a normal ninja or samurai etc.
Note:
- Must have signed the Toad Contract
- May only be performed twice per battle

☼ Approved ☼


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Ishiken | Stone Sword
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The great sword, known as the Stone Sword, was a secret sword from Mount Myoboku. Slate grey in color, the sword has a circular, hollow, pommel with a fairly long grip. A chain connects the pommel to the hilt of the sword which is joined to the blade. This ancient sword has a wide blade, which has several markings resembling veins running down its length. The sword was forged by the toad smiths, inside the belly of a fire breathing toad. The sword is made of a unique stone only found on Mount Myoboku and the so called veins that you see run down the swords length, are in truth the pulsing veins and flesh of a fire breathing toad. These veins from the fire breathing toad are not only covering the sword it is also forged into it, so the veins are running through it. The sword itself can only be wielded by the owner of the sword. The reason for this is its defense mechanism. The Stone Sword is like signing a contract, the wielder must smear blood upon his hand and place it on its handle, from that day forth, the blood and finger print is melted into the handle, and only the person with that exact blood and fingerprint may wield the sword. If another person may attempt to wield the sword, the sword will not recognize the wielder, and the veins on the sword will shoot out at blitzing speed, wrapping themselves around the person while digesting them and rapidly enlarging, essentially consuming and digesting the person whom would attempt to wield it, similar to someone whom have been reverse summoned into the stomach of a fire breathing toad. If the opponent is in touch with the sword while in combat, the veins on the sword may begin to attach to the target and digest the specific body part.

The Stone Sword has a few unique abilities that gives its wielder quite the edge in combat over their opponent. There are a total of 2 abilities which the sword possesses besides its defensive mechanism which activates automatically if someone tries to wield it.

The first ability of the sword is a defensive property which is activated through the user allowing the veins on the sword to wrap around him while then letting them digest his chakra, causing the veins to rapidly increase in size, creating a dome of meat, which has the same unique property as the fire breathing toads stomach. As such this meat dome which protects the user as the veins detaches after having sucked out the chakra and creates a dome with short range reach, where the user can do as he wishes from the inside. The properties of this meat dome are that it is highly resistant towards fire and heat based techniques as well as Taijutsu and solid objects it may repel. Of course this only applies to techniques within reason. If this meat dome catches an incoming Taijutsu attack, it will consume that body part while then drag in the person, consuming them whole and digesting them in the process. This ability is known as the Stomach Dome.

The second ability is where the offensive prowess of the sword is shown. Using the veins that are imbued into and running down the length of the stone sword, the user will generate a large amount of heat on the surface of the sword, causing the sword to become so heated that it will cause 2nd degree burns if someone touches it and it may use this heated blade to slice through stronger objects such as metal, earth etc. While if the user wishes it he may cause this heat to convert onto a single point on the sword and release it in a form of a blast of fire which goes out in a single direction incinerating anything in its path. This ability is known as the Burning Veins.
Note:
- Can only be wielded by Gutsy Jiraiya and those he allow
- To wield the sword one must have signed the Toad Contract
- The Stomach Dome technique is equal to an A-rank technique and due to it being made from the stomach of a fire breathing toad it has a natural resistance towards fire and heated elements and may stop fire and heated elements of up to S-rank. The stomach dome technique can resist solid attacks of up to B-rank and it can defend against A-rank and below Taijutsu.
- The digesting process is also increased similar to the Toad Mouth Binding for both the abilities of the sword, seeing it consumes and eats a human person within seconds, if the opponent is not capable of escaping its grasp.
- The Stomach Dome technique counts towards the move count. The Stomach Dome may be used twice per battle. The Burning Veins technique also counts towards the move count and it may be used trice per battle.
- The Burning Veins technique is equal to a B-rank technique when used simply as a heated sword, but if used to cause a blast of fire to come from the sword it counts as an A-rank technique.

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for another mod.

☼ Declined ☼

Mostly fine, but the fire blast has been done way too many times so remove it.

 

[Priest]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Removed "Beat of Gloat" and "Beat of Barm"


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Bàtáá - Bata
Type: Weapon
Rank: N/A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A(-5 per turn when active)
Damage: N/A
Description: Priest in the last of his journeys stumbled upon a lost artifact of the Sage of Music. While harnessing it for himself as a master of sound himself, unleashes the power of Bàtáá.
Bata is a crucifix that when activated, tranforms into pair of ear morphs with an angellic apperance that appears as if the user has a pair of elvish ears. The ear morphs are fixed on the user's ears and won't come off unless the user deactivates it thus making it tranform back to a crucifix. The indestructible black colored ear-morphs is fabricated from an unknown material, tightly fixed that it won't fall off even during complex movements until the user removes it himself.

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Bata would at all times, be in link with the user's auditory senses, brainwaves and chakra system and is able to manipulate sound chakra which he can now use/release in 4 different ways/beats.
Ìlù Àgèrè - Beat of Tranquility :
This is a basic and passive ability of Bata that is always on as long as he is active. Apparently, when Bataa is active, the user is shut from any form of external sound making him totally deaf. However, Bata passively records external sounds and by itself translate it in an alternate electromagnetic form directly to the user's sense of touch. By this, the user can't hear sound but can feel them. This is akin to using sound as a sonar to be able to feel and sense matter due to the sound they give off, a similar phenomenon to "Inner Sonar Skill". The user having being used to the consequencies of Bata and the drawback which is deafness, although he can feel sound, he could not actually feel what exactly is being said if the particular sound is a conversation thus making him train to be able to read lips.
Ìlù Gángan - Beat of Exorcism:
Bata is able to tap into the user chakra, draw them out and use it to form a shield/barrier of sound. Bata reacts to this upon sensing an incoming entity though it may or may not require the user's will depending on the situation. If the user isn't able to utilize his will due to him being unconcious(though still alive) or in a will-subduing jutsu of any kind, then Bata reacts itself so far the user still has chakra that it can leech. If the user can use his will properly, then it requires the user's will to form the barrier. The shield is able to deflect/bounce back A-rank and below jutsu and depending on the kind or area affected by the incoming jutsu, the shield can be large, small, parabilic or even spherical, encompassing 360deg around the user. This can only be used once per turn and count as a move.
NOTE: Can only be wield by Priest
NOTE: The user sacrifices 5 chakra point per turn while its active. The user however, can deactivate it anytime thus loosing access to the weapon's abilities.
NOTE: When Bata is inactive and worn on the neck as a crucifix, it serves no purpose but for fashion.
NOTE: Activation and transition of Bata from crucifix to ear-morphs is instant and takes no time whatsoever.
NOTE: While Bata is active, the user spends more chakra in using wind jutsus thus spends +5 more chakra for any wind jutsu he uses.
NOTE: The user recieve +10 more damage when hit by sound techniques that affects the sense of touch/body while Bata is active.

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for another mod.
Declined. Really makes no sense at all. If a drawback is deafness, why have need to use it anyway after being deaf? oh right, to constantly make an instant shield that protects you from A-rank techs all together, for as many times as you want. And that +5 more chakra on wind jutsus next to the 10 more damage on sound techniques (while sound isn't even an open skill in the first place, but requires to be taught and you need permission) really sets some drawbacks for you. (sarcasm btw). Really change pretty much the whole lot about this, because as of now it has no drawbacks at all for the power it gives you.

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Bàtáá - Bata
Type: Weapon
Rank: N/A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A(-5 per turn when active)
Damage: N/A
Description: Priest in the last of his journeys stumbled upon a lost artifact of the Sage of Music. While harnessing it for himself as a master of sound himself, unleashes the power of Bàtáá.
Bata is a crucifix that when activated, tranforms into pair of ear morphs with an angellic apperance that appears as if the user has a pair of elvish ears. Activation is akin to Ao fuin seal over his Byakugan which prevents it from neing stolen. The ear morphs are fixed on the user's ears and won't come off unless the user deactivates it thus making it tranform back to a crucifix. The indestructible black colored ear-morphs is fabricated from an unknown material, tightly fixed that it won't fall off even during complex movements until the user removes it himself.

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Bata would at all times, be in link with the user's auditory senses, brainwaves and chakra system and is able to manipulate sound chakra which he can now use/release in 2 different ways/beats.
Ìlù Àgèrè - Beat of Tranquility :
This is a basic and passive ability of Bata that is always on as long as he is active. Apparently, when Bataa is active, the user is shut from any form of external sound making him totally unable to hear normally through his ears due to Bataa covering it. However, Bata passively records external sounds and by itself translate it in an alternate electromagnetic form directly to the user's sense of touch. By this, the user can't hear sound but can feel them. This is akin to using sound as a sonar to be able to feel and sense matter due to the sound they give off, a similar phenomenon to "Inner Sonar Skill". The user having being used to the consequencies of Bata and the drawback which is "deafness while Bataa is activated", although he can feel sound, he could not actually feel what exactly is being said if the particular sound is a conversation thus making him train to be able to read lips.
Ìlù Gángan - Beat of Exorcism:
Bata is able to tap into the user chakra, draw them out and use it to form a shield/barrier of sound. Bata reacts to this upon sensing an incoming entity though it may or may not require the user's will depending on the situation. If the user isn't able to utilize his will due to him being unconcious(though still alive) or in a will-subduing jutsu of any kind, then Bata reacts itself so far the user still has chakra that it can leech. If the user can use his will properly, then it requires the user's will to form the barrier. The shield is able to deflect/bounce back A-rank and below jutsu and depending on the kind or area affected by the incoming jutsu, the shield can be large, small, parabolic or even spherical, encompassing 360deg around the user. This can only be used once per turn and counts as a move.
By sacrificing the ability of Beat of Exocrism for the remainder of the match, this abilty can be used to deflect a single jutsu of any rank above A-rank. However due to chakra strain from this, the user is not able to perform forbidden ranked techniques of any kind for 2 turns.
NOTE: Can only be wield by Priest
NOTE: The user sacrifices 5 chakra point per turn while its active. The user however, can deactivate it anytime thus loosing access to the weapon's abilities.
NOTE: When Bata is inactive and worn on the neck as a crucifix, it serves no purpose but for fashion.
NOTE: Activation and transition of Bata from crucifix to ear-morphs is instant and takes no time whatsoever.
NOTE: No sound technique above A-rank can be used the turn "Beat of Exorcism" is used
NOTE: Upon deactivation of Bataa, the user remains deaf for 2 turns and his balance is unstable thus giving him a reduction in speed(1 rank lower) for 2 turns.
NOTE: Once deactivated, Bataa can not be activated again until after 2 turns.

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for Wesobi.

☼ Declined ☼

Lets focus on the first ability first. How exactly does converting the sound to the sense of touch convey to you any sort of meaningful information? You compare it to the inner sonar skill, but that isn't really related as it has nothing to do with touch. Perhaps a better method would be that instead of converting it to touch it just skips your ear and triggers the auditory area of your brain directly making you "hear" everything without the worry of being hurt by loud noises and the such, assuming that's what you're trying to avoid with this. SO I guess either explain how feeling the sound helps you, or change it up a little.

Shamuno Furo - Siamese Flow
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 0
Description: A reverse application of "Leech All Creation: Attack Prevention Technique". The user channel his chakra to a object or a physical technique. With both the embeded chakra and his own chakra linked together and in perfect harmony, he is able to allow object to pass through him. Instead of him merging through object, he wills it and lets the object merge through him. Through the application and kneading of the user's elemental chakra, The user can adopt this to make elemental technique to pass through him one element at a time. Same with Leech All Creation where the merging medium is not disturbed in any way, the user's entity is not disturbed, the object is merely passing through with no internal relativity. During close combat, the user can use this on an incoming sword slash or an incoming punch(though the object or jutsu that is merging through the user is also not affected interms of composition, power and momentum).
NOTE: Usable 5x per battle
NOTE: Last 2 turns
NOTE: No Ninjutsu above S-rank the turn this is used
NOTE: Only works on A-rank and below Technique.

‡ Declined ‡ This is usable way too many times. Twice max. This would only work on B-Rank and below techniques. This would also only work on tangible mediums like earth

Fuuton: Fukeiken - Wind Style: Blasphemy
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B-S
Range: Short
Chakra: 20-40
Damage: 40-80
Description: The user channels wind chakra into either his arms or legs. When he uses this on his arms he would spread out his arms away from his body and coats his hands upto his elbow in wind. The wind continously rotates like a drill with the small end at the finger. At the elbow, the drill is large and have spaces like puting one's hand in a cone. Adding more chakra allows the user to expand the drill at will increasing its range(upto 5m) and rotation speed. When used on the legs, the user can decide to use it on each legs separately or he closes up his legs and use it on both legs at once as one giant drill. Using it on the legs however, requires one to be airbone as using it while standing on the ground makes it drill into the ground. This however can be used to the user's advantage to drill and move through the ground or to drill through rigid obstacles. Defensively, the user can flatten the drill to form a rotating shield of wind. More like a rotating fan with the blade made of wind. The user can transition between the defensive and the offensive form in an instant.
NOTE: S-rank can only be used 3x per battle
NOTE: No other elemental jutsu except wind can be used while active.
NOTE: Last 3 turns

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‡ Declined ‡ Similar techniques exist.

 

[Serpent]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Dorukun Katana) The Dollmaster's Blade
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: Quick fingers and an eye for detail were the Dollmaster's trademarks. But only once did he use his skills to create a weapon. This was the result, as colossal as his dolls were delicate. In a small town once known as "Arashi" lived a man known as the Dollmaster, he was well known for his craftsmanship, building and designing anything from furniture to houses but nothing compared to his Dolls, every single doll different in detail from it's previous. ranging in sizes and styles. Over the years he made thousands of Dolls, all made for his private collection. Every year during the week long "Festival of Lights". The Dollmaster placed is Dolls out on display to shine under the fireworks. After seeing the delicate Dolls, the Leader of the town admired his craftsmanship and asked the Dollmaster to make a Sword for him. Although the Dollmaster had never made a sword, he was excited to take on the challenge. Over the fallowing weeks, the Dollmaster spent most of his time on the sword, he crafted an unique blade. Upon finishing it's final details. the Dollmaster was killed by having his neck slit, his blood spilling out over the blade, his body lied bleeding out over the blade for weeks until he was found in his workshop under his home. it is unknown why the Dollmaster was assassinated. Later, after the creation of the Ninja Villages, the remaining Dollmaster's Dolls where collected and put on display in a museum located in the Land of Waves. his sword was placed as his most regarded piece of work and held as his homesteads most prize treasure. After seeing the Blade and unknown Ninja stole it for himself, only then did he learn the blade's Dominic past. Hearing the Dollmaster's voice echo throughout his mind.
Abilities Notes:
-Because of the Blood absorbed from the Dollmaster, this blade gained his chakra and soul, allowing for the sword to contaminated with it's user as if it was the Dollmaster himself. This allows the Dollmaster's Blade to alert it's wielder of anyone up to a Mid-range area.
-Once per battle the Dollmaster is able to Infuse his Chakra into it's wielder. by using this foreign Chakra the Dollmaster is able to dispelled any Genjutsu up to A-rank, giving it's wielder a clean slate.
-The Style of it's blade, is unique as it is a chain blade, allowing it's wielder to extend it's reach and un-extend it's reach up to a Mid Range area.
-Because of the Dollmaster's eye for detail, this blade is razor sharp and made out of an unknown metal that and never dulls, it is as sharp as it was the day it was forged.
Restriction Notes:
-Can only Extend reach once per turn.
-Can only Un-extend reach once per turn.
-Must be at least S-class Ninja Rank to wield.
-Must have training in Kenjutsu to wield.

||Approved|| In spite of the droll and clearly contrived justifications for certain abilities. See the bold and colored.

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(Dorukun Katana) The Dollmaster's Blade
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: N/A (-10 to extend or un-extend range)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Quick fingers and an eye for detail were the Dollmaster's trademarks. But only once did he use his skills to create a weapon. This was the result, as colossal as his dolls were delicate. In a small town once known as "Arashi" lived a man known as the Dollmaster, he was well known for his craftsmanship. Building and designing anything from furniture to houses, yet nothing compared to his Dolls, every single doll different in detail from it's previous. Ranging in sizes and styles. Over the years he made thousands of Dolls, all for his private collection. Every year during the week long "Festival of Lights". The Dollmaster placed is Dolls out on display to shine under the fireworks. After seeing the delicate Dolls, the Leader of the town admired his craftsmanship and asked the Dollmaster to make a Sword for him. Although the Dollmaster had never made a sword, he was excited to take on the challenge. Over the fallowing weeks, the Dollmaster spent most of his time on the sword, he crafted a unique blade. Upon finishing it's final details The Dollmaster found himself arrested for unknown charges. Taken and chained in the dungeons beneath the town, the Dollmaster found himself standing in the middle of a diagram, his sword next to him. After a sudden flash from the markings on the ground the Dollmaster found himself unable to move, unable to feel. His soul being sealed within the Blade and his very being forever changed. Over time, after the creation of the Ninja Villages, the remaining Dollmaster's Dolls where collected and put on display in a museum located in the Land of Waves. His sword was placed as his most regarded piece of work and held as his homesteads most prize treasure. After seeing the Blade an unknown Ninja stole it for himself, only then did he learn the blade's past. Hearing the Dollmaster's voice echo throughout his mind.
Abilities Notes:
-The Dollmaster being sealed into the blade, It gained his chakra and soul, allowing for the sword to contaminated with it's user through a mind link. This allows the Dollmaster's Blade to alert it's wielder of anything up to a Mid-range area.
-The Dollmaster is able to Infuse his Chakra into it's wielder. By using this foreign Chakra the Dollmaster is able to Recognize and dispelled any Genjutsu up to A-rank, giving it's wielder a clean slate.
-The Dollmaster, being loyal to it's wielder will attack anyone else's mind when held. This forcibly loosening the grip of the blade and deals -20 mental damage to the victim
-The Style of it's blade, is unique as it is a chain blade, allowing it's wielder to extend it's reach and un-extend it's reach up to a Mid Range area.
-Because of the Dollmaster's eye for detail, this blade is razor sharp and made out of an unknown metal that and never dulls, it is as sharp as it was the day it was forged.
Restriction Notes:
-Can only Extend reach once per turn.
-Can only Un-extend reach once per turn.
-Can only dispelled Genjutsu twice per battle.
-Must be at least S-class Ninja Rank to wield.
-Must have training in Kenjutsu to wield.

‡ Update Declined ‡ Keep the original.

(Suiton: Hitoshirenu Sukuizu) Water Release: Hidden Splash Strangle
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: While using "(Suiton: Bochabocha Seme) Water Release: Splash Attack" and causing water to splash upon an target, the user will focus their chakra quickly causing the water to condense and constrict the targeted area's of water. This will happen with extreme force and speed capable of crushing normal bone while cutting of blood flow of the constricted area.
Notes:
-Requires a Water Source
-Can only be used in conjunction with "Splash Attack"
-Can only be taught by Serpent

‡ Declined ‡ DNR.

(Genjutsu: Hitoshirenu Baindo) Illusion Release: Hidden Splash Binding
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: While using "(Suiton: Bochabocha Seme) Water Release: Splash Attack" and causing water to splash upon an target, the user will focus their chakra causing the water to become highly reflective of the surrounding light, this will shine upon a target casting a subtle illusion that mesmerizes the target as time appears to stand still preventing them from movement for a short time.
Notes:
-Requires a Water Source
-Illusion lasts one turn
-Can only be used in conjunction with "Splash Attack"
-Can only be taught by Serpent

‡ Declined ‡ No elemental Genjutsu without the proper training.

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(Suiton: Bochabocha Seme) Water Release: Splash Attack
Type: Supplementary
Rank: E
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will lay down in an water source and flop around like a fish. this causes small amounts of water to splash up on any nearby opponent(s). This is often used as a taunt to anger an opponent before battle.
Note:
-Requires a Water Source
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent


±± Approved ±± i guess...

 

[Punk Hazard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu: Hadesu no Bebīsākuru)Illusion Arts: Hades' Playpen
Type:Offense
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user will perform the Snake handseal and use his chakra to place the opponent within an illusion. The illusion causes the opponent to see themselves trapped inside of a giant metal box that emerges from the ground at extremely high speed, one that closes a the top once they're inside and just barely big enough for them to move around in. The front of the box, where they are facing, is barred, giving the appearance of a prison. Once the box has emerged, which takes about no time at all, the opponent then experiences blue flames being launched from every corner, aside from the front of the box where the bars are. The flames, of course, are completely illusionary but feels real due to the opponent's believing the flames are real. The flames converge on the opponent, causing pain in the form of mental damage. The flames last for about five seconds, then fade away along with the rest of the illusion.
~Can only be taught by Riker Slade~

(Genjutsu: Jōnzu no Petto)Illusion Arts: The Pet of Jones
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:60
Damage:N/A
Description:The user will place the opponent in a Genjutsu that causes them to see a large crack form in the ground in front of them, measuring about a foot long. From the crack, a large torrent of water will burst forward and form a dome around the opponent, stretching just behind them and beyond the crack. As the water emerges, so will two giant octopus tentacles that wrap around the opponent's body as the water emerges around them, restraining their movement. This creates the illusion that the opponent is floating in a giant orb of water with two octopus tentacles restraining them. Due to the body believing it is truly restrained and underwater, it will believe it cannot move and is drowning, causing the opponent to start to choke and be unable to move in reality and to pass out after one turn of the Genjutsu affecting them.
~Can only be taught by Riker Slade~
~Lasts for two turns max~
~Can only be used once per battle~

‡ Both Declined ‡ Similar techniques exist.

 

[Shady Doctor]

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Chishi Shindou: Ōkina eikyō | Fatal Impact: Greater Impact
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+20 to Fatal Impact Jutsu)
Description:
This jutsu was created simply to make techniques used in the Chishi Shindou style more dangerous. Users of the style store extra Chakra into their throwing arm in order to strengthen it physically, which results in stronger and faster throws, similar to the simple ability of using chakra in your feet to run faster or chakra enhanced physical attacks to hit harder. With the chakra enhanced throws of the boomerangs, they gain more speed, equaling twice the user's base speed, making each boomerang harder to keep up with. The killing potential of each thrown boomerang also rise exponentially, thus adding +20 damage to blunt and slicing damage due to the the power the boomerangs are launched with. This enhanced throwing ability only works on freeform boomerangs and fatal impact techniques seeing as it takes a certain style to throw the boomerangs, thus the added affects wouldn't be applied to say a kunai or thrown sword.

☆ Usable 3 times
☆ Only usable by users of Chishi Shindou
☆ Boosts only apply to Chishi Shindou techniques

✦ Declined, okay so this can be used 3 times but lasts for how long? I want a break in between usages as well. and double base speed....i would feel safer if this was at x1.5 or 1.75 given the user's base speed will always fluctuate depending on bio used ✦

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Chishi Shindou - Suterusu-a-rang | Fatal Impact - Stealth-a-rang
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 per turn)
Damage Points: n/a
Description:
Stealtharang is a special technique created based off of the Hiding in camouflage technique in order to create more stealthy attacks with the fatal impact style. The user uses the same basis as its mother technique to control how light is reflected around the boomerangs with chakra inflections to camouflage the boomerang by simply touching it and adding chakra to it to achieve a "Stealtharang". The technique also erases the shadow, and is usable on any terrain, making it ideal not only for covert maneuvers but also offensive strikes with fatal impact techniques combined with this. Perceiving the boomerang's position is possible only for ninja who are astute enough to observe minute variations within their surrounding environment, such as distortions of air currents in the immediate vicinity or distinguishing sounds of the boomerangs as they move in the air (Doujutsu, sensors, sound users). The user can turn any boomerang into a Stealtharang and up to 4 at a time, thus allowing the boomerangs to achieve this state for 2 turns before the inserted chakra runs out and the boomerangs are converted back to normal.

☆ Usable 3 times
☆ Only usable by users of Chishi Shindou
☆ The user must touch the boomerang in order to add the stealth on to it, being able to make 4 Stealtharangs at a time which will last 2 turns
☆ Can't be used in consecutive turns

✦ Approved, I like this, good job noob, you're getting good at this CJ thing ✦

‡ Both Pending ‡ Leaving for Madara.

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Fuuton: Akegata madei | Wind Release: Till Dawn
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Long (Suction only works with close range of creatures)
Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
Akegata madei is a simple technique revolved around the suction aspects of wind release. The user will perform 3 hand seals (Dragon - Snake - Boar) and use the wind naturally present around them to create three small creatures of harmless wind. The creature's bodies would be that of basketball sized orbs coupled with a halo of wind over the bodies, sad faces, and angel type wings that were smaller than the creatures themselve.. Once the creatures are created they'd act like moons to the user, orbiting them until commanded to act. The creatures once commanded to, can each create a powerful localized suction towards them that sucks in things at a quick pace. This suction is so precise that a single creature can suck a specific kunai to it out of several thrown for if needed, though the suction only reaches up to short range in any given direction of a single creature. This makes it to be a useful technique when it comes to avoiding damage or setting an opponent up, but it is quite limited in how large of an object they can suck in. The creatures can only suck in objects ranging from up to the size of a medium summon such as Sasuke's hawk, anything bigger or with alot of mass wouldnt be pulled in. These creatures can all be controlled to move to different positions on the field that would help fit any strategy that involves them using their suction effect; i.e. having one creatures 5m above you at all times so if a small projectile came at you the orb can suck you towards it to do an evasive maneuver upwards, or having a creature near your arm/leg during taijutsu movement to suck an evading opponent back at your attack.. The creatures are limited in usage while active though, each only being able to use the suction once per turn, though with one usage all three creatures can be used. Each creature is tethered to the user's chakra network via thin intangible strings of fuuton that aren't visible to the naked eye, allowing the creatures to maintain themselves and stay in play while the user is acts on his own. This becomes useful for the user to focus on his actual attacks and defenses until the creatures are needed to act. Each tether can near instantly be reattached by spending +10 more chakra to reconnect a new one, in case the tethers are severed in any way and the creatures are still in tact. At any given point, the creatures can passively combine suctions with one another to increase the power and range of their suction. Two creatures combining their suction can reach up to mid range, in width, height and distance, sucking anything in within that range. All three combining the suctions would be able to do the same but with longe ranged width, height and distance. This can only be done with the creatures within close range of one another though.

☆ Need to be taught by Shady
☆ Lasts three turns With a turn cool down
☆ Only usable 4×

‡ Declined ‡ I made something like this in the past and it was DNR'd ;_;. DNR.

 

[Pervyy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ninjutsu - sen'yaku) - ninja art infusion
Type: supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-long
Chakra: 20
Damage: n/a
Description: this jutsu is based off the elemental rasengan jutsu. After having released a jutsu of pure chakra, the user will use their nature contol focussing more chakra into the jutsu to give it an elental chakra changing the chakra to that element. So if the user throws a kunai of pure chakra they can then release more chakra into it focussing on a element such as lightning and the kunai will then turn to lightning. This jutsu doesn't make the original jutsu stronger it was based on trying to counter pure chakra weakness to the elements.

Note: if focussing earth the chakra will Change to mud
Note: must wait one full turn before using again
Note: once an element is chosen it can't be changed
Note: doesn't work on bijuu jutsu

‡ Declined ‡ Similar techniques exist.

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ittōryū/Fūton: Ichi Tsubasa no Tenshi) One Sword Style/Wind Release: One-Winged Angel
Type: Offensive/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80 with sword, N/A without sword
Description: The user creates two ropes of wind that attach to their arm holding the sword and their leg on the same side of the body. The ropes then begin to move in the opposite direction that the user is facing in order to create a strong pulling current. While the wind is pulling on the user's arm and leg, the user pivots their other leg on the ground. The result of the pulling wind and pivot leg causes the user's body to rotate backwards while the wind ropes also slightly drag the user toward the direction of pivot. This part of the technique enables the user to quickly rotate out of the way. In order to regain balance after the spin the user is forced to plant both legs on the ground and enter a crouching position. From this position the user can carry out the rest of their move. After this first step is complete, the user is able to avoid reasonably-sized objects and projections (most likely objects of a few meters in width), and move behind the object or projectile in a crouching position. The user's arm with the sword should now also be directly behind the object or projectile. The user then focuses raw chakra into their sword and as they stand up the user swings their arm backward, imitating the opening of a single wing. The sword as it is swung releases a stream of chakra that forms into a single wing. The stream is raw chakra and shrapnel that results from the blade shattering and is only able to be defended with techniques of equal strength. Anything caught in the wing will be reduced to shreds. The shrapnel is required to give the wing this shredding quality. The latter part of this technique can be performed without a sword by recreating the wing with simple wind. This introduces all elemental strengths and weaknesses and removes any offensive capabilities making this a pure defensive technique. The wing made of wind is able to disperse fluids up to the same rank. This is simply meant to diffuse those elements into the air like that of a flapping wing dispersing dust to prevent the opponent from manipulating the fluids further to attack the user from behind. If this hits earth while using only the wind variation, it does no damage. Similarly, if it hits the opponent, it only pushes them with S-rank strength. If the opponent can avoid any impacts with the ground or walls, they can prevent all damage. It is simply meant to create some space between the user and the opponent and expose the opponent's back for a follow up attack. The direct impact of the wind wing cannot damage the opponent.
- This technique can only be used three times per battle.
- The user's arm and leg begin to feel stress from the wind pull preventing the user from using taijutsu above A-rank next turn. The user also cannot use wind or kenjutsu above S-rank on the next turn.

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 Declined  I find it illogical. At least in how its worded. It, for me, makes no sense.

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(Ittōryū/Fūton: Osoroshī Genzai) One Sword Style/Wind Release: Ghastly Current
Type: Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user is able to focus chakra on the very tip of their sword while holding it with forward grip. The user then lets go of their sword to cause a very small natural dip in the tip of the sword. The user then immediately grabs the sword with reverse grip. The very small natural dip of the tip of the sword where the chakra was concentrated results in a smooth cut in the air. With the reverse grip, the user retraces the cut, arcs the sword backward while extending the user's arm away from their body. This causes the initial cut to be expanded. The smooth natural of the cut enables the user to remove all the air in the path of the slash and create a zero pressure zone. But this cannot ever be a true pressure zone, something will always try to fill the space. By timing the slash perfectly, the user is able to draw an opposing technique into this zone. Essentially creating a more efficient channel for the technique. This enables the user to redirect even large techniques with a simple well-timed slash of their sword. It is able to move fluids and energy, concentrated or un-concentrated through the current up to the same rank. It cannot be used on solids. The result of the technique wears down the tip leaving it a flat blunt edge. If a sword is not accessible the user is able to change this to a pure wind technique, and user their fingers, but in that instance, it can only affect wind techniques and not any other form of energy. This technique requires the utmost discipline as the user must come face to face with an opposing technique without retreating into order for the tip of the sword to generate the current zone. Once the current is created, the energy is moved away with such speeds that the user can continue without stopping and reach the opponent.
- This technique can only be used three times per battle.
- The user cannot use wind or kenjutsu above S-rank on the next turn.

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for Scorps

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 Declined  OP and exploitable. The wording of how you achieve the technique is, as always, detailed and lenghty but the limits of what it can do and how it can do it are not.

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[Igneel]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Illusion Style: Thorns of Hell | Genjutsu:Keikyoku Naraku
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user casts his opponent into an illusion in which, the hair through out his body suddenly stands on it's own as if though he was getting a goose bump. Unlike the pleasant feeling you get from a Goose bump, upon erection the hair drills inward into the body, as if the hair were made of metal. The depth of the wound is proportional to the length of the hair and the density. Due to the fact that every inch of a person's body is covered in hair, the pain felt is excruciating. The user of the technique can target specific body parts or the whole body. The most affected part is the head, due to the density of hair resulting in severe headaches, making the opponent unable to focus on anything in particular. As a result of the piercings, the opponent is rendered motionless.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: No Genjutsu in the next turn
Note: Can only be used by Igneel

‡ Declined ‡ Similar techniques exist.

Water Style:Neptune's Binding | Suiton:Nepuchu Soutei
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short- Long
Chakra:40(+10 per turn)
Damage: N/A (+10 to constructs of water)
Description: Earth Style techniques overpower Water Style techniques by the means of overpowering the cohesive nature of water, and splashing the water molecules apart. To overcome this weakness, the user activates Neptune Binding ability. Upon activation, the cohesive nature of the water molecules manipulated by the user are enhanced to a greater degree. The result is that, the water style techniques loose their inherent weakness to earth style techniques. This means that an A-rank Water techniques can very well defend against an A-rank Earth technique. Another effect of the technique is that, water constructs like the water dragon, shark etc are boosted by +10 damage due to the fact, the water is much more destructive that what it used to be.

Note:Lasts for 4 turns
Note:Usable twice per battle
Note:Cannot use Earth Style techniques when active, upon which the technique deactivates
Note:Upon deactivation, the user is limited upto A-rank Water style in the next turn
Note:Can only be used by Igneel

‡ Declined ‡ Changing basic elemental strengths and weaknesses isn't allowed. DNR.