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Phew, finally got the time to write something and now I feel like an idiot and don't have much to say.
Anyways, you weren't kidding when you said character death. Poor Kuroi, killed off a few paragraphs after his entry (you're cruel).
I like the poetic touch you gave to the story, made it all the more interesting.
Finally we get to see the Juubi (after your break of course).
All in all, the best chapter you have ever written.
Glad to see someone felt some remorse for me XD
Your reviews complete me xd
I like trying new things, guess I've established that during my latest writings.
Anyways, what I wanted to talk about XD
I have to stall the Jubi's arrival for one of two chapters O_O The next chapter will instead be titled; The Tower of Death, and quite possibly, I have to divide it into part 1 and part 2, but we shall see. The reason is that I want a more smooth transition from Chapter 6 to the Jubi's arrival than I originally had intended (I planned to jump fast ahead), and also because I've gotten heavily inspired by Bruce Lee lately and want to do a sort of re-imagination of his final movie Game of Death, which turned out nothing like he had originally intended due to his early demise. I'm going to draw inspiration from the early notes of how it was intended to be and do my own mix of it. I think it's going to be cool, because I will have to introduce a new character alongside someone familiar, as well as to include 7 brand new fights!! So yeah, stay tuned for it. Like I've said before, I think late April is realistic at this point though.
Well he could be saved, as he was in truth saved. But he didn't want to be saved, or rather, he chose to end his life and die with the last honor he felt he had.
I'm fine by now, so that's a bonus ^^
Next chapter is going to be interesting like I mentioned to Fahad in my post above. It's one of those ideas that came out of nowhere which I just feel like I have to do. So yeah, it's going to take up a chapter or two, which is kind of rad, haha.
There's going to be a plot twist for sure. If you want to have a sneak peek on what the overall vibe of it will be, I advice you to check out this YouTube video (that's the best I can do to set the "excitement for it):
From what I’ve read the next chapters are going to be abundant and exciting! =D I believe I’ve seen Game of Death years ago but I think I’ll probably re-watch it at some point as I barely remember it. Thank you for posting the video regardless
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