[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Bloo]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Aisu Meiku) - Ice Make
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 10
Damage: N/A (+ 5 to Ice jutsu)
Description:
Ice Make is the result of many years of training. Ice make isn't an attack or defense, its a hand seal. Where normal hand seals are used to gather and manipulate chakra, Ice Make takes it one step farther. To perform Ice make the user simply places their balled up fist on top of their open palm. This allows the user to concentrate and to pour more chakra into their ice techniques. It doesn't make them strong enough to counter ices weakness but it does make them stronger than ice jutsus used by the opponent. Ice make has another use, if the seal is held after performing an ice jutsu the user can spend the exact same chakra points to regenerate the ice back to its original strength and form, but only if it isn't completely destroyed.

-Must be stated in the bio or posted at the beginning of a fight.
-Regenerating can only be used twice and counts as a move.
-Can only be taught by Bloo.

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‡ Declined ‡ Just another way of powering up your techniques and the template is completely wrong. Not to mention the fact that this is two jutsus in one. DNR.

 

[-Best-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

3rd CJ for this cycle.

Joingu: Tatsu to sai sutetchi no āto | Earth grudge Fear : Art of sever and re-stitch
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D-S Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 10-40
Damage: N/A | 20-80
Description:

By taking advantage of his unique body structure, Kakuzu created a technique that would potentially help him in releasing genjutsu by pain without having the side effects of it. With this particular technique, Kakuzu will be able to manifest a Dark thread in his body to either sever, pierce or slash his body to produce considerable pain in order to release him from any form of Genjutsu ( Except Forbidden and MS grade Genjutsu ). There is certain side effects and the rank depends on the intensity of damage inflicted on the user's body. As soon as the Damage is inflicted, The user will make the dark thread refill that region covering the ruptured and damaged dark thread.

D rank : A Dark thread will make slight slash which wouldn't make much damage. Can be used to release D rank Genjutsu. No side effects.

C rank : A pair of Dark thread will cut of a small chunk of flesh on any part of the body. Can be used to release C rank and below genjutsu. Used to reform the Dark thread to cover the injured region/ similar injuries from other techniques. No side effects.

B rank : A bunch of Dark threads will Pierce the palm of either of the hands like a kunai stab in the hands in order to release the user from B rank and below genjutsu. These bunch of dark thread can be used to simultaneously refill the Dark threads in the injured area. Cannot use faster hand seals and hand seals above 4 for 2 turns.

A rank : A large bunch of Dark threads will puncture any vital muscle like the thigh muscle or shoulder muscle etc releasing the opponent from A rank and below genjutsu. These large bunch of Dark threads can be used to simultaneously refill the dark threads in the injured region or in an already injured region. Particular part goes numb for two turns. If used at shoulders, cannot use faster hand seal and hand seals more than three for 3 turns.

S rank: A very large bunch of dark threads that is used to sever any limb and then re connect it to the body. Can be used to release S rank and below genjutsu. Reconnecting takes a full turn and cannot use the particular limb whilst re-connecting. Limb goes numb for 2 turns after getting reconnected. Cannot use faster hand seal, above 3 hand seal and S rank and above EGF techniques for two turns after getting reconnected.

*Can be used (D rank -6x | C rank -5x | B rank -4x | A rank-3x | S rank-2x) per battle*
*Can only be taught by -Marco-*

‡ Declined ‡ You know you can already do this? Either freeform or with the canon Dark Threads technique. Also, no idea why you made three separate posts this cycle.

 

[Luther]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Doton: Oishigetta yubi no tsume ) -Earth Release: Overgrown Fingernails
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description: A technique based heavily on chakra and shape manipulation,which applies the usage of earth in its creation process. The user concentrates their doton chakra on the base of their fingernails just bordering the skin, and creates earth structures which uproots out of each of their ten fingernails. These said structures have a double helix meaning that they each compromise of a pair of parallel helices intertwined about a common axis,similar to that of the human DNA,the structures span well over 30 inches in length and a diameter spanning over 5mm thick. Due to this the user is unable to perform any techniques requiring hand contact when this technique is in use. The double helix structures carry brute force and are capable of causing damages if struck with it or breaking down solid based structures[ A rank or lower]. It can also be used in defense by the user crossing his two palms together forming a sort of a protective web which can protect him against solid based attacks or water based attacks A rank and below. The said structures abide to the general elemental weakness and strengths meaning they can be cut or broken by elements of the same rank who they share equality or elements of a lower rank who they have a weakness to, they can especially be very useful in taijutsu battles or long range battles where the user can grab and forcefully pull the opponents body towards him to aid him in battle.

Note: Last For Only Four Turns
Note: Can Only be used twice
Note:No S rank earth or above next turns.
Note:Can only be taught by luther.

‡ Declined ‡ These are just fancy earth nails. Also, long-range? That would look ridiculous.

(Kurippusu no menbāu~ōkingu) - Crip Walking
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description: Crip walking is a rhythmic dancing technique which was originally created by members of a gang called the crips,but has been remodeled into a form of taijutsu based rhythmic choreography to aid in battle. Unlike druken fist where the user is intoxicated and actions are spontaneous, crip walking is deliberate and done by the user. The technique is primarily an act of performing quick and intricate footwork and using that the opponent is able to perform both evasive and offensive movements, which have a certain degree of unpredictability to them due to the speed at which the intricate footwork is done.

Note: Can Only be used thrice
Note:Can only be taught by luther.

‡ Declined ‡ Watched a video to get a visual representation of this. It was amusing but I see nothing special about this.

✦ Yeaahhhh, im not as nice as NK. You are hereby banned from this thread until further noted. Protip: Wont be anytime soon. ✦

 

[Gααrα]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

3rd Jutsu of this Cycle.

(Genjutsu: Hone no gēmu) | Illusionary Art: Game of Bones
Type: Offensive
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user forms a single handseal and places the opponent in a genjutsu. This genjutsu affects the bones (not literally). As soon as the target is under the effect of the illusion, he/she will experience burning sensation all over their body. Suddenly their bones start disintegrating. They won't be able to see it of course, but they will feel it. Kaguya Clan members will see their bones turn to dust if they have them appear outside their body. As a result, they will lose the control over their body, as they can no longer stand. The burning sensation will continue while the user falls down, unable to move his limbs due to the unavailable support from their spine or any other bone. In reality, the user simply falls down on his back (imitating himself in the illusion), as he experiences the illusion.
Restrictions:
~ Can be used 3 times.
~ Lasts a maximum of 3 turns.
~ Can only be taught by Waaiz

‡ Declined ‡ Similar techniques have been made.

 

[Sirius Black]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting
Summoning Animal: Gannet (Northern Gannets)

Scroll Owner: Soul Reaper

Other Users who have signed the contract: None Yet

Summoning Boss if existing: To be created

Other Summoning Animals tied to the contract: To be created

General Description: The gannets are large white sea birds with yellowish heads; black tipped wings; and long bills. General Gannets will have a wing span of up to 2 meters while large summons (like boss summons) may be as huge as Gamabunta, while small baby gannets will be comparatively smaller. Gannets hunt fish by diving from a height into the sea and pursuing their prey underwater. Gannets have a number of adaptations which make them stand out from other birds: Gannets dive from a height of 30 metres, achieving speeds of 100 km/h as they strike the water, enabling them to catch fish much deeper than most airborne birds as the structure of their bodies is adapted for this practice. They do not have external nostrils and their secondary nostrils can be closed when they want, mostly when they are in water. The opening of their auditory canal is very small and is covered with feathers; the openings can also be closed in water using a system that is similar to that used for the nostrils.They have air sacs in their face and chest under their skin which act like bubble wrapping, cushioning the impact with the water. The sternum is very strong and sufficiently long to provide protection for the internal organs from impacts with water. This is also a reason why trained Gannets are immune to up to A-Rank and below water attacks (Each summon will only be immune to water jutsus of their own Rank with the exception of S-Rank summons who will be immune to only A-Rank water). The feathers are waterproof, which allows the birds to spend long periods in water. Their beak is long, strong and conical with a slight downward curve at the end. The front part has a sharp edge. Their eyes are positioned far enough forward on their face to give them binocular vision, allowing them to judge from long range distances accurately. When they see a fish they will dive into the water. They usually push their prey deeper into the water and capture it as they return to the surface. The bird’s subcutaneous air bags aid their rapid return to the surface. Ninja Gannets are usually trained in the use of Kenjutsu. They can attach weapons to their wings, allowing them to perform various kenjutsu attacks.

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‡ Declined ‡ The coloured is a definite no.

(Raiton: Shadounemeshisu) | Lightening Style: Shadow Nemesis
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:This technique was developed by a Nara Clan member who wanted to devise new ways of getting out of Nara Clan shadows. This technique was specifically developed to counter a shadow once you get captured in Shadow possession, and hence requires no handseals. The user channels his raiton chakra throughout the body which makes his skin glow. The light emmited from his skin is of the highest intensity (S-rank) such that it affects in a way similar to the flashbombs. The light is so intense that the opponent has to either look away or close his eyes as it pricks the retina. The second phase is when, this chakra that resides in the skin, is released into the atmosphere from all around the user. The chakra exits the body in the form of tiny bolts (sand-grain sized) and can easily reside in the moisture in the air. The moment the user releases the chakra, he returns back to the normal color. The tiny bolts of lightening, spreads throughout the battlefield and can be be manipulated with simple hand gestures. These tiny bolts can be manipulated to attack the opponent as a whole or in parts (2 each of B-Rank max). These tiny bolts can be easily spotted by naked eyes as they illuminate the entire battlefield. In entirety, these bolts can be compared with water that has a volume of 100 cubic meters. The bolts can only reside in the atmosphere for a maximum of 3 turns before dissipating into nothingness.
- Users glow for a maximum of 3 turns; during which he can only use lightning techniques.
- Users stop glowing once the tiny bolts are released.
- Can only be taught by Soul Reaper
- Cannot use any lightening jutsu above S-rank in the same or next turn.
- Can only be used twice

‡ Declined ‡ Similar techniques exist.

 

[Twilight]

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(Katon Hebi) Fire Serpent
Type: Attack.
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
The user makes the Ram handseal after which they channel their katon chakra into the ground to flow through the ground and once it reaches below the target, the user shape manipulates the katon chakra to form a giant snake of raw fire that emerges from under the target, curling round the target and dealing major burns on the target's skin after which it engulfs the target and burns up the target.
- Can only be taught by me.
- Can only be done twice with two turn cool down.
- No A-rank fire and above in the same round.
- No S-rank fire in the next round
- The jutsu last for only one round.

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(Raiton Dageki) Lightning Strike
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
The user without making any handseals channel their raiton chakra into the ground and control it to flow through the ground and when it gets 2 metres in the ground behind the target, the raiton chakra shoots out of the ground in form of a very sharp blade at a suitable angle to strike the target on their back to deal massive cutting damage that slices through the target.
- Can only be taught by me.
- The jutsu can only be used to attack one target.
- No A-rank and above lightning for the rest of the round.
- It can only be used once.
- No S-rank lightning the next round.

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(Futon Doragon) Wind Dragon
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
This jutsu has two phases. The user first makes the Dog handseal and channels their fuuton chakra into the surrounding air to flow towards the target and once it gets close to the target, the air current around the target increase and starts to hit the target from the left and right, knocking the target into mid-air while the target swings from left to right due to the forces of the air current around them. As the target reaches a certain height from the ground, the user quickly makes the Tiger handseal and holds it and then a wind dragon forms above the target in mid-air and pushes the target downwards with tremendous speed, knocking the target down and leaving the target unconscious.
- Can only be taught by me.
- Can only be done once.
- The jutsu lasts for one round.
- No A-rank and above wind in the same round.
- No S-rank wind in the next round.
- The whole jutsu takes 5 seconds to finish. So it is quite fast.

‡ All Declined ‡ Incorrect template.

 

[Avonomemi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Sōgu: Dāku-ken no sukurōru ) Manipulated tools: Scroll of Dark fist
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short - long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user sink a scroll into the ground then activate it using the seal of confrontation; from the underground the user manifest invisible chains that bind him on the neck, wrists and ankles. The user can use the chains attached to their wrist as a long ranged weapon, like a whip. In addition, one of the chains can be used to connect to their sword, kunai, shuriken etc, allowing the user to use it for long ranged attacks. The chains act also as a shield against attacks; the chains immerse in the user chakra creates a blue energy shield to block against incoming attack. The user can also use his chains to latch onto an enemy's limbs, and swing them around effortlessly.
Note:
ஜ The chains stays till countered or destroyed.
ஜ When the chains are attacked they become visible temporary.
ஜ The chains does not restrain the user free movement.
ஜ The defensive action of the chains count as a move.
Restriction:
ஜ Usable only three times per battle.
ஜ Require a scroll to use.

Declined: template is wrong. Type comes before Rank, not after it. Make sure to get this right.

(Ranton: Surīhitto Shōgai) Storm Release: Three Hit Disorder
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: Utilizing storm chakra, the user infuse their chakra into a bomb and release it to their target, the user then make a single hand seal; the storm bomb unlike the smoke or paper bomb will crack open (instead of exploding), a loud sound and bright sparks of electricity occur as the bomb crack open then it releases a large mass of energy in all direction. The electrical energy in contact stun, the loud sound deaf and bright sparks blind the enemy temporary. The storm bomb look just like a regular ninja bomb. It is not advisable to use within close range as the user can harm themselves too.
Restriction:
ஜ The effects last a turn.
ஜ The user can only use two - three storm bombs per turn.

Declined: template is wrong. Type comes before Rank, not after it. Make sure to get this right.

(Henshitsu Sukiru) Alteration Skill
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 10 ( 5 per turn)
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is a form of ninjutsu that involve using hand movement, the user can alter the trajectory of a released jutsu as the attack move toward the target using hand gestures, the user utilizing their chakra manipulation skill is able to make a fireball/water ball/wind blast/stone etc recently released to move from its original travel path to a curved or circular path or even a corner to hit a hidden target. This ninjutsu work mostly for projectile based jutsu like fire release: blazing shuriken dance.
Note:
ஜ The technique require no means of activation, meaning the user can utilize it at will. And since the user can use it at will, they can cease usage at will also.
Restriction:
ஜ The user is unable to perform other jutsu while active.
ஜ The alteration of a jutsu travel path(trajectory) stands as a move.
ஜ It will cost the user 5 chakra points after the first turn of usage to maintain.

Declined: template is wrong. Type comes before Rank, not after it. Make sure to get this right.

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(Sōgu: Dāku-ken no sukurōru ) Manipulated tools: Scroll of Dark fist
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user sink a scroll into the ground then activate it using the seal of confrontation; from the underground the scroll manifest invisible chains that bind him on the neck, wrists and ankles. The user can use the chains attached to their wrist as a long ranged weapon, like a whip. In addition, one of the chains can be used to connect to their sword, kunai, shuriken etc, allowing the user to use it for long ranged attacks. The chains act also as a shield against attacks; the chains immerse in the user chakra creates a blue energy shield to block against incoming attack. The user can also use his chains to latch onto an enemy's limbs, and swing them around effortlessly.
Note:
- The chains last for six turns.
- When the chains are attacked they become visible temporary.
- When striked with a stronger jutsu the chains de-activate for one turn.
- The chains does not restrain the user free movement.
- The defensive action of the chains count as a move.
Restriction:
- Usable only three times per battle.
- Require a scroll to use.

(Ranton: Surīhitto Shōgai) Storm Release: Three Hit Disorder
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: Utilizing storm chakra, the user infuse their chakra into a bomb and release it to their target, the user then make a single hand seal; the storm bomb unlike the smoke or paper bomb will crack open (instead of exploding), a loud sound and bright sparks of electricity occur momentarily as the bomb crack open, then it releases a large mass of energy in all direction. The electrical energy in contact stun, the loud sound deafen and bright sparks blind the enemy temporary. The storm bomb look just like a regular ninja bomb. It is not advisable to use within close range as the user can harm themselves too.
Restriction:
- The effects last for a turn.
- Two - three storm bombs per turn.

(Henshitsu Sukiru) Alteration Skill
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 10 ( 5 per turn)
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is a form of ninjutsu that involve using hand movement, the user can alter the trajectory of a released jutsu as the attack move toward the target using hand gestures, the user utilizing their chakra manipulation skill is able to make a fireball/water ball/wind blast/stone etc recently released to move from its original travel path to a curved path or even through a corner to hit a hidden target. This ninjutsu work mostly for projectile based jutsu like fire release: blazing shuriken dance.
Note:
- The technique can be activated by the user will likewise cease usage at will also.
Restriction:
- Can't perform other jutsu while active.
- Alteration of a jutsu travel path count as a move.
- Cost additional 5 chakra points after the first turn.
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‡ All Declined ‡ You bold changes on resubmission not say "Edited"

 

[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Suiton: Babiron no kūchū teien - Water Release: Hanging Gardens of Babylon
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30(-10 per turn to sustain)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Hanging Gardens of Babylon is a technique that focuses on altering the component of the user's water jutsu. Suiton has existed in many forms that fall under general style. For example, oil techniques, mist techniques and syrup or sticky techniques. This jutsu focuses on changing the composition of the water jutsu to either of these things at one given time. As a result, each composition change will carry different effects and weaknesses. However despite the change in strengths and weaknesses unique to each form of water, they still follow the basic elemental weakness of water, Earth. Each of these forms are given a specific name to go under: Syrupy composition is given the name Ishtar Gate, Mist composition dawns the name Tower of Babel and Oily composition has the name Ruins of Akkad. The change between each form is instant but still requires a move per turn after the jutsu is activated.

Ishtar Gate: Ishtar Gate gets its name for its defensive properties which are related to syrup techniques. The user focuses chakra into the their water jutsu to change its composition from a free flowing water jutsu into a highly viscous substances that sticks on to most if not all surfaces and as well as onto the opponent trapping then. By turning the water into a highly dense and sticky substance, the jutsu loses its ability to conduct lightning properly which acts as a double edged sword. The user loses the ability to string together lightning and water combos but at the same time is able to stop non-concentrated techniques such as Chidori Nagashi or even in some cases telegram flash. Due to being highly dense and viscous, the water jutsu's speed decreases by half

Ruins of Akkad: By focusing chakra into the water jutsu, the user can change its composition from a fire resistant substance into a highly flammable substance. Oil techniques are mostly offensive and should be moved that way. Ruins of Akkad allows the opponent to put more fire and water combos together because the water jutsu is flammable. Due to the natural nature of oil, it does not mix well with water techniques keeping them separated even if the oil submerged in water. This temporarily takes away the user's ability to form and stack strong water combos together as they won't flow together. Changing the composition from a water jutsu to an oily water jutsu has no affect on its speed.

Tower of Babel: The Tower of Babel allows the user to convert water jutsu into mist techniques by focusing chakra into them and changing its composition and physical state. Due to the water becoming lighter the speed of the jutsu doubles by now is more susceptible to being blown away and dispersed by wind jutsu easily. Tower of Babel is the only style that doesn't combine with other elements well and is best used on its own.

This jutsu lasts 3 turns and can be used three times per battle, each usage has a two turn cool down in between. Only one of these effects can be active at once time to stop being stacked upon. The user of this technique must have mastery over water release.

Declined. How do you make contact with the water (to insert chakra into it, needed to make these changes) when it isn't nearby anymore? I can undestand the usage at nearby, defensive water techniques, but techniques that have been sent off "do their thing" and you really have little control over them unless stated in the technique itself. There's a small line in between focusing chakra in something, somewhere (for example: creating earth techs under the opponent requires contact with the earth, and creating techniques in thin air is different) and altering chakra in a technique somewhere.

Remember: techniques are the result of chakra being used, most of the time they don't retain their chakra, only when they continue to have a special effect or cause something to happen. Even then, you need a way to contact this chakra.

Suiton: Babiron no kūchū teien - Water Release: Hanging Gardens of Babylon
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30(-10 per turn to sustain)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Hanging Gardens of Babylon is a technique that focuses on altering the component of the user's water jutsu. Suiton has existed in many forms that fall under general style. For example, oil techniques, mist techniques and syrup or sticky techniques. This jutsu focuses on changing the composition of the water jutsu to either of these things at one given time. As a result, each composition change will carry different effects and weaknesses. However despite the change in strengths and weaknesses unique to each form of water, they still follow the basic elemental weakness of water, Earth. Each of these forms are given a specific name to go under: Syrupy composition is given the name Ishtar Gate, Mist composition dawns the name Tower of Babel and Oily composition has the name Ruins of Akkad. The change between each form is instant but still requires a move per turn after the jutsu is activated.

Ishtar Gate: Ishtar Gate gets its name for its defensive properties which are related to syrup techniques. The user focuses chakra into the their water jutsu to change its composition from a free flowing water jutsu into a highly viscous substances that sticks on to most if not all surfaces and as well as onto the opponent trapping then. By turning the water into a highly dense and sticky substance, the jutsu loses its ability to conduct lightning properly which acts as a double edged sword. The user loses the ability to string together lightning and water combos but at the same time is able to stop non-concentrated techniques such as Chidori Nagashi or even in some cases telegram flash. Due to being highly dense and viscous, the water jutsu's speed decreases by half

Ruins of Akkad: By focusing chakra into the water jutsu, the user can change its composition from a fire resistant substance into a highly flammable substance. Oil techniques are mostly offensive and should be moved that way. Ruins of Akkad allows the opponent to put more fire and water combos together because the water jutsu is flammable. Due to the natural nature of oil, it does not mix well with water techniques keeping them separated even if the oil submerged in water. This temporarily takes away the user's ability to form and stack strong water combos together as they won't flow together. Changing the composition from a water jutsu to an oily water jutsu has no affect on its speed.

Tower of Babel: The Tower of Babel allows the user to convert water jutsu into mist techniques by focusing chakra into them and changing its composition and physical state. Due to the water becoming lighter the speed of the jutsu doubles by now is more susceptible to being blown away and dispersed by wind jutsu easily. Tower of Babel is the only style that doesn't combine with other elements well and is best used on its own.

To achieve the effects of this jutsu the user has to be in contact with the water or in certain cases where a continuous stream of water is released from the user this jutsu can be used on it. In cases where the user is still in complete control of their water jutsu after it moves away from them this jutsu can be used also by converting the state of the water jutsu through this technique.

This jutsu lasts 3 turns and can be used three times per battle, each usage has a two turn cool down in between. Only one of these effects can be active at once time to stop being stacked upon. The user of this technique must have mastery over water release.

‡ Declined ‡ Too many things wrong here. Oily water techniques are no longer allowed. The sticky water part feels like a one time activation variant of SY's Sticky Infusion. Not allowing the speed of your techniques to double when made into the mist variant. I personally don't see myself approving this.

 

[Shīnju]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal:Lion Fish
Scroll Owner:Artist
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:None as of yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:None as of yet
Description and Background: Pterois in the Atlantic range from 5 centimeters 2 in to 45 centimeters 18 in in length, They are well known for their ornate beauty, venomous spines and unique tentacles.

Lionfish are known for their venomous fin rays, a feature that is uncommon among marine fish in the East Coast coral reefs. The potency of their venom makes them excellent predators and poisonous to fishermen and divers. Lion fish Venom is very deadly so deadly that the lion fish earned a spot on the top 10 for the most venomous marine animals in the world , If a opponent gets stung by one the lion fishes poisonous spines , The spine comes off of the fish & stays in the opponents skin as it as its venom sack injects Neurotixic Venom throughtout the opponents body.

The opponent will first experience a burning sensation like there body is on fire even if the spine is removed the sensation lasts 10 minutes

while on top of that the area where the opponent got stung begins to swell up & begins to experience pain.The opponent will the start feeling nauseated & begin throwing up with also getting a High fever due to the venom. It also weakens the force of muscle contractions(Unable to use that part of the body after awhile ) & Increases the heart rate of the opponent

It is very simple to stop all of this the opponent must use heated water to stop & break down the venom on the affected area.

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Declined
I still don't have enough information on this summon. You gave me one aspect of it, which is the venom technique, however, what is their role in the ninja world? What elements are they usually associated with? How small or large can you summon one? What can do it in battle asides from using its toxin?

(Futon:Kiseki no hakai)Wind Release:Miracles Destructions
Type:Offensive
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:50
Damage:90(15 to the user) From each blade
Description:The user gathers a enourmous amount of wind chakra and shape manipulates it into a large compressed devastating ball of wind, The user then Performs 2 Handseals (Monkey-Dog) & the giant compressed ball floats upwards to the middle of the battle field. After in the middle the user must Make 1 last handseal (Dragon) which initiates the jutsu . The Compressed wind begins spinning in all directions as it sends blades of wind through out the whole battlefield 360 degress around the compressed ball. It sends 3 kinds of Bladed wind . Large blades of wind capable of going through buildings making them collapse, Pushing & Destroying Large boulders if an opponent is hit by one of these types of blades they fly back a range(Short-Mid)(Mid-Long) Equal to getting hit by Pains Ox Summoning. Medium Sized blades capable of hitting a opponent with medium sized force equal to a above average strong fist punch causing severe damage such as broken bones & Internal Damage. Small sharp blades of wind capable of cutting Through Anypart of the human body with ease Equal to a Focused Sword Attack. Being Hit by all 3 types of blades is certain death , Even 2 causes severe damageThe Large waves can Reach up to long range while the medium can only reach mid & the small can only reach short range.The concept of the technique is very simple to achieve 360 degrees the orb releases 4 large blades of wind from the Top left,Top right ,Bottom Left, & Bottom right at the same time. The larger blades are very slow but are very powerful.8 of the medium shaped blades are sent out from the orb Up(in the middle of the Top left & Right blades) Down ( In the middle again) moving at a average wind blade pace. 16 smaller sharp wind blades are sent from in between the large & medium blades and are very fast
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-Usable Once
-No Wind techniques the rest of the match
-Due to the vast amount of wind chakra used the user is left extremely exhausted

Pending, leaving for another checker

☼ Declined ☼
If you have three different sized blades that impact with different amounts of force, their damage should be different. Not to mention you say its 90 from each blade, which isn't going to fly. Its 90 damage total. Tempted to DNR this, but I'll give you the chance to fix it up. Make it clearer.

~Added missing stuff that got it declined~ & Bolded changes

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Summoning Animal:Lion Fish
Scroll Owner:Artist
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:None as of yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:None as of yet
Description and Background: Pterois in the Atlantic range from 5 centimeters 2 in to 45 centimeters 18 in in length, They are well known for their ornate beauty, venomous spines and unique tentacles.

Lionfish are known for their venomous fin rays, a feature that is uncommon among marine fish in the East Coast coral reefs. The potency of their venom makes them excellent predators and poisonous to fishermen and divers. Lion fish Venom is very deadly so deadly that the lion fish earned a spot on the top 10 for the most venomous marine animals in the world , If a opponent gets stung by one the lion fishes poisonous spines , The spine comes off of the fish & stays in the opponents skin as it as its venom sack injects Neurotixic Venom throughtout the opponents body.

The opponent will first experience a burning sensation like there body is on fire even if the spine is removed the sensation lasts 10 minutes

while on top of that the area where the opponent got stung begins to swell up & begins to experience pain.The opponent will the start feeling nauseated & begin throwing up with also getting a High fever due to the venom. It also weakens the force of muscle contractions(Unable to use that part of the body after awhile ) & Increases the heart rate of the opponent


Their active role is to do as the summoner says & also protect the summoner at all costs , .

And Lionfish being on the top 5 Venomous fishes in the world can do just that

These Lionfish Can Harness the Element of water & Lightning , The lionfish that harness the element of water can seep venom into a surrounding water source making opponents unable to use the source , While also squirting Venom/Water from there spins at will.

The lionfish that harness the element of lightning can swim through the earth covering themselves in raiton chakra making them able to move the same speeds as when there in water (Swims as fast as the user runs/W no Boosts) They can submerge underground and in a split second extend there spines to impale anything that's above it/ & Can also use there spines a giant lightning rods when the weather is bad

The smallest lionfish is about 12inches , while some of the largest Lionfish summoning are the size of gamabunta

They are very useful in battle , Some of which are used for distractions , Some for inflicting damage , Some for support , they are as useful as Toad summonings.
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(Futon:Fijis Hakai)Wind Release:Fijis Destruction
Type:Offensive
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:50
Damage:90(15 to the user) From each blade
Description:The user gathers a enourmous amount of wind chakra and shape manipulates it into a large compressed devastating ball of wind, The user then Performs 2 Handseals (Monkey-Dog) & the giant compressed ball floats upwards to the middle of the battle field. After in the middle the user must Make 1 last handseal (Dragon) which initiates the jutsu . The Compressed wind begins spinning in all directions as it sends blades of wind through out the whole battlefield 360 degress around the compressed ball. It sends 3 kinds of Bladed wind . Large blades of wind capable of going through buildings making them collapse, Pushing & Destroying Large boulders if an opponent is hit by one of these types of blades they fly back a range(Short-Mid)(Mid-Long) Equal to getting hit by Pains Ox Summoning.Causing Broken Bones ,& Bruised internal organs , Medium Sized blades capable of hitting a opponent with medium sized force equal to a above average strong fist punch causing severe Bruising & soarness. Small sharp blades of wind capable of cutting Through Any flesh on the human body with ease Equal to a Focused Sword Attack. Being Hit by all 3 types of blades is certain death , Even 2 causes severe damageThe Large waves can Reach up to long range while the medium can only reach mid & the small can only reach short range.The concept of the technique is very simple to achieve 360 degrees the orb releases 4 large blades of wind from the Top left,Top right ,Bottom Left, & Bottom right at the same time. The larger blades are very slow but are very powerful.8 of the medium shaped blades are sent out from the orb Up(in the middle of the Top left & Right blades) Down ( In the middle again) moving at a average wind blade pace. 16 smaller sharp wind blades are sent from in between the large & medium blades and are very fast
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-Usable Once
-No Wind techniques the rest of the match
-Due to the vast amount of wind chakra used the user is left extremely exhausted

~To checker , It was impossible to give damage points to each blade of wind so I was very detailed to what the different type of blades are capable of~

‡ Both Declined ‡ Sorry, I actually can't read these. The formatting isn't ideal. Remove all of the random capitalizations, the random spaces, et cetera.

 

[Akuma]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Dokishindou Tsuyoishukensha) - Earth Release: Wrath of the Earth Sovereign
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Performing four handseals and then focusing a concentrated amount of chakra in his hand, the user will make a fist and slam it onto the surface of the ground to cause an vicinity up to long range to tremor. Distributing dominant shockwaves as to the horizon, knocking down trees if any are in the landscape. This may also be initiated with a stomp of their feet instead, after performing the handseals. Anything that has contact with the ground affected by the jutsu will be flung into the air. The ground within the radius is then made to ascend upwards many meters as a result creating a large mesa (unstable wave-like protrusions of earth). Once the mesa is created, the user will execute one more handseal which will cause the landmass to rupture into countless amounts of debris, nonetheless still holding its shape, using immense chakra reserves to cause the numerous amount of rocks to collide down back to the gruond. Thus causing a decimated landscape which will be irreparable. The destructive force is enough to knock down otherwise built or summoned structures of equal rank.
*The user can only use two jutsu in the turn he uses this technique. (this one and 1 other)*
*Cannot use any other S rank earth in the next two turns*
*Must wait four turns prior using for the second time*
*Can only be used twice per battle*

Declined
Issues with this submission. Firstly, the sheer power and reach of this technique alone deems it as a F-Rank, not a S. Need limitations on exactly how far and wide on the land the shockwaves can affect.

Second submission of this cycle:

(Doton: Dokishindou Tsuyoishukensha) - Earth Release: Wrath of the Earth Sovereign
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: Performing four handseals and then focusing a concentrated amount of chakra in his hand, the user will make a fist and slam it onto the surface of the ground to cause an vicinity up to long range to tremor. Distributing dominant shockwaves as to the horizon, knocking down trees if any are in the landscape. This may also be initiated with a stomp of their feet instead, after performing the handseals. Anything that has contact with the ground affected by the jutsu will be flung into the air. The ground within the radius is then made to ascend upwards many meters as a result creating a large mesa (unstable wave-like protrusions of earth). Once the mesa is created, the user will execute one more handseal which will cause the landmass to rupture into countless amounts of debris, nonetheless still holding its shape, using immense chakra reserves to cause the numerous amount of rocks to collide down back to the ground. Thus causing a decimated landscape which will be irreparable. The destructive force is enough to knock down otherwise built or summoned structures of equal rank. It reachs up to 25 meters into the distance from the user's location working as the center of the attack, and covering only the scope of a 120 degree radius.
*The user can only use two jutsu in the turn he uses this technique. (this one and 1 other)*
*Cannot use any other S rank earth in the next two turns*
*Must wait four turns prior using for the second time*
*Can only be used once per battle*

Declined. So restrictions make no sense as to the power this has. Also: can only be used once and need to wait 4 turns to use again? lol

 

[Penguin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Genjutsu: Supaidā to Sono Pengin Sagari ✦ Illusionary Arts: Falling Spider and their Penguin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: (80 to mental stress if unbroken)
Description: After stringing together the Dog -> Tiger -> Bird hand seals, the user points at their opponent as they insert their chakra into their opponent's chakra network, triggering a genjutsu. The genjutsu would start off by making an old wooden house appear around both competitors, ten meters by ten meters in length. The old house would have a senile, dancing penguin with fresh bite marks belonging to that of a spider in one corner of the room, laughing hysterically as his skin begins decaying whilst looking upwards at the cracked and cobwebbed covered roof. On the command of the crazed penguin, by pointing one wind upwards then slamming it down towards the opponent, hundreds of spiders consisting of black widows, funnel webs, brown recluses, etc. would come down dangling from their webs. Eventually, the webs would wrap the opponent up from head to toe as the spiders sank their venomous fangs into the opponent's silk covered flesh, causing immediate pain. The side effects from the venom, numerous in number, would include things like the opponent's flesh to deteriorate from the enzymes in the venom, immediate flare ups in temperature, and in worst cases could result in death. If the opponent wouldn't break the genjutsu in time, they would die in said genjutsu and suffer eighty damage from mental stress, but be broken from the genjutsu.

✦ Can only be used once per conflict
✦ No genjutsu for two turns
✦ Can only be taught by Penguin.

‡ Declined ‡ Your techniques never fail to confuse me. Well, some bits of the wording need work. Wind? I assume you mean hand. The sort of thing. You need to describe the effects this would have in reality, not just in the illusion. You need to clarify what "in time" is. Also, just know I won't allow S-Rank genjutsu which paralyze.

Genjutsu: Supaidā to Sono Pengin Sagari ✦ Illusionary Arts: Falling Spider and their Penguin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: (60 to mental stress if unbroken)
Description: After stringing together the Dog -> Tiger -> Bird hand seals, the user points at their opponent as they insert their chakra into their opponent's chakra network, triggering a genjutsu. The genjutsu would start off by making an old wooden house appear around both competitors, ten meters by ten meters in length. The old house would have a senile, dancing penguin with fresh bite marks belonging to that of a spider in one corner of the room, laughing hysterically as his skin begins decaying whilst looking upwards at the cracked and cobwebbed covered roof. On the command of the crazed penguin, by pointing one flipper upwards then slamming it down towards the opponent, hundreds of spiders consisting of black widows, funnel webs, brown recluses, etc. would come down dangling from their webs. Eventually, the webs would wrap the opponent up from head to toe as the spiders sank their venomous fangs into the opponent's silk covered flesh, causing immediate pain. The side effects from the venom, numerous in number, would include things like the opponent's flesh to deteriorate from the enzymes in the venom, immediate flare ups in temperature, and in worst cases could result in death. In reality, the user would become paralyzed from the pain of the genjutsu, breathing very heavily as they break out in sweats. If the opponent wouldn't break the genjutsu in time, within one turn for the toxins to take full effect, they would die in said genjutsu and suffer eighty damage from mental stress, but be broken from the genjutsu.

✦ Can only be used two times per conflict
✦ Can only use B-rank or lower genjutsu next turn
✦ Can only be taught by Penguin.

‡ Approved ‡ Edited.

 

[21 Savage]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

1st of this Cycle.
Genjutsu: Shoki Henkan -Illusionary Arts: Initial Transformation.
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A-rank
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (due to extreme body ache).
Description: After weaving the bird > boar handseals, the user channels his chakra into the opponent's brain setting into play an illusion. The illusion begins by making the opponent's sketal system go into malfunction. The opponent's bones would firstly rotate in the opposite direction making a full 360 turn while also his ribs turn inwards opposite their normal position. The joints connecting the hip bones also turns the opposite forcefully making the opponent skeletal structure turn into that of a four legged animal. This whole process is similar to a Lycantroph bloodline transformation as well as a werewolf. The pain experienced in the illusion would totally disrupt the opponent's nervous system while he gets paralysed in the real world suffering from the bone disorder since he'd think they're out of place.
Can only be used thrice per battle with one turn cool down in between usage.
Can only be taught by Kelvin 11

‡ Declined ‡ You took a cool idea solely to obtain an easy A-Rank Genjutsu that paralyzes. The concept is interesting but the intended use has been done to death. Word this better and make this more interesting.

 

[Negative Knight]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

‡ New Cycle ‡ ​

The new cycle starts on 23/03/2015 (at the time of this post) and ends on 29/03/2015. The thread will be closed for a day so I can check any remaining submissions and then it will be re-opened.

Rules of all upcoming cycles
1) Checking will happen throughout the week rather than at the end. Only make your submission when its complete as its liable to being checked there and then. No need to rush like crazy to submit your stuff since as you've seen, I check things in a random order.

2) To avoid clutter you're only allowed to make one post. This means if your post is checked and it only contains one technique, you cannot make another post to submit additional techniques. If you wish to submit the full three techniques, I suggest you post them all in one post when all of them are ready.

3) Of course this means resubmissions in the same cycle are no longer allowed.

4) You cannot edit your post if even one of your techniques has been checked by a moderator.

 

[Kirikoe]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting.

Took out a few things regarding their speed and such

(Kuchiyose no jutsu - Uzo & Muzo) Summoning technique - Uzo and Muzo
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:short
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description: Uzo and Muzo. The monkey twins, a summoning exclusive to Kirikoe himself, these young monkeys are the new generation in the monkey kingdom, still being quite young these two monkeys are but half the size of King enma himself, Uzo the older brother of the two being the one born first dons a white fur with black patches over his limbs where as Muzo don's a black fur with small white patches over his, due to being twins and thus having a special connection to each other their main method of communication is telepathy.

Being playful by nature they love practical jokes and mocking people and have a general immature personality, these two just simply like to have fun and the ultimate fun for them is fighting, these two monkeys albeit being young and immature are still quite talented and have fought in many battles along side their siblings and racking up various experience due to this both of the young monkeys discovered they have a talent for the lightning element, however since both are young and thus their chakra pools are lower, to perform most lightning jutsu they combine their powers performing the hand-seals in sync, jutsu that generally require a shadow clone to perform these two can perform with each other instead, these two monkeys having a mastery over lightning jutsu are able to use all canon lightning jutsu that the user himself has learned with one hand-seal.

Like few of the monkeys within the monkey kingdom these two twins have a transformation ability, the Adamantine tonfa, these twins have the ability to turn into a pair of tonfa which can extend and retract with great speeds at the users will just like Enma's transformation.

Note - To summon Uzo and Muzo one must have signed the monkey contract and be taught by Kirikoe
Note - Uzo and Muzo can only be summoned once per battle and remain on the field for 4 turns whiles in monkey form
Note - No other animal summoning's may be on the field, as long as they are
Note - Every lightning technique used by the twins count towards the users move count

‡ Declined ‡ Generally summons can only use techniques up to their rank. Also, how do they perform non-collaboration jutsu e.g. Chidori Nagashi. Can they do those individually or not at all?

Resubmitting

(Kuchiyose no jutsu - Uzo & Muzo) Summoning technique - Uzo and Muzo
Type:Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:short
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description: Uzo and Muzo. The monkey twins, a summoning exclusive to Kirikoe himself, these young monkeys are the new generation in the monkey kingdom, still being quite young these two monkeys are but half the size of King enma himself, Uzo the older brother of the two being the one born first dons a white fur with black patches over his limbs where as Muzo don's a black fur with small white patches over his, due to being twins and thus having a special connection to each other their main method of communication is telepathy.

Being playful by nature they love practical jokes and mocking people and have a general immature personality, these two just simply like to have fun and the ultimate fun for them is fighting, these two monkeys albeit being young and immature are still quite talented and have fought in many battles along side their siblings and racking up various experience due to this both of the young monkeys discovered they have a talent for the lightning element, however since both are young and thus their chakra pools are lower, to perform most lightning jutsu they combine their powers performing the hand-seals in sync, jutsu that generally require a shadow clone to perform these two can perform with each other instead, these two monkeys having a mastery over lightning jutsu are able to use all S-Rank and below lightning jutsu that the user knows with one hand-seal.

Both monkeys fight in unison and so they never really move far apart from each other at all, they will always stay in short range of each other.

In instances where the technique is only applied to one person specifically such as Chidori Nagashi or False Darkness, they will perform these techniques individually.

Like few of the monkeys within the monkey kingdom these two twins have a transformation ability, the Adamantine tonfa, these twins have the ability to turn into a pair of tonfa which can extend and retract with great speeds at the users will just like Enma's transformation.

Note - To summon Uzo and Muzo one must have signed the monkey contract and be taught by Kirikoe
Note - Uzo and Muzo can only be summoned once per battle and remain on the field for 4 turns whiles in monkey form
Note - No other animal summoning's may be on the field, as long as they are
Note - Every lightning technique used by the twins count towards the users move count

‡ Approved ‡ I feel like you needlessly complicated things. I made it so the monkeys can perform techniques individually or in unison. I didn't find the whole making contact with one another/technique being split in power thing logical. If for whatever reason you don't like the changes, contact me via PM and I'll decline this for you. No idea why you restricted them to canon techniques, fixed that for you.

(Fuuton: Tentai-fū no yari o kaitensaseru) Wind Release: Rotating celestial wind spear
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long (When thrown)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Desciption: The user after performing a single handseal concentrates his wind chakra just above the palm of his hand, making his wind rotate violently and condensing it the user creates a very long and solid spear above his palm about 7 feet long and 4 inches thick, the spear would take shape starting from the middle and would proceed to extend rotating outwards as it forms until finally completing the spear, the spiraling of the wind will get thinner and thinner as it reaches both ends of the spear eventually crafting both ends into a sharp rotating points. The creation of the spear is quite a fast process, and once complete, extends up to short range when utilizing it as a weapon.

The spear itself would be very much like a drill due to its rotational current, thus greatly increasing its speed and piercing abilities. Once thrown, the spear gives off a devastating cutting wind aura when it lands, which tears up anything around it within a meter. The aura is equal to a B-rank wind jutsu.

- Can be used a total of 2 times
- No S rank wind techs or above the next turn
- User has to wait 2 turns between each use

Approved
I made edits.

Updating to work around the edits Adachi made and clear possible misconceptions

(Fuuton: Tentai-fū no Yari o Kaitensaseru) Wind Release: Rotating Celestial Wind Spear
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long (When thrown)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Desciption: The user after performing a single handseal concentrates his wind chakra just above the palm of his hand, making his wind rotate violently and condensing it the user creates a very long and solid spear above his palm about 7 feet long and 4 inches thick, the spear would take shape starting from the middle and would proceed to extend rotating outwards as it forms until finally completing the spear, the spiralling of the wind will get thinner and thinner as it reaches both ends of the spear eventually crafting both ends into a sharp rotating points. The creation of the spear is quite a fast process, and once complete, extends up to short range when utilizing it as a weapon.

While the spear is still in the user's hands being used as a weapon, the user contains the wind and condenses it, allowing for extended use making it so when the spear comes into contact with anything that the explosion that would normally be caused does not go off, the user can choose to set the explosion off whiles using the spear as a weapon however it harms the user in the process if done so

The spear itself would be very much like a drill due to its rotational current, thus greatly increasing its speed and piercing abilities. Once thrown, the spear gives off a devastating cutting wind aura when it lands, which tears up anything around it within a meter. The aura is equal to a B-rank wind jutsu.

- Spear lasts 3 turns unless thrown
- Can be used a total of 3 times per battle
- No S rank wind techs or above the next turn
- User has to wait 2 turns between each use
- Can only be taught by Kirikoe

‡ Update Declined ‡ I don't understand where you got the "explosion" bit from. I don't see that anywhere in your CJ's description.

(Fuuton: Hātobureikushotto) Wind Release: Heart Break Shot
Type:Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage:60
Description: The user channels high levels of wind around his fist, once done the user strikes forward at the opponent using a twisting screw motion with his weight behind it, which causes the wind around the fist to rotate rapidly around the arm, the strike when aimed towards the heart of the opponent aided by the wind and the corkscrew motion, if landed causes the heart to stop momentarily, this in turn causes the opponent to be paralysed for a few mere seconds allowing enough time for the user to follow up with a second attack which lets the user to take the lead.

When not aimed at the heart the technique is a powerful blow with the power to severely knock back the opponent and break bone, the paralysis only comes into fruition when aimed at the heart.

The wind used disperses throughout the opponents body when struck and is seen clearly dispersing out of the opponent the other side of the struck place, this wind that travels through the opponents body disrupts the opponents organs such as the lungs which affects the opponents breathing slightly making their body feel sluggish and heavy and takes a full turn to get over the affects.

-Can only be used 3 times
-Must wait a turn before using again
-Can only be taught by Kirikoe

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[AmaniPaz]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Buki: Orion:Weapon Orion
Rank: S Rank
Chakra: 40 per usage
Damage: N/a
Description: Orion is Silver's very own weapon/summon. He is a 9ft tall powerful and well renown toad/protector of Mount Myoboku. Orion is incapable of performing Ninjutsu beyond his transformation technique. This special technique is called Transformation: Orion's Belt. It transforms this creature into Orion's Belt, Silver's very own blade that is as hard as titanium. He is also able to produce various body parts, such as eyes or arms, from the sword. Additionally, Orion can still move on his own in the sword form, allowing him to return to Silvers. This blade's ability allows its user to create a spherical space or "room", where the user has complete control over the placement and orientation of the objects inside, making the user a Free Modification Human. It allows the user to manipulate anything within a specific area except for his opponent or their summons, such as, cannonballs, and ships in what was described as a "surgical" manner, within a spherical territory bordered by a light blue aura. Through this ability, Silvers can lift or displace objects of any size and switch himself with objects within the vicinity. A drawback to the sword is that the user of Orion can only use its powers within a specific area (50x50 meter radius), so if the target moves outside the area, they are immune to its powers. It appears that Silvers has to make hand gestures to move objects. Furthermore, while Silvers can control everything within a particular area (Bar the exceptions stated prior), if he is not focused this is not doable, meaning that no other jutsu can be performed at the same time. In order for Silvers to swap objects or himself inside the Room, there must be an object to swap with. Upon activation it begins as a circular spinning sphere located within the user's palm and expands outwards at rapid speed. Orion's ability stem from the Toad's of Mt Myoku and their extensive knowledge of Senjutsu and the way all life interacts with each other, including the environment. The user or this summoning has no Senjutsu capabilities whatsoever and there is no link between the two at all to allow some kind of loopholes, Orion merely developed this technique learning about how things within the world interact with one another.

Note: Room lasts for 5 turns upon activation, expelling 20 Chakra with each turn
Note: Can affect Jutsu's it rank and below

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‡ Declined ‡ The template is wrong (Where is the "Type"?) and its also unclear whether this is a summon or a weapon. I think this would be a summon that transforms rather into a weapon. As for the abilities themselves, I think this "Room" ability has been tried multiple times in the past not to mention the fact its OP.

(Orion's Sanjakuobi): Orion's Belt
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 10 (for activation and per usage)
Damage: N/A
Description: Orion, Silver's Toad summoning, transforms himself into his blade form and out. He isn't capable of performing any Ninjutsu other than this. He is also able to produce various body parts, such as eyes or arms, from the sword. Additionally, Orion can still move on his own in the sword form, allowing him to return to Silvers. Silver's has summoning Tattoo's on both wrist, so if he so wishes, he may summon Orion in his blade form via this method. This is the only thing they can summon.
Notes & Restrictions:
#3: Can only be Taught by AmaniPaz

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‡ Declined ‡ Parent technique was declined. Wrong template too.

(Seishin no yoroi) - Chakra Armour
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: 40 (for activation) 5 each turn for the constant usage of chakra.
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is an advanced ability pertaining to the manipulation of raw Chakra. Medical Ninjas focus their chakras in weakened or injured portions of their body in order to advance the healing process, strength orientated ninjas focus the Chakra into a single spot of their body part before making impact in order to drastically increase the strength and outcome of the attack, similarly, all ninjas possess the ability to condense Chakra into their legs to either advance their speed or leaping ability. This Jutsu revolves around a similar concept. The user drastically increases the Chakra amount, not located on a single portion of their body, but, their entire body. Being a member of the Hyuuga clan with the Byakugan, the user has the mastered ability to release chakra from all of the openings within their body, forming around them a protective armour of nothing but Raw Chakra capable of defending against Jutsu up to S rank. If the user so wishes they can cause this armour to rapidly expand outwards in the form of a repulsive explosion reaching to mid range.
Notes & Restrictions:
#1: Can only be taught by AmaniPaz
#3: Can be used 3 times per battle and lasts for 3 turns unless destroyed. This technique doesn't make me immune to S ranks for 3 turns indefinately, it can be destroyed by an S rank, or weakened (if it takes a B rank it can only take a C rank after) etc.

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‡ Declined ‡ Similar techniques exist.

 

[Python]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Kogeta poppukōn) | Fire Release: Burnt Popcorn
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user begins by charging his fire chakra at both his (index) finger tips, creating matter that is very hot before shooting it at the opponent at very high speeds. The matter which is as small as a popcorn is shot at very high speeds (which can be tracked by normal ninja of same or higher rank; lower ranked ninjas will have some difficulty) towards the opponent. The beauty of the jutsu is that, the matter is actually aimed at the area around the opponent. The moment it comes in contact with an obstruction, it explodes creating a flames that can burn the opponent, before multiplying and creating another copy of the matter which is as hot and as dangerous as the original one. Once doubled up, they bounce like popcorns (when they're baked) and land somewhere around the opponent again, to repeat the process. The entire process continues till the matter multiplies from 2 to 32 which produces enough explosion and fire power to destroy/burn down huge summons and incinerate them. However, if the popcorn is shot directly at the opponent, it will only cause minor damage (C-Rank) as compared to the full effect. Should the initial matter hit a water source (above C-Rank) it would be extinguished. Otherwise, it will start multiplying prematurely.
Note:
* Can only be used two times.
* Cannot be used in consecutive turns.
* User cannot use other Fire techniques of A-Rank and above in the same turn.
* User cannot use other Fire techniques above S-Rank in the next turn.
* Can only be taught by Python

‡ Declined ‡ Change it to A-Rank like LoK said

(Katon: Kogeta poppukōn) | Fire Release: Burnt Popcorn
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user begins by charging his fire chakra at both his (index) finger tips, creating matter that is very hot before shooting it at the opponent. The matter which is as small as a popcorn is shot at a considerable speed towards the opponent (equivalent to the speed of a Kage Ranked shinobi). The beauty of the jutsu is that, the matter is actually aimed at the area around the opponent. The moment it comes in contact with an obstruction, it explodes creating a flames that can burn the opponent, before multiplying and creating another copy of the matter which is as hot and as dangerous as the original one. Once doubled up, they bounce like popcorns (when they're baked) and land somewhere around the opponent again, to repeat the process. The entire process continues till the matter multiplies from 2 to 32 which produces enough explosion and fire power to destroy/burn down huge summons and incinerate them. However, if the popcorn is shot directly at the opponent, it will only cause minor damage (C-Rank) as compared to the full effect. Should the initial matter hit a water source (above C-Rank) it would be extinguished. Otherwise, it will start multiplying prematurely.
Note:
* Can only be used two times.
* Cannot be used in consecutive turns.
* User cannot use other Fire techniques of A-Rank and above in the same turn. * User cannot use other Fire techniques above S-Rank in the next turn. * Can only be taught by Python

‡ Approved ‡ My bad, I misread LoK's comment last time. Restored your technique to S-Rank. Nice jutsu.

(Katon: Aratana hajimari) | Fire Release: A New Beginning
Type : Attack
Rank : Forbidden
Range : Short-Long
Chakra cost : 50
Damage points : 90 (-10 to the user)
Description : This is one of the most dangerous techniques ever created, which may even take the user's own life. Only ninjas who have mastered the art of Fire release can perform this technique. This technique was originally designed to take the opponent with the user, when he died. This technique is used usually when the user is defeated/injured, there is not much hope left for him. Summoning all the remaining strength he has, the user will release a tremendous amount of fire chakra into the surrounding. Tiny embers of fire escape from his body and spread out in throughout the environment, illuminating the entire battlefield. This happens near-instantaneously as it does not cause any harm yet. When the user desires, he will command the tiny embers to blow up, causing mass destruction and obliterating everything that comes under its area. The user can, at all times restrict the range of the embers. The tiny embers blast continuously like a chain of explosion, for 2 whole turns. Right before the tiny embers explode, the embers glow brighly for a second, giving the opponent an opportunity to defend against the attack. The tiny embers have enough power to completely erase an entire village if need be.
Note:
The user usually does not survive after this. But if he does, he cannot use fire techniques above B-Rank for the next 3 turns.
The user cannot use techniques above S-Rank in the same or next turn.
The jutsu burns the outer skin of the user slightly when the chakra is released.
The speed of the user reduces by one rank in the next turn, due to fatigue.
Can only be used once.

‡ Declined ‡ I have techniques which reach all ranges "near instantly" so I know full well how destructive they can be. I will never allow a Forbidden rank like this. Note: This does not mean changing this to S-Rank will get this approved. The concept itself is OP.

(Futon/Raiton: Reitō tenshi no kami disuku) | Wind/Lightening Style: Divine Discs of the Frozen Angel
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user begins by channeling his wind and lightening chakra into his mouth, and then with a single handseal, releases it in the form of 8 flying discs made of wind. These discs are slightly larger that the normal shurikens but possess a cutting power far greater than one, thanks to the cutting property of the wind. These discs are capable of flight on their own and move around passively, as they spread around the opponent before converging and attacking him from all directions. Each disc is capable of slicing the the opponent and giving him deep cuts unless he is protected by some armor. Now what makes these discs stand out, is the fact that they release lightening bolts at the opponent when they reach close range from him. Each bolt is capable of numbing and paralyzing the opponent's limb which was shot at for at least 3 seconds. The user can use this to his advantage and attack the opponent.
Note:
Can only be used thrice.
Discs last for 2 turns
Cannot be used in consecutive turns.
Can only be taught by Python

‡ Declined ‡ This would require Yin-Yang.

 

[Yanks]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Vrook) - Summoning Technique: Vrook
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user first draws blood by biting their thumb and proceeds to wipe it across their summoning tattoo. As a result, the user summons the burly avian, Vrook. Vrook is a moderate sized Harrier; with a body length of 3 meters & wingspan of 5 meters. Because of his size, he can carry only two people on his back. This summon is rather brash, but wise; often scolding others for their screw-ups.
Abilities:
As a member of the Harrier family, Vrook naturally uses his sharp beak to pierce, and his talons to slice; easily making him formidable in close quarters. In addition, Vrook was born with a natural affinity to earth. Even though he can't use canon earth-based techniques, he has the ability to harden his wing feathers via Doton & fire A-Ranked earth spears from his wingtips.

Must be a signer of the Eastern Marsh Harrier contract
Can only be summoned twice
Lasts up to 5 turns, and all of his moves and abilities count 1/3 of the user's turn count

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Lonā) - Summoning Technique: Lonna
Type: Summoning
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user first draws blood by biting their thumb and proceeds to wipe it across their summoning tattoo. As a result, the user summons the Easter Marsh Harrier, Lonna. Lonna is a brown & white-feathered Harrier who is one of smallest summons; with a body legnth of 2 meters & wingspan of 4 meters. Due to her small size, Lonna cannot carry anyone on her back. Though she lacks in size, Lonna makes up for it in speed; being faster than a Sage-Ranked shinobi. This particualr summons is rather timid & diffident, causing Atris to be reluctant to fight enemy shinobi.
Abilities:
As a member of the Harrier family, Lonna naturally uses her beak to stab and her long, sharp talons to slash away at opponents; easily making her a deadly adversary in close-quarter combat. Although Lonna wasn't born with a elemental affinity like the other Harriers, she has the ability to use her sensing to detect/track shinobi or other summons, up to long range in distance.

Must be a signer of the Eastern Marsh Harrier
Can only be summoned twice & lasts up to 5 turns
Her sensing ability counts 1/3 of the user's turn count

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kavar) - Summoning Technique: Kavar
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user first draws blood by biting their thumb and proceeds to wipe it across their summoning tattoo. As a result, the user summons the burly avian, Kavar. Kavar is a white & grey-feathered Harrier who is one the the bigger summons; with a body length of 3 meters & wingspan of 6 meters. Because of his large size, Kavar can carry a total of two people on his back. This summon almost always has an enthusiastic attitude; making very eager and anxious to fight other opponents in battle. Kavar always a special plate of armor that covers his back and chest, which can protect him from lightning techniques that are D-Ranked.
Abilities:
As a member of the Harrier family, Kavar naturally uses his sharp beak to perforate, and his talons to slice; easily making him formidable in close quarters. In addition, Kavar was born with a natural affinty to wind. Over the years, Kavar has gained such confidence and mastery with Fūton, that he can perform all wind techniques up to A-Rank with the flap of his wings. He also is able to coat his wings with with a layer of wind, making it sharp enough to slash at opponents.

Must be a signer of the Eastern Marsh Harrier contract
Can only be summoned twice
Lasts up to 5 turns, and all of his moves and abilities count 1/3 of the user's turn count

‡ All Declined ‡ Summons last three to four turns unless its a special case. They can only use abilites up to and including their rank. A small tip but when you say "up to S-Rank", this can be confused to be anything below S-Rank so ensure you always say "up to and including" so there's no doubt about it. The first summon is an A-Rank yet he can use S-Ranks? Either raise his rank or lower what he can use. The second possess generic sensing and that won't be allowed. Remove the armour on the third one.

Made changes to the second one

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Vrook) - Summoning Technique: Vrook
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user first draws blood by biting their thumb and proceeds to wipe it across their summoning tattoo. As a result, the user summons the burly avian, Vrook. Vrook is a moderate sized Harrier; with a body length of 3 meters & wingspan of 5 meters. Because of his size, he can carry only two people on his back. This summon is rather brash, but wise; often scolding others for their screw-ups.
Abilities:
As a member of the Harrier family, Vrook naturally uses his sharp beak to pierce, and his talons to slice; easily making him formidable in close quarters. In addition, Vrook was born with a natural affinity to earth. Even though he can't use canon earth-based techniques, he has the ability to harden his wing feathers via Doton & fire A-Ranked earth spears from his wingtips; This ability can only be used six times per battle.

Must be a signer of the Eastern Marsh Harrier contract
Can only be summoned twice
Lasts up to 4 turns, and all of his moves and abilities count 1/3 of the user's turn count

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Lonā) - Summoning Technique: Lonna
Type: Summoning
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user first draws blood by biting their thumb and proceeds to wipe it across their summoning tattoo. As a result, the user summons the Easter Marsh Harrier, Lonna. Lonna is a brown & white-feathered Harrier who is one of smallest summons; with a body legnth of 2 meters & wingspan of 4 meters. Due to her small size, Lonna cannot carry anyone on her back. Though she lacks in size, Lonna makes up for it in speed; being as fast as a Sage-Ranked shinobi. This particualr summons is rather timid & diffident, causing Lonna to be reluctant to fight enemy shinobi.
Abilities:
As a member of the Harrier family, Lonna naturally uses her beak to stab and her long, sharp talons to slash away at opponents; easily making her a deadly adversary in close-quarter combat. Like other Harriers, she was born with natural affinity, which is to water release. She has the ability to use Suiton techiniqes up to & including B-Rank the user knows.

Must be a signer of the Eastern Marsh Harrier
Can only be summoned twice & lasts up to 4 turns
Her moves and abilities count 1/3 of the user's turn count

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kavar) - Summoning Technique: Kavar
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user first draws blood by biting their thumb and proceeds to wipe it across their summoning tattoo. As a result, the user summons the burly avian, Kavar. Kavar is a white & grey-feathered Harrier who is one the the bigger summons; with a body length of 3 meters & wingspan of 6 meters. Because of his large size, Kavar can carry a total of two people on his back. This summon almost always has an enthusiastic attitude; making very eager and anxious to fight other opponents in battle.
Abilities:
As a member of the Harrier family, Kavar naturally uses his sharp beak to perforate, and his talons to slice; easily making him formidable in close quarters. In addition, Kavar was born with a natural affinty to wind. Over the years, Kavar has gained such confidence and mastery with Fūton, that he can perform all wind techniques the user knows up to & including A-Rank with the flap of his wings. He also is able to coat his wings with with a layer of wind, making it sharp enough to slash at opponents.

Must be a signer of the Eastern Marsh Harrier contract
Can only be summoned twice
Lasts up to 4 turns, and all of his moves and abilities count 1/3 of the user's turn count

‡ All Approved ‡

 

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Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hyouton:Sen no hahen no dansu|Ice release:dance of a thousand shards)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: n/a
Description:The user makes one handseal and the snow flakes that are already on the field begins to float around the field like gaara's sensory sand.The user then makes the shards razor sharp which then floats around the field without cutting any body on the field.
*Can only be taught by me
*The shards float for four turns after which they fall back to the ground
*Can only be used twice
*Requires two turns cooldown
*No ice techniques in the same turn this is used
*The razor sharp flakes dont have any force nor speed,thats why they dont cut any one in their range
(Hyouton:Hogo- sha no ken|Ice release:swords of the guardian)
Type: supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short to Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After performing dance of a thousand shards,the user will make two handseals,he will then make up to four swords (swords ranges from 2 to 4) out of the floating shards. The swords which are two meters tall can then be manipulated with hand movements.
*can only be done twice
*requires two turns cool down
*no s-rank or above ice technique in the same turn.
*These blades have to be created at least three meters away from the opponent.
‡ All Declined ‡ Over the weekly limit. You made your previous post 6 hours ago. How in the world could a new cycle have started in such a short period of time? What do you think I'm running here? Daily cycles? You probably didn't do this on purpose so I won't issue a ban but from the next cycle onwards you are only allowed one post in between markers. This will probably extend to everyone else as well.

Resubbmiting

(Hyouton:Sen no hahen no dansu) | Ice Release:dance of a thousand shards
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: n/a
Description:The user makes one handseal and the snow flakes that are already on the field begins to float around the field like gaara's sensory sand.The user then makes the shards razor sharp which then floats around the field without cutting any body on the field. The razor sharp flakes dont have any force nor speed,thats why they dont cut any one in their range

*Can only be taught by me
*The shards float for four turns after which they fall back to the ground
*Can only be used twice
*Requires two turns cooldown
*No ice techniques in the same turn this is used

‡ Approved ‡ "Can only be taught by me" lmao.

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(Hyouton:Hogo- sha no ken) | Ice Release: swords of the guardian
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short to Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After performing dance of a thousand shards,the user will make two handseals,he will then make up to four swords (swords ranges from 2 to 4) out of the floating shards. The swords which are one meter long can then be manipulated with hand movements.

*can only be done twice
*requires two turns cool down
*no s-rank or above ice technique in the same turn.
*These blades have to be created at least three meters away from the opponent.

‡ Approved ‡

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Ice release: Hand of the guardians| Hyouton: Hogo-sha no te
Rank: A-rank
Type: supplementary
Range: short-long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will make two handseals while manipulating the shards floating around the battle ground to form a huge hand any where on the field to either defend the user or attack the opponent.
*The hand is manipulated by the users hand movement.
*The hand when created for the purpose of defending can only be created three meters from the opponent.
*Can only be used thrice with two turns cool down
*Must have used 'dance of a thousand shards before using this technique'

‡ Declined ‡ Wrong template. Type before Rank. Japanese name before English name.

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Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ittoryu: Suihei Seihoukei) One Sword Style : Horizontal Square
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This is a basic one handed sword technique, where the user will channel his Wind Chakra into his feet and sprint off towards the target at speeds that a lower ranking shinobi would have a hard time to follow(Unless they have a Dojutsu of some sorts). The user while running will channel his Wind chakra into his sword,then after reaching in proper range the user with there lead foot forward, will first perform a horizontal slash across the upper half of there target. Then using there forward foot the user will pivot and spin to the left or right side of the target while performing a second horizontal slash along the side they spin of the target. Afterwards now behind the target, the user will perform the 4th slash along there back, and apon doing so they will spin again slashing the other side they didnt attack earlier, performing a 4 combo strike, but as they finish a harmless visable stream of chakra will form from around the user and target in a 2D square.

-Requires at least one sword to use
-Can only be used by Aoi.
-Can be used 4 times per battle
-Leaves target slighty bleeding for half a turn.

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 Declined  the name Ittoryu already exists (for example in cali's techs) so please choose a new one so as not to make it confusing.



(Shodō no Tetsugaku Kenjutsu) - Philosophy of Calligraphy and Swordsmanship
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn active)
Damage points: (+15 to Kenjutsu techniques)
Description: This technique encourperates the elements of swordsmenship and calligrapghy which go hand in hand. This is a form of training practiced by masters new and old to develop their essense of martial arts. The user by practicing strokes of calligraphy can enhance their swordsmanship in their power giving additional damage to their techniques, their speed in deliverance of the strokes is greatly enhanced by understanding wrist movement and the way the muscles work in their arm increasing their base speed by three times.
Note: The techniques duration lasts 5 turns and must wait two turns before activation.

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 Declined  You fail to explain how it actually achieves this +15 damage boost. Ok, you learn calligraphy....and how does that mean you do more damage in Kenjutsu? its hinted but not developed. Also, its underrestricted for something that gives that boosts and lasts too long. Nor only that but the 3 times faster thing needs to go. Thats an absolute no. I don't want this to be stackable with anything else.

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(Shodō no Tetsugaku Kenjutsu) - Philosophy of Calligraphy and Swordsmanship
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: +10 Kenjutsu Techniques
Description: This technique encourperates the elements of swordsmenship and calligrapghy which go hand in hand. This is a form of training practiced by masters new and old to develop their essense of martial arts. The user by practicing strokes of calligraphy can enhance their swordsmanship. This technique is passively active, to which with simple chakra flow into the muscles of the user. Imitating the brush strokes with there sword, and using the chakra to keep the muscles well atoned and precise, the user's sword swings are much faster, and amongst speed comes more force aka power to the attacks. The speed of which the user swings his sword is one rank faster then before(so if a S-Class uses a kenjutsu technique, it moves faster equal to as a Sannin). While its passive however, modes for example EIG or other boosting modes remove the effects of this technique for the rest of the fight.

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for another mod.

☼ Declined ☼

I'm still not seeing how or why this would make your kenjutsu stronger. It also creates an issue where some techniques can't be replicated using brush stroke-type swings. I think this would be better fit as an actual technique than a boost. Or perhaps even a CFS.

(Katon/Kitsune Ogi: Kurai Kitsune no Elsa)Fire Release/Secret Fox Arts: Dark Fox of Elsa
Type: Offensive
Rank: A- Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user will channel his/her chakra into there stomach, using shape manipulation to firmly form the fire chakra into heated ash. The user will then make a single hand seal, causing hot explosive ash to be released from there mouth, but keeping the hand seal in place, they further manipulate its shape till it is molded into a solid like state. The ash will take the form of a fox, but it looks nothing compared to a real one(lacking proper body parts ie eyes, teeth etc.). The fox once formed is under the user's control where they can have it moving. The fox has two abilites , the first of which the fox can fire from its mouth needle like projectiles. These once made contact can explode, creating a C - Rank explosion. The fox can aslo being its second ability disperse into a cloud of ash in order to avoid physical attacks. Once in this form however it can be easily blown away with wind technique. The user can make one more handseal and casue the entire fox to detonate creating a B-Rank explosion.

*Can only be used by Fox Signers*
*Can be used twice*

‡ Declined ‡ This is not a fox technique. This is a fire jutsu and one that is too generic to be approved.


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(Yamanaka Ichizoku Oshirisu `Unmei) - Yamanaka Clan - Osiris' Fate
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description:/ An advanced version of Shintenshin No Jutsu) - Mind Body Change Technique, Osiris' Fate works by the user sending only a section of their own conciousness to the target's body. This allows them not to fully control the target's body, but specific limbs they choose on beforehand. In a similar way to the original, if this is used to control the hands of the opponent, then the user would lose access to his hands until he deactivates the jutsu or the opponent manages a way of doing it. Any damage done to the the limbs the user is controlling is reflected back onto him, making this a double edged sword at times. The use of this jutsu will never allow to control the opponents body fully like the original. Despite the higher rank, this jutsu is more specific and only controls two limbs at a time, whatever they may be.
~Can only be taught by Zekken. Can only be used three times per battle, and the user must wait two turns after each use. No other Yamanaka techniques higher than S-ranked can be used the same and next turn

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for another mod.
Declined, DNR. Possibilities with this jutsu are too high. You could just control the two hands and the opponent would pretty much not be able to do anything.

 

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Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting bipedalism is stated in the actual contract and was recently approved with it in there so it should be fine. No changes were made.

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(Kuchiyose: Yagiza) Summoning jutsu Capricorn
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Capricorn is one of the summons under the goat contract which was named after one of the 12 zodiacs. He is the same height is most average shinobi, and his build is athletic in nature. He sports sunglasses and a butler type suit very fashionable while he is able to stand on two legs and has hands like a shinobi. His Taijutsu knowledge and skill is on par with most masters, he has the ability to speed burst for once per turn to evade any A rank attack. His unique ability is that he can use any taijutsu move in the canon list and pair it with wind enhanced layer over the limbs he is using for his moves. He can however only do this 3 times and he remains on the field for 4 turns. He cannot uses any actual wind jutsu's as he is a freeform usage user of wind a coating style of fighting .

Restrictions:

Can only be summoned twice per battle.

Cannot use taijutsu wind coating more then once per turn.

Speed burst once per turn

Must have signed Goat contract to summon.

‡ Declined ‡ The problem isn't the bipedalism. I just found the mental image funny. Its the fact that it can use Taijutsu. Also this is your third submission this cycle, so don't make any more until the next marker.

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(Kuchiyose: Yagiza) Summoning jutsu Capricorn
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Capricorn is one of the summons under the goat contract which was named after one of the 12 zodiacs. He is the same height is most average shinobi, and his build is athletic in nature. He sports sunglasses and a butler type suit very fashionable while he is able to stand on two legs. His leg based Taijutsu knowledge and skill is on par with most masters, he has the ability to speed burst for once per turn to evade any A rank attack. He is able to achieve this ability by once per battle shedding his iron lead horns, which weigh over 2000lbs.His unique ability is that he can use any leg based taijutsu move in the canon list and pair it with wind enhanced layer over the limbs he is using for his moves. He can however only do this 3 times and he remains on the field for 4 turns. He cannot uses any actual wind jutsu's as he is a freeform usage user of wind a coating style of fighting .

Restrictions:

Can only be summoned twice per battle.

Cannot use taijutsu wind coating more then once per turn.

Speed burst once per turn

Must have signed Goat contract to summon.

‡ Declined ‡ This is better. Description near the end needs work. The ability to evade any attack is a copy of the Flicker Evasion techniques and will not be allowed. Change the type to summon. Remove the damage. This can only be summoned once per battle.