[Fantasy] Sasukes Plight

[Ryu Kishi]

Caught in the grip of hate.
Cast are bonds that kept
Me safe, I will venture
To the wild, it is my fate.

A brothers love, lost to the
Wind, a mother, and
Fathers trust, a bloody river with
No end.

I am alone in the dark,
In a serpents embrace,
I will make my brother
Pay for his mistake.

A friend reaches into the
dark, to free me from
My pain. He says we are
Brothers, but the only brother
I have is one of hate.

I am an avenger, it is too
Late. so long my friend
For your own sake.

We fight for all the pain
We Share, but your pain
Is not the pain i bear.

You scream, you shout, but
I do not hear, i hate you
For your love, why do you
Even care!

And as the final fist is
Swung, goodbye my
Friend for my time has
Come.

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A poem for tata chan

 

[fiend]

Poem about Sasuke ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°). What's next about Naruto '( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)? XD

Jokes aside nice dude, perfectly captures Sasuke's character.
These two stanzas were the best:-

Spoiler

I am alone in the dark,
In a serpents embrace,
I will make my brother
Pay for his mistake.

A friend reaches into the
dark, to free me from
My pain. He says we are
Brothers, but the only brother
I have is one of hate.

Well written and it sums up Sasuke till his first fight in the Valley of the End.=D.
Good one absolute treat for his fans =D.

 

[Ryu Kishi]

Poem about Sasuke ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°). What's next about Naruto '( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)? XD

Jokes aside nice dude, perfectly captures Sasuke's character.
These two stanzas were the best:-

Spoiler

I am alone in the dark,
In a serpents embrace,
I will make my brother
Pay for his mistake.

A friend reaches into the
dark, to free me from
My pain. He says we are
Brothers, but the only brother
I have is one of hate.

Well written and it sums up Sasuke till his first fight in the Valley of the End.=D.
Good one absolute treat for his fans =D.

Ya i wrote it for tata chan XD , And thanks

 

[Waindo]

Fantastic interpetration of Sasuke's character as a whole. Well done man, well done!

 

[Luciform]

OMG Senpi san Thank you !!! :yayy:
i really love it, especially this part :
I am an avenger, it is too
Late. so long my friend
For your own sake.

i wuv ya :hugg:

 

[Ryóma]

Nice work Senpi.

 

[Ryu Kishi]

Fantastic interpetration of Sasuke's character as a whole. Well done man, well done!

thanks waindo

OMG Senpi san Thank you !!! :yayy:
i really love it, especially this part :
I am an avenger, it is too
Late. so long my friend
For your own sake.

i wuv ya :hugg:

Thanks tata chan im glad you like it

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Nice work Senpi.

thank you fuji

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