[Romance] Is This Love?

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Is This Love?​


Your eyes, more sparkling than the brightest star,
The kindness and warmth you give off, so very true,
For even standing and watching from afar,
I was able to fall for you.

The way you smile and giggle sets my heart at twice the pace,
The way you make that adorable pout,
When a blush crosses your gorgeous face,
You take my heart, and bring forth the happiness inside about.

Dreams spent on you, during many of my nights,
Times of day when I just want to call,
My heart skipping a beat when you’re in sight,
All these things happen, because I want to be with you after all.

The painful feeling when my chest tightens,
At the thought of you going where I cannot reach, like a flying dove,
The feeling I have, I guess I could liken,
To something called “love”.

It explains the pain I feel at your absence,
The pounding in my chest at your very sight,
But also the happiness I feel at your presence,
I want to love you with all my might.

I wish the time we share will last forever,
Because I hurt so much when we say goodbye,
The tears I shed threaten never to stop ever,
But I won’t give up on you without a try.

I hope one day, that we share a life together,
Feeling nothing but happiness and delight,
Loving and cherishing each other forever,
As we smile and bask in the glowing light.​
 
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♪ Is this love
Because I gotta know, is this real
Girl I gotta know, is it you taking over my heart
If its love, then all my girls and them I gotta give them up
My playing days is over I gotta hang it up
I gotta know, I gotta know, yeah, is this love ♪




On-topic: It's alright.
 

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Rurūshu Ranperūji, you are love to me <3
Ahah...thank you.

This was just insane. I could have suggested something else on some lines,but they are just minimalistic. Amazing work man!!
Thank you very much.

cool....:eek:uttahere:
Thank you.

♪ Is this love
Because I gotta know, is this real
Girl I gotta know, is it you taking over my heart
If its love, then all my girls and them I gotta give them up
My playing days is over I gotta hang it up
I gotta know, I gotta know, yeah, is this love ♪




On-topic: It's alright.
Thanks.

It's awesome, thanks for sharing. <3
I'm glad you liked it.

Obi X Rin is true love
It is here that I say: each to their own.
 

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Gosh this is like so pure dude...

You're awesome.This made my heart ache and that happens rarely.
Ah, I am glad to hear that.

Lmfao, how did you came up with this?
I wrote from the heart.

This is pretty good poem but that font size is too small, it hurt my eyes .
I do that out of habit, fonts any larger are unappealing in my opinion. Sorry though.

Another good one, good job
Thank you.
 
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