[Romance] There's This Girl I Fell In Love With,

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There's this girl i fell in love with,
it's not like I've not known many others beautiful than her,
yet something in her that makes me fall, every breath
-i takes i feel a desire, a passionate desire,
to feel the fragrance of her body and lose in beauty of her soul .

they say she doesn't deserves me or my love,
but I've found thousand reasons to love her
and I've always asked them then how ?
maybe i see things they never sees in her,
she's not the most perfect nor she is the most beautiful,
she's a imperfection that perfect for me with a pure heart,
she dresses simply and doesn't have many dreams to fulfill,
more so she loves me for who I'm and never ask a thing other than love to fill her heart .

when she lie there resting besides me, she is like a fallen tree
-in the middle of the forest that let little trees to flourish .
her starry eyes and it's brightness tells the secret stories hidden in far space,
her hair is like a beautiful waterfall that grow drop by drop in the mountains......
when she's sad, she becomes the stillness before the rains,
the moment i understand it and when i hold her in my arms.......
i feel the warmth in her heart, there's no grudge that she hold,
more so she always finds her laughter that lightens up my world .

so how can the world tell me not to love her ?
someone who deserves the love in whole wide world,
there will be battles to fight and pains someone wouldn't bare,
but for someone like her, it's a little sacrifice in this world,
and I'm sure she gonna be with me,
for a life time and a eternity .
 

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It needs a bit of work in the grammar (sorry at poems I check that XD)

This poem was simply beautiful and genuine, straight from the heart of a man who is in love. Kudos to you for having the chance to feel such a deep connection :)
 

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It needs a bit of work in the grammar (sorry at poems I check that XD)

This poem was simply beautiful and genuine, straight from the heart of a man who is in love. Kudos to you for having the chance to feel such a deep connection :)
No problem, it gonna make me check the grammar next time XD

I just imagined it with my imagination and only used combined elements that I've seen and experienced :heh:

If you were truly Kishi.... you'd beat her.... and tell of how.... she came back..... to love u....
:what: he had that much bad experiences with women ? lol
 
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