[Other] Paradise lost

Ryu Kishi

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Aug 14, 2014
Messages
13,110
Reaction score
1,051
Cast me down into the
Flames, you throw me
into a fiery cage.

For you to wage this war
On me, can only end in
Tragedy. Your blood will
Flow,

Like a silent stream,
Forever flowing,
A forgotten dream.

I'll eat your flesh, while
It's still fresh, i'll wear
your skin, i'll make a
mess!.

Your death is all that i
Will dream, a death
That will end my
Suffering.

Cast from grace, you
Threw me down. From
Bringer of light, to king
With no crown.
 

Kai NB

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Jun 11, 2014
Messages
13,378
Reaction score
409
Love the way the sentences continue to the next line before being finished

Excellent job
 

Waindo

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Apr 17, 2014
Messages
18,259
Reaction score
1,095
This is your best work till now. Fantastic job!
 

Ryóma

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Aug 29, 2014
Messages
15,355
Reaction score
477
Top