We need details, to vague
Sounds like a good story. I would love to read.The prophecy of Daniel Guardian of the Realms. In the other 7 realms is a prophecy of a some one that comes from the 8th realm (Our World). That'll starts a new era and create a new system for all 8 realms or dimensions.
just warning you that grammar isn't that good & the first chapter is a bit rushed. cause I want the readers to feel it was rushed cause Daniel didn't have time to come to terms what had happen.Sounds like a good story. I would love to read.