The Formation Of Akatsuki-9

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Chapter: kakuzu's acceptance..

(in a prehistoric bathroom a greedy cold harsh voice was heard doing business....)

Voice:?20,000 ryo..........

Business man: it's a deal, he's only a small fry, (laughed the business man) Nice doing business with you again Kakuzu.

Kakuzu: Mmm?.
(Replied the exiled Waterfall Ninja as he collected his pay.)

(kakuzu was walking through the woods thinking of his past.......)

Kakuzu: (thinking) I really should go into retirement?I'm already freaken in my 80s and lived over 6 ninja lifespans?........Ah what the heck. This is what I live for, might as well do it for the cash of it?......

(Kakuzu had decided. He was going to the nearest bank so that he could cash in his latest pay check. His original goal was to get at least ?100 million ryo in his bank account, but he was now ?64 million ryo towards his goal........)

(Kakuzu finished cashing in his latest pay check hastily. As he walked out of the bank he checked an ANBU Bingo book that had once belonged to a Rock shinobi he had recently killed off and swapped organs with. As he flipped the first page, he saw the ninja that he still held a grudge against for defeating him easily and sparing his life only a few years ago.

On the first page of the ANBU bingo book a picture of a smiling Minato was next to some text. The first page of the Bingo Book read:

Minato Namikaze (aka. Konoha's Yellow Flash)

Kage Rank [Konoha Yondaime]

Birth date 25th January

Height 179.2cms

Weight 66.1kgs

Blood Type: B

Signature move/jutsus : Flying Thunder God Jutsu, Rasengan,Unknown sealing jutsu..

Elemental affinities: Lightning,Wind & Fire

Bounty: ?175,000,000 ryo

Action taken when found: FLEE ON SIGHT.

Kakuzu sighed and shut the ANBU bingo book.

He thought to himself with the rumours that he had heard about a year earlier.)

Kakuzu: Damn that Minato, I didn't get to get even with him, freaken gets himself killed before I can even track him down again?I always need spare WIND element affinity hearts?Heh especially HIS?..I wonder who'd be able to kill him? I heard about his death, but not the cause?this Bingo Book is outdated too, I should get a new one soon?....

(After this thought Kakuzu sighed again but immediately froze. A husky voice emanated from behind him.)

Voice2: Exiled ninja Kakuzu from Takigakure. [Hidden Village amongst the Waterfalls] I have a proposition......

(A sweat dropped from Kakuzu's brow, all this time he had checked his perimeter clear and yet this person who was right behind him concealed his presence so well, if it wasn't for the voice Kakuzu wouldn't know he was there!)

(Kakuzu replied regaining his composure)

kakuzu: Well no need for introductions?Heh, alright what is your proposition???

Voice2: Well, I am willing to fill in all your financial needs to get to your ?100 million ryo goal, IF you join our Akatsuki...............


kakuzu: (thinking) Akatsuki?! I've heard of them! Uchiha Itachi from Konoha who slaughtered his entire clan joined, and Hoshigaki Kisame from the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist who slayed a Kage joined too! I also heard lately?them two are travelling together dressed in black robes with red cloud patterns, and every Elemental Country in the world is hunting down Akatsuki members?But, just WHO is this man recruiting them?!

(Kakuzu snapped out of his thoughts and asked)
Kakuzu:Why ask me to join?

(The person behind him smiled.)

Voice2: Simply because you are capable of killing ninja at Kage rank, stole your village's forbidden techniques and have very useful qualities.

Kakuzu: when you propose a worthy business,i cant say no.........Deal.............

(A poof sounded from behind Kakuzu.)

Voice2: Take this ring cloak, and your funds to make your ?100 million ryo............

(The figure behind Kakuzu handed him a suitcase, ring and a cloak with red cloud patterns on it....)

Kakuzu: This is my lucky day, I got a rise on my own head too becoming a Akatsuki member and got to my little goal faster than expected........
(kakuzu chuckled as he slipped on the ring.)

voice2: Indeed. For now kill some time and find a partner, oh and I am Pain........

(Kakuzu turned around as he slipped on the nice fitting cloak. He no longer saw anyone behind him or sensed any other presence.)

Kakuzu: (thinking) I'd better not kill wimps for cash for abit?I'd better start practisin' again if some ninja can sneak behind me like that again?Pain?? I'll see if his well known?'


(and he began to find a mountain to hike up for the time being, he had to hide himself now as being an Akatsuki he was going to be attracting attention in public places and become hunted by ANBU and bounty ninjas even more than he already was.)

(But little did Kakuzu know, from a distance as he made his way towards a desolated mountain, a ninja watched him from afar. His face was covered by an ANBU mask..........)

who is the masked ninja??????????????????????????

Next chapter: Jashinism!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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OMG! Such a quality! 5 out of 4 if possible! Well a little overdoing it perhaps, but 4 out of 4 at least;)
Keep em coming. Only Hidan and Orochimaru left then i guess:D Good work, at least you deliver. Because it looks like The Pervy Sage has abandoned his FF:-/ Well well. We still got yours i guess;)
I`m only hoping for some action next time though:):p

Edit: If you desided to make Hidan join now you may have messed up the plot a little, considering that Hidan was the newest member before "Tobi", and that Orochimaru already had left Akatsuki, but i guess you`ll figure it out;)

Edit 2: Maybe you can make Hidan think about the offer and join later instead?;)
 
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OMG! Such a quality! 5 out of 4 if possible! Well a little overdoing it perhaps, but 4 out of 4 at least;)
Keep em coming. Only Hidan and Orochimaru left then i guess:D Good work, at least you deliver. Because it looks like The Pervy Sage has abandoned his FF:-/ Well well. We still got yours i guess;)
I`m only hoping for some action next time though:):p

Edit: If you desided to make Hidan join now you may have messed up the plot a little, considering that Hidan was the newest member before "Tobi", and that Orochimaru already had left Akatsuki, but i guess you`ll figure it out;)

Edit 2: Maybe you can make Hidan think about the offer and join later instead?;)

ya ya thanx i really6 forgot about that......................i will post it properly...........
 

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OMG! Such a quality! 5 out of 4 if possible! Well a little overdoing it perhaps, but 4 out of 4 at least;)
Keep em coming. Only Hidan and Orochimaru left then i guess:D Good work, at least you deliver. Because it looks like The Pervy Sage has abandoned his FF:-/ Well well. We still got yours i guess;)
I`m only hoping for some action next time though:):p

Edit: If you desided to make Hidan join now you may have messed up the plot a little, considering that Hidan was the newest member before "Tobi", and that Orochimaru already had left Akatsuki, but i guess you`ll figure it out;)

Edit 2: Maybe you can make Hidan think about the offer and join later instead?;)
If we go that route he has messed since the beggining..

When Itachi joined, Kisame,Orochimaru and Sasori were already there for example..

Zetsu is Madara s right hand. Which lead me to believe Zetsu was there since the beginning..

Then it was time for the Fake leader, Nagato.. With Nagato come Konan..

and so on went Orochimaru,Sasori,Kisame..
 

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If we go that route he has messed since the beggining..

When Itachi joined, Kisame,Orochimaru and Sasori were already there for example..

Zetsu is Madara s right hand. Which lead me to believe Zetsu was there since the beginning..

Then it was time for the Fake leader, Nagato.. With Nagato come Konan..

and so on went Orochimaru,Sasori,Kisame..
maybe in the beginning i may have messed it but here after i will try to correct it.............................................
 
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