[Romance] NaruSaku 700 Altranate Ending

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Sakura just got done with finished up the last patient of her shift of the ER Room. She was walking home. While she was a walking. She was thinking about what Sasuke said after he poked her forehead.

[Flash Back}

Sakura asked, "Before you leave me. I want to asked you a question okay?"

Sasuke smiled and said, "Sure."

Sakura asked, "Why did you say' That I had large Charming forhead and it makes you want to kiss it?' "

Sakura didn't expect the reaction from Sasuke cause Sasuke was laughing.

Sasuke said, "I never said that. When did 'I' said that to you?"

Sakura replied, "After our team assignment at lunch."

Sasuke started laughing hard and said, "I always wonder why that Idiot jumped me and disguise himself as me. Now I know."

Sakura was shocked.

Sasuke said, " I only think of you Sakura as my sister from now on. The reason. I poke your forehead is the same way my Brother show his love to me as a brother. Beside I always had a crush on Hinata Hyugga."

{Flash Back End]

Now Sakura came back to reality. She fell ill cause what she said to that 'Sasuke'. She almost fell over cause she was disgust with herself but the new Hokage Kakashi caught her.

Kakashi said, "I guess you finally found out about that day?" with a eye smile.


Sakura was shocked and asked, "Why didn't you tell me?"

Kakashi replied, "You didn't ask." with his eye smile grow a bit.

Sakura get a tick mark on her forehead and Chase her former Sensei.

Kakashi thought to himself, 'Unless with Naruto and Sakura kids will be handful.'

Sakura said, "Thanks for getting my mind off feeling disgust I felt. Sensei."

Sakura flicked Kakashi's headband off of his and poke her two fingers to his forehead.

She ran off to find Naruto.


Iruka and Naruto was at Ichiraku Ramen. Sakura pulled Naruto from his half eaten bowl of Ramen. Naruto was shock at Sakura is doing before Naruto could reaction. Sakura grabbed Naruto's head make her forehead against Naruto's lips and she said, "You did said that you want to kiss my Large Charming Forehead. I know you won't do it on your willingly. So I took that from you." Before Naruto speak. Sakura kissed Naruto on his lips.

After Sakura pulled away. Naruto asked, "Why did you just kissed me?"

Sakura giggled and replied, "Why won't I want to kissed My future Husband. I was approved by your father away." end the statement with a smile.


Kakashi said, "By the way Naruto. the Former Kages of all the village want you to become the 7 Hokage."

Sakura and Naruto face turn from Shock to Emberassment and angry to ruining their first Moment as a couple.

Tsunade was watching from her Grandfather's and Granduncle's compound. She shook her head. She wondering where is Orochimaru and Kabuto at?
 

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pretty brave of you to post this lol
I know but hater going hate my post I just report them for Bashing or Trolling or Bullying. That's way I won't get in trouble. I'm also trying to start my Own Manga. If anyone that is a NaruSaku, SasuKarin, SasuIno and SasuHina fans want to be part of the new manga. I just need an Artist and a Editor.

Those guys and gals show how Immature they are since their pairings are cannon. The true side of NaruHina and SasuSaku fans are.
 

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Wow that was awful.

Good luck on your manga though, I too like to draw and write comics/manga.

That fanfic up there was just WAY too cheesy for me lol
 
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I like that you realize you are making ff and not in denial .

I can't say i like it
criticism?
"you are just a sister to me.i did what my brother used to to me as sister brother etc.." was way too much forced to make the romantic scene not romantic.

Too much OOC since this is an FF for chapter 700 only (its like you changed the whole manga )
I don't know why some people overrate the forehead comment way too much . It was never important and sakura got disappointed the moment 'sasuke' said "that what naruto would say" .


Sorry if i sounded rude Just wanted to point out the OOC .
Good luck with your manga.
 

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Wow that was awful.

Good luck on your manga though, I too like to draw and write comics/manga.

That fanfic up there was just WAY too cheesy for me lol

How good are you at drawing? Could you show me some draws for both Comics and Manga? My Manga is kinda weird. Check out my Summary of Daniel: Dimension Guardian fan fiction. What do you guys think?

To NaruSaku Fans would said that Sasuke and Sakura forehead is too OC as well but most NaruSaku fans like 699. Just wished that Kishimoto would've left on 699. Cause the 700 and the movie is rushed project.
 
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You will get better feedback and less bashing if you post on a site made only for fan fiction.

OT: try to keep your characters close to their canon personalities even when you're driving the plot.
 

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You guys won't like my Manga since base off of NaruSaku and Bruce Wayne and Talia Al Ghul.

You will get better feedback and less bashing if you post on a site made only for fan fiction.

OT: try to keep your characters close to their canon personalities even when you're driving the plot.
Do you want to help with my Manga story specially the characters?
 
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I think you guys should re-read the rules:




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lmao go back to fanfic sites . both Pairing are fodders

This is a Fan Fiction selection.
 
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I like that you realize you are making ff and not in denial .

I can't say i like it
criticism?
"you are just a sister to me.i did what my brother used to to me as sister brother etc.." was way too much forced to make the romantic scene not romantic.

Too much OOC since this is an FF for chapter 700 only (its like you changed the whole manga )
I don't know why some people overrate the forehead comment way too much . It was never important and sakura got disappointed the moment 'sasuke' said "that what naruto would say" .


Sorry if i sounded rude Just wanted to point out the OOC .
Good luck with your manga.
Yes you are Rude with every NaruHina Fans and SasuSaku fans always rude.


Here's a taste of my Manga would be about:

 
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not bad. i am currently drawing (yes drawing) my own ending. calling it: "Naruto, how it should have ended" i am doing the last 2 chapters. so 699 and 700 never happened. the time skip is smaller and the overall story makes much more sense in my version....

but thats a hell lot of work to do. over 120 panels to design, draw, ink and edit..... so it will take quite a while. currently i finished drawing like page 4 (only drawing not inking or editing yet) 40 more pages to go^^
 

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not bad. i am currently drawing (yes drawing) my own ending. calling it: "Naruto, how it should have ended" i am doing the last 2 chapters. so 699 and 700 never happened. the time skip is smaller and the overall story makes much more sense in my version....

but thats a hell lot of work to do. over 120 panels to design, draw, ink and edit..... so it will take quite a while. currently i finished drawing like page 4 (only drawing not inking or editing yet) 40 more pages to go^^
Thanks would you like to be about of my new Manga?

 

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Yes you are Rude with every NaruHina Fans and SasuSaku fans always rude.


Here's a taste of my Manga would be about:

Wasn't really rude :|

U also shouldn't generalize. I have seen nice NS shippers as well as crazies and the same goes for all fandoms. U should learn to take criticism dude. If it seems forced to her or out of character then that is her opinion, just thank her for the input and move on.

I am not gonna give my feedback since I am incredibly bias and I can only NS as brother and sister, but that is just me. :sweat:
Anyway, I wish u well in your work.
 
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Wasn't really rude :|

U also shouldn't generalize. I have seen nice NS shippers as well as crazies and the same goes for all fandoms. U should learn to take criticism dude. If it seems forced to her or out of character then that is her opinion, just thank her for the input and move on.

I am not gonna give my feedback since I am incredibly bias and I can only NS as brother and sister, but that is just me. :sweat:
Anyway, I wish u well in your work.
I can only see SasuSaku as brother and sister. Will you check out my summary for my Manga?
 
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