Shuton: Suiyo Saigai | Alcohol Release: The Drunken DisasterYou must be registered for see links.
Shuton: Suiyo Saigai | Alcohol Release: The Drunken Disaster
Type: Supplementary, Offensive, Defensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will release alcohol from either their body, the ground, or materialize it in the air using Shuton chakra. This is the most basic application of Alcohol Release which allows the user to create various basic fluid constructs such as shields, walls, small pillars, small waves, and spheres. Like all other forms of alcohol it can be ignited to cause a different type of damage or simply used for supplementary purposes. If the alcohol directly enters the opponent’s blood stream it will cause them to temporarily become intoxicated and be unable to mould chakra for A-rank and above techniques. Alcohol created from the ground and air can be created from anywhere from short to long range from the user.
Declined Issues rely with parts you need to explain. First, your element states you release it from the mouth. This would imply you can't simply create it out of thin air just like that and creating it from the ground makes even less sense. If you want it to be created from mid air, you need to explain how you achieve this. Also, you mention entering the blood stream...ok but how? By simple touch? by inhalation? ingestion? If so, how long before it takes effect? The effects should be progressively higher and then decline once more as time passes. It cannot be something absolute that happens and stays in effect forever. This is also a B-Rank...restricting to A-Rank is too much. I understand that your opponent will be hazed, confused, mentally weak. But molding chakra is too generic. I assume he'd have trouble concentrating and focusing on chakra above a given rank, making a streak of many handseals very hard, complex techniques even harder, he'd be more vulnerable to Genjutsu, Taijutsu would be weaker, etc etc.
Type: Supplementary, Offensive, Defensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will release alcohol from their body or their mouth or use his chakra to manipulate the moisture in the air to form Alchool and shape it as he wishes. This is the most basic application of Alcohol Release which allows the user to create various basic fluid constructs such as shields, swords, walls, pillars, waves, and spheres. Like all other forms of alcohol it can be ignited to cause a different type of damage or simply used for supplementary purposes. If the alcohol enters the opponent’s blood stream through either wounds, injection, or ingestion the opponent will become temporarily intoxicated shortly after. The intoxication will last for a total of four (4) turns where in the first turn of intoxication the opponent will feel no effects at all. In the second turn of intoxication the opponent will be unable to mold chakra for forbidden ranked techniques and will be unable to perform complex taijutsu (above B-Rank). In the third turn of intoxication the opponent will be unable to mold chakra for S-Rank and above techniques and will be unable to perform B-Rank and above taijutsu. In the fourth turn of intoxication the opponent will be unable to mold chakra for forbidden ranked techniques and will be unable to perform complex taijutsu (above B-Rank). Constructs are always created within short range of the user.
Approved
Shuton: Rifuresshumento | Alcohol Release: RefreshmentShuton: Rifuresshumento | Alcohol Release: Refreshment
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will gather Alcohol chakra and as they will move it towards their mouth and let it out of their body, the user will start ejecting a small wave of alcohol that will be used for disinfection on the user's body or the body of any person they desire. This will destroy most harmful micro-organisms and will clean wounds and thus prevent from inflammations and diseases. Due to the fact that a small amount of alcohol is used, the intoxication is reduced to a minimum.
Notes:
- Intoxication that occurs only through absorption of the skins and scent is negligible.
Declined Explain in more detail what this can do. Also, consider releasing it from the hands. Its approach is supplementary, primarily for wounds so using it from the hands is much easier. Also, alchool doesn't enter the blood stream so easily as you say unless you make a technique designed exactly for that. This means you can assume such a kind of technique will be safe to use regardless. Considering this is a B-rank, it will only be able to defeat up to A-Rank pathogens and microorganisms. A small note of that would be good.
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user gathers Alcohol chakra and they will release it from either their hand or their mouth. The alcohol is designed to act as a disinfectant on the user’s body or other bodies that the user desires. When the alcohol comes in contact with harmful micro-organisms it will denature them and kill them. Thus this prevents inflammation and infection through tissues.
Note: This can only denature and kill micro-organisms up to A-Rank
Approved
Shuton: Atamawari Zutsuu | Alcohol Release: Splitting HeadacheShuton: Atamawari Zutsuu | Alcohol Release: Splitting Headache
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short (Self)
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will gather Alcohol chakra and concentrate it in their brain and control it to cause the wanting effects of Alcohol on themselves. The user will perform a type of extremely carefully controlled intoxication and use the chakra to greatly decrease the feel of pain. That will increase the user's durability and make them fight for a certain amount of time, even if they receive serious injuries. Although, this technique isn't completely harmless, as the user will still feel some of the bad effects of Alcohol.
Notes:
- The effects of this technique last for three turns and they cannot be removed once they're used.
- During that time, the user will have trouble performing handseals, and it takes and extra +10 chakra to use techniques due to the bad affects of alcohol.
- Can only be used twice per battle.
Declined How strong is the numbing of pain? Can you endure a severed hand? a stab? a scratch? What about movement? Can you still move normally? The effect is ok but you need some additional definition in the limits of it. Also, the more you use it, the less effective it should be btw. So i'd make it 3 times per battle, A-Rank (no need to be S-Rank), 2 first uses normal, last use shorter and with greater drawbacks.
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short (Self)
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will gather Alcohol chakra and concentrate it in their brain and apply precise control to cause the beneficial effects of Alcohol on themselves. This carefully controlled intoxication will bring about a decrease in the sensation of pain. While this technique is active the user is capable of suppressing the pain of severed limbs capable of enduring them. Of course, the wound itself will still cause the various negative side effects such as death if the user is bleeding profusely. Movement for the user is not hindered by the alcohol for the first two uses of the technique unless muscles that are important to movement have been severed or severely damaged, such as a tendon.
Note: The effects of this technique last for three turns and they cannot be removed once they are applied.
Note: While active the user will have trouble performing hand seals and their techniques will require an additional 10 chakra to perform.
Note: On the third use of this technique the user will have much greater difficulty performing hand seals and their techniques will require 20 additional chakra to perform.
Note: Can be used three times per battle.
Approved
Shuton: Yommachigai | Alcohol Release: The Drunken MistakeShuton: Yommachigai | Alcohol Release: The Drunken Mistake
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user weaves the Tiger hand seal while applying the basic primary release of Alcohol. While forming the hand seal the user will channel an enormous amount of Alcohol chakra on either or both of their hands creating extremely dense blade(s) of pure alcohol. In the case of two blades being created each will be A-Rank in strength. To a normal onlooker from a distance these will appear as normal blades of water forming on the user’s hands. In short range however the distinct smell of alcohol can be detected quite easily. The blade(s) is incredibly concentrated and very sharp making it an incredible cutting and piercing weapon that carries the traits of alcohol. When they land direct blows on an enemy and cut through their body the alcohol will quickly enter their blood stream causing them to fall into a severely drunken state where they cannot weave hand seals nor mould chakra above A-Rank for two (2) full turns. Alternatively, the user can apply the blade of water in a manner similar to Chidori Senbon where they form the blade and release numerous small, but concentrated senbons of alcohol at a target. The senbons, while individually not as powerful as the blade, still possess some piercing power. Upon piercing the senbons will cause the target to fall into a drunken state hindering their ability to mould chakra for S-Rank and above techniques for a single turn. The final application of this technique is to cause the concentrated senbons to burst out of their concentrated form unleashing a splash of alcohol on all targets within two (2) meters of the senbon to use this the user must perform one hand seal to cause the senbon to explode. In this case the alcohol, if it lands on an open wound, will intoxicate the target and cause them to be unable to mould chakra for S-Rank and above techniques for a single turn. Additionally, it will cover the target in a highly flammable alcohol.
Notes:
- Can only be used twice (2) per battle.
- Can only be used once every two (2) turns.
- The senbon have a long-range reach when used.
Declined Inconsistent. And you need to rank the senbon attack. Blades should be something you need to fuel with yuor chakra to sustain as once you release your control over it they disperse into liquid alchool. The inconsistency comes from the fact that the effects are too different when they are all based on the same: doing a wound with something made of alchool to make it spread through the blood stream. That it was done through a cut or a needle is irrevelant when the rank of the technique in question is the same. Its an S-Rank technique and the effects are weaker than the ones you listed for the first B-rank. The explosion must go as its already too many different aspects in a single technique.
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user weaves the Tiger hand seal while applying the basic primary release of Alcohol. While forming the hand seal the user will channel an enormous amount of Alcohol chakra on either or both of their hands creating extremely dense blade(s) of pure alcohol. In the case of two blades being created each will be A-Rank in strength. To a normal onlooker from a distance these will appear as normal blades of water forming on the user’s hands. In short range however the distinct smell of alcohol can be detected quite easily. The blade(s) is incredibly concentrated and very sharp making it an incredible cutting and piercing weapon that carries the traits of alcohol. When they land direct blows on an enemy and cut through their body the alcohol can enter their blood stream through the created wounds. Alternatively, the user can apply the blade of water in a manner similar to Chidori Senbon where they form the blade and release numerous small, but concentrated senbons of alcohol at a target. The senbons, while individually not as powerful as the blade, still posses some piercing power and are A-Rank in strength. Should the opponent be struck by the senbon or the blade itself and the alcohol enter their blood stream through wounds created or through injection they will fall into an intoxicated state for four (4) turns. In the first turn the opponent will be unable to mold chakra for forbidden ranked techniques and will be unable to perform complex taijutsu actions. In the second turn the opponent will be unable to mold chakra for S-Ranked techniques and above, be unable to perform B-Rank and above taijutsu actions, and be unable to weave hand seals. In the third turn the opponent will be unable to mold chakra for forbidden ranked techniques and will be unable to perform complex taijutsu actions.
Note: Can only be used twice (2) per battle.
Note: Can only be used once every two (2) turns.
Note: The senbon have a long-range reach and are A-Rank in strength.
Declined Is each senbon A-Rank? It simply doesn't make sense to have that here. Also, how l,ong do the blades last? Chakra to sustain? Can you use them for Kenjutsu? The effects are now ok. But not the actual applications of the technique. It seems as an attempt to put two different techniques into a single one, more and more.
Shuton: Satadeniato | Alcohol Release: Saturday Night
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: The user begins by weaving the Snake, Tiger, Ram hand seals and applying the basic primary release of Alcohol. This technique offers high versatility with both defense and offense in return for a very high chakra requirement in both amount and concentration. The basic application of this technique is to create large, dense amounts of alcohol on the battlefield with versatile form such as pillars, shields, swords, kunai, waves, or blasts. This application requires far less concentration than the advanced manipulation of Saturday Night. When this incredibly dense and concentrated alcohol enters the opponent’s blood stream it will leave them unable to weave hand seals or mold chakra for techniques above A-Rank for two (2) turns. The advanced release of this technique follows the same versatile principle however in this case the user will create up to two (2) spheres of Alcohol from their body. The spheres are incredibly concentrated and dense and are about the size of soccer balls. Through constant manipulation and concentration the user can manipulate the sphere(s) to act as offensive weapons or defensive tools. These act in a sense as an orbital planetary objects that remain around the user allowing them to be used upon his or her will creating virtually any weapon or shield within reason for the user’s needs. The ultimate offensive application of this weapon is to one or both of the spheres created as an massive blast of the pure alcohol. The orb can be sent up to 50 meters from the user and, with the user of the confrontation hand seal, will expand the concentrated alcohol and create a massive omnidirectional wave of alcohol that can reach up to 10 meters from the orb covering all it touches in alcohol. The same basic properties of alcohol apply. Anyone caught within the wave of alcohol will suffer from the blunt damage the concentrated alcohol expanding will cause.
Notes:
- Can be used twice (2) per battle.
- No alcohol techniques above B-Rank for 2 turns.
- Can only be used once every two (2) turns.
Declined The advanced use is in fact a completely unique technique, unrelated to the main one. Also, take note that entering the blood stream has to happen through ingestion, injection, wound, etc. Not simply smelling it or making contact with it through the skin. As its an S-Rank, it requires handseals and it cannot be made anywhere other than in short range of you.
Shuton: Satadeniato | Alcohol Release: Saturday Night
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user begins by weaving the Boar, Ram, Snake hand seals and applying the basic primary release of Alcohol. This technique offers high versatility with both defense and offense in return for a very high chakra requirement in both amount and concentration. The basic application of this technique is to create large, dense amounts of alcohol on the battlefield with versatile form such as pillars, shields, swords, kunai, waves, or blasts. The alcohol, can be created in the air around the user in short-range but the technique itself has a long-range reach. Additionally, the user is capable of releasing the alcohol from their body as normal. As with other alcohol techniques this can intoxicate opponents through ingestion, injection, and through wounds. The intoxication will last for a total of five (5) turns. Compared to the parent technique the concentration of alcohol of Saturday Night is much greater and as such the opponent will begin suffering from the effects in the very first turn after it has entered their blood stream. In the first turn the opponent will be unable to simply mold chakra for forbidden ranked techniques. In the second turn the opponent will be unable to mold chakra for forbidden ranked techniques, have a harder time weaving hand seals, and will be unable to perform complex taijutsu. In the third turn the opponent will be unable to mold chakra for S-Rank and above technqiues, be unable to weave hand seals, and will be unable to perform B-Rank and above taijutsu, as well as be nearly unable to discern subtle genjutsu from reality. In the fourth turn the opponent will be unable to mold chakra for forbidden ranked techniques, have a harder time weaving hand seals, and will be unable to perform complex taijutsu. In the fifth turn the opponent will be unable to mold chakra for forbidden ranked techniques.
Note: Can be used a three (3) times per battle.
Note: Can only be used once every two (2) turns.
Approved
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Shuton: Hamon Abusan! | Alcohol Release: The Repercussions of Absinthe!
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-S
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: 15 – 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user channels shuton chakra throughout their body and releases it as an omnidirectional pulse of alcohol chakra which is invisible to the naked eye. The alcohol is completely harmless to opponents and the user and is unable to intoxicate anyone. The purpose of The Repercussions of Absinthe is to prevent creation of water techniques from the moisture in the air. Because alcohol is a product of ethanol it is hygroscopic and it readily able to attract and hold water molecules in the air. Upon release the omnidirectional wave will absorb water in the air and retain it temporarily preventing the materialization of water and water based elements in the surrounding area. Because alcohol is neutral to water release the strength of the alcohol technique will neutralize the ability to utilize the same level of water release and below. For example, if the A-Rank strength of this technique is used then A-Rank and below water techniques will not be able to be materialized. This acts as a double-edged sword for the user as it also leaves him unable to materialize water in the surrounding area for the duration of this technique.
Note: Can be used three (3) times per battle.
Note: Once used water cannot be materialized of the proper rank for three (3) turns.
Ethanol is an extremely good solvent for materials like oils and fats which also enables Alcohol, being a mixture of ethanol and water, to still be able to dissolve those substances, although not fully and quickly as pure ethanol would. Ethanol is hygroscopic which means that it has the ability to attract and hold water molecules from the surrounding environment, to the extent that it readily absorbs water from air. This is a two-edged sword since it’s sometimes useful that Alcohol can absorb moisture from the air but that also dilutes it and makes it weaker. But the whole process of absorbing water from air doesn't happen quickly enough to influence on Alcohol in a battle.
Declined I don't mind multi rank techniques but you need to explain why it is multiranked. And if it is, the S-rank needs to have additional restrictions apart from simple limited use. It requires a handseal btw. In the description, there is also a small confusion. You release alchool chakra...ok...to do what? From that point on you talk about Alchool itself. As I see it, you release alchool chakra to create minute alchool molecules throughout the moisture which will cascade the effect you describe afterwards. Also, you must be aware that yes, I'll approve this technique...but this means people will breathe these molecules. They will be inside their bodies. I'll approve this under the condition that this technique can never be used or serve as a basis to be used offensively or as a bypass to others.
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