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With a one-dimensional personality, and few words, I can agree now that Kaguya was not handled as well as I had hoped and that it probably would have been better for Madara to remain the final villain. However, I mostly enjoyed the choreography of the fight with her as well as her techniques.
With this, how would have written the conclusion to the final arc would be Kaguya taking on that rabbit bijuu form of hers and then Madara absorbing her and the two becoming harmonized like Naruto was with Kurama, while black zetsu just..well..went away lols and Kaguya taking his place. This would also relate Naruto more to Madara in the battle.
I would have made either Hamura or Kaguya the one who rewrote the tablet. Kaguya to insure her revival in case she fell to Hagoromo and Hamura or Hamura for either revenge against his brother for becoming the god of shinobi over him and being born with the rinnegan, or possibly having a change of heart in regards to peace.
And as far as Madara and Kaguya's differing ideals go, I would have had Madara's mind become totally consumed with the Shinju's power, discarding his goal to bring peace to the world and instead wanting to completely destroy and remake it. This would have explained why Kaguya wanted all the chakra back as well. IT would still be used, except that in this scenario Madara, thanks to Kaguya would now know the truth behind it.
This way, Madara is still the main antagonist and we still get to see the full power of the Rinnegan as well as Kaguya's power, and possibly a more dimensional and sinister personality with her.
With this, how would have written the conclusion to the final arc would be Kaguya taking on that rabbit bijuu form of hers and then Madara absorbing her and the two becoming harmonized like Naruto was with Kurama, while black zetsu just..well..went away lols and Kaguya taking his place. This would also relate Naruto more to Madara in the battle.
I would have made either Hamura or Kaguya the one who rewrote the tablet. Kaguya to insure her revival in case she fell to Hagoromo and Hamura or Hamura for either revenge against his brother for becoming the god of shinobi over him and being born with the rinnegan, or possibly having a change of heart in regards to peace.
And as far as Madara and Kaguya's differing ideals go, I would have had Madara's mind become totally consumed with the Shinju's power, discarding his goal to bring peace to the world and instead wanting to completely destroy and remake it. This would have explained why Kaguya wanted all the chakra back as well. IT would still be used, except that in this scenario Madara, thanks to Kaguya would now know the truth behind it.
This way, Madara is still the main antagonist and we still get to see the full power of the Rinnegan as well as Kaguya's power, and possibly a more dimensional and sinister personality with her.
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