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Kishimoto sucks at writing females. He also sucks at developing romance. Sakura and Hinata are bland characters whose goals revolve around a guy. The pairings that happened(or could have happened) have little development.
There I just saved you guys dozens of pointless threads and debates.
 

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I agree, Kishi even admitted that he sucked at writing females. Why he introduced a female villain is beyond me....
 

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my thoughts exactly. theres so many i dont bother with it. i also dont care.
 

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Kishimoto sucks at writing females. He also sucks at developing romance. Sakura and Hinata are bland characters whose goals revolve around a guy. The pairings that happened(or could have happened) have little development.
There I just saved you guys dozens of pointless threads and debates.

Finally! Thank you!
 

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Didn't he admit it himself?
 

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What you are doing is counter-productive. It's these threads which are keeping NB alive right now. Lol

#inbeforeghostown
 

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I say kishi did an awesome job imo now unless you can do better I and show proof for it you should not put kishi down like that.

okay he said he was not perfect but I still liked the whole story it gets 5/5 or 10/10 from me
 
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Tell us something we like don't know ._.
 

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I say kishi did an awesome job imo now unless you can do better I and show proof for it you should not put kishi down like that

I sure can. I would have had Naruto at least address Hinata about her confession, telling her that he's very flattered, but that he's got a lot of stuff going on in his life. Then during the war, make sure that all naruhina moments were clear, and that Naruto's "feeligns" for sakura were wavering and have him realize that Hinata is a good for him. After the war I would have given Naruto closure with sakura; something along the lines of "I love you like a sister and I know you love me like a brother" type of deal, and finally tell hinata that he likes her back.
No bullshit. No timeskip. No they just magically fell in love and had kids because logic.
 

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I sure can. I would have had Naruto at least address Hinata about her confession, telling her that he's very flattered, but that he's got a lot of stuff going on in his life. Then during the war, make sure that all naruhina moments were clear, and that Naruto's "feeligns" for sakura were wavering and have him realize that Hinata is a good for him. After the war I would have given Naruto closure with sakura; something along the lines of "I love you like a sister and I know you love me like a brother" type of deal, and finally tell hinata that he likes her back.
No bullshit. No timeskip. No they just magically fell in love and had kids because logic.

the movie is for that

no one is perfect okay there maybe lose ends that need tying up but I would re watch/read naruto Kishi did an excellent job imo.

like i said saying and proving you could are two different things show us that you could draw and create a manga better than kishi then
 

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I say kishi did an awesome job imo now unless you can do better I and show proof for it you should not put kishi down like that.

okay he said he was not perfect but I still liked the whole story it gets 5/5 or 10/10 from me

I don't know why I agree with this poster in every thread? -_-
 

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Now you know thats an entirely rational post which means no one here will pay attention to it naturally.I personally feel even DBZ handled the females better
 

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the movie is for that

no one is perfect okay there maybe lose ends that need tying up but I would re watch/read naruto Kishi did an excellent job imo.

like i said saying and proving you could are two different things show us that you could draw and create a manga better than kishi then
That's ridiculous. I don't have to be an expert artist and storyteller to criticize a manga. If you can't cook, are you then not allowed to tell a chef his cooking is bad?
Also not only did he skip out on development, but he didn't even bother to have Naruto talk to his wife in the epilogue. The loose ends did not help the manga one bit.
 

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Funny thing is Naruto fell in love with Hinata in a movie.As far as the actual source material goes the last and final dialogue they had was in 615.lol.Just lol.So in other words,in future,a guy who does not know about the movie existing wont even understand why this pairing made sense in the first place
 

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That's ridiculous. I don't have to be an expert artist and storyteller to criticize a manga. If you can't cook, are you then not allowed to tell a chef his cooking is bad?
Also not only did he skip out on development, but he didn't even bother to have Naruto talk to his wife in the epilogue. The loose ends did not help the manga one bit.

I sure can..

You said, you can do it better.

Show us then.
 

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That's ridiculous. I don't have to be an expert artist and storyteller to criticize a manga. If you can't cook, are you then not allowed to tell a chef his cooking is bad?
Also not only did he skip out on development, but he didn't even bother to have Naruto talk to his wife in the epilogue. The loose ends did not help the manga one bit.

^this. Kishi made too many main characters and didn't develop all of them enough sometimes at all, if you compare naruto to other manga you will see what I mean. Having 4-5 main characters and developing them all aswell as developing side characters is good. But having too many main characters and not developing them all enough isn't very good Shino is an example of this. Poor side characters like iruka don't even get noticed.
 

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You said, you can do it better.

Show us then.

You want me to draw hundreds of chapters worth of development just to prove my point? That's not my job, that was Kishi's. Also, that's not even what I am saying. I am speaking storywise. I am sorry I followed this manga for a decade and at least expected to see how the main character fell in love with a girl he talked to about 5 times in the entire manga. This manga has produced too many questions and not enough answers.
 
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