Jiraiya meats Minato for the first time (part 7)

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Jiraiya pulls out all stocks!


Jiraiya stands with a drop of sweat running down his face as rock bullets keep hitting his barrier at intense speeds.


Jiriaya: Shit!
Mangetsu: Had enough yet?
Jiriaya: You wish!
Minato: Sensai!
Jiraiya: Stay back kid, ill handle this!


After about 2 minites, the rock bullets stop and the wall of rock sinks back into the ground. As it does Jiraiya releases his barrier.

Mangetsu: Its not often that people can survive my 1000 rock bullets technique, in fact your the 3rd person to have done so.
Jiraiya: Im honoured (he says smirking)
Mangetsu: I guess its time to get serious :D
Jiriaya: Bring it on, Summoning jutsu!

As jiraiya says this he performs several hand sign and then slams his hand to the ground. Then in a puff of smoke a giant toad appears! (simmalar to the toad below)


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Mangetsu: Huh? A toad summon? What a pathetic technique!
Gamabunta: What did you say you little shit?
Mangetsu: A frog with attitude huh?
Gamabunta: Im a toad! Ahhhh!!!
Jiraiya: Ready then?
Gamabunta: lets go!


As he said that, Jiraiya jumped up on to gamabunta back, squating down placing his hand on gamabuntas head.


Jiraiya: Time for some combo attacks!
Gamabunta: Ok, lets do it!
Jiraiya: Ok, Fire Release: Toad Oil Flame Bullet



As Jiraiya said this, Gamabunta inhailed and then as he breather out he fired a oil bullet at mangetsu, as this happened jiraiya performed several handsigns then used Fire Release: Flame Bullet!



Then the flames ignited the flame bullet sending a large flaming ball of oil at Mangetsu.


Mangetsu: Shit! I cant dodge that its too big!


As he said this, Mangetsu put his sword back on his back and slammed both his hands to the ground summoning a wall of rock in front of him.

But it was too late, just as he summoned the wall of rock, the flaming oil bullet smashed straight through it, exploding, knocking mangetsu back several meters.


Jiraiya: Bulls eye!
Gamabunta: That will teach the little shit!



Mangetsu: Shit, these guys are good, i need a plan!
Jiraiya: Give up you cant win!
Mangetsu: Oh yeah? We will see! Earth style: Rock Clone Jutsu!

A rock copy of mangetsu formed at mangetsus side, then they both began to run side by side at Jiraiya.

Jiraiya: Get ready!
Mangetsu: Your mine!

As both mangetsu's got close to jiraiya the one on the right stopped and used The thousand rock bullets techniques, then as Jiraiya blocked using his barrier jutsu as before the second mangetsu jumper over Jiraiya landing just behind Minato, grabbing him and holding his rock sword to his throat.


Mangetsu: Give up or the brat dies!
Jiriaya: Shit!
Mangetsu: hehehe Whats it going to be?
Minato: Dont give up sensai, forget about me and finish the mission!
Jiraiya: I cant! Dont you understand that!
Minato: What do you mean?
Jiraiya: Ill never abandon a comrade in battle no matter what!
Minato: But if you give up we will all die anway!
Jiraiya: And if i attack he will kill you and then we may aswell as failed the mission!
Minato: Do what needs to be done!
Jiraiya: Mangetsu, i never thought you were a coward!
Mangetsu: Ill show you whos a coward!


As he said this Mangetsu swung his sword at Minatos throat!



Next chapter: The Fight Ends!


I know this chapted sucks but i couldnt really think of any good ideas =/
Ill try harded next time
 

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When is the next one coming out?
cause i read all 7 in one go and dont know when the new ones are debut.

please do continue.. this is really good shit...
maybe you can make Minato save the day in the final fight???

nice job.
 

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When is the next one coming out?
cause i read all 7 in one go and dont know when the new ones are debut.

please do continue.. this is really good shit...
maybe you can make Minato save the day in the final fight???

nice job.
Ive made all 7 parts in the last 10 days so may write the next part tomorrow, and thanks but im not sure what to do next and i dont feel like its that good atm
 

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I know. Since the bad guy(mangesutsu something) ain`t apperently suppose to die, what if you make Minato do some crazy shit, the Jiraya using Sage mode, then a combind attack, freeing Shin and Shina. Then a combind attack with the 3 gennins and a finishing move by Jiraya or Minato. Then the bad guy get a beat-down by the "true" evil guy, and turns side, helping Jiraya and co. defeating him. And in the End magetsuge becomes gurdian for that grass country town helping them or something;)
 

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I know. Since the bad guy(mangesutsu something) ain`t apperently suppose to die, what if you make Minato do some crazy shit, the Jiraya using Sage mode, then a combind attack, freeing Shin and Shina. Then a combind attack with the 3 gennins and a finishing move by Jiraya or Minato. Then the bad guy get a beat-down by the "true" evil guy, and turns side, helping Jiraya and co. defeating him. And in the End magetsuge becomes gurdian for that grass country town helping them or something;)
Nah, hes gotta die :p
 

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Sorry for doubleposting, but also one more thing. If he`s Sugitsuges brother. Then how can he be one of the seven swordsmen of the mist?:confused: Can`t remember them saying that in the manga or the anime?:p The story doesn`t add up to the plot;)
 

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Sorry for doubleposting, but also one more thing. If he`s Sugitsuges brother. Then how can he be one of the seven swordsmen of the mist?:confused: Can`t remember them saying that in the manga or the anime?:p The story doesn`t add up to the plot;)
I never said he was one of thee 7 swordsmen, i said he wanted to be one, and suigestsu set his brother was dead and they both wanted be one of the 7 swordsmen, so he can die here
 

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I never said he was one of thee 7 swordsmen, i said he wanted to be one, and suigestsu set his brother was dead and they both wanted be one of the 7 swordsmen, so he can die here
Mangetsu: That would be me, ill prove my worthy of being one of the seven swordsmen of the mist!

As in: "I`ll show you how good i am, by being one of the seven swordsmen of the mist":p
 
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