Is my character over powered?

[ShiroT]

So.. It's basically a mass cross-over fanfiction but it will be illustrated?

no its not like that lol, illustrated as in published?

 

[ShiroT]

If he becomes too powerful jist have black zetsu one shot him

But yea hes overpowered as hell dude

depending on his rival/other character power

should i downgrade him some lol?

and he doesnt have a "rival", there are a group of people around the same level but only at most 9

 

[ShiroT]

Completely. He shreds any Naruto character. Kamui and Tailed Beast Cloak with Susano'o and all that other stuff is just too much. Try to narrow down to a certain technique and expand on that. The Kagune is kind of useless compared to all those other powers.

really? i thought the kaguna made is worst because he had like adleast 6 limbs now. i really just wanted an excuse to give him something that resembled a tail lol.

yea, i should definitely hone down on him so his powers dont seem so random

 

[Torche]

no its not like that lol, illustrated as in published?

Illustrated as in drawn. :| You know, illustrations are drawings. Lol

 

[Kai NB]

Interesting story... If that's the case I don't know. In this case, there's a really easy tip on making it stupidly OP and just right.

I can't really help, but good luck

 

[ShiroT]

Illustrated as in drawn. :| You know, illustrations are drawings. Lol

oh yea lol im (hopefully) drawing the whole thing

 

[ShiroT]

Yes. Absolutely OP

Actually, it's all relative. What's the series about? Are other characters basically like that? Or is this basically "One Punch Man"?

Also, generally speaking, powerful techniques should have equal consequential drawbacks.
EXAMPLES
- Mangekyou Sharingan causes blindness and intense Chakra consumption
- Gear Two tires the user and shortens their lifespan
- Super Saiyan 3 eats the Ki of the user tremendously quickly causing insanely dangerous fatigue and energy drops

well, theres a drawback to the susanno and gear 2 if you want to hear it. the fission technique disappears in one hit.

 

[~Ethereal~]

Your char can slice off Juubidara.

 

[ShiroT]

Your char can slice off Juubidara.

guuuud, guuud

 

[Naruto D Luffy]

Of course it is

 

[Hexuze]

Not as OP as Toriko characters.

 

[ShiroT]

Not as OP as Toriko characters.

what are they like?

 

[youwhatsup]

what are they like?

there's someone who can stop the rotation of a planet 100x bigger than earth with a punch